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Post by Mre-face » Wed Dec 05, 2018 9:17 pm

Application:Mondai
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"Wechsel" Change guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
When the user performs a downward slash, this stance allows them to seamlessly transition into a stance that begins with the sword being held at a downwards angle pointed between an opponent's legs with the flat side of the sword pointed downwards. is initiated by having the blades flat side aimed downward and the blades point is aimed between the opponent's feet while keeping the arms stretched out.  

"Nebenhut" Tail ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Tail guard resembles a tail hence the name of Tail guard. This stance almost looks like the user is dragging the blade on the ground. The swords stance is assumed by having the lead leg forward and the sword on the opposite side. Keeping the sword in hip height while having the blade pointing towards the ground and having the back edge towards the user and the forward edge towards the enemy. A stance that makes it easier to do upward cuts. But can also be used to make the opponent/s think the user will throw a upwards cut.  

"Schranckhut" Barrier ward
D-rank Taijutsu manuever
Used to defend against leg attacks. The ward is initiated by crossing the arms so that the lower hand is above the upper hand while holding a longsword. Causing the blade to point downwards. This can also be done by switching the front lead leg and the back leg and uncrossing the arms.

"Hangen" Hanging ward
D-rank Taijutsu manuever
Hangen guard is used by having the sword over the head and the blade pointed downwards towards the right or left used to defend against horizontal strikes.

"Schlüssel" Key ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Key ward is a transitional ward and is assumed by having left or right foot forward while holding the sword so that it points forward while having the blade pulled back close to the body while it's resting on the arm. This stance makes it easier to thrust at a target.

"Einhorn" Unicorn ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
A transitional end position after throwing an upwards cut which is used for transitioning to other guards. The sword is over the head and has the point pointing downwards towards the opponents face.

"Zorthut" Wrath ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
His shield stance actually gets the name form this stance. In Zorthut he has his sword resting on his shoulder while having his shoulder and hips cocked towards the right or left against the opponent ready to swing at any point, almost like a baseball player. This stance is used against advancing targets or defensive fighters and can be used in order to smash right through their guard with special techniques.

"Mordhau" Murder-stroke
D-rank Taijutsu stance
The Mordhau is an unusual technique used to defeat armor and cause little damage towards the blade. By grabbing the blade with both hands Mondai can use his sword and smash with either the guard of the blade or the pommel. Using the blade as an improvised bludgeon. This makes it so that the blade gains 3+ str to armor but loses 3+ against unarmored foes. 

"Halbschwimmen" Half-swording
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Same concept as the Mordhau except for a different approach by grabbing his sword normally by the grip and then grabbing the blade further up the point he can gain more control over the sword and thrust in between the gaps of the armor essentially bypassing the problem. He also can grapple more easily since his hands are so close to the blade while in this stance. While half-swording Mondai gains more control of the blade and is able to put more power into the thrusts but because of the nature of this stance, he isn't as mobile. Mondai gains a -3 speed debuff but gains a +3 str against armor.
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An aggressive, flashy and brutal style of fighting. Revolving around the use of Mondai's Moonlight great-sword. This style uses the combination of weird timing, aggression, and range to destroy his enemies. Combined with huge sweeps with an extremely long reach and damage that can cut nearly around Mondai's whole body. Make Mondai incredibly hard to get close to. Not only that but if they do, this fighting style also has variety of slams, strikes and throws if anyone gets into close quarters. [Rigid body, Sword weapons, Acrobatics, CQC]
D-rankButcher's stomp
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 10 Strength
In this attack, Mondai will take one hand an places it on his blade and one hand on the hilt. He then lifts the blade up and smashes it into the ground after rushing forwards to get in range. This can be aimed at the head or feet of the target.

Shield ward
D-Rank Taijutsu discipline
Prerequisite:10 Strength
By crouching down and placing his sword on the ground in a diagonal angle pressed towards his body, He uses his blade to cover his entire body effectively using his sword as a shield, And because of this crouching position he cannot be knocked away or knocked down unless the attack has more strength. This stance can also be used to transition into different attacks.

Switch-blade
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 Instinct,10 Strength,
After practicing for a long amount of time with the concept of using both of their hands with equal skill, the user has developed a level of ambidexterity that allows them to utilize their preferred weaponry without any sort of issue. This extends to other methods of combat or simply everyday life as well. Mondai can even use this training with his greatsword and other weapons. Mondai can switch between which hand he grips his sword in. Even during attacks. Giving him more versatility and can make it confusing to get used to an opponent switching hands.

Dragging ward
D-Rank Taijutsu discipline
Prerequisite: 9 Strength
In this stance Mondai will place the blade by his side on the ground, dragging it while he is moving. A stance that fakes an opening and is used to set up attacks.

Windmill
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 10 Strength
Instead of stopping mid-swing with his greatsword like with normal swords. Mondai uses the momentum of each swing to lead into the next.
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Post by Valkier » Fri Dec 07, 2018 4:35 am

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"Schranckhut" Barrier ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Used against leg attacks. By either crossing, the arms with the blade pointed downwards or by uncrossing the arms and switching lead legs.
Can you work on the description for this one please, I can't understand what it's doing or achieving?
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"Zorthut" Wrath ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
His shield stance actually gets the name form this stance. In Zorthut he has his blade resting on his shoulder while having his shoulder and hips cocked towards the right or left. This stance is used against advancing targets or defensive fighters in order to smash right through their guard. Anyone with str lower then Mondai's (Taijutsu+Strength)/2 will have their sword knocked out of their hands.
And this one. It says the blade rests on his shoulder and doesn't describe any attacking/striking motion, so how does it knock through a guard and a sword out of an opponent's hands?
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"Mordhau" Murder-stroke
D-rank Taijutsu stance
The Mordhau is an unusual technique used to defeat armor and cause little damage towards the blade. By grabbing the blade with both hands Mondai can use his sword and smash with either the guard of the blade or the pommel. Using the blade as an improvised bludgeon. This makes it so that the blade gains 2x str to armor but loses 1/2 against unarmored foes.
Sounds like a manouevre to me. Also please use the buff/debuff rules (+3/-3 for D-rank), since you can't just double strength like this.
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"Halbschwimmen" Half-swording
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Same concept as the Mordhau except for a different approach by grabbing his sword normally by the grip and then grabbing the blade further up the point he can gain more control over the sword and thrust in between the gaps of the armor essentially bypassing the problem
Also a manouevre.

Overall many of these are difficult to read and understand. My concern is if you use these in a fight with someone, they're going to struggle to understand how your character is moving/acting, leading to disagreements.
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Post by Mre-face » Fri Dec 07, 2018 5:46 am

Fixed!
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Post by Kao » Sat Dec 15, 2018 10:57 pm

"Nebenhut" Tail ward <-- not understanding what this is doing. if he is just using this to do upward cuts then it's a maneuver

"Hangen" Hanging ward <-- this is just defending against the slashes so it works better as a maneuver

"Mordhau" Murder-stroke <-- please follow debuffing rules. You can't just 1/2 or 2x strength like this. Since it's D rank it has to be +3/-3
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Post by Mre-face » Sun Dec 16, 2018 3:03 pm

Added more jutsu and made da changes.
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Post by Nick » Sun Dec 16, 2018 10:17 pm

I'm not going to lie, I thought I had a brain tumor reading through all of these, and then I saw nobody else understood what was going on either.

Do you have some kind of reference for these so I can maybe help you out with what you're trying to describe? Because at the moment these all just sound like word vomit. Feel free to PM me on discord.
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Post by Mre-face » Thu Dec 20, 2018 4:04 am

More comprehensible now?
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Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Dec 27, 2018 5:33 am

Hoboy. bold are spelling or grammatical errors.
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"Wechsel" Change guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Wechsel Is mostly used after the end of a downward cut. Wechsel is used to chain into other attacks mostly staring with a slashing motion. Wechsel is initiated by having the blades flat side aimed downward and the blades point is aimed between the opponent's feet whle keeping the arms stretched out.
This is a little unclear on what it actually achieves. I think what you're saying is that, when the user performs a downward slash, this stance allows them to seamlessly transition into a technique that begins with the sword being held at a downwards angle. If thats the case might want to reword a little.
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"Nebenhut" Tail ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Tail guard is initiated by standing with either the right or left foot forward having the blade on the opposite side of the lead leg with the bl-ade point aiming to the ground and having the sword behind the user. A stance that makes it easier to do upward cuts. But can also be used to make the opponent/s think the user will throw a upwards cut.
The way you're describing this is really really confusing and hard ot picture.
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"Zorthut" Wrath ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
His shield stance actually gets the name form this stance. In Zorthut he has his blade resting on his shoulder while having his shoulder and hips cocked towards the right or left. This stance is used against advancing targets or defensive fighters and can be used in order to smash right through their guard.
Also weird to imagine and could be described better I think.
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Ambidexterity
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 Instinct
After practicing for a long amount of time with the concept of using both of their hands with equal skill, the user has developed a level of ambidexterity that allows them to utilize their preferred weaponry without any sort of issue. This extends to other methods of combat or simply everyday life as well.

Switchblade
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 10 Strength,10 Taijutsu
After enough training Mondai can switch between which hand he grips his sword in. Even during attacks. Giving him more versatility and can make it confusing to get used to an opponent switching hands.
I'm not entirely sure what the difference between these techniques are as they achieve the same purpose. I'm sure you could combine them into a single technique as no additional cost.
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Post by Mre-face » Thu Jan 03, 2019 10:42 am

I hope my drunken writting fixed it this time.
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Post by Sanjuro » Sun Jan 06, 2019 6:12 am

You now have Switching Blade three times. Once that is fixed, 1/2
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Post by Mre-face » Sun Jan 06, 2019 8:17 am

Switching blade is now gone my nig**
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Post by Sanjuro » Sun Jan 06, 2019 3:30 pm

You still have Switch-Blade and Switching Blade that do the exact same thing. You can remove Switching Blade as Switch-Blade already covers swapping hands mid attack.
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Post by Mre-face » Mon Jan 07, 2019 11:08 am

Fixed!
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Post by Sanjuro » Mon Jan 14, 2019 6:07 am

Okay so Shield Ward, Dragging Ward, Switch-Blade, and Windmill all have Taijutsu pre-reqs of 10 which makes them C-Rank Taijutsu. You can choose to either up-rank them or remove the Taijutsu requirement. Honestly none of them read as C-Ranks and don't require the uprank, so the choice is up to you.

Once that is fixed you should be good, despite his confusingly worded a lot of these techniques are.
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Post by Mre-face » Tue Jan 15, 2019 12:21 pm

Fixed!
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Post by Ace Trainer » Mon Jan 21, 2019 7:14 pm

MRE, as far as I'm aware, the mid-tier prerequisites (9 Taijutsu) are unnecessary, and don't need to happen until you're above S-rank (36+) since we have assigned ranks from the slots below 35. You can remove all those prerequisites.

Once that is done, shoot me a DM on Discord and I'll 1/2 check it again for you.
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Post by Mre-face » Thu Jan 24, 2019 4:33 pm

I edited it all!
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Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Jan 24, 2019 4:34 pm

1/2
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Post by Sanjuro » Thu Jan 24, 2019 6:38 pm

2/2
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