[Denied]Style Pack

[Inari]

Application: Hinomaru Inari
Change: Style pack. Adding the following genjutsu, totaling 50 points.
Payment: 0 words of ninja magic.

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[Genjutsu • Moudokumo no Jutsu (Deadly Cloud Technique)]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by hearing the user call out the technique’s name. Should the victim hear it, they will smell a persistent odor of flammable gas. This effect lasts for three posts.

[Genjutsu • Blink]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered when the victim sees the user wink. They immediately feel a small puff of dry air straight into their eyes. As the eyes have the strongest self-protection reflex in the human body, it is almost guaranteed to make the victim blink hard.

[Genjutsu • Aiden no Jutsu (Two Gods, One Shrine Technique)]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by a wink from the user. An illusory arm bearing the same weapon splits off from the user’s own, flashing out to strike at their center mass.

[Genjutsu • Kishuu! (Surprise attack!)]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated
The user forms a series of hand seals. This genjutsu is triggered by a wink from the user. When the target sees this, they feel a sharp pinch on their rear end.

[Genjutsu • Byakugan! (Byakugan!)]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by hearing the user call out the technique’s name. Once this occurs, they will perceive the user’s eyes as the same white as the legendary Byakugan, and the user’s veins to bulge appropriately. This effect lasts for three posts.

[Genjutsu • Koikokoro (To Fall in Love)]
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu. Sight-initiated
The user forms a series of hand seals. This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the user leaning in for a kiss. The target will feel a mild rush of euphoria akin to “butterflies in the stomach.” This effect lasts for five posts.

[Genjutsu • Karategata no Jutsu (Empty Promise Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the user making an empty-handed strike toward the target. Wherever the strike is aimed, the target will feel and see an illusory explosive tag be placed. The target can feel and attempt to remove the tag, but it will not come away. This effect lasts for three posts.

[Genjutsu • Kizu no Jutsu (Scratch Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the user making a strike with a bladed weapon toward the target. Wherever the strike is aimed, the target will feel and see a very small cut; enough to release just a tiny drop of blood, which can be felt and tasted. This effect lasts for three posts.

[Genjutsu • Onchi no Jutsu (Tone-deaf Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of music made by the user. The target’s ability to localize sounds is impaired. This effect lasts as long as the music and channeling continue. Stamina drains with continuous channeling. Cumulative -1 stamina per post.

[Genjutsu • Toratora no Jutsu (Drunken Person Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of music made by the user. The target’s sense of balance is impaired as though they were drunk. This effect lasts as long as the music and channeling continue. Stamina drains with continuous channeling. Cumulative -1 stamina per post.

[Genjutsu • Goze no Jutsu (Blind Beggar Woman who Sings or Plays the Shamisen Technique)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the particular shade vermillion (the color of a torii gate). The target is rendered blind for as long as the music and channeling continue. This effect lasts two posts.

[Genjutsu • Kitte! (Listen)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the particular shade vermillion (the color of a torii gate). All sounds except said music are shut out. This effect lasts two posts.

[Genjutsu • Hebo no Jutsu (Poor Hand Technique)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the particular shade vermillion (the color of a torii gate). The target's sense of proprioception is severely impaired. They struggle to locate their own limbs in relation to their body, from walking to fine motor control. This effect lasts for four posts.

[Genjutsu • Kyousou no Jutsu (Unlucky Horoscope Technique)]
B-Ranked Status Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the particular shade vermillion (the color of a torii gate). The target's memories of hand seals will change slightly. They will remember all hand seals to have their right hand held in a fist. While this works for the Dog seal, all others are effectively ruined. This effect lasts two posts.

[Genjutsu • Monogatari no Jutsu (Fairy Tale Technique)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated
The user forms a series of hand seals. This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of the user’s voice. It can affect every sense, but creates only small illusions which are obviously false, affecting an area roughly two meters in diameter from the speaker's center mass. Ethereal shapes, minor sounds, smells, tastes, and touches. The illusions are crafted by the user’s words, augmenting storytelling. These illusions persist while the user talks and continues channeling. Stamina drains with continuous channeling. Cumulative -1 stamina per post. They cannot fool anyone in combat.

[Kao]

• Quick check. For all of these, "can be channeled" is too vague. These have to explicitly state if the user is using hand seals or channeling. You can't use either or whenever you choose.

• [Genjutsu • Koikokoro (To Fall in Love)] <-- needs a duration

• [Genjutsu • Onchi no Jutsu (Tone-deaf Technique)] <-- what music? is it coming from the user? this needs to be more specific regarding the source of the music.

• [Genjutsu • Toratora no Jutsu (Drunken Person Technique)] <--- same as above

[Genjutsu • Goze no Jutsu (Blind Beggar Woman who Sings or Plays the Shamisen Technique)] <--- same as above

[Genjutsu • Kitte! (Listen)] <--- same as above

[Genjutsu • Hebo no Jutsu (Poor Hand Technique)] <--- needs a duration

[Inari]

Edited.

[Inari]

Edited again, for real this time. Don't want all of them to be channeled.

[Fake]

>Deadly Cloud Technique - "it will convince the wise shinobi that any source of fire will lead to their own immolation." <-- Because of this addendum, this jutsu is Warp, not illusion. If you'd like to keep it at the rank and as an illusion, I would suggest writing something similar but more along the lines of:

This gas gives off a smell that is similar to that of flammable gas.

>Two Gods, One Shrine Technique <- Where is the illusory arm coming from? Is it floating mid air or is it sprouting from the caster's body? Or somewhere else?

>Surprise attack! <- Conferred with another staff member and this should be "hand seals" and not a single seal.

>To Fall in Love <- Same as above. This would also be considered a Status Genjutsu, as it's invoking euphoria.

>Empty Promise Technique/ Scratch Technique <- This is less of a system issue and more of a tip (I guess) that you're free to decide on whether or not you want to use it. Instead of specifying "where the strike is made" you could have it be a bit more vague and be like "where the strike was aimed at", so you don't actually have to hit them.

>Tone-deaf Technique <- You'll have to be doing the trigger yourself. Also, if the duration is variable in that manner, the jutsu should specify that you're continuously channeling chakra doing the duration.

>Drunken Person Technique <- Same as above.

>Blind Beggar Woman <- Same as above.

>Listen <- Same as above.

>Poor Hand Technique <- 7 posts seems like to much to me personally. You can ask someone else about this but my personal suggestion would be 5 posts.

>Unlucky Horoscope Technique <- Same as above.

>Fairy Tale Technique <- While a single seal for a D-Rank might be debatable (I personally don't think so), a B-Rank will definitely have to require the use of multiple hand seals. As for the actual execution of the jutsu, I'll confer with staff and see what's up with it and get back to you on it.

Thanks!

[Inari]

Poor Hand, Unlucky Horoscope- When I asked for guidelines on how long genjutsu last by rank, I was told B-rank could be 5-7. Are there other guidelines somewhere?

Edited the rest.

[Fake]

1/2

[Director]

[Genjutsu • Karategata no Jutsu (Empty Promise Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the user making an empty-handed strike toward the target. Wherever the strike is aimed, the target will feel and see an illusory explosive tag be placed. The target can feel and attempt to remove the tag, but it will not come away. This effect lasts for five posts.

[Genjutsu • Kizu no Jutsu (Scratch Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the user making a strike with a bladed weapon toward the target. Wherever the strike is aimed, the target will feel and see a very small cut; enough to release just a tiny drop of blood, which can be felt and tasted. This effect lasts for five posts.

Both should be 3 posts.

[Genjutsu • Onchi no Jutsu (Tone-deaf Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of music made by the user. The target’s ability to localize sounds is impaired. This effect lasts as long as the music and channeling continue.

You'll need an active stamina drain if you continue to impair someone constantly.

[Genjutsu • Toratora no Jutsu (Drunken Person Technique)]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of music made by the user. The target’s sense of balance is impaired as though they were drunk. This effect lasts as long as the music and channeling continue.

Same as above.

[Genjutsu • Goze no Jutsu (Blind Beggar Woman who Sings or Plays the Shamisen Technique)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of music made by the user. The target is rendered blind for as long as the music and channeling continue.

Same as above. This starts at A-rank, as seen in the archives, but if you downsize to a set time say like 2 posts you'd be fine.

[Genjutsu • Kitte! (Listen)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of music made by the user. All sounds except said music are shut out. This effect lasts as long as the music and channeling continue.

Same as above. If blindness starts at A-rank, as well does deafening someone, but if you downsize to a set time say like 2 posts you'd be fine.

[Genjutsu • Hebo no Jutsu (Poor Hand Technique)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the particular shade vermillion (the color of a torii gate). While the victim can see this color, their sense of proprioception is severely impaired. They struggle to locate their own limbs in relation to their body, from walking to fine motor control. This effect lasts for seven posts.

Its too long, needs to be 4 posts.

[Genjutsu • Kyousou no Jutsu (Unlucky Horoscope Technique)]
B-Ranked Status Genjutsu. Sight-initiated, channeled
This genjutsu is triggered by the sight of the particular shade vermillion (the color of a torii gate). Should the user see this color, their memories of hand seals will change slightly. They will remember all hand seals to have their right hand held in a fist. While this works for the Dog seal, all others are effectively ruined. This effect lasts for seven posts.

Not quite sure what this is supposed to do considering we don't work with hand seal forms. Better off wording it as the opponent forgets how to make hand seals. Which even then that starts at A-rank. Which even then this lasts way too long.

[Genjutsu • Monogatari no Jutsu (Fairy Tale Technique)]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu. Sound-initiated
The user forms a series of hand seals. This genjutsu is triggered by the sound of the user’s voice. It can affect every sense, but creates only small illusions which are obviously false, affecting an area roughly two meters in diameter from the speaker's center mass. Ethereal shapes, minor sounds, smells, tastes, and touches. The illusions are crafted by the user’s words, augmenting storytelling. These illusions persist while the user talks. They cannot fool anyone in combat.

There is no duration.

[Inari]

Goze no Jutsu, Kitte!
-The entry on the Rules page says that B-rank includes “removing vision.” Is that incorrect?

Kyousou no Jutsu
-The idea is to ruin their ninjutsu without them realizing what’s wrong. Their hand seals are incorrect, so their chakra molding doesn’t work right. What does “we don’t work with hand seal forms” mean? Can you just make any random hand motions and your ninjutsu will be fine as long as you do it for long enough?
The same page says that B-rank Status Genjutsu can evoke specific thought patterns. I want to inject one thought pattern: all hand seals include a right-hand fist. That seemed to be like a B-rank scale, when A-Rank is about driving people into a mindless rage or crushing despair. Am I wrong? There’s not much guideline for memories on the Status section.

If there’s some guide for how long certain ranks of techniques last, I’d really appreciate being pointed to it. I edited the rest, except for the continuous ones. I can take a continuous stamina drain, but if the option exists to keep a genjutsu going by providing a continuous trigger, I’d like to keep those that way, please.

[Director]

[Genjutsu • Goze no Jutsu (Blind Beggar Woman who Sings or Plays the Shamisen Technique)]

Just shorten the time. I never said you couldn't, just that archives start at that rank.

[Genjutsu • Kyousou no Jutsu (Unlucky Horoscope Technique)]

You've reiterated my point is that you are doing the same jutsu, ruining their nin/gen, which is started at A-rank, and only lasts two posts as quoted below. Your jutsu have the same effect, so I need you to change it.

*[Genjutsu • Alzheimer’s]
A-Ranked Status Genjutsu
This jutsu can be extremely useful when used at the right time during battle. After performing this jutsu and making eye contact, the opponent forgets how to use all of the ninjutsu and genjutsu they know, except basic jutsu. They don’t realize they have forgotten though and if they try to use one of the jutsu they will just flounder with it confused and nothing will happen. Lasts 2 posts.

Genjutsu Archives are the best place to determine how long your jutsu should be, what the rank impends against that duration, and how the trigger effects it. Triggers that are easy to be enabled such as sight, sound, and smell are not as strong as say sensory, touch, or taste.

Also the continuous stamina drain needs to be in the form of -1 stamina per post, -2 stamina per post, and etc.

[Inari]

So there’s no way to achieve similar effects with different means; all that matters for ranking is the effect?

[Kabu]

That is correct, for Genjutsu at least.

A D-rank Genjutsu is vastly less powerful than an A-rank genjutsu. Similar to how an A-rank that lasts for two posts cannot be done as a B-rank for more posts. Its asinine to allow a jutsu with the same end-effect at a lower rank for a longer time than it was created as an archive technique at a higher rank for a shorter time. Ranking, post count, and trigger count for a lot of what you can accomplish with a technique. Yours are extremely easy initiation, high post count, and they're below traditional archives with same end-goals. So yours will be extremely limited in ability/scope.

[Niro]

2 days to reply

[Inari]

A little late, but edited.

[Fake]

[Genjutsu • Goze no Jutsu (Blind Beggar Woman who Sings or Plays the Shamisen Technique)] <- Should be downsized to 2 posts maximum, or ranked up to A, as Director said.

[Genjutsu • Kitte! (Listen)] <- Same as above.

[Genjutsu • Kyousou no Jutsu (Unlucky Horoscope Technique)] <- This was not changed as requested.

[Inari]

Can I not take the continuous option instead of a fixed one?

[Fake]

I apologize; as mentioned above, having a continuous version will be A-Rank minimum.

[Inari]

Changed.

[Kao]

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