[Accepted]Day 15 + 20 Jutsu Claim

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Texas
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[Accepted]Day 15 + 20 Jutsu Claim

Post by Texas » Thu Dec 20, 2018 2:05 pm

Application: Tenzin
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[b]*[color=#80A0FF][Ninjutsu • Rattrap][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will imbue an item with their chakra that is no larger than a basketball. The next thing to touch the object within 3 posts will feel the chakra lurch off the object, surging into their body and overwhelming them. For those with less than 20 strength they will find themselves immobile for the next 5 posts. If the target that touches the object has 20 or higher strength, they will find themselves unaffected.

[b]*[color=#80A0FF][Ninjutsu • Shadow Clone Technique][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user proceeds to create a number of clones of themselves (maximum is equal to 1/3rd the users stamina). Unlike the Clone Technique, these clones are actual copies of the user in both appearance and substance. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but they will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original and any experience the clones gain during their existence is transferred to the user once they are dispersed. Given that the clones are an exact replica of the user, they share the same stats except for stamina, which is determined by the number of clones presently in effect.

[b]*[color=#80A0FF][Ninjutsu • Underworld Guardian Spikes][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will cause their hair to rapidly grow and cocoon their body for protection. The hair does this at a speed of 20, and when done, will have formed thick layers of rigid hair to protect the user from attacks of 20 and less strength. Upon completely cocooning the user, the hair disconnects from the user's hair, leaving it at it's original length. The hair of the cocoon is chakra infused, providing immunity to electricity, this lasts for up to four posts.

[b][color=#80A0FF][Ninjutsu • Chakra Bullet Technique][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, Tenzin will have his pointer finger out and his thumb up as if he was shooting a finger gun. By aiming with his finger and sending his thumb down, Tenzin can shoot a condensed orb (1" in diameter) of chakra from his fingertip. It travels at a speed of 20 and with a strength of 20. It can travel up to 15m. The technique only has one shot or stops after 5 posts.


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Last edited by Texas on Fri Dec 21, 2018 10:16 am, edited 4 times in total.
Characters
NameVillageRank
Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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Day 15 + 20 Jutsu Claim

Post by Sanjuro » Thu Dec 20, 2018 3:29 pm

Chakra Bullet is missing a rank. If it's B the strength and speed need to go down as it is multiprojectile, which should honestly be limited to 5 shots. If it is A, the strength and speed are fine but again 10 is a bit much.
Name Village Rank Color Code
Hirohito, Hideki Kirigakure Bannin #0047AB
Higurashi, Kazuo Iwagakure Special Jounin #FFC40C
Akechi, Gendo Cold Country C-Rank pink
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Day 15 + 20 Jutsu Claim

Post by Texas » Thu Dec 20, 2018 4:50 pm

Okay my bad, missed the part in the rules about multiple projectile jutsu stat changes. I just changed it to one shot.

Edit: I also added B-rank below it.
Characters
NameVillageRank
Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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Post by Sanjuro » Thu Dec 20, 2018 6:05 pm

You've still got 2 shots in there. Anything more than 1 is technically multiprojectile, unfortunately.
Name Village Rank Color Code
Hirohito, Hideki Kirigakure Bannin #0047AB
Higurashi, Kazuo Iwagakure Special Jounin #FFC40C
Akechi, Gendo Cold Country C-Rank pink
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Post by Texas » Fri Dec 21, 2018 10:17 am

I must of had a brain fart yesterday. I meant to say one shot. Sorry! Fixed it to one shot
Characters
NameVillageRank
Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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Day 15 + 20 Jutsu Claim

Post by Niro » Fri Dec 21, 2018 8:35 pm

You sure you only want 15m on a B-rank technique? You can do 25m imo
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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Day 15 + 20 Jutsu Claim

Post by Kabu » Fri Dec 28, 2018 5:52 pm

I'm just gonna go ahead and throw a 1/2 on here and if you wish to edit the jutsu, you can do so at a later point.

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Nakiya Hotaru - #9E540A
Nakano Kiyomi - #8E47AD], Nakano Ayaka - #0C1C8C
Fukusha Nezumi - #E00747
Karagata yamada - #CE1126, Makura Ayame - #7251BC
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Post by Niro » Sun Dec 30, 2018 7:25 pm

[Accepted]
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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