[Denied][Companion] King Yautja

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The Fierce Ancient Lizard Tribe Lord
King Yautja


"The Predator"




"One more for the collection."
General Information
Age:Gender:Height:Weight:Hair:Eyes:Pet/Summon:
Centuries Male. 7'5 350 lbs Scales Yellow Summon
DescriptionShow
A large musclebound pale blue lizard strapped under tribe clothing. Yautja is a 7'5 foot long lizard warrior, covered in scales from head to toe. Naturally being a lizard he has a tail that is almost as long as himself, this lizard doesn't really crawl on four but instead walks like a humanoid, although he has some lizard perks. Yautja wears a large ancient monster skeleton as a helmet and other various ornament to signify his kingdom. The lizard has five fingers and toes each coming with sharp claws ready to scratch his foes.
EquipmentShow
  • 1x Warriors Dual-Edged Fang club, "Headhunter". 4 foot long flat wooden bat with 5' predator fangs on the edges, ready to cut of heads. (On his back)
  • 2x Wrist blades, 5 inches long bone fangs.
  • 2x Bolas 1 meter width. (On the side of his belt)
  • Sharp 5 inch teeth, 33 single.
  • tail, 4 foot tail reach.
  • Ancient dragon helmet with three long horns, each 12 inches long
PersonalityShow
Yautja is first and foremost a predator, believing to be the most effective of the lizards out there thanks to his humanoid body and the lizard perks. Brash and hard head the lizard tends to believe that most situations can be handled, especially by him. When it comes to other lizard he is always ready to show that he is the boss and even willing to take their lives if they disobey him. This has caused a rift between his kingdom hood and his nearest.

Not exactly blood thirsty but out to cause pain, or that's how he likes to see himself once in battle. Yautja isn't the one that likes to listen to orders but there have been times where the king has been seen follow others orders. This usually only happens to those who have truly earned his respect. This usually entails surviving his bloody battles as the old king never seems to see an end to the war
HistoryShow
Born as a prince over a nomad lizard tribe, Yautja grow up to a sadistic world where the lizards fought for food and ground. Each tribe clan hated one another for petty reasons, this caused Yautja to grow up to become a hard lizard and being the rightful heir to the throne didn't make things easier for him. Having battled since young age the soon to be king found himself become more cruel.

Until one day when he saw most of his village get destroyed, the former king dying saving a hand few. Yautja set out to conquer most of the tribes men with his elites. Being the new king made him lose his mind, he didn't stop the massacre until he reached a point in life where he figured that it would be better to think more about his tribe than the horrible slaughter.
Battle Information
Combat StyleShow
Yautja uses his own kind of Taijutsu and his "Headhunter" to decapitate his foes, vicious and cruel once he has his trails on you he won't ever stop.
Abilities: 1/1Show
Natural Predator Is an ability that grants the user not only it's inherent lizard traits to scent further, have heat vision but also allow itself to utilize a natural camouflage. The user is able to turn itself and anything it carries and makes himself near invisible to the naked eye as he blends in with the background, the targets Instinct has to outmatch the users Taijutsu in order to be able to spot him. This ability is best utilized while moving slow or standing still.
ConcentrationsShow
Taijutsu 4/4Show
Acrobat, CQC, Tail, Sword
Rank:Village:Primary Chakra Affinity:Secondary Chakra Affinity:Tertiary Chakra Affinity:
A-Rank ? [Katon] [N/A] [N/A]
, 1
Ninjutsu:Taijutsu:Genjutsu:Stamina:Control:Strength:Speed:Instinct:
1 35 1 20 1 35 35 33
PredatorShow
Yautja The Predator:
Yautja uses his natural lizard skills and humanoid body to create his very own brand of taijutsu where he prefers to stalk his prays before swiftly swooping in to take them out.

D-Rank
[Headbutt]
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Yautja uses his helmet properties to cause more damage to his foes as he headbutts them. If Yautja is lacking his helmet then this move can injure him.

[Tail whip]
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Using it's long tail the lizard swings it's body to whip the target. At this level the lizard aims mostly for the eyes or feet to trip the target.

[Basic block]
D-Rank Stance Taijutsu
A basic block, this let's Yautja plan his moves ahead and prepare for a block against a kick, punch or weapon.

[Blood]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Once Yautja has gotten the scent of the targets blood he will be able to track the target up to half a mile before loosing the tracks.

[Tracker]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Yautja uses his vision to check for any marks left by his prey, footprints, broken twigs, signs that show where the prey might be heading.
C-Rank
[Rush!]
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Yautja locks his target within his minds eye before rushing head first (+6 Speed, -3 Tai, -3 Instinct), utilizing the horns on his helmet to slam into the target. Using it's hard exterior and fangs to wound the target. The temporary boost only last for one post. If Yautja is lacking his helmet then this move can injure him.

[Headhunter]
C-Ranked Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Fang Club.
Yautja has trained for years using his "Headhunter", so naturally he is able to master it's use to the point of it' almost an extension of his body at this point.

[Pulldown]
C-Ranked Maneuver Taijtutsu
Using his tail to grab a hold of the targets ankle before pulling the target down and towards himself.
B-Rank
[Predator]
B-Rank Stance Taijutsu
After gotten a hold of the targets blood scent Yautja will enter his predator mode, where he will feel the urge to fight the prey. 6+ Strength, +3 Speed at the cost of -6 Instinct and -3 Tai.

[Block me!]
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Using his humanoid body and lizard tail, Yautja will begin to attack the foe with his "Headhunter" and as they block or clash the lizard will use it's tail to grab the target around the ankles or waist. Where he can use this new position to his favor.
A-Rank
[Rolling Thunder]
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Yautja begins by getting down on all fours, as though he's about to pounce his target. Then he will quickly dash forward and curl himself into a ball, rolling towards his target at top speed and digging into them with the various spikes that surround his body as he grinds against them. He then rolls off of his target and into the air, unraveling mid air and coming down hard on the target, usually followed by another attack.
Last edited by Trusted Grader on Thu Nov 08, 2018 7:19 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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H.N.K
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The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
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[Olive]
[N/A]
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Post by Kabu » Wed Oct 24, 2018 5:13 pm

For all of your taijutsu you need to say whether they're a maneuver, stance, or discipline.
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Post by Niro » Thu Oct 25, 2018 12:30 am

How long are the barbs on Headhunter? Where is Headhunter + bola kept?
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Post by Trusted Grader » Thu Oct 25, 2018 5:20 am

Fixed
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The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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Post by Yura » Thu Oct 25, 2018 9:32 am

Is an ability that grants the user not only it's inherent lizard traits to scent further, have heat vision but also allow itself to utilize a natural camouflage. The user is able to turn near invisible to the naked eye as it blends in with the background, the targets Instinct has to outmatch the users [Instinct+Taijutsu]/2 in order to spot them. This ability is best utilized while standing still or moving slow.

If it's naturally occurring camo, it should be noted that his equipment isn't going to turn invisible as well since it isn't naturally occurring nor is it a physical part of him.

Also, while I'm going to take a wild guess and say that this is a summon, it isn't actually stated anywhere on the app.
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Post by Niro » Mon Oct 29, 2018 2:47 pm

3 days left
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Post by Trusted Grader » Thu Nov 01, 2018 7:48 pm

Gimme a day or two.

[edit: Is there a way for the summon to cloak it's armor and weapon as well?]
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Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
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N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
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Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
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Chishiki
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Post by Yura » Fri Nov 02, 2018 5:49 pm

Based on the ability itself, since it is a natural camo, I'm not sure of the best way to coat your non-natural weaponry and armor. You may be able to use a ninjutsu of some sort to extend it the natural camo to apply to objects that he is in contact with, or you may be able to work the same effect into you ability, but in that case it would likely come at a reduction in movement speed in order to maintain the camo over the armor and weaponry.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Fri Nov 02, 2018 6:28 pm

-5 speed?
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Sushi
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H.N.K
Wana, Ran
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Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
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Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
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Kirie
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Nara, Chikara
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The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Kijo, Nehan
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[Maroon]
Chishiki
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Post by Niro » Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:30 pm

Should be Instinct vs Taijutsu rather than Instinct vs [Taijutsu+Instinct]/2. The invis is solely a bodily function and doesn't run off of the user's Instinct.
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Post by Kao » Tue Nov 13, 2018 10:11 am

1 day left on this
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Post by Niro » Thu Nov 15, 2018 1:08 pm

[Denied]
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