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[Accepted]might be annoying

Post by Fake » Sat Jun 16, 2018 1:34 pm

Application: Yato
Change: Adding the following jutsu to a pre-approved spoiler at the bottom of my jutsu post.
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Ignorance
A-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
A discipline that allows Yato to effectively ignore anything that's deemed 'unnecessary' in the fire of combat. Things like pain, fear, visual disturbances, prospects of mental stress, and feints of any degree or form are paid heed but can be ignored and will not inhibit Yato in any manner whatsoever. Effectively, this allows Yato to adapt extremely quickly through any sort of disturbances that aren't pertinent to victory, and don't outright physically inhibit him.

[Tsukuyomi • Disguised God]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra for a brief duration, all abilities of Tsukuyomi are disabled. This jutsu can be used again to re-enable Tsukuyomi instantly. It is important to note that Tsukuyomi returns in the same state that it was disabled at. For example, if Tsukuyomi's armor was damaged while disabled, it would return damaged when re-enabled. This does not affect the stamina debuff, either. This jutsu is essentially used for the sake of being inconspicuous, as Tsukuyomi's passive state is obnoxiously visible.

[Tsukuyomi • Raw Sense]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra to the eyes and ears for a brief duration, Yato's sense of sight and hearing are completely deprived from him. During this time, he focuses more on the sensory aspect of Tsukuyomi, allowing him to pin-point on chakra signatures and 'see' the chakra network of anybody within Tsukuyomi's sensory range. While this does not allow him to see tenketsu, it does allow him to 'see' the outline and movements of bodies around him in the wirey shapes of chakra networks. It should be noted that this is not true sight, and more akin to imagery projected to Yato in the mind, so any visual triggers for Genjutsu will not apply to him while this jutsu is active. This lasts for up to 4 posts, but can be cancelled by Yato at any given moment on a whim.

[Iijutsu • Nerve Disruption]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Requirement: 30 Control
After channeling chakra to his hands or any Transcendent Hand, any hands that have been channeled to are charged with an ample amount of chakra, which lasts for 5 posts or until used. If a charged hand comes into contact with a target, the chakra disperses through the body and targets the brain to disrupt their nervous system, causing a mix-up of motor function. Anybody affected by Nerve Disruption has the use of their limbs scrambled in disarray; for example: if the affected target tries to move their left arm, their right pinky will move instead. Effectively, the more the target tries to move, the more confusing it becomes, and they will essentially fall to the ground twitching and unable to decipher what movement matches their intent. If the affected target has [Taijutsu/Instinct]/2 higher than 30, they can decipher how to properly move within a post. Regardless of whether or not the affected target can properly function, they will additionally suffer a loss of -9 Taijutsu, causing their actions to become clumsier and their coordination to dwindle. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts.

[Iijutsu • Ender]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Requirements: 30 Control
After channeling chakra to his hands or any Transcendent Hand, for the next post any hands that have been channeled to are charged with an ample amount of chakra, which lasts for 5 posts or until used. If a charged hand comes into contact with a target, the chakra disperses through the body and targets the heart, shredding the muscle fibers and tearing holes into it. Anybody affected by Ender is prone to eventual death unless they receive medical attention. If the affected target has [Strength+Stamina]/2 higher than 30, they can resist the damage, but it will still cause a minor amount of damage that requires eventual medical attention. All debuffs and damage can be reversed with Iijutsu or other supernatural means of healing. The stamina debuff lasts until medical attention is given. The following indicates what happens to those affected by Ender when below the stat threshold for survival:
  • Post 1: Heart arrhythmia and minor internal bleeding. Enemy suffers a -4 debuff to stamina.
  • Post 2: Internal bleeding worsens, and the heartbeat weakens drastically. Enemy suffers a further -4 debuff to stamina.
  • Post 3: The enemy's heart will stop functioning. Unless they have other means of surviving, or receive medical attention prior to this point, they will die, unless their (Strength+Stamina)/2 is higher than 30. If the enemy is alive, they will receive a further -4 debuff to stamina.
[Iijutsu • Grand Mystical Field]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Requirement: 40 Control
After channeling, a sphere of healing chakra expands from Yato's body out to a variable distance up to a 50 meter radius. This spherical zone of chakra is visible to the naked eye, and indiscriminate in who it affects. All within the field have all injuries healed at the same rate healing small to moderate wounds within a single post, and mortal wounds over 2 posts. This lasts for as long as Yato chooses to stay focused on this jutsu, up to a maximum of 3 posts, and has a cooldown equivalent to the duration used.

[Iijutsu • Unkillable]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Requirements: *[Iijutsu • Secret Healing Injury Destruction],
An advanced version of *[Iijutsu • Secret Healing Injury Destruction], this technique functions in the same manner for the most part. Should Yato be aware of impending attack, he can focus chakra throughout his body, and any damage he receives will immediately begin to regenerate--be it a bruise, bone fractures or breaks, small to moderate wounds, and even fatal wounds. All non-fatal wounds will heal practically immediately, while fatal wounds can take up to an entire post to heal fully depending on their size and severity. This technique can only be used a maximum of 2 times per thread.

[Iijutsu • One For Another]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
This jutsu is used for reviving the freshly deceased. In the event that someone has died within the past 4 posts, Yato will place his hands on the deceased body, as well as one willing participant who wishes to give up their life for the sake of the other. By transferring the live person's essence into the dead body over the course of 1 post, Yato is able to resurrect it at the expense of the live person's own life. However, if the patient in question is only fatally injured but not quite dead, the user of this technique will not transfer all of his/her life essence and can live through the use of this technique. If this occurs, live person will be rendered unconscious for five (5) posts following. This technique cannot be used more than once per thread.

[Erase Time • Clearing the Mind]
A-Rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
Upon being caught within an opponent's Genjutsu, Yato will channel chakra throughout his body and erase time on the Genjutsu trigger that affected him from ever occuring. In doing so, Yato will no longer be affected by the Genjutsu, and the chakra will remain in the Genjutsu caster as if they had never casted it in the first place. This jutsu can only be used if Yato has been affected by a Genjutsu in the past 2 posts, and is by no means a way of detecting whether or not he's been affected by Genjutsu. In doing so, Yato is able to then identify triggers he has already been affected by, and erase them on the spot with this jutsu when they happen.

[Open Space: Transcendent Domain]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout his Transcendent Hands, Yato opens space on all available Transcendent Hands, effectively causing them to become a complex interconnected chain of anchors. Yato is the only person able to utilize these anchors unless another person has a Control stat higher than or equal to Yato's own. In coming into contact with a hand, Yato can teleport instantly to the location of any other hand. The contact has to be intentional on Yato's part, meaning he cannot be pushed onto one of his anchors, and Yato can choose which hand he is teleported to. The hands are only temporary anchors, and after 5 posts will no longer be considered anchors.
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[Accepted]might be annoying

Post by Nick » Tue Jun 19, 2018 1:47 pm

We already discussed these, sooooooooooo...

1/2
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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[Accepted]might be annoying

Post by Director » Mon Jul 02, 2018 11:34 am

Quote:
[Iijutsu • Ender]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Requirements: 30 Control
After channeling chakra to his hands or any Transcendent Hand, for the next post any hands that have been channeled to are charged with an ample amount of chakra, which lasts for 5 posts or until used. If a charged hand comes into contact with a target, the chakra disperses through the body and targets the heart, shredding the muscle fibers and tearing holes into it. Anybody affected by Ender is prone to eventual death unless they receive medical attention. If the affected target has [Strength+Stamina]/2 higher than 30, they can resist the damage, but it will still cause a minor amount of damage that requires eventual medical attention. All debuffs and damage can be reversed with Iijutsu or other supernatural means of healing. The following indicates what happens to those affected by Ender when below the stat threshold for survival:
Post 1: Heart arrhythmia and minor internal bleeding. Enemy suffers a -4 debuff to stamina.
Post 2: Internal bleeding worsens, and the heartbeat weakens drastically. Enemy suffers a further -4 debuff to stamina.
Post 3: The enemy's heart will stop functioning. Unless they have other means of surviving, or receive medical attention prior to this point, they will die, unless their (Strength+Stamina)/2 is higher than 30. If the enemy is alive, they will receive a further -4 debuff to stamina.
Should probably specify the stamina debuff lasts until medical attention is given.

Won't take the 1/2, can finalize after this is fixed.
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[Accepted]might be annoying

Post by Fake » Wed Jul 04, 2018 2:16 pm

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[Accepted]might be annoying

Post by Director » Thu Jul 05, 2018 9:24 am

Accepted

This application has been accepted. Congratulations! Any necessary changes will be handled by the moderating team.
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