[Accepted]Sunakinesis + New Perk stuff!

And a Sankaton jootsoo

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[Accepted]Sunakinesis + New Perk stuff!

Post by TyDie » Fri Nov 30, 2018 8:30 pm

Application: viewtopic.php?&t=5946492/1/#new

Change: Adding a few more Sand jutsu, as well as a Sankaton Jutsu:
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[Sand Style • Sunakinesis]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Having achieved unparalleled mastery over Sunagakure's Sand Style, Kiyori has developed the ability to control, shape and manipulate existing bodies of sand without the need for hand seals, channels or any sort of existing techniques. The range at which Kiyori can manipulate sand is equal to her control times 2 meters. However, she cannot produce sand naturally, and must create sand or infuse existing sand with additional jutsu in order to use Kinesis.

[Sand Style • Summoning of Thoth]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body before funneling this chakra into the ground at her feet. This chakra will then rise up as a mound of sand before taking the shape of a 6 foot tall bipedal humanoid with the head of a Ibis. This clone is capable of utilizing any sand style techniques that Kiyori knows, including Sunakinesis. It's clone stats are as follows:
  • Taijutsu: 10
  • Stamina: 27
  • Strength: 24
  • Speed: 24
[Sand Style • Realm of Set]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, funneling the mass of chakra through the ground beneath her feet. This chakra will flow out for a staggering 150 meter diameter and 50 meter depth, converting any and all earth within the area to loose sand. This sand does nothing on it's own and does not apply the grinding passive on it's own, as this is merely a way for Kiyori to generate massive quantities of sand for further jutsu.

[Sand Style • Manifestation of Serket]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori channels a large amount of chakra into the sands surrounding her, causing them to rise up in the form of a 30 meter tall Scorpion with a 20 meter long tail. It's pincers are each 10 meters long from end to end and grind anything it catches as per sand's passive, with a small mouth that allows the creature to swallow anything smaller than 3 meters whole, grinding the thing within it's body. It's stats are as follows:
  • Taijutsu: 10
  • Stamina: 35
  • Strength: 35
  • Speed: 35
Sankaton NinjutsuShow
[Erosive Coat]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori channels chakra through her body, directing this chakra into a throwing weapon in one of her hands. This chakra takes the form of a thin, rustic coating around the weapon, which erodes .5m of material in front of whatever the throwing weapon encounters. This allows it to effectively penetrate thin defenses, making way for the throwing weapon itself to deal direct damage to whatever is protected by the defense. The coating lasts for 3 posts, or until used up.
IN addition, in accordance with the Perk changes, Kiyori will get +120 points because shes ranked up from genin - Jounin. Also her Accountant perk should probably have a (+2) next to it, due to the scaling rewards. I'll not be changing any of her perks though, they're fine as they are.

And of course, I have to use her 8th and final nin concentration for "sunakinesis".
SunakinesisShow
Sunakinesis:
After achieving notable mastery over Sand Ninjutsu, Kiyori has developed an expert control over Sand. Without needing the use of hand seals or an existing technique, Kiyori can shape and direct any existing body of sand.
EDIT: In accordance with staff's decision im electing to pay an additional 30 points from Kiyori's app to include Natural Light as part of her Hiton ability.

Payment: 9 points for "summoning of Thoth"
viewtopic.php?f=201&t=8339586#p4160866 - Realm of Set
viewtopic.php?f=201&t=8339586#p4160952 - Manifestation of Serket
viewtopic.php?f=201&t=8339586#p4161020 - Sunakinesis
viewtopic.php?f=65&p=4160961#p4160734 - Erosive Coat
30 points to add Natural light to her ability

THe point payout from the retroactive rank ups minus her S rank jutsu payment and her ability edit should be a net gain of 81 points to her app. So I get paid this time :D

viewtopic.php?&t=5835336/1/#new - Genin - Special Jounin Rank up.
viewtopic.php?f=91&t=8131761&hilit=Kiyori - Spec Jou to Jounin Rank Up
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Sunakinesis + New Perk stuff!

Post by TyDie » Fri Nov 30, 2018 8:32 pm

will post the nocode later <3
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Sunakinesis + New Perk stuff!

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Sunakinesis + New Perk stuff!

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[color=#BA7CBC][b]Age:[/b][/color] 21
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Gender:[/b][/color] Female
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Height:[/b][/color] 6'2 feet
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Weight:[/b][/color] 160 lbs.
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Hair:[/b][/color] Kiyori's black hair is about 6 inches long on the right side and top of her head, and shaved down to less than an inch long on the left side and back of her head. She parts all of her long hair to her right side, running down the side of her face and covering her right ear.
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Eyes:[/b][/color] Due to the [b]~Dosatsugan - Full Activation[/b] Jutsu, Kiyori's eyes always have the signature two red circles of the Dosatsugan, as her doujutsu is permanently active.
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Physical Features:[/b][/color] Kiyori has a very lean frame that shows a lot of muscle, especially in her core, legs and arms; she has a 6 pack and very defined biceps and calves, as well as thin, compact thighs and rippled forearms. She still has a small waist with a decent backside, and due to her constant working out she has yet to develop a large bust, still sitting at almost B cups. Her skin is tan due to being out in the desert sun with very little clothing, and is riddled with scars from training, sparring and fighting. She is also covered head to toe in various forms of tribal tattoos, a result of the blessing she received that grants her power over light. Lastly, she has very tough looking feet, as she constantly walks around barefoot.
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Clothing/Accessories:[/b][/color] During missions or when training, Kiyori wears an outfit that allows her much freedom of movement. This outfit consists of a simple black sports bra, leaving her stomach exposed, and she wears a white pair of Adaba pants with a black stripe going down the sides. She has a black ninja pouch that she wears fastened to her right hip on a black belt, which also has two shuriken holsters attached to the front on either side of her pelvis. She wears no footwear as she feels it messes with her combat style and constricts her feet. When not on misions, Kiyori's outfits are usually short sleeved tops and short shorts to mitigate the desert heat, though she still never wears footwear. The only thing that is worn at all times, and one of her most prized possession, is a necklace made by her late girlfriend Emi Kouseki. It is a simple chain necklace with a ruby cut in the shape of a flame.
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Forehead Protector:[/b][/color] Kiyori wears her headband on her head like normal, but only while she's on a mission. The headband also has the symbol of the Scribes of the sand etched into the right side of it, and the symbol of the Henrin clan etched into the left side of it.
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Personality:[/b][/color] Kiyori has become much different in recent years as a result of the various changes that have taken place in her life, both physical and not. Her newfound take on the religion of Yuumagure have lead her to become more serious, as she believes that as one chosen by Her Light, she must be an exemplar of the religion, and all that it embodies. She has taken on a vegetarian lifestyle and abstains from drugs and alcohol at all times. However, there is one thing she has taken a different approach on, after her time in the ancient ruins that granted her her ability; She views the darkness not as unholy, but as a necessity.

She believes that Light is not there to completely destroy the darkness, but to coexist with it. Light cannot exist without dark, and vice versa, and so both must be used together to truly achieve proper worship of Yuumagure. This means that Kiyori has become much more okay with the prospect of death, underhanded methods, and other such tactics that she would have considered wrong in days gone by. She has realized the necessity of cruelty, of 'evil', provided that evil serves a more powerful good. She still abides by a personal moral code that involves abstaining from murder unless absolutely no other alternative exists, however she understand that in some circumstances, it is neccessary. As such, she won't try to stop someone else from doing the deed if she feels it must be done.

Her personality, as far as being bubbly and happy and generally a nice woman, is toned down heavily but still present. In her day to day, she'll still be more than happy to be alive and interact with people, and is just generally a joy to be around. But her ambitions have only grown with her newfound power; if she is personally chosen to escort and learn from the Kazekage himself, and she is blessed by the physical power of the sun, she believes there is only one natural step left to take. Kiyori aims to become the Kazekage, and lead the village further into the purity of Her Light... while also ensuring that the darkness always exists to protect that light.
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[color=#BA7CBC][b]Rank:[/b][/color] Jounin
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Village:[/b][/color] [color=lightgreen]Sunagakure no Sato[/color]
[color=#BA7CBC][b]Chakra Affinities:[/b][/color] [color=saddlebrown]Doton[/color], [color=lightgreen]Fuuton[/color], [color=orangered]Katon[/color], [color=#FFA54F]Sand[/color]

[color=#BA7CBC][b]Stats[/b]:[/color] (0/50)
[list][*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Ninjutsu:[/b][/color] 25
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Taijutsu:[/b][/color] 25
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Genjutsu:[/b][/color] 10
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Stamina:[/b][/color] 24 (32-8)
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Control:[/b][/color] 30 (25+5)
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Strength:[/b][/color] 25
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Speed:[/b][/color] 25
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Instinct:[/b][/color] 25
[*][color=#BA7CBC][b]Discipline:[/b][/color] 20
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[color=#BA7CBC][b]Equipment:[/b][/color]
[list][*]30 shuriken in holsters, 10 in each holster on the front of her belt
[*]10 exploding tags, located in the ninja pouch on her right hip
[*]5 smoke bombs, attached to the left side of her belt by pins, dangling off of her left hip
[*]30 kunai in pouch on right hip
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[color=#BA7CBC][b]Combat Style:[/b][/color] Kiyori's skills in ninjutsu are now equal to her skills in hand to hand, as she is capable of devastating an area with widespread ninjutsu destruction or battling multiple opponents at once with nothing but her physical body. Her senses exceed the level of normal human capabilities, and she uses her wits and cunning to bring even the strongest of opponents down by focusing not on raw strength, but speed and precision. She is very resilient as a result of her newfound longevity and regeneration, and the blessing bestowed upon her gives her a vast array of techniques capable of overcoming most any opponent.
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[spoiler=Elementalist (Elemental Ninjutsu Specialist)]Having devoted her life to mastering the Elemental affinities, Kiyori is classified as an Elemental Ninjutsu Specialist. Elemental specialists are able to devote a total of 10 concentrations to elemental concentrations, unlike most people who are capped at 8. Kiyori is not able to access any specializations that are marked for Ninjutsu Specialist, but instead, can now pick up concentrations marked for Elemental Specialists. Additionally, her two additional concentrations MUST be used for elements. She cannot use them for ninpou styles. However, she is only able to devote a max of 5 concentrations to Taijutsu, and a max of 5 concentrations to Genjutsu. 

As a Elementalist, Kiyori is able to utilize Ninjutsu concentrations reserved for elemental specialists, but cannot utilize non-elemental ninjutsu specializations. Additionally she is able to enter the God Tier [45+] on select stats, meaning as a specialist she can select stats to break into the God tier. These stats are Instinct, Speed, Control and Stamina.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Dosatsugan][center][img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v605/Oburi/ShutterEye_zpseygkhtpx.jpg[/img][/center]
The Eye of Insight, or Dosatsugan, is the doujutsu of the Henrin clan, to the point that they're regarded all over the lands for their abilities, being a very well revered doujutsu. While active, the Dosatsugan memorizes every little thing that it sees, from scenery, creatures, to certain movements very rapidly. Not only does the user have the ability to remember it, but they also possess the ability to recall any of it at a moment's notice. Any movement that is made, they can remember it and recall it, making them near experts at Taijutsu. Most abilities do need jutsu to follow it, however.

Should the Henrin engage in prolonged use of their Dosatsugan, they need to be prepared they are capable of enduring such a task as it can be quite strenuous. While utilizing the Dosatsun, the Henrin is capable of maintaining it for a time equal to their Stamina/4 rounded down to a minimum of one post. Once the Henrin reaches the limits of their use, their doujutsu will enter a cooldown for approximately half the time it was active(minimum of 1 post). Should a Henrin attempt activation during this cooldown time, they will find their efforts met with physical pain from their eyes. Duration is based off total posts where the Dosatsugan has been activated, meaning users can turn it on and off to have a shorter cooldown.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Blessing of the Sun]After delving into an ancient temple and touching a long forgotten altar to the sun hidden in it's depths, Kiyori's chakra has been altered by the power that was stored within the alter for over a millennium. It reacted explosively with her own chakra and escaped into her, covering her body in tribal tattoos in the process. This gifted her with the powers of the sun itself, granting her Hiton (including the Natural Light concentration), Sankaton and a 9th stat called 'discipline'. In addition, Kiyori's chakra has changed to a [color=gold]golden yellow[/color], and her personal light color is the same. The powers that she can draw on are directly related to the form she is in, and the forms she can enter are dependent on her Discipline stat as shown below:[list][*]Form 0: Stat boost - +5 control
In her base form, Kiyori is covered by black tribal tattoos. While in this state, she gains a permanent +5 to her control, and can use Hiton jutsu of any rank.

[*] Form 1: Stat boost - +7 Control
In this form, Kiyori's tattoos will begin to glow a [color=#800000]Dark Red[/color], signifying the change in her abilities. In this form, she loses the ability to perform Hiton jutsu but gains the ability to perform Sankaton jutsu.

[*]Form 2: Stat boost - +5 Ninjutsu, +9 Control
In this form, Kiyori's tattoos will start to glow a [color=gold]golden yellow[/color], the same color as her chakra. In this state, Kiyori is capable of using both Hiton and Sankaton jutsu.

[*]Form 2 Ascended: Stat Boost - +10 Ninjutsu, +10 Control
There is no aesthetic change to Kiyori's final form: it looks exactly like her form 2 and functions exactly the same. However, being an ascended form, Kiyori can access this form immediately instead of going through form 1 to get to form 2. In addition, this form has higher stat boosts to coincide with the 9th 'discipline' stat.[/list]
[spoiler=Stat Breakdown][list][*]1 Discipline - Form 0 active, able to use Hiton ninjutsu.[*]7 Discipline - Form 1 available, able to use Sankaton jutsu in form 1.[*]14 Discipline - Form 2 available, able to use both Hiton and Sankaton in form 2.[*]20 Discipline - Form 2 Ascended available.[/list][/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sun's Perseverance]In addition to the power of the sun itself, Kiyori has also been granted another boon; the power to persevere as the sun has for thousands of years. This manifests in the form of bodily regeneration, and onlookers who see Kiyori wounded will watch as light pours from her wounds while they begin to heal. This ability grants her regeneration based on the elemental body and regeneration rules and goes off of her control stat. This also prevents her death by any natural means such as disease or sickness, and prevents her from physically aging past the age of 24, causing her to always appear young and making her essentially immortal barring outside circumstances, most notably a violent end in combat. She is still decidedly human, and thus her body is still subject to the same physical weaknesses as a normal human, such as poisons and vital wounds. It also takes -5 stamina from her permanently for constantly being active.[/spoiler]
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[spoiler=Ninjutsu: 8/8][quote=Katon][color=orangered][b]Katon Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive [color=orangered][i]ignition[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Ingition)]Katon's effect is [b]ignition[/b], which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. 

Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the ninjutsu stat requirement. [list][*]1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns[*]15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns[*]25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns[*]35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns[/list][/spoiler][/quote][quote=Doton][color=saddlebrown][b]Doton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive [color=saddlebrown][i]enduring[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Enduring)]Doton has a passive effect of [b]Endurance[/b], which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.[/spoiler][/quote][quote=Fuuton Affinity][color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an [b]cutting[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Cutting)]Fuuton has a natural [b]cutting[/b] property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.[/spoiler][/quote][quote=Sand Style][color=#FFA54F][b]Sand Style[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Sand, an extension composed of Fuuton and Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require Sand. Sand style has a [b]grinding[/b] effect. You must be a current or former Sunagakure shinobi, and have both Fuuton and Doton to utilize this concentration.
[spoiler=Passive (Grinding)]Sand, however, is rough, and [b]grinds[/b] in it's movement, eroding and tearing at anything it comes in contact with. This makes Sand an aggressive element that adds to it's strengthwhen coming in contact with solid matter by breaking it down and adding it to it's mass. When Sand breaks through anything it is strong against, it adds 1/5th of the strength of that thing to it's own strength. A 30 strength Sand Wave breaking through a 10 strength Doton wall would add 2 strength to itself, having 32 strength. Against organic matter, Sand grinds against skin and wounds, catching microtears that can become irritating and worsen existing wounds. Below is a list for how Sand interacts with solid matter
[list][*]1-14 Strength Requirement: Minor scrapes and cuts, minor bleeding.[*]15-24 Strength Requirement: Scrapes, removal of skin, moderate bleeding.[*]25-34 Strength Requirement: Removal of upper muscle, heavy bleeding.[*]35+ Strength Requirement: Grinding of flesh, removal of deep tissue, profuse bleeding.[/list][/spoiler][/quote][quote=Sunakinesis]After achieving notable mastery over Sand Ninjutsu, Kiyori has developed an expert control over Sand. Without needing the use of hand seals or an existing technique, Kiyori can shape and direct any existing body of sand.[/quote][quote=Kuuton Affinity][color=#7FFF00][b]Kuuton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Kuuton, and advanced form of Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Kuuton affinity. Kuuton has a [b]gravitational[/b] effect. These gravitational pockets can reach through barriers, walls, and function like a real source of gravity. Those without the Elemental Specialization cannot make custom Kuuton jutsu.
[spoiler=Passive (Pressure)]Kuuton users chakra to create pockets of [b]gravity[/b] in a specific direction. Through the use of these technique Kuuton users can launch objects away from them, pull things in to a specific place, or crush things down into the ground. Kuuton jutsu operate off a focal point, and always move towards or away from that focal point. This means that all Kuuton jutsu cover some sort of area, and only effect what is within that area. They can not be used on a micro scale.[/spoiler][/quote][quote=Iijutsu]This concentration allows for the user to use chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for it's advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiate from normal techniques by the faint light green colour of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques.[/quote][quote=Elemental Channeling]This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any ninjutsu that is designed to be channel, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method. To get this concentration the user must be an Elemental Ninjutsu Specialist, and have picked Control as one of their specialized stats.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Genjutsu: 0/3][Empty][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Taijutsu: 5/5][quote=Close Quarters Combat]The fundamental skill of [b][Close Quarters Combat][/b] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.[/quote][quote=Acrobatics]The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote][quote=Perception]The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][quote=Medicine]The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][/spoiler]
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Kiyori was born on a windswept night to a normal family of the Henrin clan. Her Father and mother were both Jounin before their retirement, when they decided to create a family of their own. To the Henrin, this mean a rather large amount of kids, and for her family it was an even spread of 6 boys and 6 girls, with her being the youngest of the bunch. Growing up in such a large family was sometimes difficult, especially when it came to training, as they had to train in groups and with each other most of the time, leading to sibling rivalries in the family with the exception of her. She never really had a competitive attitude, congratulating her sisters and brothers for a job well done when they bested her. 

Around the time she turned 5 she began learning how to use her Doujutsu, and the Dosatsugan was a magical thing to her as she used it for just about everything important to the young girl, starting with studying basic scrolls and books and memorizing the books that her family told her would be important to the Ninja Academy. Finally, after studying book after book and learning the basics of taijutsu from her family, she was enrolled in the academy at the age of 8. During the years of the Academy, Kiyori realized just how shy she truly was, as she found it difficult to make any sort of effort to make friends.She excelled in her studies and her training throughout the academy, but when it came to being social she had barely any friends, and most of them came to her first. Still the academy was laughably easy for the young girl given her years of study and her taijutsu prowess, her only true weakness was her nin and genjutsu capabilities. Still, her abilities as a Henrin were recognized, and she was passed through the academy at the age of 13.

Her genin years were spent working together with Tenjirou, Shigekuni, a skilled shinobi who came seeking her out one day to form a team. Together, they worked with the Scribes of the Sand, an organization created by Kazekage Hito himself, to help further the knowledge and power of their great village. When not working within the Library of the Scribes as an archivist, using her doujutsu to catalog and memorize book after scroll of information, she was out on missions for the scribes, forging relations with some of the oldest nomadic groups of Wind Country and discovering hidden scrolls that detailed long forgotten techniques. When she was finally ready for her exam, she was put up against a Gentai assassin named Senji, Garado, who used his genjutsu to obscure himself and get the drop on her. Luckily, through quick thinking and use of Doton ninjutsu, she was able to get the upper hand on him and take him down, promoting herself to Chuunin at the age of 16.

As a chuunin, Kiyori’s ninjutsu abilities greatly improved; the way she saw it, her Taijutsu was already incredible, and her ninjutsu was lacking, so she devoted most of her time towards improving her ninjutsu capabilities. Eventually, she found that she had an aptitude for Sand Style due to her having both of the affinities necessary to use it. Her missions during these years took a more diplomatic toll, as she was called out time and again to the nomadic tribes of Wind Country as an ambassador, not only aiding them in creating more powerful ties with Sunagakure but protecting them from anyone who might aim to cause them ill will. Her skills with her doujutsu improved as well, and through consistent use she continued to archive many of the Scribes library’s texts. Slowly but surely, the girl was becoming a living, breathing well of knowledge, able to recall almost anything through the use of her doujutsu and the right memory cue. As a result of all of this hard work, the council allowed Kiyori to ascend to Special jounin at the age of 19.

A few years after her ascension to the ranks of special jounin, tragedy struck Suna's ally Konoha in the form of an orchestrated attack by none other than Henkou; Yaku Fushinkou and Enma, two of the most powerful and infamous missing ninja, attacked the leaf village, desecrating it and almost burning it to the ground. Upon hearing of this, Kiyori immediately requested and was granted the authority to lead a squad of ninja to Konoha to assist them with their rebuild, helping them in any and all ways they could. There she met her two friends, Aina Hyuuga and Takeo Natsuki, and she forged a strong bond with the shinobi of Konoha during her time assisting them. After their time was up, Kiyori sent her squad ahead of her with a letter to Suna's council, stating that she would return a few weeks later as she had stayed behind to help forge stronger diplomatic ties with Konoha.

Weeks later, Kiyori was on her way back to Suna when the unthinkable happened. On her way back to Suna, she was blown way off course by a violent sand storm, and ended up falling beneath the sands into a dank, dark cave. As she fearfully explored these depths, she discovered an ancient temple dedicated to Yuumagure, the worship of the sun popularized in Suna. She spent almost a month in that hellhole, doing all she could to survive while also learning more and more of what ancient Yuumagure worship entailed. During this time, search parties were sent out, and Fujitsuna, Arata found himself in the same situation as her when he fell through the sands in another cave in.

The two ninja then faced off against unspeakable, dark horrors, the likes of which Yuumagure's teaching warn explicitally against. It was only after surpassing the most brutal of trials and tribulations that they uncovered the truth of the ruins; they were erected to protect an ancient altar to the sun, over which a dark Coyote spirit named Kogasha was protector and servant. The revalation stunned her, as it was taught in Yuumagure that darkness, and nocturnal creatures, were unholy. Yet here was an ancient spirit of a nocturnal coyote that stood as a bastion against the other creatures of the dark that might taint the light of the ceremonial room. Then, Kogasha claimed that Kiyori was chosen, and almost as if she was in a trance, she moved towards and touched the altar.

Her body was then baptized by holy light, and when she emerged, she was covered head to toe in thick tattoos of a tribal design. She could also manipulate light itself as a release, a talent of the Awai clan in Konoha. Shortly after, she passed out and made her way back to Suna with a nearly-husked Arata, who now bore host to the very coyote spirit that had bestowed this power unto Kiyori. The spirit desired to stay with, and protect the light, and thus bound itself to Arata as her protector. After explaining all that transpired to the council and to Kazekage Hito, Kiyori was later promoted to the rank of Jounin at the age of 21 by the Kazekage in private, and now she seeks to return to Konoha to explain the situation and show them her newfound power so that she might better learn what it means to be blessed by Her Light.
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[spoiler=Ninpou (Non-Elemental Ninjutsu)][quote=D Ranked][b]Dousatsugan - Manual Shutdown[/b]
D Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: [b]~Dousatsugan - Full Activation[/b]
Despite what many may believe, there are times where the Henrin's Dousatsugan can be quite a nuisance. Due to these instances, Kiyori created a simple technique that allows her to temporarily turn off the Dousatsugan. By channeling a small amount of chakra through her eyes to inhibit the consistent flow of chakra, Kiyori can turn her Dousatsugan on or off at will. This doesn't refund the -3 stamina while the Dousatsugan is off, it only makes it so that if the Dousatsugan would be a detriment to the situation, Kiyori can opt to shut it off.

[b]~Dosatsugan - Recall -Transcription[/b]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: [b]~Dosatsugan - Recall - Details[/b]
While their eye is active and the user has access to writing materials, they will enter a trance like state while recalling a memory in full detail. The Henrin will proceed to transcribe anything they might have seen onto paper, this can be anything from a book they might have read to drawing a portrait of a person they might have seen. The process itself can take anywhere from a post to 5 posts depending on the complexity of the transcription they're performing

[b]~Dosatsugan - Recall - Implantation[/b]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
While the Dosatsugan is active, the Henrin will perform a series of hand seals before laying both their hands upon a persons head. They will then proceed to lock eyes with them as they implant a memory of their choosing into the target from their own mind. This memory implantation is temporary but it allows the Henrin to share information with another person more easily. While the person won't recall all the exact details like the Henrin would(unless they are a Henrin), they can interpret the majority of the information transmitted into their brain. This implanted memory will only last for 2 posts before it fades from the recipients mind.

[b]~Dosatsugan – Rapid Recall[/b]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By quickly using their Doujutsu, the clan member can recall a small portion of any memory in a fraction of a second, in order to recall specific details such as clones, Genjutsu triggers, and the like. This takes almost no strain to perform, and as long as the Doujutsu was active at the time of the event, The clan member can recall the detail with pinpoint accuracy and speed

[b]~Lingering Way - Trail of the Lesser Hand[/b]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing a series of hand seals, the Henrin is able to release chakra from their arms that creates a small chakra shell that mimics their arms exact movements. If the Henrin punches something, the Tracer will strike at it as well, creating a follow up hit. Primarily used with Tripod Style, these Tracers have the capability of following their arm movements with a speed of 4 and impacting with a strength of 3. Tracers are incapable of adding in hand seals and only seem to be useful in melee compact. These arm Tracers will last for a total of 4 posts before dissipating as they seem to passively exist within the Henrin's arms when not following their movements.

[b]~Lingering Way - Trail of the Lesser Heel[/b]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing a series of hand seals, the Henrin is able to release chakra from their legs that creates a small chakra shell that mimics their legs exact movements. If the Henrin kicks something, the Tracer will strike at it as well, creating a follow up hit. Primarily used with Tripod Style, these Tracers have the capability of following their leg movements with a speed of 4 and impacting with a strength of 3. Tracers only seem to be useful in melee compact. These leg Tracers will last for a total of 4 posts before dissipating as they seem to passively exist within the Henrin's legs when not following their movements.[/quote][quote=C Ranked][b]~Dosatsugan - Recall - Scenery[/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
By using their Dosatsugan to 'record' and look at a type of scenery, the clan member is able to recall the scenery, and, going above that, see the scenery in almost any angle. The reconstruction is done entirely by their eye, letting them 'see' in each different part of the area. However, there are limitations. This doesn't allow them to actually see through anything, but, the eye 'fills in' what isn't there. So, if someone is hiding by a bush, they would see a normal bush. This takes a full post to complete the picture, so other Dosatsugan jutsu cannot be used.

[b]~Dosatsugan - Recall - Details[/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
By seeing and recording any specific event, the clan member recalls the event, and then replays the event in their head, but in a more specific manner. In doing so, they are able to memorize the minutest detail, from number of buttons on a shirt to the number of pebbles on the ground. However, doing so takes a big strain on the user, making this unable to be used in battle, unless they have two full posts to concentrate on recalling the memorizes and pick out the details.

[b]~Lingering Way – Trail of the Lesser Body[/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the Henrin will proceed to create a small chakra shell around their arms and legs. A multi-limb version, Lesser Body allows the Henrin to more readily utilize Tracers with Ryuusei Ken, the sole drawback being that these Tracers are only as strong as their D Rank counterparts. Like the other Tracer techniques, these will mimic the exact movements of the Henrin with a speed of 12 and strikes at things the Henrin strikes at, hitting them with a strength of 8. The Tracers are only usable in melee combat and the arms are unable to be used in the aid of hand seals. These arm Tracers will last for a total of 4 posts before dissipating as they seem to passively exist within the Henrin's arms and legs when not following their movements.

[b]Dosatsugan - Technique Prediction[/b]
C-Ranked Ninjtaiutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: Active Dousatsugan, 15 Instinct
Using the Dosatsugan's ability to follow and analyze their opponent, the clan member will watch carefully for any form of movement. Using this technique, the Henrin can react to an opponent's movement much faster and more precisely, allowing the member much more oppurtunity for a counter attack or dodge in encounters with her enemy. This level of the technique only allows for the Henrin to focus on a single enemy.

[b]Dosatsugan - Pattern Recognition[/b]
C-Ranked Nintaijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: Active Dousatsugan, 15 Instinct
Using the memorization of their Dosatsugan, a Henrin can effectively memorize the way an opponent utilized a specific Taijutsu technique. Thereafter, should that opponent attempt to use the same technique while the Henrin has their eye open, they can almost instinctively react to it as they have memorized and figured out the technique the first time. Essentially, the same Taijutsu technique does not work on a Henrin twice.[/quote][quote=B Ranked][b]~Dosatsugan - Illusion Resistance[/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: ~Dosatsugan - Recall - Scenery, 23 Instinct
This technique allows a Henrin who has memorized the surrounding area to point out even the most well hidden visual illusion genjutsu. They do this by focusing on the memory they have of their area and comparing it to what they see, and the overlay of information lets them spot even the smallest differences, thus rendering most visual illusions ineffective . This technique is only valid if the Henrin memorized their surroundings with ~Dosatsugan - Recall - Scenery, and only applies to illusion genjutsu created after the Henrin has memorized the area. This level of the technique can only identify B rank or lower visual illusions, as anything higher than B rank illusions are too well made to be discerned by this technique.

[b]~Lingering Way – Trail of the Greater Heel[/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After they have completed the need hand seals, the Henrin will coat their legs in a chakra shell that mimics their movements completely. Striking at anything the Henrin attacks by copying their movement, the Tracer will follow their movements with a speed of 23, impacting like a follow up attack with a strength of 17. These Tracers will last for a total of 5 posts before dissipating, seeming to passively exist within the Henrin's legs when not mimicking their movements.

[b]Dosatsugan - Tri-prediction[/b]
B-Ranked Nintaijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: [b]Dosatsugan - Technique Prediction[/b], Active Dousatsugan, 25 Instinct
Utilizing the same principle as the original on a larger scale, the Henrin will focus on a maximum of 3 opponents. This allows the member to follow and predict the movements of her enemies with incredible precision and speed, focusing on each of them with complete attention by darting their eyes from target to target to keep track.[/quote][quote=A Ranked][b]~Dosatsugan – Full Activation[/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 25 Ninjutsu, 25 Control, 25 Instinct
For those of the Henrin clan that choose to, they are able to go up a level with their doujutsu compared to other members of the clan. Because of this, their doujutsu is always active, causing a permanent 3 stamina that goes toward keeping the doujutsu active, recording anything and everything they see, becoming masters of their doujutsu. The stamina points are for powering the doujutsu, along with powering the storing process.

[b]~Lingering Way – Trail of the Greater Body[/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Completing a set of hand seals, the Henrin will coat their arms and legs in chakra shells. These Tracers will mimic their arms and legs in combat, acting like follow up attacks should the Henrin manage to land a blow. These Tracesr work much like their counter parts, following the Henrin's movements with a speed of 27 and impacting into things with a strength of 23. Lasting for 5 posts, these Tracers exist within the Henrin's limbs when actively mimicking their movements.[/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Doton Elemental Ninjutsu][quote=D Ranked]*[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Earthen Ninja Tools[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a set of up to 10 basic projectiles, such as kunai, shuriken, or senbon, in their hand. These tools have a strength of 5.

*[color=saddlebrown][b]Earth Style • Dirt Clone[/b][/color]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals, the user will form a clone made out of dirt. Due to being made out of dirt the clone isn't too resilient and breaks apart on contact, scattering it's dirt all over until it's body is completely destroyed. The clone cannot travel more than a quarter mile away from the user. It is also incapable of jutsu and has the following stats: 2 Taijutsu, 2 Stamina, 2 Strength, and 6 Speed.

[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Dirt Cloud[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a 1 meter diameter ball of loose dirt in front of them, launching it off up to 10 meters away at a strength of 4 and speed of 6. Upon impact the ball of loose dirt breaks apart forming a vision-impairing cloud of dirt with a 3 meter radius.

*[color=saddlebrown][b]Earth Style • Rising Boulder[/b][/color]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals the user will form a 1 meter diameter boulder in front of them, launching it off up to 5 meters away at a strength of 4 and speed of 6.

[color=saddlebrown][b]Earth Style • Mole Hiding[/b][/color]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and holding the final one the user will flood the earth below them with chakra. In the first post, the user may move down into the earth at a speed of 5. In the following posts, the user can travel underground at a speed of 5. They cannot go more than 7 meters beneath the surface however and can only use this technique for an amount of posts equal to their stamina 1/2, suffocating if they stay beneath the earth any longer. This technique does create a tunnel of sorts, allowing the user to create a series of tunnels for various purposes.[/quote][quote=C Ranked]*[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Tremors[/b][/color]
[i]C-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals and holding the last one, the user will stomp their foot on the ground, releasing their chakra in it and causing it to tremor violently for one post. The tremors radiate out from the user in a 10 meter radius, knocking down anyone standing on the ground with less than 10 taijutsu. Lasts as long as the last seal is held, for up to 3 posts.

[color=saddlebrown][b]Earth Style • Half-dome[/b][/color]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals the user will form a stone half-dome defense up to 7 meters away from them at a speed of 5. The dome has a strength of 15, is 1.5 feet thick and has a radius of 5 meters.

*[color=saddlebrown][b]Earth Style • Spike Shot[/b][/color]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals the user will form a stone spike directly in front of them roughly 1 meter long and 2 feet in diameter at it's thickest point. After forming this spike is launched off up to 7 meters away at a strength of 8 and speed of 12.

[color=saddlebrown][b]Earth Style • Surprise Strike[/b][/color]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *[color=saddlebrown][b]Earth Style • Mole Hiding[/b][/color]
After forming the needed hand seals and holding the last one the user will travel up to 10 meters beneath the ground in a straight line at a speed of 10 until they are beneath their target. The user will then release their seal launching them out of the ground at the same speed at their target.[/quote][quote=B Ranked]*[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Great Wall[/b][/color]
[i]B-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a monolithic solid stone wall up to 15 meters away from them at a speed of 20. The wall has a strength of 20 and is 7x7x2 meters large, curving moderately concave to the user.

*[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Stone Maw[/b][/color]
[i]B-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a nondescript 2x1x2 meter jaw complete with a dense row of spiked teeth. They will then launch the head at a target for up to 15 meters traveling at a speed of 20. During the course of it's travel at any time the user can perform an additional hand seal, causing the jaw of spiked teeth to close shut, clamping and impaling whatever is within it at a strength of 20.[/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sand Style Ninjutsu][quote=D-Ranked][b][color=#FFA54F]*[Sand Style •Sneak Attack][/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will channel for a brief moment, then throw their hand forward. From their hand a small burst of sand will form, swarming around anything in front of their hand. This is often used to blind and surprise opponents to make a quick escape.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Sandbox][/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra through her body, sending this chakra into the ground beneath her to convert the ground into sand. This sends out a pulse of chakra through the earth at a speed of 5, converting all dirt and rock within 10 meters into sand, including 10 meters beneath her. This sand does nothing on it's own and must be utilized alongside other jutsu.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Sand Cloud][/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra through her body before expelling a breath of air. This breath of air carries with it a small plume of sand that covers a 5x5x5 meter area in front of Kiyori, obscuring vision and causing minor abrasions to any who pass through it. The sand swirls in the air for 3 posts before falling to rest on the ground as regular sand.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Sand Fist][/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, focusing this chakra into her hands. This chakra will cause sand to form around her hands, causing anything they touch for the next 3 posts to be subjected to Sand's grinding effect, causing skin irritation and rashes to anyone they strike or grab. The coating can be broken with 5 or more strength worth of force.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Shifting Sands][/color][/b]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, focusing this chakra through her feet to create a thin layer of sand along the ground within 15 meters of her position. This area cannot be any bigger than 10 meters in diameter. Her chakra will then cause the sand to shift and slither around, flowing back and forth in all directions at random. Not only does this make movement difficult, requiring 5 Taijutsu or more to walk uninhibited, but it also grinds away at their footwear and feet, causing abrasions to their feet if they stand in the area too long. Most importantly, this sand will grind and erode the ground beneath it, wearing away any obvious markings or prints such as footprints or gashes, leaving smooth ground in its wake. This includes eroding any fuuinjutsu in the area, rendering them useless. This area remains this way for 3 posts.[/quote][quote=C-Ranked][b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Great Sandbox][/color][/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra through her body, sending this chakra into the ground beneath her to convert the ground into sand. This sends out a pulse of chakra through the earth at a speed of 15, converting all dirt and rock within 25 meters into sand, including 25 meters beneath her. This sand does nothing on it's own and must be utilized alongside other jutsu.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Great Sand Fists][/color][/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, focusing this chakra into her hands. This chakra will cause sand to form around her hands, causing anything they touch for the next 4 posts to be subjected to Sand's grinding effect, causing everyone she strikes or grabs to bleed as skin is removed from the target. This coating can be broken with 10 or more strength worth of force.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Sand Barrier][/color][/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, funneling this chakra into an available pile of sand within 20 meters of her. This sand will rise up to form a compact sand barrier, curved around a target to protect 180 degrees in front of them. The barrier forms slowly, only shifting with 5 speed as it forms, but is remarkably resilient with 25 strength of resistance. In addition, anyone that comes in direct contact with the barrier will be subjected to the grinding passive of Sand Style, ripping muscle from their flesh upon contact. Any jutsu that fails to break through the technique will have it's strength added to the barrier, as per the Sand Style passive. The barrier lasts for 4 posts.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Kawarimi no Suna][/color][/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, focusing on a location no more than 20 meters away from her current position. Upon doing so, Kiyori will suddenly teleport to the location specified, leaving behind an image of herself that quickly falls apart as a pile of sand. This sand is charged with Kiyori's chakra, but is otherwise normal, and does not apply the Sand Passive by itself. Each use of this jutsu consumes one of Kiyori's two teleports per thread, and sand must be present in the area in order for her to swap with it just as the normal Change of Body Stance jutsu.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Silt Striker][/color][/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 15 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, focusing this chakra into her hand to form a 1 meter long javelin of sand. This javelin can be thrown just like a normal throwing weapon, applying Sand Style's passive as it pierces through a target. With an additional Kai seal, the javelin will then unravel into a swirling cloud of sand that envelops a 5 meter area around the target at 15 speed, obscuring vision and shredding flesh with 15 strength for up to 3 posts before falling to the ground. The Javelin itself lasts for 3 posts before dissipating.[/quote][quote=B-ranked][b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Desert's Defense][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, focusing this chakra into sand within 30 meters of her position. This sand will rise up to form a 20 meter long, 10 meter high wall of sand. This wall forms with 10 speed and retains 30 strength, shredding any attack that comes in contact with it and adding it's strength to the walls if the attack is unable to break through. In addition, anyone that physically contacts the wall will be subject to Sand's grinding passive. The wall lasts for 5 posts.

[color=#FFA54F][b][Sand Style • Desert Mortar][/b][/color]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Channeling chakra throughout her body, Kiyori funnels a large amount of chakra into the ground beneath her feet, then stomps on the ground in front of them. In doing so, Kiyori creates a 20 meter diameter sphere of sand that rockets into the air at a speed of 15, hovering in the sky above for the rest of the post. Upon casting this jutsu, the user must select a specific target area within 30 meters for the sphere to land on, and this area cannot be changed. At the beginning of the sand user's next post, this sphere will descend on that target area at a speed of 15, crashing into the ground with a strength of 25, crushing anything in the immediate area before spreading out in a giant wave of sand in all directions. The wave impacts with 25 strength, and spans 10 meters in all directions, starting from the edge of the initial impact area.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Desert Coffin][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body before focusing this chakra out through her feet into the sands. This chakra will move through the sands towards a target within 30 meters, attempting to burst up around them and encase them in sand with 15 speed. The sand will then rise up to fully capture the target, holding the target in place for up to 3 posts unless they can break the sand with a strength 25 or higher. The entire time they're capture, the sand is grinding the target, causing extensive damage.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Desert Creation][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra into the earth at her feet, converting the solid earth into loose sand particles at a rate of 20 speed. Ordinarily the jutsu produces 40 meters cubed of sand, but by focusing on the jutsu for the entire duration of a post she can instead produced 60 meters cubed of sand. This sand does nothing on it's own and does not apply the sand passive without additional jutsu.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Desert Mole][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, funneling this chakra through the sand beneath her. An instant later, this sand will poof up around her in a burst of sand, obscuring her position for a split second. As the sand clears, Kiyori will no longer be standing where she once was, as the jutsu enables her to move about unhindered through the sands. She moves with her natural speed and strength, and can move in and out of the sands at will for the next 4 posts. This technique only functions with sand present, and has no effect on regular earth whatsoever. Kiyori also cannot remain underground for long, as she will eventually succumb to suffocation due to lack of oxygen.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Desert Cloud][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body before inhaling deeply, expelling a large cloud of sand from her mouth at a speed of 30 that swirls through the air in front of her for 30x30x30 meters. This cloud obscures vision, preventing anyone from seeing more than 4 meters through it, while also grinding away at anything caught within it's range with a strength of 10. The sand will continue to flit about in the air like this for 4 posts before settling on the earth as her chakra fades away.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Sand Infusion][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori begins by channeling chakra throughout her body, funneling this chakra into a 15 meter cubed area of sand around her. In doing so, she enables herself to control the element via Sunakinesis for 7 posts.[/quote][quote=A-Ranked][b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Embrace of Isis][/color][/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, focusing this chakra around herself to cover herself in a thin but heavily compacted layer of sand. This sand looks like Kiyori, and is indistinguishable from their skin in most ways normally, but when they are hit it will crack and chip off. When this happens, sand will jump out and envelop whatever made contact with the armor, grinding at anything it touches with 50 strength. The armor can absorb impacts of up to 50 strength, and forms with 10 speed. The sand armor will remain for up to 6 posts, and does not interfere with things such as creating hand seals due to how thin the shell is.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Force of Geb][/color][/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body before expelling a gratuitous amount of sand from her mouth. This sand will flow out and quickly assume the shape of a 30 meter tall, 50 meter wide wave of sand that flows forward from her position with 25 speed, engulfing anything it makes contact with as it flows out in a straight line for 70 meters. Anything in it's path is hit with 35 strength, grinding down defenses to add to it's power and savaging the flesh of anyone before it. Once it reaces the end of it's range, the wave falls apart, leaving a trail of sand and destruction behind it.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Domain of Khepri][/color][/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Ninjutsu
Kiyori channels a large amount of chakra through her body and into the ground at her feet, converting all but a small 2 meter pedestal around her into sand at a speed of 20. This area of sand extends out for 50 meters in diameter, with Kiyori's safe pedestal being the center of the area. Once it has completed, the sand will begin to churn and swirl in a circle with 40 strength, tearing and grinding anything within the range of the jutsu while simultaneously trapping anyone caught in the area with it's strength. If unable to escape, the loose sand will ensnare the target, sucking them below the sands to grind them to bits. This jutsu lasts for up to 5 post pr until Kiyori ends the jutsu with a single hand seal, whichever comes first.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Eye of Horus][/color][/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Ninjutsu
Kiyori channels chakra throughout her body while taking a deep breath, then exhales a large plume of sand from her lungs. This sand then swirls and takes the form of a 20 meter wide, 30 meter tall tornado of sand that rampages forward for 50 meters at a speed of 20. Upon reaching a distance of 20 meters from Kiyori, the tornado reaches it's maximum size, and at this point the tornado will pull anything within 30 meters of it towards itself like a vacuum, sucking and grinding with 40 strength as it churns the surroundings to dust.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Desert Infusion][/color][/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body before funneling this chakra into a 20 meter cubed area of sand around her person, infusing said sand with her chakra. In doing so, she enables herself to control the element via Sunakinesis for 10 posts.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Sunakinesis][/color][/b]
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Having achieved unparalleled mastery over Sunagakure's Sand Style, Kiyori has developed the ability to control, shape and manipulate existing bodies of sand without the need for hand seals, channels or any sort of existing techniques. The range at which Kiyori can manipulate sand is equal to her control times 2 meters. However, she cannot produce sand naturally, and must create sand or infuse existing sand with additional jutsu in order to use Kinesis.[/quote]
[quote=S-Rank][b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Summoning of Thoth][/color][/b]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body before funneling this chakra into the ground at her feet. This chakra will then rise up as a mound of sand before taking the shape of a 6 foot tall bipedal humanoid with the head of a Ibis. This clone is capable of utilizing any sand style techniques that Kiyori knows, including Sunakinesis. It's clone stats are as follows: [list][*]Taijutsu: 10[*]Stamina: 27[*]Strength: 24[*]Speed: 24[/list]

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Realm of Set][/color][/b]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body, funneling the mass of chakra through the ground beneath her feet. This chakra will flow out for a staggering 150 meter diameter and 50 meter depth, converting any and all earth within the area to loose sand. This sand does nothing on it's own and does not apply the grinding passive on it's own, as this is merely a way for Kiyori to generate massive quantities of sand for further jutsu.

[b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Style • Manifestation of Serket][/color][/b]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori channels a large amount of chakra into the sands surrounding her, causing them to rise up in the form of a 30 meter tall Scorpion with a 20 meter long tail. It's pincers are each 10 meters long from end to end and grind anything it catches as per sand's passive, with a small mouth that allows the creature to swallow anything smaller than 3 meters whole, grinding the thing within it's body. It's stats are as follows:[list][*]Taijutsu: 10[*]Stamina: 35[*]Strength: 35[*]Speed: 35[/list][/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Katon Elemental Ninjutsu][quote=D Ranked]*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Fireball[/b][/color]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a 1/2 meter diameter fireball at the opponent. It travels up to 10 meters away at a speed of 6 and a strength of 4.

*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Torch[/b][/color]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will exhale a small jet of flame directly in front of them. The ball lights up the surrounding area in a 5 meter radius and has a durability of 5. Unless destroyed, it will stay locked in it's location for 5 posts before fading.

*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Flame Jet[/b][/color]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a cone that is up to five meters long and three meters wide at it's base. The cone travels at a speed of 6 and pushes with a strength of 4.

[color=orangered][b]Katon • Portable Torch[/b][/color]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
A variation of the Torch technique, Kiyori performs a series of hand seals and exhales a small jet of flame from her mouth. This flame condenses into a ball of flame that hovers above her head, lighting up a 5 meter area in all directions for 5 posts before fading away. The ball of flame will follow her around, allowing her to scout out dark areas.[/quote][quote=C Ranked]*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Great Fireball[/b][/color]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling a thin stream of flames up to 15 meters away at a speed of 10. Either at 15 meters, or if the stream makes impact with anything, the stream will erupt into a spherical C-Rank explosion, scattering flames all over the immediate area.

*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Bomb Creation[/b][/color]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling katon chakra into any item, the user will turn it into a ticking time bomb. Either when 3 posts are up or when activated through the use of Chakra Kai, the object will explode, releasing all the katon chakra in it in a C-Rank explosion and scattering flames in the immediate area.

*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Ripple[/b][/color]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling katon chakra into their body, the user will release a short, uncontrolled burst of flame outward from their body that travels just a few centimeters and lasts hardly a second. The short-lived burst of flame pushes outward with a strength of 10.[/quote][quote=B Ranked]*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Flame Armor[/b][/color]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After the needed hand seals, the user will release an katon outward from their body rapidly as the fire twists around them. This fire forms a pseudo-defense against taijutsu because for the next three posts if anyone comes into contact with it they will receive severe second degree burns. Additionally, this technique can be used offensively for that reason.

*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Flame Lash[/b][/color]
[i]B-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user breathes out gently and sends a wire-thin line of flames at a target. The line can travel up to 20 meters from the user at a speed of 20. If it connects to a target the contact point has all of the chakra forced into it at once, releasing flames all over the target and igniting them with ease.[/quote][quote=A Ranked]*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Izanagi's Spear[/b][/color]
[i]A-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a condensed 5cm diameter, 3 meter long spear of fire in their hand then throw it at an opponent. At any time during the course of the spear's travel, the user may use Chakra Kai to activate the spear. This causes the spear to rapidly unwind and expand into a 10 meter long, 7 meter diameter whirlwind of fire at a speed of 30. On impact, the spear will then explode at A-Rank strength.[/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Hiton Fusion Elemental Ninjutsu][quote=D Ranked][b][color=gold]Hiton • Sun Screen[/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will begin by channeling chakra throughout her body, then extend her hands in front of her. She then forms a 3 meter wide, 2 meter high screen of Hiton chakra. This chakra is not hard and will let anything pass through it as normal, but anything that touches it will receives 1st degree burns as per the Hiton passive. In addition, anyone looking directly at it within 10 meters will be blinded as per the Hiton passive. This jutsu lasts for 3 posts.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Flare[/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will channel chakra throughout her body before releasing this chakra in the form of a small burst of light from her body in all directions. This causes blindness as per the Hiton passive to anyone looking directly at her. This does not cause any form of burn however, and is meant solely to distract or debillitate an enemy.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Distress Signal[/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before pointing her palm to the sky and firing off a small orb of Hiton chakra. This chakra will rise 100 meters into the sky and hover in place for 3 posts. It bears no burning damage nor the blinding passive of Hiton, but in ideal circumstances it can be seen clearly 2 miles away, making it great for signalling allies of her location.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Scorching Kunai[/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before channeling chakra into her hands, creating a single Kunai made of light. This Kunai, upon impact or upon activation via Kai, will erupt with explosive force, causing burns and blinding anyone looking directly at the explosion. This Kunai lasts for 3 posts before dissipating into nothing.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Light Infusion[/color][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before channeling chakra into an object in her hands no greater than a softball in size. That object will then begin to glow brilliantly, providing light and allowing people to see 20 meters out in pitch darkness. This lasts for 4 posts, and any time during those 4 posts Kiyori may Kai the object, causing it to explode with the force of a single tag. Anyone who stares directly at the object during this time will be blinded as per the Hiton passive, and anyone caught within the explosion will receive burns. The object will not burn anyone until kai'd however, allowing someone to handle and carry it without fear of damage.[/quote][quote=C Ranked][b][color=gold]Hiton • Beacon of Light[/color][/b]
C-rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before gathering chakra into one of her palms. This chakra will exist within her palm for 3 posts or until she touches a target, at which point that target will begin to vibrantly glow with light. This does not blind anyone looking at the target, nor does the target emit heat. However, the target shines so brilliantly that obscuring effects such as smoke, mist, or even invisibility techniques are rendered ineffective. Targets within obscuring particulates are 3 times more visible, while invisible targets are rendered visible due to the vibrant glow emanating from them. They will glow like this for 4 posts.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Will o Wisp[/color][/b]
C-rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before raising her hand to the sky, creating a 1 foot diameter orb of Hiton that hovers in the air. This orb can be controlled by Kiyori if she does nothing else, can move at a speed of 12, and explodes with the force of 2 exploding tags when it gets close to a target that isn't her or when it is Kai'd. It lasts for 4 posts, or until it explodes. Anyone near the explosion will be burned via the Hiton passive.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Lesser Invisibility[/color][/b]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before placing her hand on an object, person or herself. She will then fill that target with chakra, causing all light to bend around the target and distorting them, rendering them somewhat invisible. If the target does not move, they are invisible. However, if they move at all, the distortion effect becomes muddled and they are easily visible until they stop moving again. This lasts for 4 posts.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Sunlight Orb[/color][/b]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before placing her hands together as if holding an orb. She will then channel chakra into her hands, forming a solid, 1 foot diameter orb of Hiton chakra in her hands. This orb can then be thrown like a throwing weapon, and upon contact with a target it will cause burns as per the Hiton passive. Anyone looking directly at it will also be blinded as per the Hiton passive. This orb lasts for 3 posts, or until it impacts a solid surface, after which it will dissipate.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Solar Flare[/color][/b]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will begin by channeling chakra throughout her body, creating a gold hue of chakra around her. She then releases this built up chakra in the form of a flash of light that causes momentary blindness to anyone looking at her. This does not cause any form of burn however, and is meant solely to distract or debillitate an enemy by robbing them of their sight.[/quote][quote=B Ranked][b][color=gold]Hiton • Searing Light[/color][/b]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before pointing her palm towards a target in question. From her palm, a 1 meter diameter ray of pure light will emerge and fly towards it's intended target at 20 speed for a max range of 50 meters. It hits with 20 strength, engulfing the body of anyone hit by the technique with light, burning their skin and blinding anyone looking directly at the beam as per the Hiton passive.

[b][color=gold]Hiton • Starlight[/color][/b]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Kiyori will perform a series of hand seals before raising her hands to the sky to create hundreds of little orbs of light. These orbs will then hover in the air until activated via the Kai technique, at which point they will rush towards a 20 meter diameter location within 50 meters of their initial creation point. They do so with 20 speed and 20 strength, bombarding the area with scorching, blinding light. They last for 3 posts, or until used.[/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sankaton Ninjutsu][quote=D-Rank][color=brown][b][Erosive Coat][/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Kiyori channels chakra through her body, directing this chakra into a throwing weapon in one of her hands. This chakra takes the form of a thin, rustic coating around the weapon, which erodes .5m of material in front of whatever the throwing weapon encounters. This allows it to effectively penetrate thin defenses, making way for the throwing weapon itself to deal direct damage to whatever is protected by the defense. The coating lasts for 3 posts, or until used up.[/quote][/spoiler]
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Post by TyDie » Sat Dec 01, 2018 8:19 pm

Okay, the first listed coded is her 1st post, and the second listed code is her third post. I already added the point payment and subtracted the amount for the S rank I bought too, so all that should be required is Copy Pasting.

EDIT: After discussion the final ruling on Kiyori's Hiton ability has been decided, and so I am paying 30 points to include the ability to use natural light in her Blessing of the Sun ability. This probably takes my 1/2
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1/2
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Post by Valkier » Sun Dec 02, 2018 11:12 am

[Sand Style • Summoning of Thoth] -> The maximum number of stats in one place is 27 I'm afraid (Using A-rank clone stats due to ability to use jutsu).

[Sand Style • Realm of Set] -> How loose are we talking for this one; could it be used offensively to make people sink/fall into it, trapping (albeit with no strength) or preventin/restricting movement? If yes, possibly reduce the range a little (also, how is the user affected in that case?). If it can still be treated as regular terrain that is just infused, then I think it's okay!

Increase to perks and rankup payout should be okay, but please can you link back to your rankup mods as proof? Just helps us keep a proper record!

I'm confused by the word counts of your trainings; am I missing a factor? With 25nin+25 control and Fur country, your word discount is 1300, right? But your A and S-rank trainings are all 200 words short. I can't see any training reduction perks on Kiyori or Zao that would apply. Is there something else providing a discount here?
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Post by TyDie » Sun Dec 02, 2018 2:01 pm

kay, fixed Summoning of Thoth. As for Realm of Set it's just regular terrain, it doesn't do anything on it's own aside from make sand to be used for other jutsu.

Now for this part... I will try my damndest to track down her rank up mods but bear in mind how old this character is XD. I make no promises! EDIT: Holyshit I found them

as for her word counts, her ability grants her a +10 ninjutsu, and I was told that I train with that number added to my ninjutsu stat, which would reduce my word count total by 200.
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Post by Valkier » Sun Dec 02, 2018 3:04 pm

1/2
In the future it'll be big help to breakdown the word count reductions :)
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