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Post by Zao » Tue Feb 19, 2019 10:01 pm

Application: Tarou

Change: Fixing the coding issues with the jutsu spoiler, updated the stat total to 180/250, gave his previously unnamed polearm and armor names in the equipment section. Changed out lower body concentration with CQC and lastly lined out his ability since he hasn't earned it yet.

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Tarou AppShow
Username: Zao
Owner: Zao
Stat Trainings: (20/25)
Tarou

General Information
Type: Spirit
Gender: Male
Age: 150
Appearance:
  • Face/head: A large, cone like head at the top covered in dark fur with a few patches of grey coming in with only the face and ears not covered in fur. The exposed skin is a reddish hue with slightly wrinkled looking due to being a gorilla and his age. Two large teeth from the primate's bottom jaw often can be seen outside the mouth and the creature has a set of sharp hazel eyes.
  • Body: The thirty meter tall gorilla's body has the same traits as its head with thick, dark colored fur with some gray patches beginning to become noticeable in the fur due to age and the hands and feet are the only skin not covered in fur have the same red hue as the face and ears do. It's body appeared very muscular with a large torso, somewhat short legs for its size and overly long, muscled arms that are nearly as long as the ape is tall.
  • Notable Features:Exposed skin is red, hazel eyes, muscular body features, long arms.
Personality:
  • General: The gorilla has a fiery temper, smart mouth, and quick wits. If it wasn't for the binding seal placed upon it then it would have never allowed to his prideful self to ever serve as a companion to a human. But it is slowly finding out that despite his previous thoughts of humans, that not all of them were like the old man who defeated and humiliated him in the past.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Dreams that in the future that its master, Zao, will release him back to his home realm.
  • Fears: Never being able to return to his home.
  • Combat Mentality: The large ape uses its powerful strength and polearm to fight at close to medium range against opponents, using its massive strength to over power opponents and change the landscape they are fighting upon.
Battle Information Rank: A Rank
Stats 180/250
  • Ninjutsu: 1
  • Taijutsu: 40
  • Genjutsu: 1
  • Stamina: 32
  • Control: 1
  • Strength: 40
  • Speed: 50
  • Instinct: 15
Equipment:
Warrior Monk ArmorShow
The gorilla spirit wears a suit of armor, colored primarily in a bright red color and outline in a golden color around the edge, that covers the upper torso via a chest plate, having large shoulder spaulders that lead down onto the biceps of the arms, and finally into matching color grieves that cover down to the first knuckles of each of the gorilla's hands.
Second ChanceShow
A thirty meter long metal polearm, ten meters of the total length consists of a shiny chrome spear blade that is useful for stabbing and slicing while the other twenty meters are crafted from a metal that is black in color. With each swing or thrust of this polearm, it is capable of delivering a second ghost strike created from wind with a strength equal to half of the user's [Strength+Speed]/2.
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Giant Tank:
The gorilla spirit has the natural ability to grow to a size above its normal rank (Gigantism) and has the passive ability to regenerate from wounds, based on its stamina stat. (-5 Stamina debuff after acquiring ability)
[Requires: 15 Points and C Rank PB to unlock.]
Concentrations
Ninjutsu (0/1)[Place them here]
Taijutsu (3/4)[Polearm, Deft Hands, Close Quarter Combat]
Genjutsu (0/1)[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow

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TaijutsuShow
Kushou-Ryu SoujutsuShow
Kushou:
Kushou-Ryu Soujutsu, or spear techniques, are a collection of Taijutsu techniques focused around the use of polearms. The techniques can be used interchangeably for users of spears, staves, glaives and similar weapons. These techniques were developed by the military of the Holy City of Towers, rumored to have been passed from the Holy Mother herself to the males of her land centuries ago. Those who wish to learn the secret techniques of the style must travel there and convince them to teach them. The style itself revolves around keeping the user’s weapon and body moving in order to Manoeuvre around an opponent’s guard, or beat their way through it. Requires: [Polearm Weapons], [Deft Hands], [Lower Body]

* Kushou・The Viper Flicks its Tongue
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves thrusting quickly with the user’s long weapon from a distance before quickly pulling back their polearm to prevent counters. This techniques most useful aspect is that it can be used while in motion without affecting speed or momentum.

* Kushou・The Courtier Taps his Fan
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves proper use of the pole of the user’s weapon to deflect blows. By properly angling and maneuvering their spear or staff they can deflect other like weapons, hand to hand blows or even sword blows by striking the right place at the right time, even while in motion.

* Kushou・Parting the Silk
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・Low Wind Rising
This simple technique involves engaging an opponent’s weapon or one of their arms and moving it slightly to one side with the user’s weapon. This creates a very small opening which the user then exploits by kicking the opponent, keeping their weapon guarding the opponent’s arms.

* Kushou・Low Wind Rising
D-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The foundational stance of the Kushou style, Low Wind Rising involves the spinning of the user’s spear or polearm around their body constantly whilst remaining in motion. While in this stance, the user will be able to deflect projectiles with less strength than their own, while also making unpredictable movements of their spear.

* Kushou・The Swallow Takes Flight
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will vault themselves into the air using their polearm and then unleash a powerful blow from above. This technique is used to disorient and surprise foes as well as overpower them as it strikes with all of the user’s body weight and momentum from the spin they perform in the air in order to strike with the spear that was touching the ground moments before.


* Kushou・Folding the Fan
C-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: [Sword Weapons] concentration
A supplementary stance of the Kushou style, Folding the fan involves pulling back the user’s polearm and using only a portion of its length in order to engage briefly in shorter range with opponents. This sacrifices the user’s range advantage, but also allows them to more properly deal with those who get inside their range. This allows the use of a polearm weapon like a sword weapon.

* Kushou・Twisting the Wind
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・Low Wind Rising
This is the core technique of the Kushou Style. The user will begin in the Low Wind Rising stance and then approaches their opponent. They will begin with a wide arcing blow to begin this combination of blows. Following this they will spin their polearm and their body as they follow their opponent across the battlefield, chasing them down as they block and evade. This technique takes the user’s entire post, and can strike a number of times equal to half their speed. Those who block more than one blow will suffer a -3 to Taijutsu for 3 posts as the weapon’s momentum and force jars their body.

* Kushou・The Swallow Rides the Wind
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・The Swallow Takes Flight
The user of this technique must first launch themselves high into the air as if with The Swallow Takes Flight. They will then begin to spin and unleash a flurry of blows from above. The user is capable of performing up to three strikes in the air, each of them prolonging the user’s airtime. The Swallow Rides the Wind is useful as it maintains the advantageous high ground and all of the forward momentum toward the opponent throughout all of its blows, giving the user an effective +6 Strength and -6 Taijutsu for the three blows.

* Kushou・Bundling Straw
C-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite:15 Instinct
This technique is a kind of mental preparation for the constant movement and spinning involved in the Kushou style. This enables the user to gather snippets of vision, sounds and tactile sensory information in order to be properly aware of the battlefield around them whether standing still or in rapid circular motion. The user is effectively aware of their surroundings within Instinct/3 meters of their person, able to recognize when attacks are coming and the body positions of opponents.

* Kushou・Unfolding the Fan
C-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
While rare for a practitioner of Kushou-ryu to be on the defensive, this technique is designed to facilitate effective defense against other close ranged opponents. The user of this technique is constantly aware of distancing between the opponent and themselves, and therefore will aim all of their strikes to prevent the opponent from closing the gap using their long weapon. This will make it extremely difficult for those with less Taijutsu than them to get close to the user safely without somehow neutralizing the user’s weapon.


* Kushou・The River Undercuts the Bank
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user of this technique will first block an incoming strike. Then, they will almost immediately cease resisting, causing the opponent to fall forward slightly and lose their balance provided their taijutsu is lower than the users. This successfully created opening allows the user to raise the lower end of their weapon to strike from inside the opponent’s guard, typically at either the groin or the chin with full strength.

* Kushou・Watered Silk
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user of this technique will strike the ground with one end of their weapon hard, dragging it in a line. This will fling a cloud of dirt, rock and dust up into their opponent’s eyes as if the user had thrown it. The use of one end of their weapon in this enables the immediate return of the opposite end for a follow up strike at either a blinded opponent or an opponent that is quite predictably dodging the debris.

* Kushou・Threading the Needle
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
After either blocking an opponent’s strike or having one of their strikes blocked, the user will flick their weapon. Using their great leverage and range to their advantage, the user is able to skillfully dart their weapon around the opponent’s existing guard for a quick thrust at their opponent providing their Taijutsu is greater than the opponent’s.

Kushou・Extending One's Reach
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 35 Strength
Being preformed through a horizonal slash (via normal slash or from a spin) of the polearm, the technique produces an air pressure with the slash that carries the force forward up to [20] meters past the end of the weapon at a speed equal to 1/2 their strength, creating an 'air blade' the size of the weapon used to create it, that can cut with the same sharpness as a sword attack.


* Kushou・The Lion on the Hill
A-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The user will balance the tip of their weapon toward the ground before them while facing the opponent side on and rising the rear end of the weapon into the air. This stance concentrates a lot of the user’s power and agility into their legs, enabling them to dash short distances (5m max) at maximum speed without acceleration time after a moment’s preparation. This is extremely taxing on the user’s stamina however, and costs them 1 stamina each time they dash.

* Kushou・Whirlwind on the Mountain
A-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerquisite: * Kushou・Twisting the Wind
The user of this technique begins a relentless onslaught upon an opponent. They take a moment to prepare their legs before dashing forward. This technique is used to pursue opponents and wear them down with repeated spinning attacks. Opponents with a speed lower than the user’s will find it difficult to safely move away from the user while they pursue them. Those that block or are hit by two or more blows will have their Taijutsu reduced by 6 because of the jarring nature of the blows for 6 posts.


* Kushou・Ougi: Gae Bolg
S-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 40 Taijutsu, 35 Speed, Must be Learned from the Holy City of Towers
The user will begin by thrusting at an opponent. If the blow is blocked or evaded, the user is able to perform this Manoeuvre. The practitioner of Kushou pulls back their spear at an incredible speed and strikes again. Those with a Taijutsu+Instinct/2 lower than the user’s Taijutsu+Speed/2 will be unable to detect the second blow and will see an afterimage of the first strike remaining in the place where it had struck before. If the opponent’s Taijutsu+Instinct/2 is more than 5 points lower than the user’s, they will be able to strike a third time in the same manner.
GenjutsuShow

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History The red faced gorilla was born into the primate spirit realm, raised for the majority of its lift within a monk like temple, similar to many other places within the rather peaceful spirit realm there. Around the age of fifty it encountered its first human, a space-time traveler who landed there by accident. Wanting to express to the human the strength of the primate spirits within the realm it challenged the human but in the end was utterly embarrassed leaving a sour taste in the gorilla's mouth that it was unable to rid itself of as the human soon devised a manner to leave the realm and continued his journey through the spirit realms.

It would not be until nearly a hundred years later that it would encounter another group of shinobi, Zao and his comrades from the Sand village who were hurtling through the spirit realms just trying to find a way home. Just when the group was about to peacefully leave the primate realm the spirit took the opportunity to challenge the group with the end goal of killing them all to regain a bit of the honor it had lost all those years ago. However, it had underestimated the group and mostly the strength of the shinobi's Tenkujutsu which in the end led to its failure. But the shinobi did not kill the ape and instead used a powerful binding skill to forcible bind the gigantic gorilla into a manner of forced servitude before he was removed from his realm and bound to the human's personal realm.

Where he now serves as a companion to the white haired human, being shown a different light of the human realm and shinobi, being treated like a valued companion instead of a servant by his new master. The Suna-nin even searched out a polearm master from the Holy City of Towers, the renown spear and polearm users, in order to help the red faced ape further improve his polearm skills. Something that he would have never expected for his master to do for him and it left him confused on his previous thoughts and feelings about humans.

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[b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=2056587]Zao[/url]
[b]Owner:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8118184/1/]Zao[/url]
[b]Stat Trainings:[/b] (20/25)
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[center][size=150][b]Tarou[/b][/size]
[img]https://s20.postimg.cc/p76fwy3fx/dc77d0a15c171feb95d1c861759a66fd.jpg[/img]
[b][size=150]General Information[/size][/b][/center]
[b]Type:[/b] Spirit
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Age:[/b] 150
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[list][i]Face/head:[/i] A large, cone like head at the top covered in dark fur with a few patches of grey coming in with only the face and ears not covered in fur. The exposed skin is a reddish hue with slightly wrinkled looking due to being a gorilla and his age. Two large teeth from the primate's bottom jaw often can be seen outside the mouth and the creature has a set of sharp hazel eyes.[/list]
[list][i]Body:[/i] The thirty meter tall gorilla's body has the same traits as its head with thick, dark colored fur with some gray patches beginning to become noticeable in the fur due to age and the hands and feet are the only skin not covered in fur have the same red hue as the face and ears do. It's body appeared very muscular with a large torso, somewhat short legs for its size and overly long, muscled arms that are nearly as long as the ape is tall. [/list]
[list][i]Notable Features:[/i]Exposed skin is red, hazel eyes, muscular body features, long arms.[/list]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[list][i]General:[/i] The gorilla has a fiery temper, smart mouth, and quick wits. If it wasn't for the binding seal placed upon it then it would have never allowed to his prideful self to ever serve as a companion to a human. But it is slowly finding out that despite his previous thoughts of humans, that not all of them were like the old man who defeated and humiliated him in the past.[/list]
[list][i]Hopes/Dreams:[/i] Dreams that in the future that its master, Zao, will release him back to his home realm. [/list]
[list][i]Fears:[/i] Never being able to return to his home.[/list]
[list][i]Combat Mentality:[/i] The large ape uses its powerful strength and polearm to fight at close to medium range against opponents, using its massive strength to over power opponents and change the landscape they are fighting upon.[/list]

[center][b][size=150]Battle Information[/size][/b][/center]
[b]Rank:[/b] A Rank
[b]Stats[/b] 180/250
[list][b]Ninjutsu:[/b] 1[/list]
[list][b]Taijutsu:[/b] 40[/list]
[list][b]Genjutsu:[/b] 1 [/list]
[list][b]Stamina:[/b] 32[/list]
[list][b]Control:[/b] 1 [/list]
[list][b]Strength:[/b] 40[/list]
[list][b]Speed:[/b] 50[/list]
[list][b]Instinct: [/b]15
[/list]
[b]Equipment:[/b]
[spoiler=Warrior Monk Armor]
The gorilla spirit wears a suit of armor, colored primarily in a bright red color and outline in a golden color around the edge, that covers the upper torso via a chest plate, having large shoulder spaulders that lead down onto the biceps of the arms, and finally into matching color grieves that cover down to the first knuckles of each of the gorilla's hands.
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[spoiler=Second Chance]
A thirty meter long metal polearm, ten meters of the total length consists of a shiny chrome spear blade that is useful for stabbing and slicing while the other twenty meters are crafted from a metal that is black in color. With each swing or thrust of this polearm, it is capable of delivering a second ghost strike created from wind with a strength equal to half of the user's [Strength+Speed]/2. 

[center][img]https://s20.postimg.cc/nuoqv3o0t/05c33121674495c9d2e97843583f5737.jpg[/img][/center]
[/spoiler]
[b]Elemental Affinities:[/b] Fuuton
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[center][b][big]Abilities and Concentrations[/big][/b][/center]
[table=2, Abilities][b]First Ability[/b][c]
[s][quote="Giant Tank"] The gorilla spirit has the natural ability to grow to a size above its normal rank (Gigantism) and has the passive ability to regenerate from wounds, based on its stamina stat. (-5 Stamina debuff after acquiring ability)
[Requires: 15 Points and C Rank PB to unlock.]
[/quote][/s]
[/table]
[table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b] (0/1)[c][Place them here][c]
[b]Taijutsu[/b] (3/4)[c][Polearm, Deft Hands, Close Quarter Combat][c]
[b]Genjutsu[/b] (0/1)[c][Place them here][/table]
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[center][b][big]Jutsu[/big][/b][/center]
[spoiler=Ninjutsu]

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[spoiler=Taijutsu]

[spoiler=Kushou-Ryu Soujutsu]
[quote="Kushou"]
Kushou-Ryu Soujutsu, or spear techniques, are a collection of Taijutsu techniques focused around the use of polearms. The techniques can be used interchangeably for users of spears, staves, glaives and similar weapons. These techniques were developed by the military of the Holy City of Towers, rumored to have been passed from the Holy Mother herself to the males of her land centuries ago. Those who wish to learn the secret techniques of the style must travel there and convince them to teach them. The style itself revolves around keeping the user’s weapon and body moving in order to Manoeuvre around an opponent’s guard, or beat their way through it. Requires: [i][Polearm Weapons][/i], [i][Deft Hands][/i], [i][Lower Body][/i][/quote]
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[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・The Viper Flicks its Tongue[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves thrusting quickly with the user’s long weapon from a distance before quickly pulling back their polearm to prevent counters. This techniques most useful aspect is that it can be used while in motion without affecting speed or momentum.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・The Courtier Taps his Fan[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This simple technique involves proper use of the pole of the user’s weapon to deflect blows. By properly angling and maneuvering their spear or staff they can deflect other like weapons, hand to hand blows or even sword blows by striking the right place at the right time, even while in motion.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Parting the Silk[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・Low Wind Rising
This simple technique involves engaging an opponent’s weapon or one of their arms and moving it slightly to one side with the user’s weapon. This creates a very small opening which the user then exploits by kicking the opponent, keeping their weapon guarding the opponent’s arms.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Low Wind Rising[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The foundational stance of the Kushou style, Low Wind Rising involves the spinning of the user’s spear or polearm around their body constantly whilst remaining in motion. While in this stance, the user will be able to deflect projectiles with less strength than their own, while also making unpredictable movements of their spear.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・The Swallow Takes Flight[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user will vault themselves into the air using their polearm and then unleash a powerful blow from above. This technique is used to disorient and surprise foes as well as overpower them as it strikes with all of the user’s body weight and momentum from the spin they perform in the air in order to strike with the spear that was touching the ground moments before. 


[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Folding the Fan[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: [Sword Weapons] concentration
A supplementary stance of the Kushou style, Folding the fan involves pulling back the user’s polearm and using only a portion of its length in order to engage briefly in shorter range with opponents. This sacrifices the user’s range advantage, but also allows them to more properly deal with those who get inside their range. This allows the use of a polearm weapon like a sword weapon.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Twisting the Wind[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・Low Wind Rising
This is the core technique of the Kushou Style. The user will begin in the Low Wind Rising stance and then approaches their opponent. They will begin with a wide arcing blow to begin this combination of blows. Following this they will spin their polearm and their body as they follow their opponent across the battlefield, chasing them down as they block and evade. This technique takes the user’s entire post, and can strike a number of times equal to half their speed. Those who block more than one blow will suffer a -3 to Taijutsu for 3 posts as the weapon’s momentum and force jars their body.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・The Swallow Rides the Wind[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: * Kushou・The Swallow Takes Flight
The user of this technique must first launch themselves high into the air as if with The Swallow Takes Flight. They will then begin to spin and unleash a flurry of blows from above. The user is capable of performing up to three strikes in the air, each of them prolonging the user’s airtime. The Swallow Rides the Wind is useful as it maintains the advantageous high ground and all of the forward momentum toward the opponent throughout all of its blows, giving the user an effective +6 Strength and -6 Taijutsu for the three blows.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Bundling Straw[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite:15 Instinct
This technique is a kind of mental preparation for the constant movement and spinning involved in the Kushou style. This enables the user to gather snippets of vision, sounds and tactile sensory information in order to be properly aware of the battlefield around them whether standing still or in rapid circular motion. The user is effectively aware of their surroundings within Instinct/3 meters of their person, able to recognize when attacks are coming and the body positions of opponents.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Unfolding the Fan[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
While rare for a practitioner of Kushou-ryu to be on the defensive, this technique is designed to facilitate effective defense against other close ranged opponents. The user of this technique is constantly aware of distancing between the opponent and themselves, and therefore will aim all of their strikes to prevent the opponent from closing the gap using their long weapon. This will make it extremely difficult for those with less Taijutsu than them to get close to the user safely without somehow neutralizing the user’s weapon.


[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・The River Undercuts the Bank[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user of this technique will first block an incoming strike. Then, they will almost immediately cease resisting, causing the opponent to fall forward slightly and lose their balance provided their taijutsu is lower than the users. This successfully created opening allows the user to raise the lower end of their weapon to strike from inside the opponent’s guard, typically at either the groin or the chin with full strength.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Watered Silk[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user of this technique will strike the ground with one end of their weapon hard, dragging it in a line. This will fling a cloud of dirt, rock and dust up into their opponent’s eyes as if the user had thrown it. The use of one end of their weapon in this enables the immediate return of the opposite end for a follow up strike at either a blinded opponent or an opponent that is quite predictably dodging the debris.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Threading the Needle[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
After either blocking an opponent’s strike or having one of their strikes blocked, the user will flick their weapon. Using their great leverage and range to their advantage, the user is able to skillfully dart their weapon around the opponent’s existing guard for a quick thrust at their opponent providing their Taijutsu is greater than the opponent’s.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]Kushou・Extending One's Reach[/b][/color]
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 35 Strength
Being preformed through a horizonal slash (via normal slash or from a spin) of the polearm, the technique produces an air pressure with the slash that carries the force forward up to [20] meters past the end of the weapon at a speed equal to 1/2 their strength, creating an 'air blade' the size of the weapon used to create it, that can cut with the same sharpness as a sword attack.


[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・The Lion on the Hill[/b][/color]
A-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The user will balance the tip of their weapon toward the ground before them while facing the opponent side on and rising the rear end of the weapon into the air. This stance concentrates a lot of the user’s power and agility into their legs, enabling them to dash short distances (5m max) at maximum speed without acceleration time after a moment’s preparation. This is extremely taxing on the user’s stamina however, and costs them 1 stamina each time they dash.

[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Whirlwind on the Mountain[/b][/color]
A-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerquisite: * Kushou・Twisting the Wind
The user of this technique begins a relentless onslaught upon an opponent. They take a moment to prepare their legs before dashing forward. This technique is used to pursue opponents and wear them down with repeated spinning attacks. Opponents with a speed lower than the user’s will find it difficult to safely move away from the user while they pursue them. Those that block or are hit by two or more blows will have their Taijutsu reduced by 6 because of the jarring nature of the blows for 6 posts.


[color=darkolivegreen][b]* Kushou・Ougi: Gae Bolg[/b][/color]
S-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 40 Taijutsu, 35 Speed, Must be Learned from the Holy City of Towers
The user will begin by thrusting at an opponent. If the blow is blocked or evaded, the user is able to perform this Manoeuvre. The practitioner of Kushou pulls back their spear at an incredible speed and strikes again. Those with a Taijutsu+Instinct/2 lower than the user’s Taijutsu+Speed/2 will be unable to detect the second blow and will see an afterimage of the first strike remaining in the place where it had struck before. If the opponent’s Taijutsu+Instinct/2 is more than 5 points lower than the user’s, they will be able to strike a third time in the same manner.
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[spoiler=Genjutsu]

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[center][b][big]History[/big][/b][/center]

The red faced gorilla was born into the primate spirit realm, raised for the majority of its lift within a monk like temple, similar to many other places within the rather peaceful spirit realm there. Around the age of fifty it encountered its first human, a space-time traveler who landed there by accident. Wanting to express to the human the strength of the primate spirits within the realm it challenged the human but in the end was utterly embarrassed leaving a sour taste in the gorilla's mouth that it was unable to rid itself of as the human soon devised a manner to leave the realm and continued his journey through the spirit realms.

It would not be until nearly a hundred years later that it would encounter another group of shinobi, Zao and his comrades from the Sand village who were hurtling through the spirit realms just trying to find a way home. Just when the group was about to peacefully leave the primate realm the spirit took the opportunity to challenge the group with the end goal of killing them all to regain a bit of the honor it had lost all those years ago. However, it had underestimated the group and mostly the strength of the shinobi's Tenkujutsu which in the end led to its failure. But the shinobi did not kill the ape and instead used a powerful binding skill to forcible bind the gigantic gorilla into a manner of forced servitude before he was removed from his realm and bound to the human's personal realm.

Where he now serves as a companion to the white haired human, being shown a different light of the human realm and shinobi, being treated like a valued companion instead of a servant by his new master. The Suna-nin even searched out a polearm master from the Holy City of Towers, the renown spear and polearm users, in order to help the red faced ape further improve his polearm skills. Something that he would have never expected for his master to do for him and it left him confused on his previous thoughts and feelings about humans.

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Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

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Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

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