[Denied]Hei Long

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[Denied]Hei Long

Post by The Legend Excalibur » Fri Dec 14, 2018 2:13 am

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Hei Long
The Storyteller

"The best stories have more than one ending."

General Information Age: 19
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 171 lbs
Physical Features:
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  • Face/head: Heil Long could be considered a conventionally attractive man, possessing determined expression on his face even when relaxed. His hair is a dark brown, and passes his neck by a few inches, and is kept in a pony tail. His eyes are a vibrant amber.His facial features give away his foreigner origin.
  • Body: He possesses a fair skin tone, slightly lighter than your average person, as well as a strong build. His muscles are well trained and it shows; though not overly buff, they are clearly defined.
  • Notable Features: Two tufts of hair notably stick up, giving the appearance of Long having "horns"
Clothing/Accessories: When simply relaxing, usually when he paused for a few days in a small village or inn, Long will wear garb from his homeland; A dark gray robe that fades into a light tan at the bottom, with a a white wave pattern laid over, an orange sash tied around his waist, dark gray pants, simple sandals, and a scarf tied around his head with a blue and white overlapping half circle pattern. On his forearms and ankles he wears wrapped bandages.

His garb when actively travelling is notably more lively; he wears a dark orange robe with black/yellow inner trim, with sleeves that fade to a light tan color. On his left shoulder, he wears a three piece blue pauldron, attached with three straps; one going across his chest and the other two under his armpit, along with and emblem attached denoting his service in his homelands military. He wears dark gray pants that lighten as they reach the leg, with a white ocean pattern overlaid. On his lower legs he wears black shin guards with yellow flame-like symbols painted on them. At his waist is a ribbon-tied white sash, as well as three golden cords that hang freely. On his forearms, ankles, and around his abdomen, he wears wrapped bandages, while on his left chest, he wears a black sling.

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Personality: Heilong is a very social and easy-going person, taking the opportunity he's been bestowed to travel the world and see all it has to offer. He is a curious person, quick to take interest in anything new. He always has a very calm and positive mindset, even in events less than so. He has a habit of writing down his experiences even as they occur, and has been told before he is quite the chatter. He is capable of speaking the language of those on the shinobi continent, as well as being able to read it, but he tends to fall back into his native language, Pin Yin, often, both purposely and not.
  • General:
  • Hopes/Dreams: To experience a story worth telling, to become a world-renown author, to live an eventual life.
  • Fears: Becoming tethered to one place, to live a dull and boring existence,
  • Combat Mentality: Heilong's style of fighting depends on his mood at the moment. When in a tired or lazy mood, he will adopt a defensive, reactionary effort, responding to opponents blows and strikes. If in a upbeat or inspired mood, he will be largely direct, being the first to land a hit and the last to give in.

Battle Information Village: Chéngmò, Hóuzidì; The Land of Monkeys
Rank: C-Rank Youxia; Wandering Adventurer
  • Ninjutsu: 1
  • Taijutsu: 20
  • Genjutsu: 1
  • Stamina: 14
  • Control: 1
  • Strength: 14
  • Speed: 14
  • Instinct: 15
Equipment:
Huǒ Bàn:
A 36 inch folded steel blade with a 12 inch pommel. Forged in the style of a katana, the blade is a weapon Long has carried since he first entered the military. It has been with him at both his highest and lowest points, and he takes it wherever her goes, if nothing else.
Inner Pocket:
Within his robes, Long has a stitched in pocket, which holds:
  • His journal
  • A pen
  • An ink well
  • The Great Monkey King and the Dragon, his favorite novel[/i]
Wicker Basket:
When travelling, Long carries a large wicket basket, which contains items such as his change of clothes, food rations, water containers, valuables, and any other things he may obtain along the way.
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Suiton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
NinjutsuNot Learned
Taijutsu
Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Close Quarters Combat:
The user has learned how to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body for example but not limited to, adv kicks, grapples, adv punches, etc.
Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
GenjutsuNot Learned

Jutsu
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Flowing Stream Sword Style:
Originating as a martial style within the Land of Monkeys, Flowing Stream practitioners have earned prestige for their mastery of the sword. Through the use of flowing, circular motions, the style enables users to neutralize incoming attacks, and redirect the power of opponents.
Requires: [Sword Weapons] Concentration
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[Stage 1: Stream]
D-Rank Taijutsu Stance
The basic stance assumed when initiating combat, the user holds out their sword, the tip pointed directly at the target and their arm outstretched, while their free hand is held above their head, their pointed and middle finger directed at the opponent.

[Stage 1: Flick]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Requires: [Stage 1: Stream]
When their opponent performs a swing or slash with their weapon, the user will meet it with their sword, running the edge of the opponents weapon off it and to the side.

[Stage 1: Low Dip]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The use side steps an opponents strike, spinning around and crouching as they do, slashing with their sword at their opponents lower legs.

[Stage 1: Strike]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user hold's their sword bearing arm back, their opponent at a distance using their off-hand. Then, quickly, they will jab forward with their sword, aiming for the central torso.

[Stage 1: Hold]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will meet the sword of their opponent, then perform a spinning motion, twisting and locking both their swords temporarily.

[Stage 2: River]
C-Rank Taijutsu Stance
The user adopts a light-footed and graceful stance. By moving from step to step in a merging, flowing manner, the user is able to much easier across the battlefield, regardless of terrain. The stance gives the impression that the user is gliding across the ground.

[Stage 2: Gliding Slash]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Requires: [Stage 2: River]
The user will quickly move past an opponent, performing a spin as they do, slashing into them twice with their sword.

[Stage 2: Fading Body]
C-Rank Taijutsu Stance
A primarily defensive stance, the user will adopt a loose stance, allowing their body more easily sway and move. When attacked, they become able to more easily dodge strikes and blows with minimal body movement, often times causing their opponents to miss by mere centimeters.

[Stage 3: Lower Slash]
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The is able to perform a slash with their weapon with their legs. Using legs, they will pinch it behind the back of the leg, and perform a quick spin, slashing the opponent.
Wushu: Drunken Monkey:
A blanket term used to describe the multiple variants of a form of martial arts practiced throughout several nations within the Land of Shrimp, the primary style that Heilong practices is an energetic, confrontational style, using acrobatic movements combined with rapid strikes to overwhelm and confuse an opponent. It is known as Drunken Monkey.
Requires: [Acrobatics] and [Close Quarters Combat] Concentrations
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Monkey Palm
D-Rank Taijutsu Stance
The user sets their feet apart, with the dominant foot positioned slightly behind them. Their dominant hand is held out, while their offhand is held at their chest, with both having the palm facing outwards.

Divert
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Requires: Monkey Palm
Heilong engages in combat with his opponent, blocking oncoming blows, before taking a window to block a incoming strike, and punch them in the abdomen.

Recovery
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Requires: Monkey Palm
If knocked down, Heilong will quickly recover by throwing down his arm, pressing himself briefly against the ground before bouncing back up.

Two Part Strike
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Requires: Monkey Palm
Heilong will engage his opponent, throwing his elbow into their throat, before throwing a punch directly into their face.

Break
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Requires: Monkey Palm
Heilong will catch the opponents leg, and drop his elbow down on it. If their strength is sufficiently above, this will break it.

Stepping Stone
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Heilong will step onto the leg of the opponent, using it to propel himself into back flip, kicking them in the chin as he does.

Dropping Stone
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Heilong will bring his leg directly upwards, and bring it slamming down on top of his opponent.

Low Hanging Fruit
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Heilong enters a state he is able to instinctively balance his body with little effort. Whether it be on top a tree branch, a razor thin wire, or even an opponents weapon, he to maintain his balance in a variety of positions as if they were his natural state.

Palmed Strike
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Heilong will strike his opponent across the face with his open pal, and follow through with a turning side kick to their torso.

Drunken Chatter
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Having been apprenticed to both a story-teller and a drunkard, Heilong has long since mastered the craft of weaving distracting tales. While engaged in combat, he will begin to spin a story on the spot, often untrue, in an attempt to disrupt the concentration of the opponent. If their instinct is not equal to ([Instinct+Taijutsu]/2) of Heilong's, they will begin experiencing a debuff to their Taijutsu of -3 for a maximum span of 3 posts.

Fury of Son
B-Rank Taijutsu Stance
Heilong will adopt a light-footed and springy form, which allows him to take full advantage of the high maneuverability that serves as the basis for Drunken Monkey. While in it, he is easily able to perform complex acrobatic feats and moves, such as using an opponents weapon as a spring-board or flip, or leaping across projectiles mid-air.
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History
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Born the third son in a family of artisans, Long was well-off growing up. Much of his childhood was spent assisting his father in his trade, pottery, with his eventual future being to become an apprentice, and then, to take over for his shop. When not with his father, he spent time exploring the village, playing with the other children and listening to the stories of travelers.

It was here that he became enthralled with adventures, and the fantastical stories that came with them. Though facing some difficulty in convincing his father of the value in such a craft, he eventually persuaded the man that the telling of stories was as worthy to be called an art as sculpting, or painting. For several years, he learnt the disciplines and traditions of a story-teller, his skill in oration becoming enough that he often performed in the inns of his hometown, or during celebrations.

His apprenticeship came to a pause Long chose to join the Junfá's Army during a recruitment drive. He'd developed a craving for the world outside his village, and felt the army was the easiest way to achieve this. Those his family was somewhat concerned with his path, his master encouraged him with a wide smile, explaining that every man had their own story to tell. He did, however, set a promise to his apprentice. "Don't come back to me until you've got a good story to tell."

His time in the army wasn't long lived, yet he did gain some experiences worthy of remembering. His first time holding a blade. His first time with a woman. His first kill. The death of friends. Revenge. Despite all this, at the end of it all, Long felt he had not finished writing his tale.

After being discharged from the army due to an injury, he wandered for about a year, learning in the span of time to speak and understand the language of the Shinobi Continent. Feeling as though there was a whole lifetime worth of experiences to be had there, he charted a ship departing, and began the next chapter of his life.
KirigakureOho TetsuJounin A-Rank Missing Ninja
IwagakureAkari Vale • Genin
IwagakureWu Sun • Chuunin
KonohagakureNara Shikado • Chuunin

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Hei Long

Post by Sanjuro » Thu Dec 20, 2018 3:12 am

Try using these links for the images, they tend to be a little more reliable: https://i.imgur.com/vlWLjnb.jpg - casual attire
https://i.imgur.com/gNjwHTM.jpg - You attire, also spoiler says You, am assuming it's meant to be Hei.

Face/head: Heil <- Hei*

amber.His <- amber. His*

having "horns" <- "horns."

Picture: <- Move your picture spoilers here or remove this portion.

Personality: <- Move this section to after the General tab on the list, or remove the General tab of the list.

Personality: quite the chatter <- chatterer*?

Dreams: to live an eventual life. <- Eventful*?

Combat Mentality: Heilong's <- Hei Long's

Under equipment <- The Great Monkey King and the Dragon, his favorite novel[/i], broken tag.

When travelling, Long carries a large wicket <- wicker*

[Stage 1: Low Dip] <- The use - The user*

[Stage 1: Strike] <- The user hold's their sword bearing arm back, - holds*
their opponent at a

[Stage 3: Lower Slash] <- The is able to perform a slash with their weapon with their legs. Using legs, they will pinch - The user is able to perform a slash with their weapon using their legs. Pinching their weapon

Low Hanging Fruit <- weapon, he to maintain - he is able to*

Palmed Strike <- open pal - open palm*

History
His apprenticeship came to a pause Long <- when Long*
Those his family <- Though*
charted a ship <- chartered*
Name Village Rank Color Code
Hirohito, Hideki Kirigakure Bannin #0047AB
Higurashi, Kazuo Iwagakure Special Jounin #FFC40C
Akechi, Gendo Cold Country C-Rank pink
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Hei Long

Post by Yura » Wed Dec 26, 2018 10:31 am

Please reply/make edits within another day or two for this.
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NameRankVillageTeamColor
SadakoGeninIwagakureTeam 13[color=#90D2D8]
Enkouten, MitsuoBanninIwagakureTeam 18|Jousai[color=#ff2200]
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NameRankVillageTeamColor
Nara, ShikariBanninKonohagakureMamorinuku[color=#fb8a00]
Takara, MorikoGeninIwagakure[color=#ffeb66]
Inji, AyakoC-RankWaterfall[color=#8080ff]

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Hei Long

Post by Niro » Sun Dec 30, 2018 8:12 pm

[Denied] due to Timing
#MakeIwaGreatAgain
NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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