[Accepted]Doton Jutsu For Kasai

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[Accepted]Doton Jutsu For Kasai

Post by Zao » Sun Oct 07, 2018 7:10 pm

Application: Kasai
Change: Adding three newly trained Doton Jutsu
Payment: Training Thread
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[Doton • Ghost Bunshin]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra, Kasai will cause dirt and stone to form and rise off his hands which quickly forms into the clone of a small ghost just over a foot in height with a cloaked appearance with only two ghoulish looking hands and no legs only an a wispy lower half that can coil around things. The ghost can hover to a maximum height of eight feet above the ground.The ghost are capable of performing any of their creator's jutsu B-Rank or lower. They possess following stats:
  • Taijutsu: 3
  • Stamina: 15
  • Strength: 3
  • Speed: 6

[Doton • Divide Earth Hammer]
A-rank Ninjutsu
Requires: Terrakinesis and Superior Terra Infusion
After channeling chakra into an area of twelve cubic meters of earth, infusing it with his chakra, the man is able to shape this earth into the form of a massive hammer of earth. This hammer of earth has a handle that measures forty eight meters in length and three meters in diameter, with the head being twenty meters wide, twelve meters tall, and six meters thick. Wielded by the user's Terrakinesis. This infusion lasts for the remainder of the thread.


[Doton • Reaper of Earth]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 40 Ninjutsu
Channeling his chakra, the user will have their body coated by a compact inch of hard layer of doton chakra, and around that, a one foot of residual swirling earth and rock that move erratically around them. This cloak of earth is shaped relatively perfect to his body, giving the illusion of a worn cloak of stone. While active, anything attempting to physically breach Kasai's cloak that possess less than 50 strength is repelled and/or assaulted by the rotating rock and earth before they could ever reach the wearer. This cloak materializes at a speed of 30. This cloak lasts for 9 posts.
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[color=#804000][Doton • Ghost Bunshin][/color]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra, Kasai will cause dirt and stone to form and rise off his hands which quickly forms into the clone of a small ghost just over a foot in height with a cloaked appearance with only two ghoulish looking hands and no legs only an a wispy lower half that can coil around things. The ghost can hover to a maximum height of eight feet above the ground.The ghost are capable of performing any of their creator's jutsu B-Rank or lower. They possess following stats:
[list]
[*]Taijutsu: 3
[*]Stamina: 15
[*]Strength: 3
[*]Speed: 6
[/list]


[color=#804000][Doton • Divide Earth Hammer][/color]
A-rank Ninjutsu
Requires: Terrakinesis and Superior Terra Infusion
After channeling chakra into an area of twelve cubic meters of earth, infusing it with his chakra, the man is able to shape this earth into the form of a massive hammer of earth. This hammer of earth has a handle that measures forty eight meters in length and three meters in diameter, with the head being twenty meters wide, twelve meters tall, and six meters thick. Wielded by the user's Terrakinesis. This infusion lasts for the remainder of the thread.


[color=#804000][Doton • Reaper of Earth][/color]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 40 Ninjutsu
Channeling his chakra, the user will have their body coated by a compact inch of hard layer of doton chakra, and around that, a one foot of residual swirling earth and rock that move erratically around them. This cloak of earth is shaped relatively perfect to his body, giving the illusion of a worn cloak of stone. While active, anything attempting to physically breach Kasai's cloak that possess less than 50 strength is repelled and/or assaulted by the rotating rock and earth before they could ever reach the wearer. This cloak materializes at a speed of 30. This cloak lasts for 9 posts.

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Doton Jutsu For Kasai

Post by Kao » Mon Oct 08, 2018 5:05 am

you have a broken list tag on your bunshin at the end of each bullet point text
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Doton Jutsu For Kasai

Post by Zao » Mon Oct 08, 2018 8:34 am

Fixed
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Kyōhō Ken - The White Snake Sage - S Rank Assassin/Bounty Hunter

Aburame Hisato S-rank Mn / Inactive

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Arashiyama Ning - Kumo Chuunin - Weilder of the Ghost Spear

Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

Genso - Elemental Crafting Shaman - A Rank Monk - Inactive

Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

Naegi, Chin - A-rank MN / Inactive







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Doton Jutsu For Kasai

Post by Yura » Mon Oct 08, 2018 9:44 am

The ghost can hover to a maximum height above the ground reachable by normal human physiology. <--- What does that mean exactly? Like it can only hover as high as the average person so that it's that tall? That's a bit subjective so I'd prefer a flat height to be honest.

While active, anything attempting to physically breach Kasai's cloak that possess less than 50 strength is instantly repelled and airborne contaminants or particulates find themselves blown away by the rotating dust current before they could ever reach the wearer. <---- Doton doesn't naturally allow for this sort of thing, it usually only does it as part of an extension like sand. Doton itself doesn't create/maintain air currents so at the very least it should require fuuton.
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Doton Jutsu For Kasai

Post by Zao » Mon Oct 08, 2018 10:28 am

Think that should fix it
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Saisuko Zao - Suna Bannin - Spirit Weapon Saint

Kyōhō Ken - The White Snake Sage - S Rank Assassin/Bounty Hunter

Aburame Hisato S-rank Mn / Inactive

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Arashiyama Ning - Kumo Chuunin - Weilder of the Ghost Spear

Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

Genso - Elemental Crafting Shaman - A Rank Monk - Inactive

Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

Naegi, Chin - A-rank MN / Inactive







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Post by Kao » Fri Oct 12, 2018 2:10 am

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Ishiwara SetsunaChuunin Iwagakure no Sato[color=#E81D1D]
Enkouten Mai Jounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#CE5412]
Aisu Namie Chuunin Kirigakure no Sato [color=#5bc2d4]
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Doton Jutsu For Kasai

Post by Niro » Wed Oct 17, 2018 4:13 pm

[Accepted]
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Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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