Changed my mind! Whoops.

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Changed my mind! Whoops.

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"There are no sides. Just people who help you and people who don’t."
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TeenagerShow
ChildhoodShow

  • Age: 28
  • Gender: Male
  • Height: 5'11"
  • Weight: 224 lbs
  • Hair: Yoru’s head is topped with thick soft locks of vermilion, that cascaded past his shoulders. His distinct hair colour sets him apart from the typical sea of dark haired shinobi. It always has a gleaming shine, showing that it is well groomed and tended to.
  • Eyes: Yoru only has one eye, it is a dark shade of hazel, with splatters of green and gold.
  • Physical Features: His skin is porcelain white radiance and soft splatters of light freckles that scatter across his cheeks. His nose is small and soft, rounding out gently at the tip, his lips too seem almost delicate and often find themselves forming into a benevolent smile. The left side of his face has a small scar around his eye which is peremntly closed. His hands are calloused and rugged, evident of his upbringing on a farm. His arms are powerful yet they are only moderately defined. What is most staggering however is his scars. Typically hidden beneath bandages, Yoru’s entire right arm and part of his chest are wrought with scar tissue, marred by heavy burns, leaving his skin permanently blotchy. His back is similarly marred, his flesh nearly consumed by lancing scars, courtesy of countless floggings.
  • Attire:Outfit 1: Yoru dons a long sleeved haori which is forest green in colour, with a black trim that drops by his hips, a brown cloth hanging around his waist which is tired together by a red sash. In addition to black trousers which fall several inches short of his ankles, because of this he will often wear wrappings around his shins. . His footwear is quite standard, brown ninja sandals.

    Outfit 2: Yoru dons a grey a long-sleeved button up that goes past his knees, around the neck is an attached hood, he finishes this off with a black sash around his waist. In addition he wears a pair of black trousers which fall several inches short of his ankles and bandages around his shin, additionally he wears a simple pair of brown ninja sandals and matching brown gloves. Finally he wears a light brown mask with a simple red lotus pattern.


    Outfit 3: This is Yoru’s battle armour, this is mostly worn during war time situations, formal gatherings though sometimes worn on missions or other combat situations when he feels it necessary. The forest green amour is made from carbon steel, it consists of a rounded dou that is attached to the chest, kusazuri around the waist to protect the groin and upper legs & a pair of sode, attached to the shoulders that offer slight protection of the neck, due to a higher collar. He wears a long black sleeve shirt underneath, black gloves, black trousers with wrappings & black ninja sandals.
  • Forehead Protector: None
  • Personality: Once light-hearted, humorous, caring, heroic and charming. He was the pure embodiment of a Konoha shinobi, always striving for what is right and just. This however has slipped away, his aloof visage weighed. He has become a chameleon, pretending to be someone he's not to get whatever he needs from whoever he needs. Deep down his demeanour is cold, untrusting. Yoru has become calm and calculated, planning out every move before he makes it, trying to stay one step ahead of everyone. He however surpassingly has impeccable manners and never comes across a rude, no one gets to see the true him, if there even is one at all.

  • Rank: Bannin S-Rank Missing Ninja
  • Village: Konohagakure no Sato
  • Chakra Affinity: Suiton
  • Second Chakra Affinity: Raiton
  • Stats:
  • Chakra Pool: 40
  • Endurance: 30
  • Control: 50
  • Strength: 30
  • Speed: 50
  • Willpower: 50
  • Combat Style: Over the years, Yoru’s fighting style has changed and developed in his younger years he focused on physical attacks and just as powerful ninjutsu to overwhelm his opponent, trading blows and fighting wildly with very little thought. He has however now focused on honing his abilities in genjutsu and ninjutsu, this makes him vulnerable to any direct or physical strikes. This doesn’t however mean he isn’t capable, but going against someone who considers themselves a master in taijutsu is not favourable for Yoru. However he has developed techniques to protect himself and uses his immense speed to keep moving and makes himself very difficult to pin down.
EquipmentShow
The Plate of KinpakuShow
The Plate of Kinpaku is a set of armour that is passed down the Aizawa family. It is over sixty years old, first owned by Aizawa, Yoko who was said to be a great shinobi of Konoha before retiring and becoming a farmer and given to Aizawa, Yoru by his father once he turned eighteen years of age. The forest green amour is made from carbon steel, it consists of a rounded dou that is attached to the chest, kusazuri around the waist to protect the groin and upper legs finished off with a red rope sash, with the forehead protector placed upon it and golden tags at the end & a pair of sode, attached to the shoulders that offer slight protection of the neck, due to a higher collar. This is simply ceremonial armour and offers no protection.

Hip Pouch, Left Hip:
5x Flash Tags
5x Explosive Tags
20x Makibishi
5x Smoke Pellets
1x 5m Reel of wire
15x Kunai


Kunai Holster, Left Leg:
1x Small Scroll (Pinned to the side)
15x Kunai
20x Senbon
12x Shuriken

  • None
  • None
  • None

NinjutsuShow
Suiton:
Suiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive enveloping effect.
Passive (Enveloping)Show
Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of times (i.e, exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with the 3/4th strength of the technique, rounded down. This means that if a suiton wave is shot forward with 17 strength, it will envelope and move anything with it that does not have more than 12 strength to resist it. This allows Suiton to fill a very powerful role in eliminating tools from opponent's access and capturing targets.
Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the strength stat requirement.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
Acid:
Acid
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Acid, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the acid affinity. Acid jutsu have a corrosive effect. It uses a similar function as Suitonhowever what creates the Acid techniques are its weakness, acid can be 'washed' away or certainly diluted.
Requires Suitonconcentration.]
Acid DamageShow
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: First degree burns, can leave small grooves in soft materials such as stone.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement Second degree burns, can cause standard weaponry to dull its edge.
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Third degree burns, can even burn through muscle, metals are now brittle enough to break with bear hands.
  • 35-40 Strength Requirement: Burns entirely through flesh and muscle, leaving bone exposed, metal becomes brittle enough to shatter, wood and stone is evaporated entirely.
  • 41-50 Strength Requirement: Any substance not reinforced by chakra is entirely dissolved, living creates will lose limbs without question. Only highly trained medical-nin can stave of death or dismemberment at this point.
Tenkujutsu:
Tenkujutsu
The users of this style have a strong affinity towards spirits, and are able to utilize certain chakra techniques based off of spirits. Those with the affinity have a Maroon color tint to their chakra when using these techniques. Tenkujutsu jutsus fall underneath their own pyramid, and do not have ties to Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu.
TaijutsuShow
Ochiba:
Ochiba
Ochiba is a weapon style originating from the fire country, one of the few weapon styles developed by Shinobi and not Samurai. Ochiba translate as “Dead Leaf” As it is a weapon style that focuses on the use of a Kunai which are similar in appearance to a leaf. The kunai is held in a reversed manner, the handle comes up by the thumb and the blade comes down by the bottom of the hand. This allows for short, yet quick strikes and parries. Though this style is developed to use a kunai it can be transposed to other short weapons such as ninjato & tanto, though not all techniques will be available.
Requires: Deft Hands and Sword Weapons
Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
GenjutsuShow
Warp Genjutsu:
This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target.
Status Genjutsu:
This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.
Sight Initiation:
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.
Sound Initiation:
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

BiographyShow
Yoru Aizawa was born in a large farming district in the north east territories of the fire country. He lived a happy childhood, with an loving mother and farther. He was always meant to be farmer, that would be his future and nothing in sight was going to change that. Until the farming distract was enslaved by a band of Rock Country slavers, the farmers tried to fight back but they were easily overwhelmed. The farm became a ‘hub’ for the slavers, using to supply themselves and a place to move slaves in and out. Many were killed, either from flogging, starvation or for fun. They were nothing but animals to the slavers.

Enya, Yoru’s farther stole food and kept supplies for the other slaves trying to keep them alive and do what he could for his community. Enya unfortunately was caught and to be taught a lesson, they didn’t hurt Enya or his wife, they took it out on his boy. Dragging him out in front of the other slaves and flogged him. Yoru didn’t scream, he stayed quiet, he wouldn’t give them the satisfaction. This enraged the slavers, who began grabbing on Miya, Yoru’s mother. The young boy charged at the slavers, kicking one in the shins and head butting him so hard he bust open his nose. The slaver enraged dragged Yoru by the scruff of the neck and held him in flames while his mother and farther were restrained. He screamed that time.


Konohagakure, received intel about the farming district. As it was so close to the border it almost went under the radar, the Konoha forces overwhelmed the slavers in what was an easy battle for them. Yoru was in awe these ‘Shinobi’ true powerful heroes that feared no one. The last of the slaves were freed, but their land, farm and homes were in no fit state. They were brought to Konoha, given jobs and put into schools.

Yoru enlisted in The Academy, hoping to become one of those heroes he saw that day and hope that he’d be able to pay back the village for all they had done for him and his family. He was ecstatic to join the academy, but it dawned on him that he wasn’t as apt as the other students, they’d lived around Shinobi, they knew the culture and already had a basic understanding, though he overcame this, absorbing as much knowledge as possible and learning a variety of techniques. Upon passing the Genin exam he was placed into ‘Squad Eight’ under the tutelage of a young Jounin ‘Natsuki, Takeo.’ The two became inseparable and created a bond, almost like brothers. The two bonded over Suiton, it’s Yoru’s primary element and Takeo’s second, however they learnt to use at the same time.

When Takeo thought Yoru was ready, he entered him and his squad into the Chunnin exam. The three were tasked with fighting a mammoth of a man, Yoru was the last one standing and the only member of his team to move forward as a Chunnin. Once Yoru received this rank he unfrotunatly lost contact with the Genin of his squad and they were passed on to another Jounin. Takeo and Yoru became a two-man team.

This bond however would be rocked, Yoru as most young men did found his first love. A beautiful young woman, slightly older than Yoru but that didn’t seem to be a problem or so he thought. Takeo also had his sights on the girl and began dating her. Yoru’s heart was ripped to shreds and put a strain on the the sensei and students relationship. Yoru put the girl behind him, focusing on his work and grinding through the system eventually earning the rank of Jounin. Once that day arrived, he couldn’t believe it everything he had trained for he was now an elite shinobi. He’d finally become the hero he’d always wanted.

It was later revealed that Yoru had a unique ability that would allow him to communicate with spirits. He was tasked with been the guardian of a young man ‘Awai, Minoru. The host of the Phantom Genma. However this was short lived, without Yoru knowing the Genma was removed and sealed away from the young boy, putting him into a coma. Yoru was shocked and disgusted that the village would make such a choice that would damage the boy and not even consult his guardian. He began to have doubts about the village and the decisions they were making.

Though those doubts were pushed away for now as much pressing matters had occurred. Konhagakure had been invaded. The village was attacked and brought to it’s knees by a band of Missing Ninja, Yoru fought valiantly on the battlefield. His path crossed with Takeo, his Sensei. They fought alongside one another, proving what a powerful team, they were. As strong as the pair were, they were no match for the Missing Ninja, they escaped from the village with the Hyuuga Clan’s Scrolls, that contained a variety of secrets and techniques.

Some time after, Takeo was given the rank of Hokage. He rewarded Yoru the rank of Bannin and became one of his closest advisors and it turn, one of the most powerful shinobi in Kohagakure, though the fame that Bannin often received and world wild notoriety didn’t come for Yoru. The relationship between Takeo and Yoru began to strain again after Takeo confided in Yoru that he was working with a Missing Ninja from Iwagakure, who was known murderer and had even killed Konoha shinobi. The plan was to trade information to gain access to Iwagakure and start a war with them.

Yoru was disgusted with Takeo’s actions and the decisions he was making as a Hokage, how could he use such underhanded tactics? This was not the Konoha way, they were meant to be the ‘heroes’, shinobi of purity and honour. Hew grew ashamed of his village and what it was becoming.

Weeks later, Yoru was dispatched to the ‘Minor Countries’ on an intel mission, he was to collect information on the smaller countries and any forms of forces they are building up and if they are collaborating with any of the major countries. This seemed like a ploy to get rid of Yoru or so at least the Bannin thought. His suspicions were furthermore enforced, deep into the pebble country he found an inn where he’d set up base, a group of Missing Ninja were waiting for him, ready to ambush him.

Yoru put up a good fight, he seemed to have the upper hand until a Kunai was thrust into his left eye. He was immediately rushed, stabbed, cut and beaten to an inch of his life. Rather than just killing him and putting him out of his misery, they set fire to the inn leaving Yoru inside to die. The structural integrity gave way, falling in on itself and on top of Yoru, though causing damage it actually protected him from the flames, saving his life. Just.

Trapped, alone and in a pool of blood he wasn’t sure what to do. He used what little chakra he had to create water for himself to survive as long as he could. Three weeks passed, three weeks of hating Konoha, hating Takeo. Death was coming for him. It finally arrived, bright lights filled his eyes, looking down at his was a woman for a skull for a face. He closed his eyes and waited to be taken.

His eyes flicked open, he was now in a comfy bed, food by his table and a fresh jug of water. Someone had saved him, he didn’t know who but he was grateful. Yoru was nothing but skin and bones, he was weak. He stayed in hiding for a long time, until he was back in good health. He began to wander, searching for the woman with a skull for a face.

His search led him to the Dragon Country, in the depths of Seledar Market a villainous place that only the dredges of society reside. Here he found Kijo, Nehan a Rouge Kunoichi from Konohagakure. She attacked him on sight. Fighting in close quarters and in a public place, she bested him drawing blood. Revealing her true nature, she was the woman with the skull for a face.

From that moment on, Yoru took on the alias of ‘Daremo’ pledging himself to Nehan until his debt was repaid.

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CharactersShow

The White Eyed Demon of the Leaf
Aizawa, Yoru
S-Rank - Bannin
Konohagakure - ANBU

Shiazu, Ico
D-Rank - Genin
Kirigakure

Aono, Ikuto
A-Rank - Shogun
Land of Tea

Hondo (Aizawa), Haru
C-Rank
Land of Tea

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Changed my mind! Whoops.

Post by TheLacarix » Wed Apr 22, 2020 10:06 am

NocodeShow
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[Center][color=#00BF80][size=120]"There are no sides. Just people who help you and people who don’t."[/size][/color]
[video=480,50]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mABsEF-cvJg[/video][/Center]
[Spoiler=Undercover][center][img=274,682]https://i.imgur.com/qbywwrZ.png[/img][/center][/Spoiler]
[Spoiler=Teenager][center][img=300,600]https://i.imgur.com/Z0h2Jdp.png[/img][/center][/Spoiler]
[Spoiler=Childhood][center][img]https://i.imgur.com/8C30q75.png[/img][/center][/Spoiler]
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[list][*][b]Age:[/b] 28

[*][b]Gender:[/b] Male

[*][b]Height:[/b] 5'11"

[*][b]Weight:[/b] 224 lbs

[*][b]Hair:[/b] Yoru’s head is topped with thick soft locks of vermilion, that cascades past his shoulders. His distinct hair colour sets him apart from the typical sea of dark haired shinobi. It always has a gleaming shine, showing that it is well groomed and tended to.

[*][b]Eyes:[/b] Yoru only has one eye, it is a dark shade of hazel, with splatters of green and gold. [/list]

[list][*][b]Physical Features:[/b] His skin is porcelain white radiance and soft splatters of light freckles that scatter across his cheeks. His nose is small and soft, rounding out gently at the tip, his lips too seem almost delicate and often find themselves forming into a benevolent smile. The left side of his face has a small scar around his eye which is peremntly closed. His hands are calloused and rugged, evident of his upbringing on a farm. His arms are powerful yet they are only moderately defined. What is most staggering however is his scars. Typically hidden beneath bandages, Yoru’s entire right arm and part of his chest are wrought with scar tissue, marred by heavy burns, leaving his skin permanently blotchy. His back is similarly marred, his flesh nearly consumed by lancing scars, courtesy of countless floggings.[/list]

[list][*][b]Attire:[/b]Outfit 1: Yoru dons a long sleeved haori which is forest green in colour, with a black trim that drops by his hips, a brown cloth hanging around his waist which is tired together by a red sash. In addition to black trousers which fall several inches short of his ankles, because of this he will often wear wrappings around his shins. . His footwear is quite standard, brown ninja sandals.

Outfit 2: Yoru dons a grey a long-sleeved button up that goes past his knees, around the neck is an attached hood, he finishes this off with a black sash around his waist. In addition he wears a pair of black trousers which fall several inches short of his ankles and bandages around his shin, additionally he wears a simple pair of brown ninja sandals and matching brown gloves. Finally he wears a light brown mask with a simple red lotus pattern.


Outfit 3: This is Yoru’s battle armour, this is mostly worn during war time situations, formal gatherings though sometimes worn on missions or other combat situations when he feels it necessary. The forest green amour is made from carbon steel, it consists of a rounded dou that is attached to the chest, kusazuri around the waist to protect the groin and upper legs & a pair of sode, attached to the shoulders that offer slight protection of the neck, due to a higher collar. He wears a long black sleeve shirt underneath, black gloves, black trousers with wrappings & black ninja sandals.[/list]


[list][*][b]Forehead Protector:[/b] None.

[*][b]Personality:[/b] Once light-hearted, humorous, caring, heroic and charming. He was the pure embodiment of a Konoha shinobi, always striving for what is right and just. This however has slipped away, his aloof visage weighed. He has become a chameleon, pretending to be someone he's not to get whatever he needs from whoever he needs. Deep down his demeanour is cold, untrusting. Yoru has become calm and calculated, planning out every move before he makes it, trying to stay one step ahead of everyone. He however surpassingly has impeccable manners and never comes across a rude, no one gets to see the true him, if there even is one at all. [/list]
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[list][*][b]Rank:[/b] [s]Bannin[/s] S-Rank Missing Ninja
[*][b]Village:[/b] [color=Orangered][s][b]Konohagakure no Sato[/b][/s][/color]
[*][b]Chakra Affinity:[/b] [color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton[/b][/color]
[*][b]Second Chakra Affinity:[/b] [color=#fe0][b]Raiton[/b][/color]
[*][b]Stats:[/b]

[*]Chakra Pool: 40
[*]Endurance: 30
[*]Control: 50
[*]Strength: 30
[*]Speed: 50
[*]Willpower: 50[/list]


[list][*][b]Combat Style:[/b] Over the years, Yoru’s fighting style has changed and developed in his younger years he focused on physical attacks and just as powerful ninjutsu to overwhelm his opponent, trading blows and fighting wildly with very little thought. He has however now focused on honing his abilities in genjutsu and ninjutsu, this makes him vulnerable to any direct or physical strikes. This doesn’t however mean he isn’t capable, but going against someone who considers themselves a master in taijutsu is not favourable for Yoru. However he has developed techniques to protect himself and uses his immense speed to keep moving and makes himself very difficult to pin down. [/list]


[Spoiler=Equipment]
[spoiler=The Plate of Kinpaku][center][img]http://i.imgur.com/38Byqlh.png[/img][/center][/spoiler]The Plate of Kinpaku is a set of armour that is passed down the Aizawa family. It is over sixty years old, first owned by Aizawa, Yoko who was said to be a great shinobi of Konoha before retiring and becoming a farmer and given to Aizawa, Yoru by his father once he turned eighteen years of age. The forest green amour is made from carbon steel, it consists of a rounded dou that is attached to the chest, kusazuri around the waist to protect the groin and upper legs finished off with a red rope sash, with the forehead protector placed upon it and golden tags at the end & a pair of sode, attached to the shoulders that offer slight protection of the neck, due to a higher collar. This is simply ceremonial armour and offers no protection.

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Hip Pouch, Left Hip:
5x Flash Tags
5x Explosive Tags
20x Makibishi
5x Smoke Pellets
1x 5m Reel of wire
15x Kunai


Kunai Holster, Left Leg:
1x Small Scroll (Pinned to the side)
15x Kunai
20x Senbon
12x Shuriken [/Spoiler]
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[Spoiler=Ninjutsu][quote=Suiton][color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive [color=dodgerblue][i]enveloping[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Enveloping)]Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of times (i.e, exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with the 3/4th strength of the technique, rounded down. This means that if a suiton wave is shot forward with 17 strength, it will envelope and move anything with it that does not have more than 12 strength to resist it. This allows Suiton to fill a very powerful role in eliminating tools from opponent's access and capturing targets.[/spoiler][/quote]
[quote=Raiton][color=yellow][b]Raiton[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a [b]shocking[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Shocking)]Raiton has the effect of [b]shocking[/b], which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the strength stat requirement.[list][*]1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.[*]15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation[*]25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis[*]35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis[/list][/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Acid][color=#999933][b]Acid[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Acid, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the acid affinity. Acid jutsu have a corrosive effect. It uses a similar function as [color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton[/b][/color]however what creates the Acid techniques are its weakness, acid can be 'washed' away or certainly diluted.
Requires [color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton[/b][/color]concentration.]
[spoiler=Acid Damage][list][*]1-14 Strength Requirement: First degree burns, can leave small grooves in soft materials such as stone.
[*]15-24 Strength Requirement Second degree burns, can cause standard weaponry to dull its edge.
[*]25-34 Strength Requirement: Third degree burns, can even burn through muscle, metals are now brittle enough to break with bear hands.
[*]35-40 Strength Requirement: Burns entirely through flesh and muscle, leaving bone exposed, metal becomes brittle enough to shatter, wood and stone is evaporated entirely.
[*]41-50 Strength Requirement: Any substance not reinforced by chakra is entirely dissolved, living creates will lose limbs without question. Only highly trained medical-nin can stave of death or dismemberment at this point.

[/list][/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Tenkujutsu][b][color=#8C004C]Tenkujutsu[/color][/b]
The users of this style have a strong affinity towards spirits, and are able to utilize certain chakra techniques based off of spirits. Those with the affinity have a [b][color=#8C004C]Maroon[/color][/b] color tint to their chakra when using these techniques. Tenkujutsu jutsus fall underneath their own pyramid, and do not have ties to Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu.[/quote]
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[Spoiler=Taijutsu][quote=Ochiba][b][color=#60C659]Ochiba[/color][/b]
Ochiba is a weapon style originating from the fire country, one of the few weapon styles developed by Shinobi and not Samurai. Ochiba translate as “Dead Leaf” As it is a weapon style that focuses on the use of a Kunai which are similar in appearance to a leaf. The kunai is held in a reversed manner, the handle comes up by the thumb and the blade comes down by the bottom of the hand. This allows for short, yet quick strikes and parries. Though this style is developed to use a kunai it can be transposed to other short weapons such as ninjato & tanto, though not all techniques will be available.
[b]Requires:[/b] [i]Deft Hands[/i] and [i]Sword Weapons[/i][/quote]

[quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote]

[quote=Sword Weapons] The fundamental skill of [b][Sword Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote]

[quote=Acrobatics]The fundamental skill of [b][Acrobatics][/b] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][/Spoiler]
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[quote=Warp Genjutsu]This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target.[/quote]

[quote=Status Genjutsu]This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.[/quote]

[quote=Sight Initiation]
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.[/quote]

[quote=Sound Initiation]
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.[/quote]
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[Spoiler=Biography] Yoru Aizawa was born in a large farming district in the north east territories of the fire country. He lived a happy childhood, with an loving mother and farther. He was always meant to be farmer, that would be his future and nothing in sight was going to change that. Until the farming distract was enslaved by a band of Rock Country slavers, the farmers tried to fight back but they were easily overwhelmed. The farm became a ‘hub’ for the slavers, using to supply themselves and a place to move slaves in and out. Many were killed, either from flogging, starvation or for fun. They were nothing but animals to the slavers.

Enya, Yoru’s farther stole food and kept supplies for the other slaves trying to keep them alive and do what he could for his community. Enya unfortunately was caught and to be taught a lesson, they didn’t hurt Enya or his wife, they took it out on his boy. Dragging him out in front of the other slaves and flogged him. Yoru didn’t scream, he stayed quiet, he wouldn’t give them the satisfaction. This enraged the slavers, who began grabbing on Miya, Yoru’s mother. The young boy charged at the slavers, kicking one in the shins and head butting him so hard he bust open his nose. The slaver enraged dragged Yoru by the scruff of the neck and held him in flames while his mother and farther were restrained. He screamed that time.


Konohagakure, received intel about the farming district. As it was so close to the border it almost went under the radar, the Konoha forces overwhelmed the slavers in what was an easy battle for them. Yoru was in awe these ‘Shinobi’ true powerful heroes that feared no one. The last of the slaves were freed, but their land, farm and homes were in no fit state. They were brought to Konoha, given jobs and put into schools.

Yoru enlisted in The Academy, hoping to become one of those heroes he saw that day and hope that he’d be able to pay back the village for all they had done for him and his family. He was ecstatic to join the academy, but it dawned on him that he wasn’t as apt as the other students, they’d lived around Shinobi, they knew the culture and already had a basic understanding, though he overcame this, absorbing as much knowledge as possible and learning a variety of techniques. Upon passing the Genin exam he was placed into ‘Squad Eight’ under the tutelage of a young Jounin ‘Natsuki, Takeo.’ The two became inseparable and created a bond, almost like brothers. The two bonded over Suiton, it’s Yoru’s primary element and Takeo’s second, however they learnt to use at the same time.

When Takeo thought Yoru was ready, he entered him and his squad into the Chunnin exam. The three were tasked with fighting a mammoth of a man, Yoru was the last one standing and the only member of his team to move forward as a Chunnin. Once Yoru received this rank he unfrotunatly lost contact with the Genin of his squad and they were passed on to another Jounin. Takeo and Yoru became a two-man team.

This bond however would be rocked, Yoru as most young men did found his first love. A beautiful young woman, slightly older than Yoru but that didn’t seem to be a problem or so he thought. Takeo also had his sights on the girl and began dating her. Yoru’s heart was ripped to shreds and put a strain on the the sensei and students relationship. Yoru put the girl behind him, focusing on his work and grinding through the system eventually earning the rank of Jounin. Once that day arrived, he couldn’t believe it everything he had trained for he was now an elite shinobi. He’d finally become the hero he’d always wanted.

It was later revealed that Yoru had a unique ability that would allow him to communicate with spirits. He was tasked with been the guardian of a young man ‘Awai, Minoru. The host of the Phantom Genma. However this was short lived, without Yoru knowing the Genma was removed and sealed away from the young boy, putting him into a coma. Yoru was shocked and disgusted that the village would make such a choice that would damage the boy and not even consult his guardian. He began to have doubts about the village and the decisions they were making.

Though those doubts were pushed away for now as much pressing matters had occurred. Konhagakure had been invaded. The village was attacked and brought to it’s knees by a band of Missing Ninja, Yoru fought valiantly on the battlefield. His path crossed with Takeo, his Sensei. They fought alongside one another, proving what a powerful team, they were. As strong as the pair were, they were no match for the Missing Ninja, they escaped from the village with the Hyuuga Clan’s Scrolls, that contained a variety of secrets and techniques.

Some time after, Takeo was given the rank of Hokage. He rewarded Yoru the rank of Bannin and became one of his closest advisors and it turn, one of the most powerful shinobi in Kohagakure, though the fame that Bannin often received and world wild notoriety didn’t come for Yoru. The relationship between Takeo and Yoru began to strain again after Takeo confided in Yoru that he was working with a Missing Ninja from Iwagakure, who was known murderer and had even killed Konoha shinobi. The plan was to trade information to gain access to Iwagakure and start a war with them.

Yoru was disgusted with Takeo’s actions and the decisions he was making as a Hokage, how could he use such underhanded tactics? This was not the Konoha way, they were meant to be the ‘heroes’, shinobi of purity and honour. Hew grew ashamed of his village and what it was becoming.

Weeks later, Yoru was dispatched to the ‘Minor Countries’ on an intel mission, he was to collect information on the smaller countries and any forms of forces they are building up and if they are collaborating with any of the major countries. This seemed like a ploy to get rid of Yoru or so at least the Bannin thought. His suspicions were furthermore enforced, deep into the pebble country he found an inn where he’d set up base, a group of Missing Ninja were waiting for him, ready to ambush him.

Yoru put up a good fight, he seemed to have the upper hand until a Kunai was thrust into his left eye. He was immediately rushed, stabbed, cut and beaten to an inch of his life. Rather than just killing him and putting him out of his misery, they set fire to the inn leaving Yoru inside to die. The structural integrity gave way, falling in on itself and on top of Yoru, though causing damage it actually protected him from the flames, saving his life. Just.

Trapped, alone and in a pool of blood he wasn’t sure what to do. He used what little chakra he had to create water for himself to survive as long as he could. Three weeks passed, three weeks of hating Konoha, hating Takeo. Death was coming for him. It finally arrived, bright lights filled his eyes, looking down at his was a woman for a skull for a face. He closed his eyes and waited to be taken.

His eyes flicked open, he was now in a comfy bed, food by his table and a fresh jug of water. Someone had saved him, he didn’t know who but he was grateful. Yoru was nothing but skin and bones, he was weak. He stayed in hiding for a long time, until he was back in good health. He began to wander, searching for the woman with a skull for a face.

His search led him to the Dragon Country, in the depths of Seledar Market a villainous place that only the dredges of society reside. Here he found Kijo, Nehan a Rouge Kunoichi from Konohagakure. She attacked him on sight. Fighting in close quarters and in a public place, she bested him drawing blood. Revealing her true nature, she was the woman with the skull for a face.

From that moment on, Yoru took on the alias of [i]‘Daremo’[/i] pledging himself to Nehan until his debt was repaid.[/spoiler]
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Changed my mind! Whoops.

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Just an image change I am gonna accept this
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