[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

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Garaton • Bakuhatsu 2.0 [Glass Release • Explosion 2.0]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Bakuhatsu [Explosion]
After performing a set of handseals, Amaya focuses on placing explosive properties on a piece glass that she touches. When exploding the glass will act as shrapnel flying off in different directions, exploding in the force of 8 explosive seals. The explosion is triggered via Chakra Kai.

Garaton • Eterueru Ganseihirō [Glass Release • Ethereal Eviscerator]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Kontan Sa-Cha- [Soul Searcher]
After performing a set of handseals, Amaya calls glass from herself or the surrounding area to her left hand raised above her head. In a single moment it will melt into a spinning mass to take the form of chakram rapidly rotating at speeds capable of cutting, it also instantly cools down into a solid shape. With a single movement it can be sent at a speed of 25 and a cutting force of 25. In total its two meters in diameter and two centimeter in thickness and sharp on all edges. This chakram being improved can reach 50 meters before losing its momentum also when thrown it is controllable if Amaya holds down a hand seal with her right hand. The higher control Amaya has the better she is at controlling it and no other jutsu can be used while controlling the chakram. The chakram is compatible with her guardian jutsu set.

Garaton • Harō [Glass Release • Halo]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Eterueru Ganseihirō [Ethereal Eviscerator]
After performing a set of handseals, Amaya calls glass from herself or the surrounding area to her head. In a single moment it will melt into a spinning mass to take the form of chakram rapidly rotating at speeds capable of cutting, it also instantly cools down into a solid shape. With a single movement it can be sent at a speed of 40 and a cutting force of 30. In total its half a meter in diameter and barely a centimeter in thickness and sharp on all edges. This chakram being improved can reach 75 meters before losing its momentum also when thrown it is controllable if Amaya holds down a hand seal with her right hand. The higher control Amaya has the better she is at controlling it and no other jutsu can be used while controlling the chakram.

Garaton • Fukanzen no Megami [Glass Element • Imperfect Goddess]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Senshuken no Megami, Tsuwamono no Megami
Amaya forms a few hand seals then ending with a clap, holding it for a second, then forces out a large amount of glass from her skin, then it suddenly appears as a coating around her entire body at the speed of 35. This coating increases in thickness in all directions, retaining the humanoid shape but increasing in size that from head to toe, its three feet taller than she and two and a half feet wider. Its one and a half inch thick glass, and sports an iguana head. It's spiked all the way down to its tail, which is curled up like a chameleon. The most visual part of the armor is shaped into ten rib bones and it features. It has ten ribs on each side, each one as big as one of Amayas limbs. This jutsu also grants her with two skeleton arms made out of glass--Amaya's control = Arms Taijutsu stat with max cap being at 40--wielding two swords, the blades are six feet long, one foot wide. Each arm move at the speed of 35. When struck with a strength of 35 or greater, will break at the point of impact, allowing whatever struck it to go through. If the armor was struck with flesh, however, the broken glass is more than capable of shredding flesh on the way through, doing even more damage if attempted to be removed. The armor follows Amaya's movement but it uses a lot of chakra so this jutsu auto cancels after average of Ninjutsu and Stamina in posts or until she runs out of chakra. It's compatible with the other goddess sets, yet no other jutsu can be controlled while using these combined sets. The glass shatters outwards from the user on high enough impact.

Garaton • Kishi Yoroi [Glass Element • Knight Armor]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Hada Dekidaka [Skin Production]
After forming a set of hand seals, Amaya start to produce molten glass from her pores rather than her mouth, which hardens into a glass defense quickly but limits movement, it creates at the speed of 30. At this rank the glass created is an inch thick and can withstand 40 strength hits before breaking but giving her -3 taijutsu. The armor coats not only her but also her pet Wana, giving it the same armor when she is mounting it which makes them inseparable while the jutsu is active. The glass breaks off after 8 posts.

Garaton • Monsūn [Glass Element • Glass Monsoon]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Kigen [Rise]
After forming the needed hand seals Amaya will focus her chakra on the glass hovering in the air and spread it out to an 35m by 35m area in the air, over the next 1 posts thousands of shards of glass will break loose and form in the the size of playing cards will form at 1 speed. At the end of the 2nd post the shards of glass will fall to the ground at 49 strength. This jutsu is compatible with her guardian jutsu set.
Payment: 10+10+10+10+7+7= 54 points.
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The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Yura » Sun Feb 25, 2018 12:35 pm

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Garaton • Bakuhatsu 2.0 [Glass Release • Explosion 2.0]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Bakuhatsu [Explosion]
After performing a set of handseals, Amaya focuses on placing explosive properties on any glass. When exploding the glass will act as shrapnel flying off in different directions, exploding in the force of 8 explosive seals. The explosion is triggered via Chakra Kai.
Is this for any glass that she is touching or for any piece of glass within a certain range? Either way, needs to be specified.
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Garaton • Kishi Yoroi [Glass Element • Knight Armor]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Hada Dekidaka [Skin Production]
After forming a set of hand seals, Amaya start to produce molten glass from her pores rather than her mouth, which hardens into a glass defense quickly but limits movement, it creates at the speed of 30. At this rank the glass created is an inch thick and can withstand 40 strength hits before breaking but giving her -3 taijutsu. The armor coats not only her but also her pet Wana, giving it the same armor, which makes them inseparable while the jutsu is active. The glass breaks off after 8 posts.
I assume it only makes armor for Wana if she is riding the companion and not if Wana is at a range from her.
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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Trusted Grader » Tue Feb 27, 2018 1:57 am

Fixed the first one and don't know about the second one... Am I allowed to give it armor if it's within x amount of range?
CharactersShow
Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
Graw


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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Yura » Tue Feb 27, 2018 4:26 am

Kitsui:
Tue Feb 27, 2018 6:57 am
Am I allowed to give it armor if it's within x amount of range?
In theory sure, but it would probably need a higher nin requirement to allow it to either do it while touching or to do it at a range based on what you want. You're probably better off leaving this one the way it is and then making a separate one to allow you to make armor for yourself and Wana with Wana at a range (which wouldn't need a higher nin req since you're only doing one thing).
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Enkouten, MitsuoBanninIwagakureTeam 18|Jousai[color=#ff2200]
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NameRankVillageTeamColor
Nara, ShikariBanninKonohagakureMamorinuku[color=#fb8a00]
Takara, MorikoGeninIwagakure[color=#ffeb66]
Inji, AyakoC-RankWaterfall[color=#8080ff]

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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Trusted Grader » Tue Feb 27, 2018 10:00 am

Okay cool! Got it! Then we shall do it like that! For now it only works if she rides the hyena :)
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Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
Graw


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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Yura » Tue Feb 27, 2018 2:54 pm

Just make a note of that in the jutsu. Something along the lines of "She can also extend this jutsu to cover her pet Wana if/when she is using the pet as a mount".
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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Trusted Grader » Wed Feb 28, 2018 5:50 am

Done
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Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
Graw


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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Yura » Wed Feb 28, 2018 10:17 am

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[Accepted]Amaya Jutsu

Post by Kabu » Wed Feb 28, 2018 11:50 am

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