Kimara Hyuuga

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Kimara Hyuuga

Post by Kimera24 » Sat Oct 19, 2019 10:01 am

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Hyuuga Kimara



don't judge if you don't want to be judged

General Information Age: 12
Gender: Female
Height: 4'9''
Weight: 80 Lbs
Physical Features: Kimara is a shy and introverted girl, her black hair reaches back lower with framing strands growing to shoulder-length, As a Hyuuga, she possesses the Byakugan, giving her featureless lavender eyes.
  • Face/head: she keeps her hair just above her forehead with chin-length strands framing her face
  • Body: She is thin, in fact she doesn't eat a lot, but she still manages to normally do all kinds of ninja activities without any problems whatsoever
  • Notable Features:----When Kimara cancels her Byakugan effect she starts to feel sick, she has to train to resolve this aspect of her Kekkei Genkai.
Clothing/Accessories: She doesn't have a specific style, she just wears things she likes, like jackets and heavy clothes in general, she also wears a pair of short dark navy shorts she doesnt' like she uses these type of clothes during missions.
Personality: She is kind, always thinking of others' more than for herself, and always caring about others feelings and well-being, but she has problems talking with other people, she will never start a conversation with a stranger, the other person has to start it if you want to get close to her.
  • Fears: She is scared of society, she had a big trauma and now she has this problem, she is able to fight this personality issue but she needs moral support.
  • Hopes/Dreams: She hopes to become at least a Jounin to achieve her goal, keeping the people she loves safe, her dream is a complex and simple one, she desire a person helping her with her personality problems.
  • Combat Mentality:------------She prefers to attack enemies from afar, in fact she has many ranged attacks, she didn't learn the art of the Gentle Fist, at the moment she should learn how to deal with an enemy at close range

Battle Information Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
  • Ninjutsu: 7
  • Taijutsu: 6
  • Genjutsu: 5
  • Stamina: 6
  • Control: 7
  • Strength: 5
  • Speed: 7
  • Instinct: 5
Equipment: She has 2 pouches at the hips, one containing X15 kunais, and the other containing X15 shurikens
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Raiton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Byakugan:
Byakugan Doujutsu
One of the most famed doujutsu in the world, Byakugan is the bloodline limit of the Hyuuga Clan. When active, the clan member gains 360 degree vision and Penetrative vision, allowing the Hyuuga clan to see the Tenketsu of their enemies. Their telescopic vision can be activated via jutsu. As such, the Byakugan is capable of ability channeling, allowing the Hyuuga to activate their Doujutsu techniques without hand seals. It should be noted that while using their telescopic vision the Hyuuga experiences tunnel vision, making it difficult to see their surroundings.

Prolonged usage of the Byakugan is strenuous and requires a high level of endurance. The maximum operating time a user can utilize their Byakugan at a time is equal to their stamina stat divided by 4 rounded down, to a minimum of one post. Upon reaching the max duration, the stress of using their Byakugan to it’s limit causes a cooldown period of 1/2 of the duration time, to a minumum of one post. During this cooldown period, the Byakugan cannot be activated and attempting to do so will cause physical pain. Duration is based off total posts where the Byakugan is activated, meaning users can turn it on and off to have a shorter cooldown.
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu 2/2
Raiton Affinity:
Raiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the ninjutsu stat requirement.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
Katon Affinity:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
Passive (Ignition)Show
Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own.

Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the strength stat of the individual jutsu.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns
Taijutsu 0/2
Genjutsu 0/2

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
RaitonShow
*Raiton • Stun Gun
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will channel Raiton chakra to two of their fingers. They will then be able to fire up to three total bullet sized balls of concentrated lightning from their fingertips. These bullets will travel at 5 speed, but will not have any physical force. Instead, they will apply light electrical burns similar to a sun burn and will apply Raiton's shocking effect.
*Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at a speed of 6, striking with a strength of 4.
KatonShow
*Katon • Fireball
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a 1 foot diameter fireball at the opponent. It travels up to 10 meters away at a speed of 6 and a strength of 4.
*Katon • Flame's Shadow
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of katon chakra. The clone will be able to move with the stats labelled below, while also exploding with the force of a single exploding tag upon death into a burst of flames. The clone will only last for 3 posts.
  • Taijutsu: 2
  • Stamina: 1
  • Strength: 1
  • Speed: 2
TaijutsuShow
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History
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Her Family
She was born by Akane Hyuuga and Akira Hyuuga like second-born, unfortunately she never saw her big-brother Eito Hyuuga because he was always busy with his family and Ninja carrier, her life was peaceful, her parents loved her a lot and they continued to treat her as they did with her brother, but one day, when she turned 10, the Byakugan arrived.....
A Tragical Event........
Her parents were excited at the idea that their daughter, shortly thereafter, would participate in her rite of passage, But at the time, they were very far from Konoha, in fact the father, an important figure for the Hyuuga clan, has been called for an important reunion, at the meeting they talked about the recent losses of all the villages during the last war, so the whole family was returning at home when, suddenly, a figure appeared on the caravan, a mysterious one,
They both died but Kimara didn't, fortunately, she has been rescued by the Hokage Takeo, he took her to Konoha and a family adopted her, then she joined the Academy to become a Genin.......
The First Battle
At the she ''faced'' one of her classmates, defeating him with a combination of the Byakugan and her Stun Gun, her best (and only) Jutsu she knew perfectly, she used the Byakugan to spot his vital points and then she hit him with the Stun Gun in these spots, needless to say, he fell to the ground unconscious and slightly paralyzed, but she was upset because of the damage she caused to him, the teacher she had at the academy saw an incredible strength in her, for this reason, she is finally a Genin, and is still more ready to become a Jounin.
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Kimara Hyuuga

Post by Kimera24 » Sat Oct 19, 2019 10:02 am

I hope my English has been decent, if not, tell me what to correct and I'll do it
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Kimara Hyuuga

Post by Rain21199 » Sun Oct 20, 2019 12:21 pm

1/2

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Kimara Hyuuga

Post by Varian » Mon Oct 21, 2019 4:34 pm

Are you sure you only want to start with 2 jutsu?
You get 50 points to spend on jutsu as a genin at start up you have only spent 4 points while this isn't wrong you are certainly missing out on free jutsu that you don't have to work towards.

This is entirely up to you. The cost of Jutsu can be found here:
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Post by Kimera24 » Fri Oct 25, 2019 10:18 am

I used all the points, 50 points in this case considering that she is a Genin
40 points for 8 stats
8 points for 4 Level-D jutsus
and 2 points for X15 kunais and X15 shurikens

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Kimara Hyuuga

Post by WrightJustice » Sun Oct 27, 2019 9:47 am

It seems you linked to the user control panel instead of your profile at the top, that should be fixed.
Can you make it a little more clear where the pouches are? Perhaps at the hips or are they above the right and left bum cheek?

Also you should mention your rite of passage in your history which is an event in the clan that happens when you unlock byakugan. You can see the details on it under the clan traditions, the right most description.

Other than that I want to make sure the parents death makes sense and having OOCs have a look at it.

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Post by Kimera24 » Mon Oct 28, 2019 1:55 pm

I adjusted all these things you have told me to replace (oh and sorry for the inaccuracy of the pouches spots, i'm not a native english boy so i will make some pronunciation errors)
I put the profile instead of the user control panel in the first link
I updated the story but i need a person who can play the part of the mysterious figure, i'll tell you when i will update the story

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Post by Niro » Wed Oct 30, 2019 1:51 pm

1/2
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