[Accepted]Shit is getting real!

[Trusted Grader]

Application: Nehan
Change: Adding 3 S-Rank techs

Verdadera GuadañaShow

-:-Bone Annihilator!
S-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 50 Strength, Bone Crusher!
By using brute strength Nehan's strikes can cause bone crushing effects on weaker foes, especially if they try to block the strikes. If the target are within 3 strength will receive minor fracture to their bones, those beyond 5 will have their bones broken. Strikes hitting the ground will not only cause it to protrude but also shake violently for 1 post.

NinjutsuShow

*[Ninjutsu • Shadow Assassination Technique]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will disguise themselves in a process similar to the transformation technique, "flattening" themselves and causing them to appear like a semi-opaque solid black image of their flattened self, giving off the visual illusion they are a shadow. The user may then send themselves flying to a nearby target's shadow, within 25 meters, at a speed of 35. If successful, they will mirror themselves in the users shadow so that they may follow them for up to 5 posts. At any point if the users attempts to attack, the disguise will be released, causing a "poof " of smoke. This jutsu uses up one of the 2 teleportations a character can use in a single thread.

[Ninjutsu • Chakra Explosion]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into one of their fists, the user will then attempt to strike their target and if successful, they will release additional concussive force in the form of an outward explosion at S-Rank force from their fist. If the user does not strike a target within 5 posts the jutsu dissipates.

Payment: 30

[Valkier]

-Bone Annihilator! reads like it should be a manoeuvre to me. As a discipline it implies that Nehan would always break bones with every strike she ever makes, as a consequence of sheer instinct - so she essentially would have no control over her own strength. I guess that's okay, if the only thing she ever does with her hands is punch people to death

Otherwise all looks good.

[Trusted Grader]

Exactly, that's exactly what it is.

[Valkier]

I'm not sure I explained that well enough, because I can't understand that it's intentional. With no control over her own strength, everything she does with her hands will be at max strength. Trying to turn off a lightswitch would end with her punching through several buildings. Trying to brush her teeth would probably result in beheading herself from the sheer force. And so on - as a discipline, she has zero control over it, it's pure instinct alone.
Simply changing the type to manoeuvre means she can do it by choice, and apply it just when she wants... Is that not preferable?

[Trusted Grader]

As long as it applies to all her moves when she is in a fight, i'm down...

[Niro]

1/2

[Kao]

Actually I think this fits better as a stance.

Stances

Stances, unlike maneuvers, are not specifically combat oriented, but have to do with modifying how the user controls their body. Stances are things like moving silently, bracing themselves for damage, or preparing for specific kinds of attacks. They involve altering themselves from the default, changing the way they would normally respond to a specific way to elicit a specific type of result. Stances can be game changers, inside and outside of combat, that heavily modify how well a character is able to perform.

Rank S

Those who transcend mortality and break into the realm of lesser dieties belong here. These feats include controlling your body on a microscopic level. While you may not be able to achieve what those who use ninjutsu may, few would know the difference as you stop bleeding, throw punches that burn on contact, and control yourself at what would seem the speed of thought itself.

I mean I could be wrong, but I think it fits?

[Trusted Grader]

It seems so, but eh like I said, as long as it applies to all her physical attacks is all (that's why I chose discipline)

But fine, as long as it works. I'll go with stance then.

[Rain21199]

1/2

[Niro]

Accepted

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