[Denied]Daihekei Yuu

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❦Daihekei Yuu❦
General Information
AGEGNDRHGTWGT
24Male6'4220lbs.
Physical Features
When not on mission Yuu enjoys to spend his time in the outdoors, chopping down trees, gardening, or just spending time in nature. Being outside so much has left his with a dark tan, but never burning. Along with his tannes his body has a natural strong physic from work outside, and his active lifestyle. His facial features have a complexion and simpleness that don't differentiate him at from another normal person, or a working class man. He has beach blonde hair that he lets grow out a little, but keeps it cleanly cut, as he values cleanliness.

Clothing/Accessories
Yuu, when on a mission or away from a leisure afternoon in nature, can often be found dressed in nice clothing. He mainly will sport a dark button up shirt, with a tie to match. The rest of his outfit usually stays the same on mission, as he enjoys his elusive all white get up, in which he goes the extra mile to keep clean. He wears a white blazer, which buttons in the front over his dress shirt, as well as white slacks to match. Along with this he sports a white overcoat that he often drapes over his shoulders, not using the sleeves, and decorates with a scarf to give the outfit a little color. Lastly he wears black leather shoes in which he has a sprawling collection of, leading them to be his most prized position. When fighting he tried to go the extra mile to keep his clothes clean, as Yuu will generally take off his overcoat and roll up his sleeves before exchanging blows, wanting to keep the blood of his enemies from staining.

Personality
Yuu is a simple minded person. He left the big city of Konohagakure to venture out in the world and find a nomadic and slow life for himself. He enjoys quiet afternoon and nature most of all, and is always willing to lend a helping hand to a fellow laborer in need.

Combat Mentality
While in combat Yuu rarely feels the thrill of a fight, only when an opponent can truly go toe to toe with him, in a long lasting fight of testing wills does he find enjoyment in combat. Most of the time Yuu will look to finish a fight before it starts, longing to be back in the forest surround by solidarity.
Battle Information
CountryRank
Konohagakure A-Rank
NINTAIGENSTACONSTRSPDINS
402622240163024
[c]Yuu has a white mask in which he used to use in order to hide his identity on high level missions. However sense defecting from Konohagakure he rarely is seen wearing it, for he no longer worries if he is recognized, as he mostly spends his days in small villages.
Equipment
[b]Companions[/b] (0/0)
[b]Affinity[/b]Suton
[b]Specialty[/b][spoiler=Ninjutsu Specialist]Having devoted his life to mastering the arts of Ninjutsu, Yuu is classified as a Ninjutsu Specialist. Ninjutsu specialists are able to devote a total of 10 concentrations to Ninjutsu, unlike most people who are capped at 8. However, they are only able to devote a max of 5 concentrations to Taijutsu, and a max of 5 concentrations to Genjutsu. As a Ninjutsu Specialist, Yuu is able to utilize Ninjutsu concentrations reserved for specialists, and is able to enter the God Tier [45+] on select stats, and meaning as a specialist they can select stats to break into the God tier. These stats can only be Ninjutsu, Speed, Control, and Stamina.[/spoiler]

Abilities and Concentrations [b]First Ability[/b][spoiler=Ryo-ku Henkei][b]Ryo-ku Henkei: Graviton Shift[/b] Through his unique powers of alteration Yuu has developed the ability Ryo-ku Henkei. This ability lets him shift and manipulate the denseness, as well as the directional force, of gravity. Since energy and mass are equivalent, all forms of energy cause gravitation and are under the influence of it, in which Yuu creatures massive energy using Ryo-ku Henkei in order to influence the world around him. The manipulative properties of Ryo-ku generally fall under attracting and repelling, along with anchoring gravity. Attraction using gravity works by Ryo-ku increasing the energy around him or a designated object, in order to add gravitational pull on those in the range of the ability. While repelling using gravity works the opposite way, as the Ryo-ku ability will drastically and quickly decrease the energy acting in the area, causing the gravity to lessen and repel. Lastly with high level abilities of Ryo-ku Yuu has the ability to anchor gravity around himself, causing the area inside the affected alteration of gravity to act as though what is anchored is the center of mass, instead of the earth.[/spoiler][b]Second Ability[/b][spoiler=Kei-jō Henkei][b]Kei-jō Henkei: Surface Inversion[/b] Through his unique powers of alteration Yuu has devolped the ability Kei-jō Henkei. This ability lets him shift and inverse surfaces or objects. Surface inversion works through modify the gravitational force acting upon an object or area by touching it, which is expressed by that object turning inside-out. If the object or area being acted upon is touched twice, the effects are reversed. This ability when using high level jutsu has great destructive potential: a blow to the chest designed to be fatal as the heart turns inside out, and blood flow is reversed, depriving the brain of oxygen. Kei-jō Also, with great care and through a high level jutsu, is able to let Yuu partially turn himself inside out without harm in order to evade attacks. However all Kei-jō jutsu that can affect living organisms is B-Rank or above. Though abilities main use to deal fatal blows it can also mold the environment, as Kei-jō can also use the turning inside out of objects to try trapping its opponents or violently snap small objects like tiles to project them into enemies. [/spoiler][b]Third Ability[/b][spoiler=Kaso-ku Henkei][b]Kaso-ku Henkei: Acceleration Overdrive[/b] Through his unique powers of alteration Yuu has developed the ability Kaso-ku Henkei. This ability lets him shift and manipulate the time affecting living organisms as well as the surrounding area or objects. Kaso-Ku alteration ability works as though Yuu is using a manipulated form of time on an object, mostly speeding up time through applied energy in which increases the rate of time advancing. This ability thus has many different uses, being able to speed up time around a wound healing it faster, or even letting Yuu cut forward in time by a couple seconds with higher level jutsu. Overall this is mainly used as a support jutsu for Yuu and his other abilities, making his other techniques faster or simply giving aid. [/spoiler]
Abilities
[b]Ninjutsu[/b][spoiler=Advanced Channeling]This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any ninjutsu that is designed to be channel, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method. To get this concentration the user must be a Ninjutsu Specialist, and have picked Control as one of their specialized stats.[/spoiler] [b]Taijutsu[/b][spoiler=Lower Body]The fundamental skill of [b][Lower Body][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency in using their legs and feet in many different ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.[/spoiler][spoiler=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/spoiler][spoiler=Polearm Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Polearm Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with staves, spears, halberds, pikes, scythes and other like weapons. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/spoiler][b]Genjutsu[/b][None]
Concentrations

History Yuu life started the way that most kids life begin, by being born. He was born to his mother Mariko, and no father. She always treated him kindly, loved him so dearly even though the first year or so of Yuu's life his mother was shunned for her bastard boy. She paid that no mind, and could often be seen loving the young child, smothering him with kisses to the point in which one would think the child was in pain from the love. She could not be separated from her little ball of joy, when she worked the young babe was dangling around her neck, held by a piece of cloth, picking at the flowers as she worked in the fields. While she was happy with her life, and with her child rumors started to spread through the village of who had planted the seed for this child to grow. Rumors be told that it was the self proclaimed shogun that had traveled the land around a year before Yuu's birth. At first as the news touched the quaint ears of the village folk more people became disgusted with Mariko. Disgusted as she was someone who could be tricked by a man beauty and word of his travels and power, to fall for a man and be left to bare the burden of mother and father. However these rumors were quickly quieted, as people began to stand up, praise the power of the shogun, those who had seen him in action, and also stand up for Mariko's love for not only her child, both the shogun as well. Eventually as Yuu began to walk and talk, learning exceptionally fast, he and his mother were once again accepted with open arms, almost praised by the country folk that they resided with.

Soon after this was when Yuu turned four, and he began to venture into training and following in his father's footsteps of power, along with abiding by the standard which developed in the village for his strength. He began to train with the warriors that were already established in the village, along with the kids much older then him, ranging from 10-18, training all to be able to protect the village. In time he started to surpass some of the younger children, and then ashe trained for two years, Yuu was able to go toe to toe with some of the older trainees as well. He showed great strength and speed, along with a understanding of battle and sword play. He began to study advanced sword and medicale techniques along with his basic training, under Yuu Yuu, a village elder. This advanced training was in order to be able to confidently send him and his mother one day into the open world, in order for him to learn of other cultures and sword styles from around the world. Sooner than later the villages elders decided that time had come. At the age of six years old, accompanied only by his mother, Yuu went out into the world.


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Jutsu
Ninjutsu:
Kaso-ku Henkei
D-RankShow
Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Jikan
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into the palm of their hand. Once placed on an object the jutsu will cause time for that sole object or organism to speed up gradually. The longer the jutsu is held on the object the faster time starts to speed up, this jutsu has very little use on people as it would take a long time to have any affect on them. However if used on a small plant the user should be able to wilt in a little over a minute, as the time perceived without water will grown and the plant will rot.

Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Suru Kokoro
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, once completed the jutsu will accelerate the users mind. This jutsu utilizes exsus energy causing the mind to work faster, preserving and analyzing situations at a faster speed, almost twice as fast as normal brain functions. This jutsu can last up to the users stamina, however if it last over five post the user will start to feel extremely powerful headaches, getting worse every five additional posts.

Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Sakushi
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into the palm of their hand. Once this jutsu connects, with an open palm strike to the opponent, the person the jutsu is acting upon will start to feel faster. This jutsu tricks the person being acted on by speeding up the connections in the brain, causing the actions one wants to perform to lag behind, leaving the person to think that they are moving faster while they really are moving the same speed, and loose reaction time. This affect last up to five posts.

Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Kudō
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into the palm of their hand. Holding an object, or just simply touching one in motion will activate this jutsu, letting the user transfer energy into the object causing it to move much faster than before. The speed of the object is the original speed of the object thrown plus the users control/2.
C-RankShow
Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Obadoraibu
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into the palm of their hand. Holding an object, or just simply touching one in motion will activate this jutsu, letting the user transfer energy into the object causing it to move extremely faster than before. The speed of the object is the original speed of the object thrown plus the users control. If the total of the speed of jutsu's thrown is more than twice the speed+instinct of an enemy the objects acted upon will seem to just go from one place to the other, not being able to see them travel through the air.

Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Hiro
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into the palm of their hand. Then if the user hits or places their open palm on the opponent it will cause that jutsu to gain fatigue twice as fast as normal. This jutsu makes there muscles use energy faster, making it so that even normal movements will leave the person feeling exhausted at the end of the jutsu, this jutsu lasts up to five post, however if the opponents stamina is less then ten they will feel depleted and out of energy before the five post are up, if it is more then ten when the five post are up the person affected will feel fatigued and sluggish but still fully capable to fight.

Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Koka
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into the palm of their hand. Then the user will slap the open palm onto either their chest or another persons. This jutsu speeds up the processes of enemy jutsu, effectively cutting down the time in which the user is affected by half. This makes it so that the jutsu effect will wear off quicker than usual, however if it is an effect like poison that deals damage or could be fatal, this jutsu would make that effect happen twice as fast.
B-RankShow
Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Suru Me
B-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into their eyes. The users eyes would then be able to move faster and perceive their environment along with peoples actions much faster and much more accurately then before. This jutsu can even examine muscle movement of a person when the sole focus is on that one person, letting the user predict movements based on early muscle movement, however these predictions are not always right. The user is able to use this jutsu equal to their control stat. However if the jutsu is used continuously for over ten post the user's eyes will start to get weary and hurt, along with a slight headache, if used over twenty post the user vision will start to blur gradually along with headache, and over fourty the users eyes will temporarily shut in order to heal.

Kaso-ku Henkei: Chiyu Sokushin
B-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals, and then focus chakra into the palm of their hand. After the user will place their palm over an open wound, this jutsu effects smaller would, mainly cuts and lacerations that aren't too deep. With the palm over the wound the user will speed up the natural healing process, causing wound to close in around a minute. If the palm is taken off the wound during the healing process the progress will not be retracted, the wound would just begin to heal at a normal pace again.
A-RankShow
Kaso-ku Henkei: Kingu Kurimuzon
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite Jutsu: Kaso-ku Henkei: Kasoku Suru Me
The user channels their chakra into their entire body while focusing on the predicted image. As the eyes watch the body will be able to follow the prediction of what will happen and the events that will take place over the next couple of seconds. The amount of seconds this jutsu can effect is the users control stat/4. Then once the image is perceived of the next ten seconds the user will speed up those seconds and effectively remove himself from them. "During" this period of time, other people will be unable to experience anything that happened and will retain no memories of it either. People affected by the jutsu will carry out their actions in which they were already going to do in those ten seconds, as this jutsu does not affect opponents besides speeding up time to the point where their actions happen to fast to preserve it. After the allotted time frame, they will suddenly find themselves in the situation they were supposed to be afterwards. On the other hand, the user remains fully conscious during the erased time and only he can re-adjust his actions. The user moves with the speed up time as a void filled with juxtapositions of what would have happened during this period, allowing him to think out the next best action, however while this cut happens the user is not able to touch anyone else being affected as the jump is too fast.
Kei-jō Henkei
D-RankShow
Kei-jo Henkei: Kunai Morudo
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and by placing a hand on an object the user will be able to invert the object into a shape of a kunai. This weapon would need to be snapped off of the object after the inversion and would only work with a hard material.

Kei-jo Henkei: Pōrudansā
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands, and will place both hands on the ground and invert the ground to stick out in a long cylinder shape. This creates a 6' long staff that is able to be broken away from the ground and fought with. This jutsu works best with a hard surface such as rocks or wood, as dirt would fall apart.

Kei-jo Henkei: Hanten Kiba
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands will place both hands on the ground, inverting the ground in front and around him in a circle. This inversion will cause multiple spikes to implode out of the ground around him, if the surface is a hard material their form will hold.

Kei-jo Henkei: Shōkibo Hanten
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hands on the ground or an object. After pressing the users palm to the object it will invert, that is implode at first and reform into the same form but inverted. The user is able to do this on small sized objects, objects about three feet tall and three feet wide.

Kei-jo Henkei: Hanten Suringushotto
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hands on a flat object. By touching the object with the users palm, after a moment, the flat object will invert slightly, making the corners snap and jump off whatever surface the flat object is on. This creates a snapping nose and launches the object towards whatever direction it is facing, the user can also touch only corners of the object in order to make it shoot in a certain direction. The object travels at a speed of the users control/4.
C-RankShow
Kei-jo Henkei: Hanten Konpakuto Suringushotto
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hands on a flat object. By touching the object with the users palm, after a couple of second as the object builds up elastic force, the flat object will invert slightly, making the corners snap and jump off whatever surface the flat object is on. This creates a snapping nose and launches the object towards whatever direction it is facing, the user can also touch only corners of the object in order to make it shoot in a certain direction. The object travels at a speed of the users control/2.

Kei-jo Henkei: Chūkan Sukēru Hanten
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hands on the ground or an object. After pressing the users palm to the object it will invert, that is implode at first and reform into the same form but inverted. The user is able to do this on medium sized objects, objects about six feet tall and six feet wide.

Kei-jo Henkei: Hanten Tsume
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hands on the ground or an object. The object affected is inverted and coiled out in an attempt to grab and immobilize the enemy. This jutsu works as in a coil pattern and once the initial inversion has happened it will not be able to be controlled or moved, the movement happens at the start of the jutsu.

Kei-jo Henkei:
C-Rank Ninjutsu
B-RankShow
Kei-jo Henkei: Hanten-shitsu
B-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hands on the ground or an object. As the hands are placed on the ground it will trigger the ground or object affected to invert in a way that resembles a room, propping up into a sealed of square room. This jutsu is used mostly for trapping enemies and the dimensions of the room can be equal to the users control stat (in ft.).

Kei-jo Henkei: Kin'niku Hanten
B-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hand on an enemies body. Once the palm connects with the enemy the jutsu will target the muscles underneath the targeted area, and thus inverting it. This process of inversion causes a lot of pain as the enemies muscles splits and rips apart while turning inside out under the skin. While this process is going on the muscle would be rendered useless and even after inversion would still be much weaker than before.

Kei-jo Henkei: Hone Hanten
B-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hand on an enemies body. Once the palm connects with the enemy the jutsu will target the bone that is underneath the targeted area, and thus inverting it. This process causes a tremendous amount of pain as muscle tissue and skin can be damaged as the bone expands and reforms. Along with the initial damage the bone itself will end up inverted, leaving the soft cartilage on the outside and the hard outside shell in the thin middle.
A-RankShow
Kei-jo Henkei: Nejire-tai
A-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their body and internally inverts their body. This jutsu has to be done with extreme caution to not only keep the body from inverting too far, causing injury, but also when correcting the body to not alter it. This jutsu slightly inverts parts of the body in order to dodge attacks, most of the time the effects of the jutsu are slightly pulling in limbs or slightly twisting in a part of the body in order for the attack to glide by.

Kei-jo Henkei: Shishi no Hanten
A-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hand on an enemies Limb. This can very from small body parts like the hand or fingers, to bigger parts like the forearm. As the blow from the palm connect to the limb the jutsu inverts the limb, breaking it and rendering it unusable.
S-RankShow
Kei-jo Henkei: Saigo no Tān
S-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places the palm of their hand on either an opponent's chest over the heart or forehead. This jutsu inverts either the heart or the brain according to which part of the body is targeted, thus killing the person affected.
Ryo-ku Henkai
D-RankShow
Ryo-ku Henkai: Jūryoku Banjīsunappu
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and transitions their chakra into two objects. After placing their hand on each object, transerfing the chakra, the user is able to release each object and they will be pulled together.

Ryo-ku Henkai: Jūryoku Ketsuro
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and places his palms on a surface with an open center. The user then transfers chakra into the object his hands are placed on, causing it to crumble into the center of the open space. This jutsu is not able to make the object the force is acting upon any smaller but it is able to crush it into a tightly packed version, squashing anything inside.

Ryo-ku Henkai: Jūryoku Hanten
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and hits an enemy with an open palm strike. After the attack has connect the person affected by this jutsu will have lost their sense of gravity, in a way where their entire system is inverted. That being trying to raise an arm would cause you to lower it, trying to step to the right would cause the person affected to step to the left. This effect can linger up to five posts.
C-RankShow
Ryo-ku Henkai: Guravuiton Yūchi
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and, by using a strong compression of gravity between the users hands and a object, will cause the object to be pulled or attracted to the users hand. This works in way which after the initiation compression the user has no control over where the object or person affected is pulled too, and at what speed, as the course can be altered by outside sources. However the initial compression if not altered will be enough to pull and object or person to the users hand, in which the speed pulling on the person affected is the users control stat/2.


Ryo-ku Henkai: Guravuiton Hanpatsu
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels their chakra in their hands and, by a using a strong snapping of gravity between the users hands and a object, will cause the object to be repealed. This works in way which after the initiation snap the user has no control over where the object or person affected is repealed too, and at what speed. However the initial snap can help determine this, as the speed of the launch off the snap can be up to the users control stat/2.
B-RankShow
Ryo-ku Henkai: Karui Ankā
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing hand seals the user will become the Anchor of a reverse gravitational force, this jutsu limits are the user control stat in feet. After the jutsu has been performed the user will become the center of gravity, working in the way of a reverse gravitational phenomenon, effectively making the gravity shifts so that people and objects are repelled from the user. Thus, any unfixed object will fall away from him as if the Earth was a giant cliff but then return to normal once they fall sufficiently away from the user. Likewise, anyone positioned above the user will fall upward. The user is unaffected and can freely move around, and by default, the users gravity always makes him attracted to the surface below his feet, making him able to walk on any surface, even vertical ones, thus shifting gravity once again.
Taijutsu:
Kushou Style
D-RankShow
* Kushou・The Viper Flicks its Tongue
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves thrusting quickly with the user’s long weapon from a distance before quickly pulling back their polearm to prevent counters. This techniques most useful aspect is that it can be used while in motion without affecting speed or momentum.

* Kushou・The Courtier Taps his Fan
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves proper use of the pole of the user’s weapon to deflect blows. By properly angling and manoeuvring their spear or staff they can deflect other like weapons, hand to hand blows or even sword blows by striking the right place at the right time, even while in motion.

* Kushou・Low Wind Rising
D-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The foundational stance of the Kushou style, Low Wind Rising involves the spinning of the user’s spear or polearm around their body constantly whilst remaining in motion. While in this stance, the user will be able to deflect projectiles with less strength than their own, while also making unpredictable movements of their spear.

* Kushou・The Swallow Takes Flight
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will vault themselves into the air using their polearm and then unleash a powerful blow from above. This technique is used to disorient and surprise foes as well as overpower them as it strikes with all of the user’s body weight and momentum from the spin they perform in the air in order to strike with the spear that was touching the ground moments before.

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[Denied]Daihekei Yuu

Post by Fake » Sat Jun 02, 2018 8:50 pm

I've conferred with staff and you can't start at the age of 6. Perhaps something more reasonable, like 10.

Swallow is not a rank; I think you mean D-Rank.

As a minor country character, you're going to have to start with 1 Nin, 1 Control, and 1 Gen. Please fix that accordingly.

We can address the companion when it comes, but it's important to note that WIP's are not allowed in reg. Please be careful of that.

Nick says you can't have his ability, so -shrug-

As mentioned before, since your Genjutsu stat is 1 and your character can't have it at start up, you'll have to replace the Genjutsu on your sheet with something else. This also means you cannot have the sight initiation concentration.

Your history will have to also be adjusted to be consistent with your new age.

Minor: your weapon says "his sword his attacked to his back"; I think you mean "attached".

Finally, your jutsu count (including the two Genjutsu) adds up to 28 points of jutsu. You can add 1 more D-Rank if you keep the same amount of jutsu when you switch out your Gen.
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[Denied]Daihekei Yuu

Post by Diego » Fri Jun 08, 2018 4:09 pm

I edited and changed everything accordingly!

JK, I re-worked it into a new character, but its all ready to go now. I may have to work on the history A little bit more, but I think ill have some time if needed. I have a lot of custom jutsu, might be good, might be bad, please try to work with me as I'm not the best at custom jutsu!

Thanks y'all!

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[Denied]Daihekei Yuu

Post by Kao » Sun Jun 10, 2018 11:40 am

• You misspelled "suiton" in your affinity section

• Your third ability is the "time"part of the space/time style. You're going to need to follow the rules of space/time in order to have this:
Space Time Rules:
Additionally, the user must have an Ninpou pyramid that supports 3 S-rank jutsu. This pyramid must be pure ninpou, meaning it cannot be built with any concentrations.

In addition to the Ninpou pyramid, the user must have a combined 25 jutsu from other ninpou based concentrations (Sensory, Iijutsu, Fuuinjutsu, etc)

Stat wise, the user must have an average of 36 between their Stamina, Control, and Ninjutsu stats.
• Your gravity ability is kuuton mixed with space/time style. In order to do something like that, it'll be a paid ability, which you can't have at startup.
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Diego
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[Denied]Daihekei Yuu

Post by Diego » Sun Jun 10, 2018 10:36 pm

Im going back to the drawing board, this thread can be deleted! Thanks y'all!

Daihekei, Yuu
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[Denied]Daihekei Yuu

Post by Yura » Mon Jun 11, 2018 5:33 am

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Inji, AyakoC-RankWaterfall[color=#8080ff]

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