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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Oct 12, 2018 2:48 am

Application: Shio
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[Genjutsu Sage]
Sages around the world are those who can access the natural energies of the world and use them in place of chakra in exchange for extraordinary abilities. Shio, a conduit of the universe and a speaker of truths, has learned that he can utilize the concept of Sage Mode to bridge the gap between reality and illusion via Genjutsu utilizing Sage Mode. This ability is [Control] and [Genjutsu] based, the two being required to perform jutsu per rank.. These genjutsu are, in essence, placing a genjutsu on reality. In short, Shio can use these technique to create an illusion in relation to a natural law, natural component, or concept, and Shio can ‘delete’ that law in isolation. Foremost, this ability does not allow the user to take genjutsu and turn them into ninjutsu, or create illusions and turn them into reality. Sage techniques consume chakra at a heightened rate, because it requires converting chakra into natural energy. It should be assumed a technique is roughly +1 rank in stamina consumption. Like all genjutsu, these techniques have durations, and area affected is limited to the range of the [Control + Genjutsu]/4 meters.


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Post by Nick » Thu Oct 18, 2018 6:39 pm

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Boop Against the MachineToday at 5:35 PM
To reclarify about Onu's genjutsu sage stuff
It's not allowed
and you can't fake out the universe into doing stuff
And even if you did gen a tree or whatever
It would just be a tree
And wouldn't effect anything the tree is doing
KabuToday at 5:36 PM
pretty much
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NiroToday at 5:38 PM
Basically the universe has no brain/CNS to manipulate
Which is what genjutsu fucks with to create genjutsu
Happy to listen to other ideas, but the idea of genjutsuing the universe is universally no'd. A few example jutsu of the high and low end of what you're trying to do might help your case, but as is, it's a direct no.

Could also use a little clarification, the wording makes it sound like your sage stat is a 9th stat, but I think your intention is to just take [genjutsu+control]/2 to make a derived stat?
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Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Oct 18, 2018 6:45 pm

I'd argue that genjutsu does not interact with the brain/CNS because we have the ability to genjutsu elemental bodies. Otherwise you're saying that in any event someone with an elemental body is in a genjutsu, they can simply disband their body to get rid of the genjutsu.

On the basis of that alone, we can support that chakra is the medium in which genjutsu are done, not the nervous system, even if the nervous system is typically want reflects the confounding done by genjutsu.

I'd also argue that because S/T specifies that the universe is self correcting, and operates under some force beyond simply existing, that requires that the universe has some level of self-awareness. In order to correct something wrong with itself, there has to be some mechanism to recognize what is wrong. So I don't think the tree analogy is very accurate because we have a system in play already that recognizes some level of action performable by the universe.

It'd be super helpful if the "no" is
"We won't allow space/time-styled events under genjutsu." or if its simply the means in which I'm attempting to do it in this specific case, too! Thanks.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:06 pm

Made some of the requested changes and should be all set.
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Post by Director » Fri Nov 02, 2018 8:31 pm

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Post by Niro » Sun Nov 18, 2018 10:34 pm

Would the previously given example jutsu change at all with the changes made or no? If so, could you please present some new example jutsu.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Mon Nov 19, 2018 1:25 pm

No they shouldn't. When discussed with Director this was rewritten to make those work.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Nov 20, 2018 12:38 pm

This is annoying. Just deny this for now.
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Post by Yura » Wed Nov 21, 2018 7:42 am

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