Jutsu update

Fix off wording in archived jutsu

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Jutsu update

Post by Diatenshi » Fri Nov 15, 2019 1:56 pm

Application:Bone Breaker Style

Change:

Original:

*Fight fire with fire
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Pre-requisite: 20 Strength
The user throws a punch at their opponent as their opponent is throwing a punch as well. The user aims to meet fists with the opponent, but also overwhelms them with strength. Which causes reveberations throughout the opponents arm causing several fractures in their forearm, bicep, and hand. This technique causes extreme pain, and the opponent to be crippled in the afflicted arm. The user must have 5 higher Strength than the opponent's strength to be successful with this jutsu.

Suggested change: replace highlighted word: bicep, with humerous

Reason: honestly im probably just nitpicking but seeing as bicep is a muscle and not a bone im pretty sure the intended target was the humerous, the bone in the upper arm to which the bicep is attached.

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