[Denied]Akuma Awai

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Akuma Awai
Demon Boy

[The more I view the light, the darker I observe the world]

General Information Age:11
Gender:male
Height:4'11
Weight:88
Physical Features:He has dark black eyes, with even his spikee hair being a pitch black. The hair was spiked up in the form of lots of three inch spikes scattered across his head. He has a pointy nose, with eyes not wide, but not small either. His face was rather round, but not fat, he was athletic. His light's color is black
  • Face/head: Face/head: The only notable scar he has runs accross his face, and rumors have it that he received it from his father.
  • Body:Body: In shape, has a six pack for his age, and is caucausion. He appears skinny and weak, but looks are deceiving.
  • Notable Features:Scar running accross his face on his left eye in a vertical slash and down his cheek.----
Clothing/Accessories:He is seen wearing military grade cargo pants, steel certified in a beige color as well as a white shirt with a flack jacket of the same properties of his cargo pants and color. He wears the headband over his forehead
Picture:
Personality: Akuma has a somewhat of a revolutionary mindset, with APSD and a highly functional sociopath, thanks to his encounters as a child. His personality can not be defined, but he is a highly intellectual human being with observational and deduction skills. His sense of humour is tremendous, and is mysterious.
  • General:
  • Hopes/Dreams:To become Hokage
  • Fears: Failure
  • Combat Mentality:Observant
    Opportunistic
    Charismatic
    Flaring
    Daring
    Brave
    Tactician
    Psychological
    Aggressive
    Science of Deduction
    Gorilla Warfare

Battle Information Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank:Genin
  • Ninjutsu:7
  • Taijutsu: 5
  • Genjutsu: 3
  • Stamina: 5
  • Control: 7
  • Strength: 2
  • Speed:4
  • Instinct:7
Equipment: Carries a med kit
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity: Katon, Raiton, Hiton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
HitonHiton
Born to the Awai clan, this user is able to utilize Light Release, a fusion composed of Raiton and Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require Hiton. Hiton has a blinding effect.
Concentrations
Deft HandsThe fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
Medicine The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu
Arts of Medicine Arts of Medicine
This user has educated themselves in traditional medicine, and is able to treat and care for wounds in methods taught to medicine men and doctors that don't utilize chakra.
Requires: [Medicine] and [Deft Hands] Concentrations
All Art of Medicine Techniques require both Taijutsu and Instinct stats equal to the requirements for the rank of the Technique.]

Jutsu
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*~Light Release • Blinders Technique
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A passive technique, the user has learned to weaken the intensity of light from their jutsu that comes towards them. This means that users are effected less by the blinding and by the burning quality of their techniques.

~Light Release • Sun Ball Technique
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Performing hand seals and then holding out their hand, the user produces a softball sized ball of light that is the same color as their personal light in the palm of their hand. This ball gives off a constant glow like that of four candles; however, this technique is actually solid and produces heat. It can be thrown or used in melee combat. When it hits something, it acts like a gas in a sense and spreads out over the impacted area, causing first degree burns and small impact damage, then fading away. Otherwise it lasts 3 posts.

~Light Release • Becoming Flashy Technique
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After grabbing a weapon or small object and flowing Hiton chakra into it, the user causes the object to glow with their personal chakra color and essentially turns the weapon or object into a flash tag. This infusion lasts for 2 posts. The 'infusion' does not make the object more durable in any way. During those 2 posts, the user can also release the Hiton chakra stored inside once and cause it to let out a large burst of light over a 5ft radius that causes first degree burns on contact.

~Light Release • Sun Shield Technique
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Performing a small series of hand seals, the user creates solid hiton around one or both hands and makes, essentially, a small square of solid light around the hand. The square of light is only a few inches wider and longer than the user's hand is, up to a max of one foot tall and eight inches wide. The wall forms at 3 speed and has 7 strength, causing 1st degree burns on contact. The wall lasts for 4 posts, or until destroyed.

~Light Element • Light Clone]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user concentrates hiton chakra into the form of a clone. This clone looks identical to the user in every way. The clone can go up to a one hundred feet away from the user. These clones are incapable of performing ninjutsu or genjutsu. Once destroyed by a weak attack, the clone dispels into shimmering, faint light.

Taijutsu: 3
Speed: 3
Strength: 3
Stamina: 3

~Light Release • Shining Blade Technique
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming the hand seals and focusing chakra into one hand, an Awai is capable of solidifying and shaping their personal chakra into a rudimentary blade shape at 10 speed. The sword has 10 strength and can range from one foot long to two foot long, or wakizashi length, to katana length. It also has charring heat stored inside the light which can cause scalding or searing, but and provides first degree burns. The blade lasts for 3 posts or until destroyed.

~Light Release • Solar Cutting Blade Technique
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Performing the hand seals, the user then puts one hand up and is able to create a brightly shining disc of condensed light that is the same color as their personal light. The disk is extremely thin, maybe half a centimeter, and one foot in diameter, glowing with half the intensity of a flash tag, making it hard to look directly at unless wearing some sort of eye protection. The user can throw the disc for (control x 2) meters and it hits, cutting into the object with 10 strength, causing first to second degree burns as it does so.

~Light Release • Empty Light Technique
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: At least +2 above average control
Focusing chakra into their body, the user performs hand seals and then manipulates the way light refracts around their bodies, allowing them to make themselves visually invisible. They still have a chakra signature, must breathe and still make noise, but they are completely invisible to the naked eye. The user must hold the last seal or the technique fades, so they may only walk while invisible. This lasts for 3 posts.

~Light Release • Bright Screen Technique
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user performs a few hand seals and then puts both hands out forward, creating a temporary barrier that spreads out from the palms and makes a thin, full length screen that is a few inches wider and taller than the user's body at 5 speed, though it stops on any surface it encounters as to not cut into it. With 15 strength, the barrier can be used as a shield, causing 1st degree burns to anyone who touches it, the jutsu disappears after 4 posts.

~Light Release • Blazing Vision Technique
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Performing the hand seals and then opening both eyes wide, the user of this technique essentially 'sucks in' some of the light in the immediate area into their eyes, temporarily darkening the area around them, and then releases it from both eyes charged with chakra. Two beams of light shoot from both eyes at a target up to 35 feet away at 25 speed, starting at the size of a pupil but expanding as they travel to by up to as large as a fist. Both beams are bright, and impact with 15 strength when they land, causing 2nd degree burns on contact.

~Light Release • Solar Ward Technique
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: ~Light Release • Bright Screen Technique
An advancement on Bright Screen Technique, the user first performs the hand seals and then puts both hands together, flooding the area with Hiton chakra of their personal color. The dome extends two feet above the user's own height and forms a perfect oval-dome shape, extending out in a diameter of 5 feet around the user at 20 speed. The dome is thick and sturdy, though and has 20 strength, causing 2nd degree burns on contact. The dome lasts for 5 posts or until destroyed.

~Light Release • Exploding Sun Technique
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: ~Light Release • Sun Ball Technique
Focusing chakra after performing several seals, the user creates a large ball of compressed light in their hand that is roughly twice the size of a human head and holds it in their palm. From there they can throw it or use it in a number of ways. The user is able to throw the ball (control x 2) meters. The ball is solid and is very hot, enough to cause second degree burns with some contact and when it hits an object, it explodes with both the force of two exploding tags as well as two flash tags, meaning it causes an extremely violent and very blinding flash when the solid light is 'ruptured'. It lasts for 2 posts if unused

*[Ninjutsu • Hidden Needles]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will focus chakra into their mouths and into up to five senbon within 3 feet of their position. The senbon will be summoned from their persons or nearby into the user's mouth, where they will be spit out aided by chakra at a speed of 6 and strength of 4. The senbon can be shot up to 7 meters away.



*[Ninjutsu • Tracking Device]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will coat one of their hairs in chakra. Once this has been done, they will place it on their target. The user can track the exact location of the strand of hair for up to 7 meters. For up to twenty meters out, the user can track a rough location. From then out to 100 meters, the user just gets a general idea of where the opponent is. The chakra in the hair will dissipate at the end of 6 posts.

*[Ninjutsu • Wall]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user causes a thin 3x3 meter flat barrier to form directly in front of them at a speed of 5. This barrier can take a hit of up to 5 strength before shattering, otherwise it lasts for 3 posts.

*[Ninjutsu • Sensory Deprivation: Sight]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A technique used for a variety of purposes, each unique to the user's needs, the user channels chakra over their eyes. This chakra will act as though it were solid, rendering the user blind until it is dispelled. This can be held as long as the user has chakra, but once it has ended, it has a cool-down period of 2 posts before it can be used again.

*[Ninjutsu • Chakra Burst]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into one of their fists, the user will then attempt to strike their target and if successful, they will release additional concussive force in the form of an outward explosion at D-Rank force from their fist. If the user does not strike a target within 3 posts the jutsu dissipates.

*[Ninjutsu • Barrier]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user forms a 10m3 barrier around a target up to 10m away from their position. The barrier forms at a speed of 12, has a strength of 8, and lasts 4 posts before fading away.


*[Ninjutsu • Advanced Transformation Technique]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
An advanced form of the Transformation Technique, after performing the correct hand seals and holding the final one temporarily, the user will coat and mold chakra around their body into the shape and form of something or someone which is no more than twice their size at a speed of 4. This technique's true advantage is that the disguise is given physical substance. This means, for example, if they transform into something with claws, they will have claws that can physically be used. For the disguises 5 post duration, if it is damaged by a hit of 16 or more strength, the disguise "poofs" from existence. This includes collateral damage caused by striking an opponent that may occur to the disguise.

*Ninjutsu • Spiritualism Technique]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The base technique for summoning, the Spiritualism Technique allows users to bring forth their summons to fight on their behalf. Once an agreement has been made between the user and their summon, they will be able to use this technique to call upon it at any time unless stated otherwise. The chakra used for this technique varies, as it is dependent on the size and rank of what is being summoned. Once it has been summoned, the user will experience a constant drain on their chakra for as long as the summon is in place. This drain is also dependent on the size and rank of the summon.

*[Ninjutsu • Binding]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will focus chakra into a rope, wire, or a similar object in their possession. The object will then lash out at a target at a speed of 10 for up to 15 meters attempting to then coil around them and bind them. After coiling around the target, the chakra will cause the object to harden to a strength of 10. After 4 posts the chakra will run out and the bind will break.

*[Ninjutsu • Rattrap]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will imbue an item with their chakra that is no larger than a basketball. The next thing to touch the object within 3 posts will feel the chakra lurch off the object, surging into their body and overwhelming them. For those with less than 20 strength they will find themselves immobile for the next 5 posts. If the target that touches the object has 20 or higher strength, they will find themselves unaffected.

*[Ninjutsu • Shadow Clone Technique]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user proceeds to create a number of clones of themselves (maximum is equal to 1/3rd the users stamina). Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies of the user in both appearance and substance. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but they will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original and any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed. Given that the clones are an exact replica of the user, they share the same stats except for stamina, which is determined by the number of clones presently in effect.

*[Ninjutsu • Underworld Guardian Spikes]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will cause their hair to rapidly grow and cocoon their body for protection. The hair does this at a speed of 20, and when done, will have formed thick layers of rigid hair to protect the user from attacks of 20 and less strength. Upon completely cocooning the user, the hair disconnects from the user's hair, leaving it at it's original length. The hair of the cocoon is chakra infused, providing immunity to electricity, this lasts for up to four posts.


Ninjutsu[*Raiton • Static Shroud
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of visible static which crackles around them for 4 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of 5 strength and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied.

*Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at a speed of 6, striking with a strength of 4.

*Raiton • Shock Double
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of Raiton chakra. The clone will be able to move with the stats labelled below, while also exploding with the force of a single exploding tag upon death (which also applies the raiton passive effect). The clone will only last for 3 posts.
Taijutsu: 2
Stamina: 1
Strength: 1
Speed: 2


*Raiton • Conductor
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.

*Raiton • Stun Gun
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will channel Raiton chakra to two of their fingers. They will then be able to fire up to three total bullet sized balls of concentrated lightning from their fingertips. These bullets will travel at 5 speed, but will not have any physical force. Instead, they will apply light electrical burns similar to a sun burn and will apply Raiton's shocking effect.

*Raiton • Jamming Pulse
C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user emits a wave of electricity from their palm in a single direction. This is produced as a 10m wide line which extends 2m into the air and travels up to 25m from the user at 10 speed. The wave will apply the shocking effect and reduce the speed of any living thing it strikes by 5 points for 3 posts by electrically interfering with the brain's nervous signals.

*Raiton • Galvanic Zone
C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 20m diameter. The user's Raiton techniques will travel 5 points faster when they travel through this zone for 3 posts. This technique ends the moment the user leaves this area. They also return to normal speed upon leaving the area. This technique does not apply the shocking effect.

*Raiton • Golden Birds
C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user creates two orbs of lightning the size of basketballs slightly above their head. They are then able to direct these orbs at a speed of 10 at their will, however they may not move while doing this. These orbs cannot leave a 40m diameter around the user, and detonate with the power of a single explosive tag each on contact with a solid. These orbs last a maximum of 4 posts, and may be self destructed at any moment in their lifespan at the user's will.

*Raiton • Voltaic Zone
C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 20m diameter. This will produce an electric current on the ground in this area visible as crackling lightning on the surface. Any other than the user who step into this zone will have the shocking effect applied and their legs will sustain first degree electrical burns. This current lasts 3 posts, while it ends immediately if the user leaves the area.

*Raiton • Thunder Wave
B-ranked Raiton Jutsu
The user will first perform the correct hand seals, and then fire a cone of lightning which begins at 5m wide closest to them and then 30m wide at the furthest point. The cone extends 40m from the user's body at a speed of 20. This cascade of lightning roars tremendously loud, and strikes all caught within it at 15 strength. Those caught in the blast will have their speed reduced by 5 points for 2 posts.

*Raiton • Castle of Sky
B-ranked Raiton Jutsu
The user will first perform the correct hand seals before releasing a basketball sized orb of lightning 15m into the air. The orb will then cascade sheets of lightning down in the shape of a dome over the caster, with a 15m radius. This dome, apart from being exceptionally loud, forms a sort of protection against attacks. It comes into being at 20 speed, and is able to redirect hits of up to 20 strength in a downward direction. These sheets of lightning also serve as a visual obscurity. This technique lasts for up to 3 posts depending on the user's discretion.

*Raiton • Thunderous Lightning Cannon
B-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, a beam of lightning will erupt from the user's hand. The lightning will travel 50m at 20 speed and explode with the force of 4 explosive tags on contact, while applying the Raiton shocking effect throughout the explosion's area.

*Katon • Fireball
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a 1 foot diameter fireball at the opponent. It travels up to 10 meters away at a speed of 6 and a strength of 4.

*Katon • Torch
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will exhale a small jet of flame directly in front of them. The ball lights up the surrounding area in a 5 meter radius and has a durability of 5. Unless destroyed, it will stay locked in it's location for 5 posts before fading.

*Katon • Flame Jet
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a cone that is up to five meters long and three meters wide at it's base. The cone travels at a speed of 6 and pushes with a strength of 4.

*Katon • Flame's Shadow
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of katon chakra. The clone will be able to move with the stats labelled below, while also exploding with the force of a single exploding tag upon death into a burst of flames. The clone will only last for 3 posts.
Taijutsu: 2
Stamina: 1
Strength: 1
Speed: 2


*Katon • Heated Blade
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling katon chakra into a metal weapon or blade, the user will cause it to grow hotter and cover the blade in flames. The imbued weapon will be able to carve through defenses of 5 or less strength with ease.

*Katon • Scattering Flames
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will puff their chest before spitting out a torrent of 15 individual fireballs, each 2 centimeter diameter. The fireballs are shot for up to 10 meters away at a speed of 9 and a strength of 1.

*Katon • Great Fireball
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling a thin stream of flames up to 15 meters away at a speed of 10. Either at 15 meters, or if the stream makes impact with anything, the stream will erupt into a spherical C-Rank explosion, scattering flames all over everything within a 5 meter radius from the point of impact.

*Katon • Erupting Burning Finger
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into their fingers, the user then attempts to make contact with the opponent. In the event that the strike is successful, the fingers release a C-Rank Explosion of fire outward towards the targets body. If unused, lasts 3 posts.

*Katon • Ripple
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling katon chakra into their body, the user will release a burst of flame around their entire body, coming outwards from them. This sphere of roiling fire pushes outward with 10 speed and impacts whatever it touches with 10 strength, the sphere extending roughly 3 meters in radius from the user's body.

B-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user breathes out gently and sends a wire-thin line of flames at a target. The line can travel up to 20 meters from the user at a speed of 20. If it connects to a target, their body will suddenly burst into flames,
igniting them and whatever they happen to be wearing in a searing inferno of flames.

*Katon • Flame Armor
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After the needed hand seals, the user will release a blast of katon outward from their body rapidly as the fire twists around them. This fire forms a 3-inch layer of flames around their body that manifests at 30 speed, and essentially provide a pseudo-defense against taijutsu because for the next three posts if anyone comes into contact with it they will receive severe second degree burns. Additionally, this technique can be used offensively for that reason as it also has an impact force of 10 strength.

*Katon • Burning Entrapment
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user exhales a ring of fire up to 20 meters away at a speed of 20. On impact the ring immediately erupts outwards and upwards as it's dancing flames form a dome with a 5 meter diameter and a 3 meter pitch. The dome is held together at a strength of 20 for 4 posts before falling apart into wild flames.

*Katon • Flame Lash

*Katon • Flame Lash
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user breathes out gently and sends a wire-thin line of flames at a target. The line can travel up to 20 meters from the user at a speed of 20. If it connects to a target, their body will suddenly burst into flames,
igniting them and whatever they happen to be wearing in a searing inferno of flames.
TaijutsuShow
*[Medicinal Style • Bandage Wrapping]
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user knows how to utilize bandages, wrapping a wound in a manner that creates a near-perfect barrier from external forces, keeping the wound clean from bacteria. The bandage is tucked in place, preventing it from falling off, though excessive rubbing, pulling, or getting the bandage wet can cause it to fall off.

*[Medicinal Style • Wound Cleanse]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user knows how to use sterile water or alcohol to clean out a wound, destroying any bacteria in the would to prevent infection.

*[Medicinal Style • Injury Assessment]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
Unlike the mystical means of diagnosis utilized through iijutsu, those who utilize the Arts of Medicine must learn the most effective manner to assess a patient. Learners of this discipline have learn the most effective manner to diagnose a patient, starting at the head, and assessing for head wounds, then moving down through the torso, both arms, the groin area, both legs, then the back. Those who learn this discipline will be able to account for any wounds that present with physical symptoms on a patient.

*[Medicinal Style • Pressure Points]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user has learned all appropriate pressure points on a body. In the event of bleeding, they know where to apply pressure to slow the bleeding while treatment is administered.

*[Medicinal Style • Splint]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user is able to create slings and wraps that support fractures, sprains, and breaks in patients.

*[Medicinal Style • Medic]
C-rank Taijutsu Discipline
Perhaps one of the most important disciplines of any aspiring Medic, one who has mastered this Discipline can maintain a clear mind when treating patients. Techniques C-rank and below that effect their emotional spectrum, or attempts at distracting them will have no effect while they are treating patients.


*[Medicinal Style • Antidote]
C-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
In the case of injected venoms and poisons, the user is able to assess the site of injection, and properly cut off circulation, and roll veins, to force out the poison or venom. So long as they begin within the first post of injection, they can prevent the effects of the venom or poison.

*[Medicinal Style • Stitching]
C-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Through the use of the proper tools, the use is able to stitch close most minor and moderator wounds, preventing the furthering of infection and deterioration of that wound.


*[Medicinal Style • Air Way]
C-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user is able to use make shift supplies to obtain, and maintain, an airway in a patient through various methods, such as intubation or emergency cricothyroidotomy. This allows people to breath even if they have obstructed airways, and remain alive.


B-rank Techniques

*[Medicinal Style • Field Transfusion]
B-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Assuming they have the approriate materials, the user is able to set up a field transfusion, taking blood from one person, and transfusing it into their patient, adding to their blood volume and potentially extending their life. A Field Tranfusion can extend the life of a patient by up to 3 posts.

*[Medicinal Style • Priority]
B-rank Taijutsu Discipline
When faced with multiple patients, one who has mastered this discipline is able to rapidly assess multiple patients and determine priority of their individual injuries, and the totality of their injuries to determine which require the highest priorities, and which can survive with delayed care. An additional benefit of this discipline is that one who has mastered it is always able to determine whether a patient is alive or dead, unless they are under the effects of A-rank or higher techniques designed to make them appear dead.

*[Medicinal Style • Comfort]
B-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Through the use of acupuncture and their knowledge of pressure points, the user is able to quickly apply a series of pricks, leaving the needles in, that dulls pain in localized areas of the body, or even the entire body. This method only isolates pain receptors, not other receptors, allowing someone under the effects of this technique to continue to function. The pain dulling effects will last for up to 5 posts, at which points the needles will have to be removed then replaced.
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History
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When Akuma was young, his father was extremely abusive to his mother, and often would get drunk and beat on her on the daily, as they coaligned with his drinking habits. He would often neglect his children to be at the local tavern getting it in with the local whores and woman, to satisfy his sexual needs, then would come home angry and unhappy because of his marital life. His mother did not ever once cheat on him during the 13 years they were together, however, one fateful night changed that, when she was caught with an outsider, within their home. The father came home and brutally murderer the man without hesitation, as Akuma watched,
out of passion, and then he made his way to Akuama's mother. Akuma didn't get to stop him in time as he killed her, but did manage to kill the assailant. At the time, the police saw this as self defense, but it has affected him ever since. He was 7 years old the day it happened.

In school he was said to be a genius, not ever completing his homework, but always completing the exams with great prowess. His teachers were lead to believe that he was a cheater, and thus kept close observation, but found nothing of the sort that would indicate him as a cheater. He developed ASPD and sociopathic disorders, but was diagnosed to be functional and fine after years of therapy.

Students look at him with hatred because of what he did in the past, and are afraid of him, and call him the drunks son and the adulterers son at times, as well as the Demon Boy who killed his parents as some even believe, due to his dark colored aura/light, that he was the perpetrator. He goes around commiting petty crimes, and other higher but not life-threatning to others, crimes to receive attention from people and grown ups to get him in line, although, he'll never admit to that. He now spends most his time training to become the greatest ninja.

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[Denied]Akuma Awai

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bruhh, how D:

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Post by Legacy » Wed Feb 21, 2018 10:34 am

Have no fear, your friendly neighborhood mod is here. It looks like you have several broken codes which are throwing off the overall structure of the app. What I would recommend is that you go and cop the template exactly as is from the character creation section and fill it in exactly as instructed.
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Post by Legacy » Wed Feb 21, 2018 11:19 am

You linked to your profile...I sent a pm regarding what to do.
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Post by BrotherhoodOfAnime » Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:29 pm

i did fix it but made another post instead,,,, bump

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Post by BrotherhoodOfAnime » Wed Feb 21, 2018 8:30 pm

i fixed it here now again


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Post by BrotherhoodOfAnime » Thu Feb 22, 2018 11:44 pm

this is what they told me was the guidelines.....

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Post by BrotherhoodOfAnime » Thu Feb 22, 2018 11:50 pm

this shit is annoying me fr fr

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Post by BrotherhoodOfAnime » Fri Feb 23, 2018 12:41 am

Im fixing it. But wouldn't it be easiere, since no where in the near future i see myself being a mod, to just tell me where I went wrong, instead of pointing me to the guidelines. Isn't that your jjob

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Post by WrightJustice » Fri Feb 23, 2018 5:11 am

Well you went wrong with a lot of stuff which are listed in the links such as concentration numbers, jutsu numbers and levels of stats for them and such. Signs you may have skipped over a lot of the rules, in particular just the character creation guide.
Also whilst you're at it, it seems a bunch of your code is broken and your personality is kind of lacking but maybe acceptable if you could make combat mentality into actual paragraph instead of a list.

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Post by Niro » Fri Feb 23, 2018 12:59 pm

Username:My Profile Include a link to your profile. <-Close but no cigar. Copy and paste this line of code and you'll be good. Put it outside of the [b] and remove the 'Include a link...' [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=4044504/]BrotherhoodofAnime[/url]

You'll need to link the Awai name back to the clan, I'll provide the code so just copy and paste again.

Replace the current [big][big][b]Akuma Awai[/b][/big][/big]

with

[big][big][b][url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5937076/1/#new]Awai[/url], Akuma[/b][/big][/big]

In general, we put the information outside of the code. Currently everything is within the code and is bolded, italicized, etc. Please move it so it is outside of the [/b] and [/i] tags.

Age:11 <-Genin are 12+, they're still in the academy at 11

Weight:88 <-88 what? Lbs? Stones?

Body:Body: In shape, has a six pack for his age, and is caucausion. He appears skinny and weak, but looks are deceiving. <-I don't see many if at all any 11 year olds with a six pack, even as a shinobi.

Personality: Akuma has a somewhat of a revolutionary mindset, with APSD and a highly functional sociopath, thanks to his encounters as a child. His personality can not be defined, but he is a highly intellectual human being with observational and deduction skills. His sense of humour is tremendous, and is mysterious.
General:
Hopes/Dreams:To become Hokage
Fears: Failure
Combat Mentality:Observant
Opportunistic
Charismatic
Flaring
Daring
Brave
Tactician
Psychological
Aggressive
Science of Deduction
Gorilla Warfare <-Gonna need you to actually describe his personality. Please write these into paragraphs rather than just listing off different adjectives.

Equipment: Carries a med kit <-What's in this med kit? Where is it stored? Does he carry any kunai? Shuriken? Explosive tags? If you don't grab them now you'll have to pay for them in the future.

Your ability section should look like this
Abilities
First Ability
Awai:
Hiton
Born to the Awai clan, this user is able to utilize Light Release, a fusion composed of Raiton and Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require Hiton. Hiton has a blinding effect.
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Hiton jutsu are known for their blinding quality that exists unless otherwise stated. This quality, combined with the burning power of raw light creates a powerful offensive style that has a game-changing supplemental ability. The brightness of Hiton jutsu, and the burning power they have is based off rank.
  • 1-10 Ninjutsu 1st Degree Burns :: Spotting in Vision
  • 11-20 Ninjutsu 2nd Degree Burns :: Momentary Blindness with Residual Blurriness, Spotting, lack of Focus
  • 21-35 Ninjutsu 3rd Degree Burns :: Temporary Blindness 1 - 3 posts
  • 36+ Ninjutsu 4th Degree Burns :: Blindness 4+ posts
Second Ability
Third Ability
Copy and paste the code below into your current ability section.

[table=2, Abilities][b]First Ability[/b][c][quote=Awai][b][color=gold]Hiton[/color][/b]
Born to the Awai clan, this user is able to utilize Light Release, a fusion composed of [color=#fe0]Raiton[/color] and [color=orangered]Katon[/color], and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require [color=gold]Hiton[/color]. [color=gold]Hiton[/color] has a [b]blinding[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Blinding)]Hiton jutsu are known for their [b]blinding[/b] quality that exists unless otherwise stated. This quality, combined with the burning power of raw light creates a powerful offensive style that has a game-changing supplemental ability. The brightness of Hiton jutsu, and the burning power they have is based off rank.[list][*][b]1-10 Ninjutsu[/b] 1st Degree Burns :: Spotting in Vision[*][b]11-20 Ninjutsu[/b] 2nd Degree Burns :: Momentary Blindness with Residual Blurriness, Spotting, lack of Focus[*][b]21-35 Ninjutsu[/b] 3rd Degree Burns :: Temporary Blindness 1 - 3 posts[*][b]36+ Ninjutsu[/b] 4th Degree Burns :: Blindness 4+ posts[/list][/spoiler][/quote]
[c][b]Second Ability[/b][c]
[c][b]Third Ability[/b][c][/table]

Your concentration section should look like this
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Place them here]
Taijutsu
Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
Medicine:
The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Arts of Medicine:
Arts of Medicine
This user has educated themselves in traditional medicine, and is able to treat and care for wounds in methods taught to medicine men and doctors that don't utilize chakra.
Requires: [Medicine] and [Deft Hands] Concentrations
All Art of Medicine Techniques require both Taijutsu and Instinct stats equal to the requirements for the rank of the Technique.
Genjutsu[Place them here]
Again, just copy and paste the code below into your concentration section and have it replace the current code.


[table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][c]
[b]Taijutsu[/b][c][quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote][quote=Medicine]The fundamental skill of [b][Medicine][/b] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][quote=Arts of Medicine][b]Arts of Medicine[/b]
This user has educated themselves in traditional medicine, and is able to treat and care for wounds in methods taught to medicine men and doctors that don't utilize chakra.
[b]Requires: [Medicine] and [Deft Hands] Concentrations[/b]
[i]All Art of Medicine Techniques require both Taijutsu and Instinct stats equal to the requirements for the rank of the Technique.[/i][/quote][c]
[b]Genjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][/table]

I'm going to stop here for now but once you have everything else fixed I'll be back.
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Post by BrotherhoodOfAnime » Sat Feb 24, 2018 11:23 am

@WrightJustice I don't see how Its lacking? Are you just upset over the comments I made referring to mods? Anyway, thanks for the few bit you did input.

@Niro THANK YOIU! you were extremely helpful.

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Post by BrotherhoodOfAnime » Sat Feb 24, 2018 11:25 am

ALSO I DID DESCRIBE HIS PERSONALITY, JSUT NOT HIS COMBAT MENTALITY WHICH DIDN'T SPECIFY THAT I NEEDED TO POST A PARAGRAPH ORMORE, OR I WOULD HAVE

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Post by Niro » Sun Feb 25, 2018 3:29 pm

Please post to let us know when you edit.
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Post by Kao » Sun Feb 25, 2018 3:32 pm

• Arts of Medicine isn't a concentration. It's a tai style, so you can remove that bit from your concentrations section. Use this code instead:

[table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][c]
[b]Taijutsu[/b][c][quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote][quote=Medicine]The fundamental skill of [b][Medicine][/b] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote]
[c][b]Genjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][/table]

• Even though the "combat mentality" doesn't specify that it needs to be in a paragraph, you still need to write it out in complete sentences.
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Post by Director » Fri Mar 02, 2018 1:39 pm

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Post by WrightJustice » Fri Mar 02, 2018 3:37 pm

Whilst you're at it; it should be ASPD for Anti-Social Personality disorder but you put APSD.

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Post by Yura » Tue Mar 06, 2018 3:35 pm

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