[Accepted]Asuke, Rin

[Manann]

Username: Manann
Points: 5
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Asuke, Rin
The Monkey Samurai

[Walk Your Own Path]

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General Information Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 1"
Weight: 130
Physical Features:

• Face/head: Rin has blonde hair, the side of it shaven off and the middle let grow out so it droops over the sides and front, as well as thick sideburns. He has light violet eyes that are both cheery and wise.
• Body: Rin is slim but athletic, fitting the bill of a track star or dancer. He has some musule tone but not enough that it looks like he lifts weights often.
• Notable Features:4ft long blonde monkey tail growing from the bottom of the spine, just above the butt

Clothing/Accessories: Rin likes flashy colorful clothes an those that make him look like an outlaw, because he thinks it's cool. He wears a red jacket over a grey shirt and a pair of grey below knee grey shorts. He also wears a single samurai style shoulder protector on his left shoulder, with his family symbol (a sword over a sakura flower) painted on it.
Personality: Rin is a kid at heart, he's carefree and never serious, always making jokes and being optimistic. He rarely gets anger but is deathly protective of his friends and teachers.

• General:
• Hopes/Dreams: To become the most powerful ninja in the world and to prove himself to his family
• Fears: That he'll never be good enough
• Combat Mentality:"You have a combat mentality?! I just hit stuff and don't get hit"

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Battle Information Village: Minor, Dragon Country
Rank: D-rank

• Ninjutsu: 1
• Taijutsu: 10
• Genjutsu: 1
• Stamina: 15
• Control: 1
• Strength: 5
• Speed: 5
• Instinct: 2

Equipment:
Katana: 28inch long Located in a sheath hanging over his left hip from a belt
Katana: 28inch long Located in a sheath hanging over his left hip from a belt
Katana: 28inch long Located in a sheath hanging over his right hip from a belt
Wakizashi: 14inch long Located behind his back hidden from view an easily accessible for his tail.
Companions: (0/5)
Affinity: Katon

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Abilities and Concentrations

Abilities
First Ability	Saru, Possessed by the Monkey Spirit Rin is the host of a monkey spirit, however due to his inability to use chakra the spirit is locked away within him, unable to be utilized. The possession has granted Rin increased chakra pools and a prehensile tail that is just as strong as any of Rin's other limbs. This is Orochi style Tenkujutsu and is unusable until Rin can perform one [1] ninjutsu other than the Basic Ninjutsu.
Second Ability	Companion Master This character specializes in the organization of others, and has committed part of their time in coordinating themselves with pets, spirits, or henchmen in combat. This gives the user of this ability four[4] companions, each companion is separate from the other and can be any type of companion. There is no limit to ranks for companions.
Third Ability	-----

Concentrations
Ninjutsu	OPEN
Taijutsu	The fundamental skill of the [Upper Body] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their arms, chest and head in various ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. Shiha Saru-ryu is a sword style created by Rin Asuke that focuses on using his unique features to his advantage, in particular his tail. Shiha Saru-ryu involves holding a blade in each hand, the mouth, and tail; hence the name Four Sword Monkey Style. It involves multiple inaccurate slashes and spinning attacks, aswell as an unrelenting offense. The style is also good for defense and can be defensive while still being offensive. The downfall of this style is the clumsiness and lack of precision. it also takes some time to enter into the style, making it a good idea to prepare before the combat. Requires: [Upper Body], [Sword] Concentrations, and a prehensile tail
Genjutsu	OPEN

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Jutsu

NinjutsuShow

None

TaijutsuShow

Shiha Saru-ryuShow

D-RankShow

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Open Stance]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: 5 Taijutsu
The signature stance of the style, Open Stance is a basic stance to be in but more advanced to use. The user stands with feet shoulder width apart and a slight bend in their knees. Blades held at waist level pointing forward at a slight angle to the side. The mouth blade is held by the handle facing either way, same with the tail blade. This stance is useful for chops, slashes, and blocking in all directions and can hit the opponent anywhere around them.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Sakura Stance]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: 5 Taijutsu
Sakura Stance is a basic stance is simple to use. The user stands with feet close. Blades are held at any height and all blades point either left or right. The mouth blade is held by the handle facing the same direction as the other blades, same with the tail blade. This stance is used for spinning attacks.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Nettle Stance]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: 9 Taijutsu
This stance is much more difficult to use. The user stands with feet shoulder width apart, one back from the other and a slight bend in their knees. The hand blades are held back, arms bent so the hands are inline with the torso. The mouth blade is held by the handle facing either way and the head is turned to the blade is facing straight out from the body. The tail blade is held back, the blade of the sword resting on the user's side. This stance is a fully offensive stance that is dangerous to use, it is made for devastating stabs. It is very easy to switch to and from this stance.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Stormy Mountain Stance]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: 9 Taijutsu
This stance is much more difficult to use and more dangerous. The user stands with feet shoulder width apart, one back from the other and a slight bend in their knees. The hand and tail blades are held above the head. The mouth blade is held in a way that the blade protects the upper torso. This stance is offensive and dangerous to use, it is made for devastating overhead chops.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Butterfly Hurricane]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 5 Taijutsu
A very important tool for users of Shiha Saru-ryu. The user focuses on breathing and pumping oxygen rich blood to the muscles in the legs, giving a short burst of speed and more control on precise movements. This gives +3 Speed for a post but decreases the user's speed by 3 for two posts afterwards as the muscles recover. Useful for any attack that involves momentum or the movement of the legs.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Full Body Slice]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
A very basic move, the user slices with all their swords at once, overwhelming defenses with four seperate attacks.

C-RankShow

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Whirling Defense]
C- Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Usage of the Open Stance
The user begins to swing all their blade around them, intercepting attacks aimed for them. This is a very weak total defense, blocking attacks all around them. This jutsu is activated at the user's speed and has strength equal to the user's strength

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Beetle Pierce]
C- Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Usage of the Open Stance, Usage of Wise Owl
When the target makes an intercept-able attack the user blocks that attack and counter attacks, swing their hand blades in downwards chops, their head blade sideways, and their tail blade in a diagonal slash. This is hard to block due to the different directions the attacks come in.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Sakura Petal]
C- Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Usage of the Sakura Stance
The user steps forward and twirls their foot entering into a fast spin. When they contact the target they push their blades outwards and step into them while continuing to spin creating deep gashes. After this is used the user feels dizzy and has -1 speed for 1 post

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Nettle Jab]
C- Ranked Taijutsu Manuever
Prerequisite: Usage of Nettle Stance
A very dangerous move, the user full out sprints towards the target, keeping their blades back, when the tips of the blade touch the target the user pushes all their swords forwards in an attempt to impale the target. This is dangerous as it leaves the user wide open to ranged attacks or being struck from the side.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Dragon Falling Bolt]
C- Ranked Taijutsu Manuever
Prerequisite: Usage of Stormy Mountain Stance
A very dangerous move, the user swings their blades downwards while bending at the waist and knees, creating lots of downwards motion boosted by gravity creating powerful chops and slashes that result in deep cuts. This is dangerous as it leaves the user wide open


[Shiha Saru-ryu • Wise Owl]
C- Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 Taijutsu
Another important tool for users of Shiha Saru-ryu. "The user constantly looks for even the slightest enemy movement during combat allowing them to predict attacks easier and see openings in their defense.

GenjutsuShow

None

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History

Historical AccountsShow

Rin was born in the Fields country to a small samurai family, protectors of their town and friends of the nearby town's samurai. At Rin's birth a monkey spirit has cast into his body by a hateful samurai that was part of an allied samurai family. For Rin's entire life he was an outcast, hated and feared by his family and the other people of his village. So he left, searching for someone to teach him how to use the spirits power so he could prove himself to his family

[Kao]

Hi, welcome to saigen

• Username: Include a link to your profile. <--- You can replace this with the following code:

[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=4046891/]Manann[/url]

• We don't have a country called Fields Country, but we do have countries called Whirlpool Country and Grass Country between Earth and Fire countries. This is a link to our current map. Whirlpool Country is country 41, and Grass is number 40. Country 39 is unnamed and has not been made yet but you can be from there as well.

• Please write the sizes of your katana and wakizashi.

• Your history spoiler is trapped inside your genjutsu spoiler. If you add another [/spoiler] at the end of it, it'll be fixed. It'll look like [spoiler=Genjutsu]None[/spoiler][/spoiler]

• Your genjutsu spoiler is trapped inside your taijutsu spoiler. You can fix it the same way you'd fix the problem with the genjutsu/history spoilers. Add a [/spoiler] tag after the ninjutsu spoiler information.

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Jutsu

• [Shiha Saru-ryu • Nettle Stance] <--- If the prereq is 10 tai, then it's automatically a C rank technique. The most you can have it as a prereq and still be D ranked is by making the prereq 9.

• [Shiha Saru-ryu • Stormy Mountain Stance] <-- same as above

• [Shiha Saru-ryu • Butterfly Hurricane] <--- if this is adding a speed boost, you need to say exactly how much it'll boost it. Basically, your D rank technique can have a total stat boost of +3. But keep in mind that there will also be a stat debuff of -3. Here is a link to the stat boosting rules if you want to read up about it some more.

• [Shiha Saru-ryu • Full Body Slice] <--- I think this is more of a maneuver, not a stance

• [Shiha Saru-ryu • Whirling Defense] <--- Also more of a maneuver than a stance

• [Shiha Saru-ryu • Dragon Falling Bolt] <--- Also more of a maneuver, I believe

[Manann]

Should be fixed, changed country to Dragon Country and added 5 points because tomorrow is my birthday!!

viewtopic.php?&t=4022309/1/

[Rain21199]

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Butterfly Hurricane]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 Taijutsu
A very important tool for users of Shiha Saru-ryu. The user focuses on breathing and pumping oxygen rich blood to the muscles in the legs, giving a short burst of speed and more control on precise movements. This gives +3 Speed for a post but decreases the user's speed by 3 for two posts afterwards as the muscles recover. Useful for any attack that involves momentum or the movement of the legs.

This should be a maneuver as you are physically doing something. Disciplines are things that your character knows or automatically does at all times. This is like if your tail is used to constantly keep balance or you're character is always aware of the best escape route in an area.

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Wise Owl]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 Taijutsu
Another important tool for users of Shiha Saru-ryu. The user focuses on their opponent, focusing on their attacks and movements. This is useful for defense and offense.

This sounds more like a stance, as it locks your character into watching their opponent closely. If you wanted it to be a discipline it would have to be constant like "The user constantly looks for even the slightest enemy movement during combat allowing them to predict attacks easier and see openings in their defense." but that would be a C-Rank jutsu. You have enough jutsu points to transform that jutsu into a C-Rank if you so wish.

Also, could you please put a location on where your weapons are held?

[Manann]

Fixed

[Kao]

Nice. 1/2

[Niro]

Almost done, this won't remove your 1/2

[Shiha Saru-ryu • Whirling Defense]
C- Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Usage of the Open Stance
The user begins to swing all their blade around them, intercepting attacks aimed for them. This is a very weak total defense, blocking attacks all around them. This jutsu is activated at the user's speed and has strength of 20 <-Taijutsu scale off of your own physical stats rather than attacking with a set physical stat. Because your strength is 5, it'd only strike with 5.

[Manann]

Fixed

[Rain21199]

Quick thing, it says you have 5 points at the top of your app, that should be a 0.

[Manann]

Birthday points, see second reply

[Rain21199]

Okay, sorry for missing that.

2/2



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