[Denied][Character] Hyōryū

A-rank Suna Missing Nin

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[Denied][Character] Hyōryū

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Hyōryū

Ryu or Hyo

[Do not let the narrow view of others decide your path in life.]

General Information Age: 20
Gender: Male
Height: See puppet bodies
Weight: See puppet bodies
Physical Features: See puppet bodies
  • Face/head: N/a
  • Body: N/a
  • Notable Features:His body is a puppet.
Clothing/Accessories: See puppet bodies
Picture:
Personality:
  • General: Hyo is the kind of person who just wants to be himself, a crime that landed him within the walls of the Sunagakure Prison, 'The Pit', for heresy which in turn instilled a direct hatred within him for the village and its narrow minded way of thinking. After escaping the prison break the man left the village and country before turning back to what got him into trouble with the village. Having a desire to upgrade his body, wishing to create the so called 'perfect body' for a shinobi in his own eyes. In order to achieve such goals he will do things that he normally wouldn't do, as the former Suna nin wouldn't be considered to be a bad person, more so driven to obtain his own goals but not at any cost. Seeking out those who doesn't see him as some type of freak. For those that find the man in there company, he can be a truly loyal soldier and friend to those whom he considers to be a friend or loved one. The man's time in oppression for being what he wanted to be within the 'Pit has caused for the young man to be a bit distance when meeting people, but he still has a friendly nature to him with a sense of righteousness for what is wrong and right, still a shinobi at heart. Knowing when he should kill and when he shouldn't, having no hesitation once he had made the decision to do so.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Becoming the perfect weapon by creating the perfect puppet body.
  • Fears: Dying before creating the perfect body.
  • Combat Mentality: A mid-to-long range style focusing on using chakra threads to control a number of weapons to attack and overwhelm opponents.

Battle Information Village: Suna
Rank: A-Rank
  • Ninjutsu: 34
  • Taijutsu: 20
  • Genjutsu: 1
  • Stamina: 30 *
  • Control: 45 *
  • Strength: 15
  • Speed: 30 *
  • Instinct: 25 *
Equipment:
WeaponsShow
  • Senbon - The traditional long needle utilized by shinobi. Forty five in total sealed within the [Fuuinjutsu • Tool Storage] seal tattooed on his the upper right chest of his puppet body.
  • A pair of plain katana, 36" in total length, the curved blade being 28" and the hilt being 8". Worn on the left hip.
  • Seven (7) [Blasting Seal] tags can be found in a special pouch on the right thigh of the puppet body designed just to hold these tags.
Fuuin Tattoos/InscriptionsShow
  • Right Shoulder Arms - Two arms have the [Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Release], one arm has [Fuuinjutsu • Thousand Birds], and the last arm has the [Fuuinjutsu • Flying Swallow] seal inscribed upon it.
  • Left Shoulder Arms - Two arms have the [Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Release], one arm has [Fuuinjutsu • Thousand Birds], and the last arm has the [Fuuinjutsu • Flying Swallow] seal inscribed upon it.
  • Main Arms - Each of the two main body arms have the [Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Release] seal inscribed upon them.
  • Legs - Each of the two main body legs have the [Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Release] seal inscribed upon them.
  • Back - Inscribed on the upper back of the puppet body is the [Enduring] fuuin.
Puppet BodiesShow
  • Preservation Device - A heart sized metal container that houses the essential pieces of Ryu's old body and his consciousness. Is able to be moved between puppet bodies the shinobi owns.
    Puppet Body 1Show
    <General Info Description: Due to not having the asset's he did while a shinobi in the village, the man was forced to use different means and materials than normal to create his new elemental body after escaping during the prison break. The current puppet has a standard humanoid shape to it, standing about seven feet in height, created from chakra tempered dark grey metals with slender features that caused the arms and legs to seem a little lanky as some muscle definition was placed into the creation of the chest and arm parts. Having only a single pair of arms and legs on the base body, the metal puppet body is set apart by the head portion that consist of four matching faces on the single head piece causing the head to be a bit squared as head face has two golden eyes and functioning mouth and voice box to allow for speech. The chest region is designed to open up to accept the puppeteer's preservation device before enclosing it completely in the puppet armor. For more details see image below. Normal clothing worn with the puppet body is some time of cloak that helps to hid the bulky features of the otherwise athletic looking frame, no foot wear of any kind, and a straw or bamboo hat is often worn to help conceal the man's faces from prying eyes of others. A sash like article of clothing is wrapped around the waist and drops down to around the knees in length in the front and back of the puppet. This puppet is build with the ability to separate into multiple parts.

    Picture:
    ImagesShow

    Rank: D
    Stats:
    • Durability: 3
    • Mobility: 3
    • Strength: 3
    • Deftness: 5
    Total Number of Mechanisms 5
    Mechanisms Used: 3
    • Chest Chakra Thread Projector - A special compartment build within the left side of the upper chest and having a direct connection to the core. When opened the puppeteer is able to expel a large number of chakra threads from the mechanism, up to a number equal to the user's [Controlx2]. Mechanisms used [1] one.
    • Multi Arm Chakra Thread Left Shoulder Pauldrons - Mounted on the back of the left shoulder can be found a dark grey metal disk that has eight full size metal puppet arms attached to them. The disk is about a foot across and three inches thick and when activated the disks transition from the back onto the outside of the shoulder. When this mechanism is activated through a puppetry technique chakra will accumulate in the middle of the disk and then chakra threads will expand from the disk to the puppet arms allowing for them to detach from their disk. Under the control of the chakra threads these arms can then be controlled by the user's will as though they were inanimate objects being manipulated with a speed and strength equal to the user's [Control] stat. The arms can be stored within the [Puppet Storage Seal] inscribed on each disk when not in use. Mechanisms used [1] one.
    • Multi Arm Chakra Thread Right Shoulder Pauldrons - Mounted on the back of the right shoulder can be found a dark grey metal disk that has eight full size metal puppet arms attached to them. The disk is about a foot across and three inches thick and when activated the disks transition from the back onto the outside of the shoulder. When this mechanism is activated through a puppetry technique chakra will accumulate in the middle of the disk and then chakra threads will expand from the disk to the puppet arms allowing for them to detach from their disk. Under the control of the chakra threads these arms can then be controlled by the user's will as though they were inanimate objects being manipulated with a speed and strength equal to the user's [Control] stat. The arms can be stored within the [Puppet Storage Seal] inscribed on each disk when not in use. Mechanisms used [1] one.
    Empowered Mechanism Changes
    • Chest Chakra Thread Projector - The number of threads is increased to the user's [Controlx3] and the threads are able to be controlled based on the user's [Control] stat instead of the normal [(Control+Taijutsu)/2] formula.
    • Multi Arm Chakra Thread Shoulder Pauldrons - Increases the range of the puppet techniques used in meters equal to the user's [Control] stat.


Companions: (0/0)
Primary Affinity: Doton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Puppet Body:
Having performed the ultimate taboo, the user been turned into a living puppet. They will use a “preservation device” to contain their heart, which will keep them alive without a body. A person with a puppet body cannot die unless their preservation device is destroyed.
  • Takes One Ability Slot
  • Requires 15 Control
Second Ability
Puppet Body Empowerment:
The preservation device that Hyōryū created for his body has a natural empowering effect to what ever puppet body the core is residing within. This allows for the chakra of core to seep into the puppet and its mechanisms, passively increasing the strength of the mechanisms contained within the puppet allowing for the mechanisms within the puppet to be treated as though they were combined with one addition mechanism (some mechanisms will be unaffected by this). Each puppet will have its normal mechanisms listed and then a second set of mechanisms will be listed with the changes that occur with the 'enhanced mechanism' for when the user's preservation device/core is located within that specific puppet body.
Third Ability[Coming Soon]

Ninjutsu Specialist:
Having devoted their lives to mastering the arts of Ninjutsu, this shinobi is classified as a Ninjutsu Specialist. Ninjutsu specialist are able to devote a total of 10 concentrations to Ninjutsu, unlike most people who are capped at 8. However, they are only able to devote a max of 5 concentrations to Taijutsu, and a max of 5 concentrations to Genjutsu.

As a Ninjutsu Specialist, [Hyōryū] is able to utilize Ninjutsu concentrations reserved for specialists, and is able to enter the God Tier [45+] on select stats, and meaning as a specialist they can select stats to break into the God tier. These stats can only be [Instinct], [Speed], [Control], and [Stamina].
Concentrations
Ninjutsu (7/7)[Storage and Force, Puppetry, Charge, Doton, Advanced Channeling, Raiton, Fuuton, ]
Taijutsu (1/5)[Close Quarter Combat,]
Genjutsu (0/1)[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
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*[Ninjutsu • Wall]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user causes a thin 3x3 meter flat barrier to form directly in front of them at a speed of 5. This barrier can take a hit of up to 5 strength before shattering, otherwise it lasts for 3 posts.

[Ninjutsu • Bursting Chakra Orb]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into one of their fists, forming a two inch diameter orb of chakra the user launches the orb under their control at a speed of 5 and a range up to 10 meters from the user. Upon the user willing it or it impacting something the chakra orb explodes with the force of a D-Rank explosion. If the user does not strike a target within 3 posts the jutsu will explode on its own.

[Ninjutsu • Extended Vision]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into both eyes, the user is able to enhance their vision for the next three posts, allowing the user to see at a distance of up to fifteten meters away as if they were standing directly upon it. Though as a slight draw back this causes the user’s vision to become tunneled in the direction in on what they are looking at.

*Ninjutsu • Multiple Chakra Kai
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Despite requiring both hands and more time than *Basic Jutsu • Chakra Kai, Multiple Chakra Kai allows the user to activate up to five objects simultaneously, up to 20 + (Control/2) meters away.

[Basic Multiplying Projectile]
C-rank Ninpou
The user will channel chakra into a projectile that the are about to throw, after released the projectile will emit a puff of smoke that reveals a two meter cloud of identical weapons moving at the same speed and strength as the original. Turning a single throwing weapon into fifty, these new weapons are real and are treated as the original would have been but disappear one post after they've struck something.

[Intermediate Multiplying Projectile]
B-rank Ninpou
The user will channel chakra into a projectile that the are about to throw, after released the projectile will emit a puff of smoke that reveals a five meter cloud of identical weapons moving at the same speed and strength as the original. Turning a single throwing weapon into a hundred and fifty, these new weapons are real and are treated as the original would have been but disappear one post after they've struck something.
Puppetry NinjutsuShow

*[Puppetry Style • String Trap Technique]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After using chakra strings, the puppeteer is able to attach them to objects, then solidify pieces of the string as someone is passing by, causing them to trip if they don’t notice the invisible wires.

*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Ventriloquism Technique]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
A fairly simple jutsu, this one uses the strings of chakra to carry the puppeteer's voice to the puppet, so it will sound as if the puppet is talking when in reality it is the puppeteer's words. If it is equipped with a sound vibrating device, the voice can also be changed to whatever the user wishes it to be.

*[Puppetry Style • String Toggle Technique]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By releasing less chakra into his chakra strings, [NAME] is effectively able to 'turn off' some of his chakra strings, giving them no ability to pull or retract anything. In order to accommodate this, the strings will lengthen and shorten so they don't react to anything that they are attached to. The strings can be reactivated by putting a bit of chakra into them, letting the user use them again. This can also be used to attach wires to someone, and then deactivate the wires so they aren't able to feel the wires at all until they are needed. The strings can still be removed as if they were on, though.

*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Change of Body Stance Technique]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After completing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to quickly substitute his/her body with one of their puppets. This substitution allows the object to take the force of the attack that was meant for the user, additionally allowing the user to create distance between him/her and the opponent. This technique may only be used a total of two (2) times in a single thread, counting towards the (2) teleportation limit.

*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Transformation Technique]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Much like the original Transformation Jutsu, the puppeteer does the needed handseals and causes their puppet to take on the appearance of their own body and their own body into the appearance of their puppet. By consistently emitting chakra throughout their body, the user is able to keep their appearance adjusted at the cost of their stamina draining over time. As this technique is quite strenuous to uphold, experienced shinobi may see more clearly through this delusive disguise. This technique lasts for a number of posts equal to that of the user's stamina.


*[Puppetry Style • Initiate Puppetry Technique]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The Puppetry Technique is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppeteers. By releasing chakra from their tenketsu, the puppeteer is able to release chakra strings from their finger. These strings are able to move a max of X times 2 meters away, where X is equal to the puppeteer’s control stat. This jutsu allows the puppeteer to attach their chakra strings to inanimate, chakra-less objects at a speed of 10. While an inanimate object is being controlled, it’s treated as if it has a speed equal to the average of the puppeteer’s taijutsu and control.

[Doton Puppetry • Earth Diving Technique]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Doton
By channeling doton chakra to their puppet or their puppet body, the puppeteer causes the puppet to be to move into and underneath the ground, as long as the earth isn't solid (sand/dirt), doesn't work in areas of solid rock or mostly rocky terrain. Once underground, the puppet to move about at a speed equal to [1/2] of its mobility stat, while a puppet body is able to move at speed equal to their [Control] but not greater than [1/2] of their [Speed] stat. This enable a puppet or puppet body to be able to reappear and surprise opponents. This is a good technique to set up ambushes or protecting the puppet from taking damage.

[Puppetry Style • Weapon Retrieval Technique]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Requires Storage and Force Concentration and an active puppetry technique.
Using the chakra threads of a puppetry technique, the user has learned how to reach into one of their own storage seals without destroying it in order to withdraw a number of weapons from the seal up to the maximum number of chakra threads the user is able to manipulate.


*[Puppetry Style • Advanced Puppetry Technique]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *[Puppetry Style • Initiate Puppetry Technique]
Master Puppetry is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppeteers. By releasing chakra from their tenketsu, the puppeteer is able to release chakra strings from their finger. These strings are able to move a max of X times 5 meters away, where X is equal to the puppeteer’s control stat. This jutsu allows the puppeteer to attach their chakra strings to humans or animals arms and legs at a speed of 5, using every part of the puppet to its max potential. In order to break out from this technique, the target must be willing to break out and at least 20 strength to resist the strings. While being controlled, the target is unable to move on their own and the puppeteer can move their arms and legs in any natural way.

*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Separation Technique]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Puppet with detachable parts.
This is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppet masters. The ability to control a multitude of separate objects with chakra strings is a difficult one, but once mastered it can be most useful. That way, the puppeteer is able not only to give his puppet a better chance to avoid attacks by simply separating its various parts, but also the ability to attack an enemy from several angles all at once.


*[Puppetry Style • Perfection of Puppetry Technique]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *[Puppetry Style • Advanced Puppetry Technique]
Perfection of Puppetry is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppeteers. By releasing chakra from their tenketsu, the puppeteer is able to release chakra strings from their finger. These strings are able to move a max of X times 12 meters away, where X is equal to the puppeteer’s control stat. This jutsu allows the puppeteer to attach their chakra strings to humans or animals arms and legs at a speed of 10, using every part of the puppet to its max potential. In order to break out from this technique, the target must be willing to break out and have at least 25 strength to resist the puppeteer’s control. While being controlled, the target is unable to move on their own and the puppeteer can move their arms and legs in any way.
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*Fuuinjutsu • Tool Storage
D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a seal formula on a surface, appropriate in size to the weapon being sealed but no larger than 3x9 inches, the user forms the needed hand seals then may place as many of that singular object into the scroll as desired. When done, the user performs another set of hand seals and touches the seal closing it off as the seal condenses to the shape of the object stored. This seal is the only known sealing applications that allows depth storage and unfortunately this cannot be done at larger sizes. Tools can only be released at a maximum of 10 at a time, and are released with zero force.

*Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Tag
D-Rank Force Fuuinjutsu
After drawing an 2x5 inch seal formula on a surface the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. Upon being kai'd, the tag releases it's stored energy as a D-Rank Explosion of concussive force outward from itself.

*Fuuinjutsu • Tattoo
D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
Developed for clandestine operations originally, instead of using ink and paper, the user draws a seal onto their body the size of the item they are sealing into their body. Upon doing a set of hand seals, the user then slides the item into the tattoo and performs a second seal, causing the seal to go dormant. When kai'd the seal releases the stored item.

[Finger Engraving Seal]
D-Ranked Charge Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: 5 control
Concentrating chakra into their finger or a sharp point, the user is able to write seals on almost any surface. If used on a living target, it will cause a discomfort as the fuuinjutsu is scarred into their flesh. This can be used up to posts equal to the user's stamina.

*Fuuinjutsu • Air Seal
D-Rank Charge Fuuinjutsu
A truly unique move in that it can be used alongside other Fuuinjutsu, by channeling into their finger as they draw in the air directly in front of them, the user releases raw chakra the lingers for a small amount of time, allowing it to be used as a seal formula. This technique consumes chakra equal to the cost of the technique.


[Storage: Moderate Weapon]
C-Ranked Storage Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: [Storage: Minor Weapon]
By writing out the needed fuuinjutsu on a scroll and performing a set of hand seals the user is able to seal moderate weapons. These weapons are about the size of a normal katana to buckler shields. The size of the fuuinjutsu is directly equal to the object that is stored into it. Weapons can't be sealed this way in combat.

*Fuuinjutsu • Link
C-Rank Augment Fuuinjutsu
By placing a small seal behind the ear and on the inside of the lip, then performing a short set of hand seals, the user creates an audio link between themselves and any targets they personally place this seal combination on. While hearing is always active, channeling chakra into the seal allows effected targets to speak, their words being stored and transmitted to the other seals.

[Puppet Storage Seal]
C-Rank Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: 10 Control
By writing out the needed fuuinjutsu on a scroll the user is able to seal puppets into scrolls or this can be used to store additional puppet parts like arms onto the puppet by inscribing the seal directly onto the puppet body. Unlike other storage fuuin, this is able to store much more than its size but only works with puppets or puppet related items. However, whenever the puppet or puppet parts are removed, the user is only able to connect their chakra strings to them and are unable to use any non-puppetry jutsu for the rest of the post. This seal can be used to seal things in combat.

[Bursting Seal]
C-Ranked Force Fuuinjutsu
The user inscribes needed pattern or writes the seal on a surface, the formula taking up a space of 3"x6" in size the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. With a release seal, the user can cause the fuuinjutsu to explode with the force of a C-Rank explosion.

*Fuuinjutsu • Secret Seal
C-Rank Augment Fuuinjutsu
After drawing an approximately 1x2 inch seal formula on a targets tongue, the user will chant off a list of words then after forming the needed hand seals touches the seal to activate it. As long as the seal remains on the targets tongue, their ability to speak those words is removed.


Fuuinjutsu • Enduring
B-Rank Augment Fuuinjutsu
By doing the needed hand seals, the ninja inscribes the fuuinjutsu onto a surface (non-organic). This seal releases chakra into the structure, strengthening it to a durability of 20. If the object is stronger than 20, there is no effect. This effect persists as long as the seal does, or the item is intact. The Fuuin is six inches in size.

*Fuuinjutsu • Large Storage
B-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a seal formula on a surface, up to 7x7 meters in size the user forms the needed hand seals and stores one singular object within the scroll. When done, the user performs another set of hand seals and touches the seal closing it off as the seal condenses to the shape of the object stored. In order to retrieve any stored objects a separate technique is required.

[Blasting Seal]
B-Ranked Force Fuuinjutsu
The user inscribes needed pattern or writes the seal on a surface, the formula taking up a space of 4"x8" in size, the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. With a release seal, the user can cause the fuuinjutsu to explode with the size and force of a B-Rank explosion.

[Fuuinjutsu • Wake Up Time]
B-Rank Charge Fuuinjutsu
After inscribing this on a person, the user will channel a bit of chakra to arm it. With this fuuinjutsu it will deliver a shock to the man's puppet core in order to wake them up from any kind of slumber or unconscious state when Kai is used. This fuuinjutsu is 6x6 inches.

[Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Release]
A-Rank Force Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: 34 Ninjutsu
The user can inscribe this seal on an object or tattoo this fuuinjutsu across a person's/companion's limb before channeling chakra into it. This fuuinjutsu is so large it takes up the entirety of a normal person's arm from the shoulder down to their finger tips or majority of a leg from the ankle to thigh in most cases, no other Fuuinjutsu can be applied there. The maximum area this seal can take up is a meter in length and twelve inches wide when written/inscribed. This Fuuinjutsu can store up to 34 strength worth of explosive energy, and can release it with chakra kai. If two of this Fuuinjutsu are tattooed on the same individual, the user can open kai on both to absorb energy with one and shoot it out with the other as a conduit, as long as they energy doesn't exceed 34 strength. Since this fuuinjutsu expels the explosive energy outwards from the user in the direction of the limbs motion, saving the wearer from any damage.

[Fuuinjutsu • Thousand Birds]
A-Rank Charge Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Ninjutsu
The user can inscribe this seal on an object or tattoo this fuuinjutsu across a person's/companion's limb before channeling chakra into it. This fuuinjutsu is so large it takes up the entirety of a normal person's arm from the shoulder down to their finger tips, no other Fuuinjutsu can be applied there. The maximum area this seal can take up is a meter in length and twelve inches wide when written/inscribed. After inscribing this the user will channel chakra to arm it. When kai is used this jutsu will produce a concentrated amount of lightning in the palm of the hand. The lightning causes a sound similar to thousands of birds chirping over the top of each other while it is in existence. The lightning has the ability to burn through what the hand touches with a strength of 30. The lightning then shocks the target as per Raiton's passive abilities. When this technique is combined with 35+ speed this technique gains +10 strength when combatting defensive techniques. The lightning disappears from the user's hand after 5 posts.

[Fuuinjutsu • Flying Swallow]
A-Rank Charge Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Ninjutsu
The user can inscribe this seal on an object or tattoo this fuuinjutsu across a person's/companion's limb before channeling chakra into it. This fuuinjutsu is so large it takes up the entirety of a normal person's arm from the shoulder down to their finger tips, no other Fuuinjutsu can be applied there. The maximum area this seal can take up is a meter in length and twelve inches wide when written/inscribed. After inscribing this the user will channel chakra to arm it. When kai is used this jutsu will cause for sharp fuuton chakra to manifest around the user's limb, extending the reach of said limb by up to two meters through a blade of wind. The straight, double edged blade of wind extends out to two meters in length with the max width of the blade being the width of the user's hand before tapering down to a point. The wind blade is able to cut with a strength of 30 also having the same durability. This technique lasts for 5 posts.
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History
Historical AccountsShow

Hyōryū was born into an average family, both of the baby's parents were shinobi though neither of them were exceptional shinobi as both were already in their twenties and were only chuunin. The boy would become their only chakra and was the love of their life and wasn't pushed either way to join the ranks of shinobi. Instead deciding to join mostly because of his mother whom was a puppeteer, something that she had used to entertain him as a baby and young child, it was something that really made an impact on him during his childhood years. Causing for him to want to follow in his mother's footsteps and become a puppet user, having small puppets to play with as a child that sometimes got him made fun off by the kids his age but he really didn't care and became someone who always chased there dreams.

Entering into he shinobi academy at the age of nine, the child would spend three years learning how to be a shinobi with the main direction of his training focused on using puppets with a side interesting in fuuinjutsu and the applications that the two could do for one another with combined. Yet, it was shortly after his graduation around the age of thirteen that the man encountered an accident in practicing fuuinjutsu, having inscribed a fuuin diagram on his arm as he was trying to make himself more effective as a shinobi. But things went wrong and the arm was destroyed from the mid bicep down, Hyōryū truly thought that his career as a shinobi had been ended by this silly mistake yet how could he have known that this would change his thoughts about how he perceived his body and what the perfect body for being a shinobi was. As his mother whom had become a jounin by this time hand crafted a puppet arm to replace his lost one and the capabilities of the prosthetic arm really opened up the kid's eyes to just what he could do than if he had two regular arms.

Thus about a year later, the young man had another 'accident' in which he injured his other arm in a similar manner to that of the right arm resulting in him receiving another puppet arm crafted with care from his mother, though some found it almost convenient how the accident occurred despite how proficient the young genin was become with fuuin to make such a mistake. At the age of fifteen the young man would fight another genin in his first chuunin exam, the battle a skillful one on both parts of the two young shinobi but Hyo was obviously the underdog due to being a year younger and a bit more experienced. Despite being able to catch the older genin off guard a handful of time with his puppet limbs and puppets the puppeteer still ended up loosing in the end. Yet, even with loosing the young shinobi was still awarded the rank of chuunin for his insight in tactics with his puppets and puppet limbs, being able to catch the older genin off guard that could have resulted in his loss during those times.

Up until this point the young man had managed to keep his body obsession to himself and a secret from his family and friends, knowing full well the way the village looked at the type of modifications that he wanted to make to himself in order to achieve what he considered to be the perfect body at that time. Yet, in the end he couldn't help himself as he was attempting to have a rather shady medical nin help him replace his other limbs with puppet limbs. Before the actually procedure could be conducted the pair were caught and charged with heresy before being tossed into "The Pit" for there crimes in order to 'rehabilitate' there way of thinking back in line with the village at the age of sixteen. Though the young man refused to convert back to what the village considered its doctrine and divine will of the Sun, causing part of the boy to form a deep hatred for those who couldn't accept his own vision.

Ryu expected to stay within the Sunagakure prison for some time, fully preparing himself for such as he had nothing to do except dream about not only modifying his body further with puppet parts but actually becoming a lethal weapon: having a full puppet body. At first this was nothing more than a dream but within the confines of the prison the young man met a powerful medic-nin whom he became friends with during his time within the prison. This man told him that there was an actual forbidden procedure that one could do to actually do just that though as much as Hyo wanted to believe such a thing it sounded a bit far fetched to the inexperienced shinobi. But the truth would come to him when the prison break happened without warning allowing for the two of them to escape in the chaos that ensued. For it turned out that the old man was not spouting nonsense and had in fact been imprisoned for performing that exact forbidden procedure, something that he would in turn help Hyōryū perform for the assistance he provided before and during the prison break happened.

At the age of eighteen, right after the prison break, Hyōryū would obtain his first dream of becoming the perfect shinobi by obtaining the puppet body but he knew that because of his current standing with the village crafting it would require a lot more work on his part due to not having the same assets that the village contained. Due to this the puppet body he currently has can only sadly be considered an incomplete prototype. Thus the missing-nin began to travel far from the village and Wind country in search of different rare materials to help modify and craft his new body...

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Post by Kao » Sun Nov 04, 2018 11:20 pm

• [Doton Puppetry • Earth Diving Technique] <--- for this tech, when you say "as long as the earth isn't solid" do you mean it has to be really loose, like sand? Cause I think most earth/ground is pretty solid

• [Puppetry Style • Weapon Retrieval Technique] <-- should be "one of their own" not 'there'

• [Puppet Storage Seal]: Unlike other storage fuuin, this is able to store much more than its size <-- I'm unsure about that line. Fuuin can only hold things based on the size, so this shouldn't be able to store more than what its size would allow

• [Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Release] <--- you should be able to say "meter and 12 inches" part is the maximum size since the size will basically depend on the size of the person you're putting it on. It'd be different sizes between a small person vs a larger person.

• [Fuuinjutsu • Thousand Birds] <--- same as above

• [Fuuinjutsu • Flying Swallow] <--- same as above; also, the way this one is worded ("able to enhance the sharp quality of their wind-element chakra,") it sounds like it only works if the person already has fuuton. is this what you want?
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Post by Zao » Mon Nov 05, 2018 7:05 am

  • Earth Diving - Fixed, yes like dirt or sandy environments. Unable to move through solid stone or rocky terrain.
  • Weapon Retrieval - Fixed
  • Puppet Storage - I altered the words from the archive one in the puppetry technique that does the same thing, should I just use the archive one instead?
  • Exlosive Release through Flying Swallow - Edited.
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Post by Varian » Mon Nov 19, 2018 7:09 am

[Doton Puppetry • Earth Diving Technique] - Puppet movement speed through underground should not be it's top speed as a c-rank jutsu, should be mobility/2 for it's speed while moving underground.


I can't see any other issues
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Fixed
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Post by Yura » Wed Nov 21, 2018 2:27 pm

[Puppetry Style • Weapon Retrieval Technique] <--- Rather than saying "storage seal" as a requirement, should just have it as Requires Storage and Force Concentration. Bit more official that way.

Probably about all that I've got.
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Post by Zao » Wed Nov 21, 2018 4:46 pm

Fixed
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Post by Kao » Thu Nov 22, 2018 12:16 pm

Looks good to me. 1/2
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Post by Valkier » Sun Dec 02, 2018 4:21 pm

Seems like a silly point, but could you cross out the "Village: Suna" or write something to the effect of being Suna MN there? Just so that it is easy to see at a glance that he is MN and not VN.

[Basic Multiplying Projectile] & [Intermediate Multiplying Projectile]: Can you give a number of the projectiles in each cloud? Because they're real weapons that will cause damage, knowing how many can exist might one day become important for things like breaking through higher-strength defences, or judging whether someone could block them all, etc.

[Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Release], [Fuuinjutsu • Thousand Birds] & [Fuuinjutsu • Flying Swallow]: Unfortunately you don't meet the ninjutsu pre-requisites for these techs! Should either be toned down to A(25) stats or will need you to adjust your stat distribution.

Can you comment here in the replies (just a papertrail for later reference - no need to spoil your nice app with notes) how you got the number of stats/mechanisms on the puppet body? Did you start with an E-rank puppet and use startup points to rank to D, and buy additional mechanisms?
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I think allowing control based on only the user's [Control] (compared to the usual (Control + Taijutsu)/2) should only apply when this is an Empowered Mechanism, when the user is occupying the body. Otherwise it should follow the regular rules.
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Post by Zao » Sun Dec 02, 2018 6:15 pm

Village - Fixed

Multi projectile techniques - So, doing just some simple math with the shuriken just being evenly spaced out at six inch intervals I got around 216 shuriken per cubic meter. Which will turn into a crazy number of shuriken when mixed with the original size of five cubic meters. Thinking it might be better for the rank to change the meters into feet? Your thoughts?

Fuuin - Edited Stats

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Post by Valkier » Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:37 pm

Changes look good.
For the multi-projectile techs, that would help too - it depends whether you're after a small dense cloud or a wide but sparse cloud of weapons?
Either way I think the final number of weapons in each will have to be judged carefully against the jutsu rank. I haven't seen someone create jutsu with more than a handful of projectiles involved really - given that the cumulative effect/damage output would be vastly greater than that of a conventional like-rank jutsu, we might be talking about upranked techs to achieve such dense clouds of weapons.
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Post by Niro » Mon Dec 03, 2018 5:15 pm

Chakra Forged and Tempered Body - Though a special forging and tempering process with chakra and unique metals, the puppet body and its attachments have had their durability increased to the point of being able to endure strikes up to thirty five [35] strength before being damaged. Mechanisms used [3] three. <-A 35 Str body would cost [30+10+10] 50 points at least and as such, 5 mechanisms.
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Post by Zao » Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:15 pm

I've altered the multi-projectile techniques, made them small clouds with a set number of weapons. Let me know how they look now. :)

For the chakra forged body I was going off a mechanism chart I had worked out with Guns over dm, here's the chart below. If you guys can fill in the discrepancies with it that would be a great help for me in the future with this character.
  • Each mechanism is worth ten points, combining them results in the following.
  • 1 mechanisms = Allows a single mechanism to have 15 stats - strength/mobility/durability/deftness.
  • 2 mechanisms = Allows a single mechanism to have 27 stats - strength/mobility/durability/deftness.
  • 3 mechanisms = Allows a single mechanism to have 35 stats - strength/mobility/durability/deftness.
  • 4 mechanisms = Allows a single mechanism to have 40 stats - strength/mobility/durability/deftness
  • 6 mechanisms = Allows a single mechanism to have 45 stats - strength/mobility/durability/deftness
  • 8 mechanisms = Allows a single mechanism to have 50 stats - strength/mobility/durability/deftness
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Post by Nick » Sun Dec 23, 2018 1:13 pm

I dunno if Niro reached out to you at all, but as I said when you were putting it together, the numbers are rough, and all weapon pricing can have a large degree of variance in cost for a variety of reasons that staff has decided to remain undisclosed.

As it stands, Niro's pricing of 50 is official.
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Post by Zao » Sun Dec 23, 2018 2:49 pm

Talked over dm. Removing the body mechanism and adding another pauldron mechanism, so one for each shoulder now. Removed one B rank fuuin [mute] and replaced it with [Enduring]

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Post by Sanjuro » Tue Jan 01, 2019 9:05 pm

Thousand Birds - You can create lightning with Charge Fuuin but not the Raiton passive without the Raiton conc as a prereq, so that'll need to be edited.
Flying Swallow - Fuuton isn't invisible and just to specify can't have the Fuuton passive without the Fuuton conc as a prereq.
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Added both concentrations! :)
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