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[Bolin!]

Application: Yojinoka Saburo

Change: Adding three Doton jutsu, one Archive and two Custom.

Archive:

D-RankedShow

*Doton • Dirt Cloud
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a 1 meter diameter ball of loose dirt in front of them, launching it off up to 10 meters away at a strength of 4 and speed of 6. Upon impact the ball of loose dirt breaks apart forming a vision-impairing cloud of dirt with a 3 meter radius.

Custom:

C-RankedShow

Doton • Pebble Bullets
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user makes hand seals to form six pebbles made of chakra in their mouth which they spit rapidly at their target. Each pebble flies up to 15 meters at a Speed of 8 and hits with a Strength of 2. Because they are formed primarily of chakra these pebbles break into dirt upon impact, and as such do not benefit from the Doton passive.

B-RankedShow

Doton • Earthen Clone Posse
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Doton • Earthen Clone
The user makes hand seals and three clones made of packed dirt spring from the ground. Despite sharing their creator's features, they are clearly made of earth and cannot use jutsu. They have the following stats:

• Taijutsu: 6
• Stamina: 8
• Strength: 7
• Speed: 6

Additionally, if defeated, the clones will collapse into a pile of the soil that created them. This means that they do not possess the Doton passive.

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[Ace Trainer]

Doton • Pebble Bullets
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user makes hand seals to form pebbles made of chakra in their mouth which they spit rapidly at their target. This technique flies up to 15 meters at a Speed of 15 and hits with a Strength of 5. Because they are formed primarily of chakra these pebbles break into dirt upon impact, and as such do not benefit from the Doton passive.


This is really minor, but the technique implies multiple projectiles, but is written as if its a single projectile. "pebbles" vs "technique", I believe if it pebbles, plural, it should be downranked to D-rank stats and a quantity given. Unless they hit with a collective strength.

[Bolin!]

I had written the bullets as a collective strength "burst fire" kind of thing. But if I can stay consistent with the multi-projectile rules, I could swing maybe 6 bullets at Speed 8/Strength 2?

[Kao]

The part "he spits them rapidly" is what makes it multi projectile, since he could still sorta pause between firing and fire them as multiple projectiles. So yeah, you'd have to lower the stats for it. But if you want them to hit as one collective then you'd have to make that clearer and he'd had to fire them all at once

[Bolin!]

Edited for multi-projectile and lowered the strength and speed, let me know how it looks.

[Niro]

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[Kao]

[Accepted]