[Accepted]Kotaru Mod 1.7

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Kao
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[Accepted]Kotaru Mod 1.7

Post by Kao » Thu Mar 01, 2018 12:23 am

Application: Akari Kotaru

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Experience Tranquility
B-Ranked Status Genjutsu
This technique can be used on enemies or allies alike. After Kotaru channels his chakra, he will say “Relax” to activate the genjutsu. After hearing the command, over the course of one post the target will experience a sensation of being gradually relieved of stress and hostility. After this initial post, the target will be amiable, less inclined to be hostile towards others, and more open to positive suggestion from the user. Though this does not guarantee the target will heed to the user's suggestions, the genjutsu influences the target to view the suggestions positively and makes them more inclined to follow them. This technique lasts 6 posts.

Into the Sand
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After channeling his chakra , Kotaru will place his hands in front of him with his fingers spread and palms pointed down and then makes a downward pushing motion. When his target sees the motion, the genjutsu will activate. Over one post, the ground beneath the target will cover their feet up to their ankles and act as quicksand, pulling them down with 20 strength. If the target has above 20 strength, they can wrench their body from the ground, which will cause the illusion to break. After the first post, for the next 4 posts the target will slowly sink into the ground in the following manner:
  • End of 2nd post: buried up to the knees
  • End of 3rd post: buried up to the waist
  • End of 4th post: buried up to the neck.
The target will remain buried to the neck for an additional post before the technique ends.

Eyes on Me
B-Ranked Status Genjutsu
After channeling his chakra, Kotaru will say “Eyes on me” to activate the technique. After hearing the command, the target will be inclined to keep Kotaru within their line of sight and much less likely to look away from him for an extended amount of time. This technique lasts 5 posts.

Double Jump
D-Ranked Taijutsu Manuver
Type: Eroshiin
With his eroshiin extended, Kotaru jumps up and then flaps his eroshiin. The movement allows him to double jump up to X meters, where X equals 1/2 of his strength.

Corkscrew
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Pre-Requisite: Eroshiin
With this manuever, Kotaru jumps into the air and uses his eroshiin to rapidly spin upward at a speed equal to his strength and gain height of X meters, where X is equal to 1/2 his strength.

Hover
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Pre-Requisite: Eroshiin
Kotaru can use this techinique to remain in the air after jumping upward using another maneuver or jumping down from a high position. He must continuously flap the shiin at a steady pace to maintain his position in the air. While using Hover, due to it requiring his focus he is unable to use any other taijutsu maneuvers and is unable to gain height.

~Glide
B-Ranked Maneuver Taijutsu
Type: Eroshiin
Requirements: ~Feather Fall
Effectively the same as the prior technique, this allows the Akari to glide in all measure of the word. They are able to 'ride' the wind, gaining height through the use of the natural wind or [Fuuton] techniques.

Twin Spirals
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, Kotaru clenches his hands into claws and holds them in front of his body. A swirling jet of flames will erupt from each hand, traveling at a speed of 12 and hitting with a strength of 8. The flames move in a spiral pattern with a diameter of up to 10 feet, though this can be adjusted plus or minus one foot per 2 points of control up to a maximum of 15 feet. This justu lasts up to two posts.

Spike
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed seals, a three foot long spike shaped mass of katon forms in Kotaru's hand. Within the next 2 posts, he is able to throw the spike toward a target. Once the the spike hits the target it explodes with the strength of a C-ranked explosion.

Flaming Arc
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming the needed seals, Kotaru coats his melashiin in katon chakra. Within the next 3 posts, if he swings the melashiin the motion launches the katon in an arc shape that is the same length of his melashiin toward the target at speed equal to his strength. The flames hit with 10 strength. The flames can be launched up to 12 meters before they lose their shape and disperse.

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[Accepted]Kotaru Mod 1.7

Post by Yura » Thu Mar 01, 2018 2:31 am

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[Accepted]Kotaru Mod 1.7

Post by Niro » Thu Mar 01, 2018 8:42 am

Accepted

This application has been accepted. Congratulations! Any necessary changes will be handled by the moderating team.
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