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Post by Legacy » Fri Dec 07, 2018 5:05 pm

Application: Mitsurugi, Gene
Change: Add the following disciplines to Gene's Stealth spoiler:
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C - rank Discipline

Prerequisite: 15 Instinct

Description: Taught extensively in the way of a true Shinobi, Gene has learned the art of tracking his target(s) in various terrain archetypes. By studying footprints, handprints, broken branches and other irregularities left by someone he may pick up on their trail and follow it. Unless significantly altered by environmental factors Gene may follow the physical sign of a trail even if it is several days or weeks old.

[Motion Tracking]
B-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Gene has trained his eyes to be able to catch even the faintest hints of movements, allowing him to determine threats such as an opponent launching an attack or a trap getting ready to go off. Even something as subtle as the brief tensing of a muscle can be picked up by his incredible eyesight.

[Clarity]

A - ranked Discipline

Prerequisites: [Distinction], 30 Instinct,

Description: Tying in with distinction which allows Gene to string together complex information regarding the sound around him, clarity is a discipline of the highest variety that enables Gene to vividly and accurately study and learn the intimate details about the things that he observes with his sight. These things are often minute details easily missed by the average or even practiced observer but not to Gene due to his instinctive attention to the world around him to include people, their mannerisms, hidden tales, quirks and other pertinent details. Furthermore, because of this superhuman like level of focus Gene may recognize the flaws in most transformation techniques provided his instinct is higher or equal to the technique being performed.
+5 CP per the day seven claim.



Payment: C & B rank Discipline training (Word counts separated) ,A - rank Discipline training
Last edited by Legacy on Thu Dec 20, 2018 10:39 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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Post by Kao » Sat Dec 08, 2018 3:33 pm

• At C rank, I'd say you can't follow tracks that are several weeks/months old. That's more B rank, at least. At C rank you could do some days old tracks, but not weeks and months.

• Your A rank doesn't have a name listed. Is that purposeful?
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Post by Legacy » Sat Dec 08, 2018 7:35 pm

Fixed the name for the A rank. Edited the C rank discipline
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Post by Yura » Wed Dec 12, 2018 8:00 am

I'm not sure what you changed for the C rank, but you still say weeks/months.

Give how instantaneous body flicker is, seeing through it is probably S-Rank not A
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Post by Legacy » Wed Dec 12, 2018 7:37 pm

Says days and weeks, not weeks to months. As for the body flicker tracking, I'm not sure why a same rank technique wouldn't be able to achieve that affect especially with the instinct requirement being where it is.
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Post by Legacy » Fri Dec 14, 2018 6:02 pm

Re - edt: Removed the portion about body flicker entirely from the A rank discipline description in this modification. Should be good to go as is now.
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Post by Yura » Tue Dec 18, 2018 11:20 am

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Post by Niro » Thu Dec 20, 2018 3:45 pm

[Clarity] <-Can't see residual chakra without Sensory. You could pick up on them not moving accurately to what they're transformed to look like, however. E.g man transformed as a woman wouldn't walk like a woman
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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Post by Legacy » Thu Dec 20, 2018 9:23 pm

Gene does have Sensory.
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Post by Niro » Fri Dec 21, 2018 8:35 pm

Discussed

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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
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Post by Kao » Sun Dec 23, 2018 3:26 pm

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Ishiwara SetsunaChuunin Iwagakure no Sato[color=#E81D1D]
Enkouten Mai Jounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#CE5412]
Aisu Namie Chuunin Kirigakure no Sato [color=#5bc2d4]
Awai FusaeA-Rank MNKonohagakure no Sato[color=#D95FEA]
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Akari Kanehara Akari clan elder [color=#80A0FF]
Sakata KannaIwagakure Councilwoman [color=#3DA43B]
Hazuki Shuran Jinchuuriki researcher [color=#E854C0]
Enkouten Kaizen Iwagakure councilman, clan leader [color=#C65871]
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