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Post by Varian » Tue Jun 26, 2018 4:02 pm

Application:Arashiyama Sji
Change:
Adding the following Jutsu:
RaitonShow

Raiton • Reactive Shroud
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of visible static which crackles around them for 4 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will cause the static to travel away from the user's body and attempt to pierce the invader of this space with a strength of 5 moving at them with a speed of 5 and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.

*Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at a speed of 6, striking with a strength of 4.

Raiton • Volatile Cloak
C-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of of small sparking arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 5 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will cause the arcs to travel away from the user's body and attempt to pierce the invader of this space with a strength of 10 moving at them with a speed of 10 and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.


Raiton • Sparking Cloak
C-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of small sparking arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 5 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of 10 strength and will have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.

Raiton • Electro Cowl
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of large arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 6 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of 20 strength and will have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.

Raiton • Live Wire Cowl
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of of small sparking arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 6 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will cause the arcs to travel away from the user's body and attempt to pierce the invader of this space with a strength of 20 moving at them with a speed of 20 and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.
RantonShow
Ranton • Nano Beam
D-Ranked Ranton Jutsu
The User channels chakra into their hand while making the gesture of raising the hand with the palm of their hand facing the opponent a single beam of Ranton would fire in the direction of their opponent, the beam is only 1 meter in diameter and stretches out for a total of 15 meters. The beam has a strength of 5 and speed of 5, upon impact the beam splits up into 3 ribbons that become additional beams curving round to attack the original target at a speed of 5 and strength of 3 within a 2 meter area.

Ranton • Deca Beam
C-Ranked Ranton Jutsu
The User channels chakra into their hand while making the gesture of raising the hand with the palm of their hand facing the opponent a single beam of Ranton would fire in the direction of their opponent, the beam is only 3 meters in diameter and stretches out for a total length of 30 meters. The beam has a strength of 10 and a speed of 10, upon impact the beam splits up into 5 ribbons that become additional beams curving round to attack the original target at a speed of 10 and strength of 5 within a 3 meter area.

Ranton • Kilo Bombardment
B-Ranked Ranton Jutsu
The user channels chakra to their hands and launches 5 spheres measuring at 2 meters in diameter at a range of 25 meters, they travel at a speed of 10 and explode on impact with a strength of 10 within 23 meter, they also apply the ranton passive allowing 5 ribbons to split from the center of each explosion and spread themselves over a 3 meter area at a speed of 10 where they explode with a strength of 5 within 13 meter.
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[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Reactive Shroud[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of visible static which crackles around them for 4 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will cause the static to travel away from the user's body and attempt to pierce the invader of this space with a strength of 5 moving at them with a speed of 5 and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.

*[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Bright Bolt[/b][/color]
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at a speed of 6, striking with a strength of 4.

[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Volatile Cloak[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of of small sparking arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 5 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will cause the static to travel away from the user's body and attempt to pierce the invader of this space with a strength of 10 moving at them with a speed of 10 and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.


[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Sparking Cloak[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of small sparking arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 5 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of

[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Electro Cowl[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of large arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 6 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of 20 strength and will have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.

[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Live Wire Cowl[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of of small sparking arcs of lightning which crackles around them for 6 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will cause the static to travel away from the user's body and attempt to pierce the invader of this space with a strength of 20 moving at them with a speed of 20 and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied this can be stacked with other Chakra Cloaks.



[color=#00B7C6][b]Ranton • Nano Beam[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ranton Jutsu
The User channels chakra into their hand while making the gesture of raising the hand with the palm of their hand facing the opponent a single beam of Ranton would fire in the direction of their opponent, the beam is only 1 meter in diameter and stretches out for a total of 15 meters. The beam has a strength of 5 and speed of 5, upon impact the beam splits up into 3 ribbons that become additional beams curving round to attack the original target at a speed of 5 and strength of 3 within a 2 meter area.

[color=#00B7C6][b]Ranton • Deca Beam[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ranton Jutsu
The User channels chakra into their hand while making the gesture of raising the hand with the palm of their hand facing the opponent a single beam of Ranton would fire in the direction of their opponent, the beam is only 3 meters in diameter and stretches out for a total length of 30 meters. The beam has a strength of 10 and a speed of 10, upon impact the beam splits up into 5 ribbons that become additional beams curving round to attack the original target at a speed of 10 and strength of 5 within a 3 meter area.

[color=#00B7C6][b]Ranton • Kilo Bombardment[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Ranton Jutsu
The user channels chakra to their hands and launches 5 spheres measuring at 2 meters in diameter at a range of 25 meters, they travel at a speed of 10 and explode on impact with a strength of 10 within 2[sup]3[/sup] meter, they also apply the ranton passive allowing 5 ribbons to split from the center of each explosion and spread themselves over a 3 meter area at a speed of 10 where they explode with a strength of 5 within 1[sup]3[/sup] meter.
If the mod could also do me a favour and change the name of the other B-Rank Ranton techniques from Giga to Kilo I messed up while trying to keep to the naming style of Ranton thanks in advance.

Payment:
5 Points - 1 Raiton B-Rank
5 Points - 1 Raiton B-Rank
3 Points - 1 Raiton C-Rank
3 Points - 1 Raiton C-Rank
2 Points - 1 Raiton D-Rank
2 Points - 1 Raiton D-Rank
2 Points - 1 Ranton D-Rank
3 Points - 1 Ranton C-Rank
5 Points - 1 Ranton B-Rank

Total - 30 Points + My Gratitude.
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Post by Niro » Wed Jun 27, 2018 9:44 am

Ranton • Kilo Bombardment <-Just my nitpicking since I dislike using 'x amount of tags' in jutsu, could you change it from "explode on impact with the force and area of 2 exploding tags" and "explode with the force and area of 1 exploding tag each." to "explode on impact with a strength of 10 within 23 meter" and "explode with a strength of 10 within 13 meter."

Code used to make 23 is [sup][/sup]
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Post by Varian » Wed Jun 27, 2018 12:46 pm

No problem, edited.
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Post by Fake » Wed Jun 27, 2018 11:03 pm

Ranton • Kilo Bombardment <- If this is applying the Ranton passive, then the strength of the explosions from the ribbons should be 5, not 10.

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Post by Varian » Thu Jun 28, 2018 2:10 am

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Post by Niro » Sat Jun 30, 2018 9:38 am

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