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Last edited by Legacy on Tue Apr 21, 2020 6:20 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Mitsurugi, Netto
Quote:Can't be ambiguous with this ability channeling. It should be specific jutsu pertinent to the doujutsu like analyzing objects or etc. It cannot be used as a catch all.Kyokugan
"May be used to channel varying forms of jutsu."
Quote:Your Doujutus mentions nothing about reflecting Genjutsu back onto people only about breaking things down.Genjutsu • Reflection
B -rank Overlay
Prerequisite: Kyokugan
Description: Relying upon the Kyokugan's ability to intimately break down information, Netto may discern the nature of a particular Illusion and, provided he shares similar triggers with the original caster, may reflect the Genjutsu back upon them by creating an overlapping realm using the same link of chakra to assert his will. Must have WP equal to or higher than the original castor otherwise this technique will not work.
Character: Awai, Fanho | Rank: Hokage | Village: Konoha | Color Code: [b][color=#682860]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]
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Quote:You doujutsu still doesn't mention reflecting Genjutsu.Genjutsu • Reflection
B -rank Overlay
Prerequisite: Kyokugan
Description: Relying upon the Kyokugan's ability to intimately break down information, Netto may discern the nature of a particular Illusion and, provided he shares similar triggers with the original caster, may reflect the Genjutsu back upon them by creating an overlapping realm using the same link of chakra to assert his will. Must have WP equal to or higher than the original castor otherwise this technique will not work.
Character: Awai, Fanho | Rank: Hokage | Village: Konoha | Color Code: [b][color=#682860]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]
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Mitsurugi, Netto
Director already touched on this
"Should he choose to do so, Netto may ability channel techniques through the Kyokugan" <-- ability channel what? honestly you might as well get rid of this line because you have advanced ninjutsu channeling which is the ame as ability channeling.
Broken tag in your basic jutsu spoiler
Broken bold tag on Flawless Aim - Deceptive Draw
"Should he choose to do so, Netto may ability channel techniques through the Kyokugan" <-- ability channel what? honestly you might as well get rid of this line because you have advanced ninjutsu channeling which is the ame as ability channeling.
Broken tag in your basic jutsu spoiler
Broken bold tag on Flawless Aim - Deceptive Draw
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Last edited by Legacy on Tue Apr 21, 2020 6:23 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Mitsurugi, Netto
A rank MN get 160 stats, not 200.
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Moved back to registry, Niro moved it to completed prob on accident.
Character: Awai, Fanho | Rank: Hokage | Village: Konoha | Color Code: [b][color=#682860]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]
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Character: Awai, Fanho | Rank: Hokage | Village: Konoha | Color Code: [b][color=#682860]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]