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Post by Belac » Fri Dec 21, 2018 12:01 am

Application: Awai Michio
Change: I would like to increase Raiden's Katon nature ability to cause second degree burns on contact.
Spoiler tag under Ninjutsu saying: Ink Style with the following jutsu:

Ink Style • Spike
D-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Michio creates a neon colored ink before forming it into a spike. This spike is then fired with a strength of 5 and speed of 5 for up to ten meters away. These spikes, whether they impale or miss, revert back into a puddle of ink afterwards.

Ink Style • Shield
D-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Michio creates a neon colored ink before shaping it into a seven by four foot wall. This wall forms with a speed of 7 and has as strength of 3. Once destroyed, the shield reverts back into a puddle of ink.

Ink Style • Chain
C-Ranked Ink Style Ninjutsu
Michio creates a neon colored ink before shaping into four ten foot long chains. These chains move at a speed of 5 and bind with a strength of 15. These chains will remain until broken or for six posts, at which point they will return to being puddles.

Then under Hiton:

~Light Release • Becoming Flashy Technique
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After grabbing a weapon or small object and flowing Hiton chakra into it, the user causes the object to glow with their personal chakra color and essentially turns the weapon or object into a constantly glowing flash tag. This infusion lasts for 2 posts. The 'infusion' does not make the object more durable in any way. During those 2 posts, the user can also release the Hiton chakra stored inside once and cause it to let out a large burst of light over a 5ft radius.

~Light Release • Light Ray Jutsu
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Performing the hand seals for the technique, the user then puts both hands out forward and from both palms a basketball sized beam of light colored the same as the user's personal light shoots forward. The ball moves in a straight line to a maximum distance of 30 feet at a speed of 10. The light is semi-solid, hitting hard with 10 strength but as it hits it breaks up like gas against the object when it hits, spreading out over the person.

~Light Release • Solar Cutting Blade Technique
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Performing the hand seals, the user then puts one hand up and is able to create a brightly shining disc of condensed light that is the same color as their personal light. The disk is extremely thin, maybe half a centimeter, and one foot in diameter, glowing with half the intensity of a flash tag, making it hard to look directly at unless wearing some sort of eye protection. The user can throw the disc for (control x 2) meters and it hits, cutting into the object with 10 strength.

Followed with, under Katon:
Katon • Fire Projectiles
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Requirement: 8 control
By channeling katon chakra into their lungs and then expelling flames onto a weapon, a user is able to coat small projectiles with fire. This adds a 1st degree burning effect to at most ten small weapons, and lasts for three posts.

*Katon • Ripple
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling katon chakra into their body, the user will release a burst of flame around their entire body, coming outwards from them. This sphere of roiling fire pushes outward with 10 speed and impacts whatever it touches with 10 strength, the sphere extending roughly 3 meters in radius from the user's body.

Payment: the ten points specifically for jutsu from this post plus this one as well and Ten points from my character profile
Last edited by Belac on Mon Dec 31, 2018 9:07 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Post by Kao » Tue Dec 25, 2018 1:37 am

• I would like to increase Raiden's Katon nature ability to cause second degree burns on contact. <-- not sure what you mean by this? the burns inflicted by katon is determined by the jutsu's strength. So if you want 2nd degree burns the tech has to have a strength of at least 15.

• Ink Style • Chain <-- how long are the chains?
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Post by Belac » Thu Dec 27, 2018 6:27 pm

I added a length to the chains, honestly wasn't sure what to go with.

As far as Raiden, I stated 'The blade has the ability to equip any element the user knows. ' It's less linked to jutsu, and moreso to his known elements/extensions and his skill in the ninjutsu stat.
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Post by Nick » Sat Dec 29, 2018 2:09 am

Hi, just popping in because I was asked to do pricing.

First off you'll need to specify which elements it has, not just "Any the user has", because if you end up getting katon, raiton, or hiton extensions (or a paid ability for more elements) then you'd have to pay for each addition.

As it stands, 3 elements with first level stuff is about 25 points.

With 3 elements, one at second level stuff, and the other two at first level stuff, would be about... 35.

Overall you'd pay 10 points for the upgrade.
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Post by Belac » Sun Dec 30, 2018 2:09 am

so I'm just paying the 10 to increase the katon it already has?
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Post by Niro » Sun Dec 30, 2018 7:43 pm

Correct

How is he creating ink? Most Ink Style users have containers of ink and use those as their source.
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Post by Belac » Sun Dec 30, 2018 8:33 pm

Alrighty. And I assumed through chakra? Like Katon and Raiton do, making elements from nothing.
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Post by Niro » Sun Dec 30, 2018 8:51 pm

Total cost should be 30 points for jutsu + weapon upgrade, payment only has 20 currently
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Post by Belac » Mon Dec 31, 2018 9:08 pm

Woops, forgot to link my other post. Thank you. Edits made. Happy New Years you guys ^-^
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Post by Niro » Mon Dec 31, 2018 10:28 pm

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