[Accepted]Practical arts [Part 3]

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[Accepted]Practical arts [Part 3]

Post by Legacy » Fri Jan 11, 2019 5:02 am

Application: Mitsurugi, Gene

Change: Add the following technique to Gene's Stealth spoiler

[Quick hands]

C rank Maneuver

Prerequisite: Deft hands and Stealth concentration

Description: When in close proximity to a target Gene will attempt to lift an item of interest off that person; utilizing his speed and precise hand movements to take an item often times without the person being aware of what they've lost until it's too late, provided the average of his speed and Taijutsu stats are higher than the instinct of his target. When performed on targets who's instinct stat is equal to the average of Gene's Taijutsu and speed totals then the chance of this maneuver being successful is greatly diminished but not improbable. Conversely, he may also plant items on a person using this method without them being aware.

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[color=#BF4000][Quick hands][/color]

 C rank Maneuver

 Prerequisite: Deft hands and Stealth concentration

 Description: When in close proximity to a target Gene will attempt to lift an item of interest off that person; utilizing his speed and precise hand movements to take an item often times without the person being aware of what they've lost until it's too late, provided the average of his speed and Taijutsu stats are higher than the instinct of his target. When performed on targets who's instinct stat is equal to the average of Gene's Taijutsu and speed totals then the chance of this maneuver being successful is greatly diminished but not improbable. Conversely, he may also plant items on a person using this method without them being aware.
Payment: -3 Points
Last edited by Legacy on Mon Jan 14, 2019 1:50 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Practical arts [Part 3]

Post by Sanjuro » Mon Jan 14, 2019 6:43 am

The way you have this written is you're averaging your Speed and Taijutsu and then dividing it by 2 again. You can remove the /2 or change it to just the formula and remove the average wording.

Average of Speed and Taijutsu; or
Gene's (Speed + Taijutsu)/2.
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Post by Legacy » Mon Jan 14, 2019 1:51 pm

Whoops! I went ahead and fixed the error, should be good now.
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Post by Sanjuro » Mon Jan 21, 2019 8:16 pm

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