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[Sia]

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Change: Add the following jutsu

Acidic Mist: Anchor B
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: Mist Concentration, Acid Concentration
After performing the correct hand seals, the user slowly moves their hand down, stabilizing the mist in the area. B-Ranked and below Fuuton jutsu will still work in the mist, but will no longer displace it, allowing the mist jutsu to be maintained easier. Additionally, the duration of the mist will be extended by 5 posts.

Acidic Mist: Constriction
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will focus on a 6m x 6m x 6m area within their acidic mist and cause it to thicken rapidly, pushing down on anything within that area and causing those with less than 20 strength to be unable to move.

Acidic Mist: Breathing
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
While within 5 meters of the mist the user will perform the correct seals and clasp their hands to initiate the jutsu. In response, the whole mist will become outstandingly thick with itself. The anyone inside the mist will be able to move normally, but their breathing space will be limited and choked with water. This causes them to lose 1 point of stamina for every post they spend in the mist. This jutsu lasts for 9 posts.

Acidic Mist: Care Package
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
1 Tai, 7 Stamina, 6 Strength, 12 Speed
After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone of themselves made of acidic mist. The clone will remain for up to 7 posts and may cast any Acidic jutsu that the user knows.

Acidic Mist: Obscure and Overwhelm
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming the required hand seals, the ninja creates a blanket of acid mist which covers the area in front of them. The mist covers 60x60x60m area. The mist limits the visibility of those inside to 1 meter in any direction, and dampens scents, weakening any advanced scent techniques, or controlled scent techniques by 4m. Additionally, sound is dampened as well, which can make it more difficult to communicate plans through the mist without advanced hearing techniques. Those without advanced hearing techniques won't be able to hear anything that's not within 5meters of them, while advanced hearing is limited to 10m. Additionally, the mist is saturated in chakra, which makes it impossible for sensors outside the mist to sense who is within it. This technique lasts a number of posts equal to the user's 1/3 stamina.

Acidic Mist: Anchor A
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: Mist Concentration, Acid Concentration
After performing the correct hand seals, the user slowly moves their hand down, stabilizing the mist in the area. A-Ranked and below Fuuton jutsu will still work in the mist, but will no longer displace it, allowing the mist jutsu to be maintained easier. Additionally, the duration of the mist will be extended by 6 posts.

Acidic Mist: Silent Sleeper
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 50 Ninjutsu
After forming the required hand seals, the ninja creates a blanket of acid mist which covers the area in front of them. The mist covers 400x400x400m area. The mist limits the visibility of those inside to 1/2 meter in any direction, and completely dampens scents, making it impossible to smell anything without advanced smelling techniques, and limiting advance smelling, and scent control techniques to 2m. Additionally, sound is dampened to the point where nothing can be heard without advanced hearing techniques. Those using advanced hearing techniques won't be able to hear anything that's not within 4meters of them. Additionally, the mist is saturated in chakra, which makes it impossible for sensors outside the mist to sense who is within it, and those within it it to sense outside of it. This technique lasts a number of posts equal to the user's 1/3 stamina.

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[Kao]

1/2

[Niro]

Acidic Mist: Obscure and Overwhelm

Acidic Mist: Silent Sleeper

Each of these have 4 anti-sense effects. You're only allowed 2.

[Sia]

Archive Mist have the exact same number of anti-sense attached to them. That was supposed to be a thing exclusive to mist, by its nature.

In fact. These are just copy pastes with acid added, for those ranks.

[ShinobiTruth]

Not gonna comment on the anti-sensor bit, but I wanted to let you know you have two jutsu both named "Acidic Mist: Anchor". Also, while I know that you're taking these from Mist style archives and adding Acid to them, you should mention how the addition of acid affects them as opposed to simply leaving it up for assumption. Even a simple mention of "this technique applies Acid's passive to anyone within it" or whatever would be good.

[Sia]

Naming was intentional. But I added letters just to appease folks.

All jutsu properly state that they are acidic mist. Not really sure what you're on about. o-O

Acid is an active effect, not a passive effect.

[WrightJustice]

Acidic Mist: Care Package <--- Speed should not be more than double that of strength, also I was a little confused at first with the list of stats at the top.

Also seems like you shouldn't be able to add those extra anti-sense to your acid mist since its too many blocks and is running on two passives since your acid runs on its own and does not state the acidic strength per jutsu.
Which may actually be an innate problem with acid mist itself if I am understanding things correctly.

Feel free to discuss with staff on the matter.

[Sia]

As discussed during the last mod, Acid is an active effect and not a passive effect. Which is why they did not need to be de-ranked.

When I first posted the last mod, everything WAS de-ranked and I was told that it was not necessary. So I removed the de-ranking and eventually the mod got accepted. Acidic strength per jutsu does not get listed as it is based on the nin stat of the jutsu in question and is listed in the table corresponding to the concentration.


Fixed STR:SPD ratio on Care Package.

[Director]

Acid is a passive effect, it has a table that follows per ninjutsu stat that makes it passively work regardless if the technique explodes, punches, coats, defends, or etc the acid's passive effect is to eat through things. Like Katon's passive is to burn things it will apply burns regardless if it explodes, punches, coats, or defends it still burns based on its own table. So therefore both passives between mist and acid need to be debuffed equally for acid mist to be applicable.

I understand you were told that Acid was an active effect in the last mod, and I apologize that you we're told so. However you cannot have two effects that work in the background of a jutsu, and not debuff both of them. That is inherently broken, and all jutsu that combo two effects have the passive ranked down. Jesse's Umiton on his companion is a perfect example of this where it debuffs the passive a rank down.

Also I believe mist shouldn't be able to have three anti-sense, and the reason why it has more of an argument than acid mist is that mist has no real inherent combat applicable skills compared to acid mist that passively eats away at your skin and encroaches so it grows with every post making it that much harder to escape. Your acid mist inherently has a combat advantage while regular mist isn't that threatening on its own, and it shouldn't be entailed the same strength that mist has because yours has a much stronger combat applicable passive. While regular mist is just "ooh spooky can't see" yours is "ooh spooky can't see and your skin melts off." However I digress, I think Mist shouldn't be able to block three senses, but that is a topic we're having in staff chat about Mist. Hopefully we'll bring it soon to the discord channel for everyone to discuss. In the mean time I ask that you change for the reasons above, and appreciate your patience. Feel free to DM me any questions, or buzz the questions discord if you wanna talk about it. I may not be available during Mon-Fri 8AM-5PM EST however due to work.

[Sia]

I'm not 100% available atm to make changed on this. But I'd like to keep chatting on discord about it.

I'll definitely de-rank them, but I'm gonna need to reword the concentration to state that acid is an "active" effect, even with the de-ranking,

[Director]

Let me know when you post an updated version of Maido's code to down rank the effects of acid mist.

Also, as per the conversation in Discord. The reason Sankaton is an active effect according to Onu is its due to the effect its oxidation and does not have an actual strength to hit with. So if it hits a person it won't deal 5 strength on contact, it just passes onto the person and begins eating away. Acid has a physical component being sludge that hits with a strength and begins eating away. I'm not sure how that'd work being a physical matter yet not having a strength paired with it to make it an active effect. Perhaps its best to change it from acid to a particulate/acidic effect without a physical mass sorta the effect of acid? Also I'm not sure how pairing Acid without a physical body to Mist with a physical body effects that. They'd need to be sorta the same, otherwise mist gets a special property of not being effected by kouton or Acid gains the ability to get negated by Kouton?

[Sia]

I've liquidized the points from this with a redo token.

[Kao]

In that case I'm marking this as complete