Kesu

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Kesu

Post by Ace Trainer » Sun May 10, 2020 2:09 am

Username: Onu!
Owner: Shio!
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Kesu


General Information
Type: Henchman
Gender: Male
Age: 8
Appearance: Kesu has short blonde hair, that hangs over his forehead and obscures his large bright blue eyes. His light skin is unlike most people in his region, but a signatory of his sheltered life. His hands are often blackened being covered in charcoal and graphite from his writing and studies. He wears a button up shirt that his mother made for him, a long sleeved jacket, and shorts. These are all shaped after the time scholars visited her from the distant lands, as she hopes one day they’ll return and she’ll be able to show her son’s intelligence. Kesu is perhaps most distinctly noticeable from the faint glow constantly coming from his body.
Personality: Intelligent, soft spoken, and witty, Kesu is a young boy who has known only his studies his entire life. He is someone who likes to think, and often pauses to think before speaking. He is quiet, but only because he believes in the power of words and never wants to misspeak or say something wrong. He strongly believes in becoming smart and the value of intelligence, if only because that was all he was ever taught. To him, Shio is one of the most interesting beings he has ever seen, and Kesu believes firmly that Shio is who he is destined to follow. Battle Information Rank: C-rank Henchman
Stats
  • Chakra Pool: 7
  • Endurance: 5
  • Strength: 4
  • Speed: 4
  • Control: 15
  • Will Power 5
Equipment: [None]
Elemental Affinities: Katon
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
JannahThe Jannah ability grants the user ‘Angelic’ physiology. Kesu was born with Holy Fire in his belly that eventually turned him from flesh to fire. His heart was hardened by the flames into a heart sized gem that sits within his chest. Kesu is by all accounts no longer human, but an elemental body composed of Holy Fire. Holy Fire burns white at all times, and although Kesu can appear normal, the Holy Fire within in causes him to have a faint glow at all times, making him visible even in complete darkness. Without a concentration to control it, Holy Fire functions as Katon.
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[None]
Taijutsu[Medicine][Deft Hands]
Genjutsu[None]

Jutsu
Art of MedicineShow
*[Medicinal Style • Bandage Wrapping]
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user knows how to utilize bandages, wrapping a wound in a manner that creates a near-perfect barrier from external forces, keeping the wound clean from bacteria. The bandage is tucked in place, preventing it from falling off, though excessive rubbing, pulling, or getting the bandage wet can cause it to fall off.

*[Medicinal Style • Wound Cleanse]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user knows how to use sterile water or alcohol to clean out a wound, destroying any bacteria in the would to prevent infection.

*[Medicinal Style • Injury Assessment]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
Unlike the mystical means of diagnosis utilized through iijutsu, those who utilize the Arts of Medicine must learn the most effective manner to assess a patient. Learners of this discipline have learn the most effective manner to diagnose a patient, starting at the head, and assessing for head wounds, then moving down through the torso, both arms, the groin area, both legs, then the back. Those who learn this discipline will be able to account for any wounds that present with physical symptoms on a patient.

*[Medicinal Style • Pressure Points]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user has learned all appropriate pressure points on a body. In the event of bleeding, they know where to apply pressure to slow the bleeding while treatment is administered.

*[Medicinal Style • Splint]
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user is able to create slings and wraps that support fractures, sprains, and breaks in patients.

*[Medicinal Style • Tourniquet]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
The user has extensive knowledge on how to properly make and apply a tourniquet, and they can often make one out of whatever supplies are available, even scraps of clothing.

*[Medicinal Style • Air Way]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user is able to use makeshift supplies to obtain and maintain an airway in a patient through various methods, such as intubation or emergency cricothyroidotomy. This allows people to breathe even if they have obstructed airways.

*[Medicinal Style • Antidote]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The user is able to assess the site of injection of a venom or poison into a patient, properly cut off circulation, and roll veins to force out the poison or venom. So long as they begin with the first post of injection, they can prevent the effects of venom or poison.

*[Medicinal Style • Medic]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Perhaps one of the most important disciplines of any aspiring Medic, one who has mastered this Discipline can maintain a clear mind when treating patients. Techniques of equal rank or lower that affect this character's emotional stability or distract them from their work will have no effect while they are treating patients."

*[Medicinal Style • Stitching]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Assuming the medic has the proper tools to do so, this character is able to use sutures to stitch most minor and moderate wounds closed, preventing the progression of infection and deterioration of the wound.

*[Medicinal Style • Priority]
B-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
When faced with multiple patients, one who has mastered this Discipline is able to rapidly assess multiple patients and determine priority of their individual injuries and determine which require the highest priorities and which can survive with delayed care. An additional benefit of this Discipline is that one who has mastered it is always able to determine whether a patient is alive or dead unless they are under the effects of equal or higher technique designed to make them appear dead.

*[Medicinal Style • Comfort]
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Through the use of acupuncture and their knowledge of pressure points, the user is able to quickly apply a series of pricks, leaving the needles in, that dulls pain in localized areas of the body or even the entire body. This method only isolates pain receptors, not other receptors, allowing someone under the effects of this technique to continue to function. The pain dulling effects will last for up to 5 posts, at which points the needles will have to be removed and then replaced.

History Kesu was born to a small farming family in the Land of Fountains. They would spend their lives living an unexceptional existence day in and day out. Kesu has a notably small frame, which drove his mother to encourage his father to let him focus on studies. She hoped for the day that the men in robes she saw in her youth would one day return, and she’d be able to offer forward her brilliant son in hopes of giving him a better future. Kesu’s two older brothers farmed, but Kesu spent every day studying with his mother, while she taught him all she knew. They would bargain for books from the other villagers, and she hoped for a bright future for him. Kesu’s...unique physical attributes did not go unnoticed by her, but she kept her lips sealed, and instructed Kesu to do the same. Hoping her husband and other children wouldn’t notice. She knew Kesu was special in her deepest of hearts.

Eventually, his father realized, and lashed out against the boy and her mother. The father eventually killed both the boy, and his mother, and then killed himself in shame of his freakish son. Kesu, due to his ability, would recover, surrounded by the corpses of his parents. He would run from his home village and move to another, where a elderly woman gave him a small room to stay in. He did small labors around the town to make money for her. Using his intellect and medical knowledge to treat people for money.

One day a small boy who’s voice was louder than thunder showed up to the small village and seemingly hypnotized the whole village, except Kesu who the boy, Kesu would later learn was named Shio, singled out and instructed him to follow. Kesu followed.
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Kesu

Post by Servant » Sun May 10, 2020 10:14 am

You have a broken spoiler tag in your history section.

I think you also swapped points and stats; a C rank hench gets 40 stats and 35 points, but it looks like you have 35 stats and 40 points of jutsu.
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Kesu

Post by Ace Trainer » Sun May 10, 2020 1:49 pm

Definitely have 40 stats, but also did have 40 jutsu points, fixed that.

SPoiler fixed.
Mistaki ShioShiimu KozanGekko IndraShoshiki HeiyaHizashi Ikinari
Kirigakure No Sato
Kemurigakure no Sato

Taishou of Iron Country
Kirigakure No Sato
Genin
Experiment 81 v2
Sunagakure No Sato
Genin
The Soul Host
Iwagakure No Sato
Special Jounin
The Tungsten Princess
Sunagakure No Sato
Jounin
The Revolutionary
Past CharactersShow
[Kenketi Tenteki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Special Jounin]
[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
[Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
ChatangoShow
HonchkrOnu
ArticOnu
RichardUnknown
RichardGreen
RichardRed
RichardBlack
RichardGold
AlienHostRichardGold
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NotOnu
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Kesu

Post by Niro » Wed May 13, 2020 10:16 pm

While they do not have an ‘elemental body’ so to speak, their body no longer requires biological function, and their heart acts as a core. <-Really dislike this. We have no rules of what elemental bodies/cores have to be made of but I feel this is directly breaking the spirit of it.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri May 15, 2020 2:48 am

Okay, made him an elemental body. Specified his new core is a heart sized gem stored in his chest. Hope that’s alright.
Mistaki ShioShiimu KozanGekko IndraShoshiki HeiyaHizashi Ikinari
Kirigakure No Sato
Kemurigakure no Sato

Taishou of Iron Country
Kirigakure No Sato
Genin
Experiment 81 v2
Sunagakure No Sato
Genin
The Soul Host
Iwagakure No Sato
Special Jounin
The Tungsten Princess
Sunagakure No Sato
Jounin
The Revolutionary
Past CharactersShow
[Kenketi Tenteki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Special Jounin]
[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
[Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
ChatangoShow
HonchkrOnu
ArticOnu
RichardUnknown
RichardGreen
RichardRed
RichardBlack
RichardGold
AlienHostRichardGold
ValidusWrecks
ValidusWreckingBall
NotOnu
ReallyisOnu
NotCdf
SunaOOCOnu
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Kesu

Post by Kao » Mon May 18, 2020 1:29 am

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Post by Niro » Sun May 24, 2020 2:08 pm

Much better, thank you

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