[Accepted]Explosion corps

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Tristan
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Tristan » Tue Mar 13, 2018 10:53 pm

Explosion corps
*Neutralize any and all threats to the Village
*Strike fear into the enemies of Iwagakure
* operate when and wherever needed
* follow all orders from the village to the fullest possible extinct

”They won’t be able to find all the pieces ”

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Type of Organization:Sub-Org
Location of the Organization's Main Base:Iwagakure
Description of the Organization:The explosion corps is a specialized Force of shinobi from Iwagakure that specializes in every possible use of explosives and explosive chakra and participate in missions requiring demolition, defensive setups,mine detection,facilitating movement and support of friendly forces while impeding those of the enemy. Infiltration,and even does some forms of domestic and Combat construction via doton and koton The explosion corps has also been on the forefront of applications and inventions of new explosive weapons and equipment
Requirements of the Organization: Be chunin rank or higher, pass a specialized test, have expanded knowledge on explosives and demolition,
Members Of the Organization
Matsuka, Tsuki

NPCs Of the Organization



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Location of Outpost: central Iwagakure near Kouchi
Intent of Outpost: central intelligence for the corps ,where the meeting are held , the last outpost to defend the village as it’s the closets to the tsuikage
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1st Division” The Fireworks “ -Offensive unitShow
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Kabu
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Kabu » Wed Mar 14, 2018 11:36 pm

This looks mostly in order except that in order to have NPCs for the organization you need to earn them IC by earning resources for the org first and then buying them.
NPCsShow
Shinsen Kyoko - #99840A
Kyomu Nozomi - #5960A8
Ibakuro Rin - #9E4FA5
Nakiya Hotaru - #9E540A
Nakano Kiyomi - #8E47AD], Nakano Ayaka - #0C1C8C
Fukusha Nezumi - #E00747
Karagata yamada - #CE1126, Makura Ayame - #7251BC
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Valkier » Thu Mar 15, 2018 12:03 am

Looks like you're missing a single opening square bracket '[' at the very beginning of the post which is interrupting the formatting.

Further to Kabu's feedback, I'm afraid the same currently applies to equipment and bases too - organisations right now start with nothing and have to earn these benefits to add to their sheet.
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Aisu NaohiroJouninKirigakure no Sato[Unit 12] [HHD] [#BAE0E2] [#70CEE2]
Hachiya KotoriGeninIwagakure no Sato[Ukiyogenma Jinchuuriki] [H.N.K.][Gold] [#BF8040][Thread Tracker]

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Tristan
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Tristan » Thu Mar 15, 2018 3:48 am

Ok I have changed it


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Kao
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Kao » Sun Mar 18, 2018 8:10 pm

1/2
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Akari KotaruBanninIwagakure no Sato Team 18 Jousai [color=#1fb8a3]
Komiya ShizuoJounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#209DD3]
Yanagida Yukino Special Jounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#a07ac2]
Ishiwara SetsunaChuunin Iwagakure no Sato[color=#E81D1D]
Enkouten Mai Jounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#CE5412]
Aisu Namie Chuunin Kirigakure no Sato [color=#5bc2d4]
Awai FusaeA-Rank MNKonohagakure no Sato[color=#D95FEA]
Important NPCsShow
Akari Kanehara Akari clan elder [color=#80A0FF]
Sakata KannaIwagakure Councilwoman [color=#3DA43B]
Hazuki Shuran Jinchuuriki researcher [color=#E854C0]
Enkouten Kaizen Iwagakure councilman, clan leader [color=#C65871]
Rock Country Daimyo [color=#AC4A4A]

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Tristan
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Tristan » Sun Mar 18, 2018 8:45 pm

?


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Kao
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Kao » Sun Mar 18, 2018 8:48 pm

In order to get something passed, two mods need to pass it. The first mod gives a 1/2, the second mod gives a 2/2, and then it will be officially put into the archives.

So, 1/2

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Kao's CharactersShow
Akari KotaruBanninIwagakure no Sato Team 18 Jousai [color=#1fb8a3]
Komiya ShizuoJounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#209DD3]
Yanagida Yukino Special Jounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#a07ac2]
Ishiwara SetsunaChuunin Iwagakure no Sato[color=#E81D1D]
Enkouten Mai Jounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#CE5412]
Aisu Namie Chuunin Kirigakure no Sato [color=#5bc2d4]
Awai FusaeA-Rank MNKonohagakure no Sato[color=#D95FEA]
Important NPCsShow
Akari Kanehara Akari clan elder [color=#80A0FF]
Sakata KannaIwagakure Councilwoman [color=#3DA43B]
Hazuki Shuran Jinchuuriki researcher [color=#E854C0]
Enkouten Kaizen Iwagakure councilman, clan leader [color=#C65871]
Rock Country Daimyo [color=#AC4A4A]

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Kabu
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[Accepted]Explosion corps

Post by Kabu » Sun Mar 18, 2018 9:43 pm

Accepted

This application has been accepted. Congratulations! Any necessary changes will be handled by the moderating team.
NPCsShow
Shinsen Kyoko - #99840A
Kyomu Nozomi - #5960A8
Ibakuro Rin - #9E4FA5
Nakiya Hotaru - #9E540A
Nakano Kiyomi - #8E47AD], Nakano Ayaka - #0C1C8C
Fukusha Nezumi - #E00747
Karagata yamada - #CE1126, Makura Ayame - #7251BC
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