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Post by Zao » Thu Jun 11, 2020 8:30 pm

Application: Zao

Change: A couple new abilities I'm trying to create for Zao.

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Demon Hegemon, Emperor of the Demon RealmShow

After falling into the vicious trap of the Demon Hegemon during the exploration of the one of the spirit realms known as the Demon Realm, Zao had his own soul sealed away as the ruling Demon Hegemon took over the Suna-nin's body as his own vessel corrupting it with his dark chakra gaining access to the bodies original attributes and skills as though they were his own. The chakra also has forced minor exterior changes on the body as the skin of the man's body has turned to a pearly white color, the finger and toe nails elongating slightly and coming to a point, his former brilliant blue eyes replaced with a set of soul devouring yellow irises and transforming the former white scalar to a raven hue.

From about the middle forearm down the white skin gives way to a bright red hue skin that gives them the appearance of being dipped in fresh blood. While the man's long white hair has grown thicker and longer, having a more wild appearance to it, the ears having grown slightly longer at the top to a point similar to elf ears, and lastly now as a single twisted crimson horn has grown from the human's left forehead reaching eight to ten inches in length while this same horn material forms also on each side of the outside of the face going around the ear and down to the jawline. The man's normal bright blue chakra has been transformed into a dark purple, sometimes mistaken for black chakra.
Hegemon's Corruption, Demonic RebirthShow

The second unique ability of the Demon Hegemon who has taken over the Suna Bannin's body. Using his demonic chakra, the demon is able to take over the bodies of others by directly connecting this life like chakra to heart and its body right after death, normally. When used on a living target the target can resist this claim if their [Control] or [Strength] is equal to or greater than the Hegemon's [Control]. This demonic chakra transforms the body of the target into that of a demon that holds some resemblance to the original heart's owner, which is then merged with the Hemegon's shadow world becoming one of his eternal slaves.

The armored like demons give off the same dark purple chakra of the Demon Hegemon. Their concentrations, abilities, jutsu, stats and anything else that was a part of their original body is retained by them in this demonic rebirth with the exception of their former free will. (Follows the body snatching rules, allowing the slaves to only keep one ability slot from their previous life and being limitedto the companion stat cap. )

The demonic chakra can be used to even corrupt the chakra of other spirits or lesser creatures (pets), transforming them into demonic spirits or demonic pets in turn causing quantitative alterations their physical bodies on a larger scope than those the demon slaves undergo upon their rebirth. They are then bound to the user and his shadow realm, becoming mere pets of the Hegemon to unleash upon his foes. Spirits and pets can resist this claim if their [Control] or [Strength] is equal to or greater than the Hegemon's [Control].

These Demon slaves, spirits, and pets are able to share a hive style mind with the Hegemon, the demon's mind and consciousness extending throughout the various creatures, and as a result, each of their senses can be linked as needed with his own and each other, allowing the demons to perceive the sensory input of each others telepathically. The user is also able to speak through his retainers or slaves, if he desires.


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[spoiler=Demon Hegemon, Emperor of the Demon Realm]

After falling into the vicious trap of the Demon Hegemon during the exploration of the one of the spirit realms known as the Demon Realm, Zao had his own soul sealed away as the ruling Demon Hegemon took over the Suna-nin's body as his own vessel corrupting it with his dark chakra gaining access to the bodies original attributes and skills as though they were his own. The chakra also has forced minor exterior changes on the body as the skin of the man's body has turned to a pearly white color, the finger and toe nails elongating slightly and coming to a point, his former brilliant blue eyes replaced with a set of soul devouring yellow irises and transforming the former white scalar to a raven hue. 

From about the middle forearm down the white skin gives way to a bright red hue skin that gives them the appearance of being dipped in fresh blood. While the man's long white hair has grown thicker and longer, having a more wild appearance to it, the ears having grown slightly longer at the top to a point similar to elf ears, and lastly now as a single twisted crimson horn has grown from the human's left forehead reaching eight to ten inches in length while this same horn material forms also on each side of the outside of the face going around the ear and down to the jawline. The man's normal bright blue chakra has been transformed into a dark purple, sometimes mistaken for black chakra. 

[center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/4d0H2T2k/Zao-Demon-Face.jpg[/img][/center]

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[Spoiler=Hegemon's Corruption, Demonic Rebirth]

The second unique ability of the Demon Hegemon who has taken over the Suna Bannin's body. Using his demonic chakra, the demon is able to take over the bodies of others by directly connecting this life like chakra to heart and its body right after death, normally. When used on a living target the target can resist this claim if their [Control] or [Strength] is equal to or greater than the Hegemon's [Control]. This demonic chakra transforms the body of the target into that of a demon that holds some resemblance to the original heart's owner, which is then merged with the Hemegon's shadow world becoming one of his eternal slaves. 

The armored like demons give off the same dark purple chakra of the Demon Hegemon. Their concentrations, abilities, jutsu, stats and anything else that was a part of their original body is retained by them in this demonic rebirth with the exception of their former free will. (Follows the body snatching rules, allowing the slaves to only keep one ability slot from their previous life and being limitedto the companion stat cap. )

The demonic chakra can be used to even corrupt the chakra of other spirits or lesser creatures (pets), transforming them into demonic spirits or demonic pets in turn causing quantitative alterations their physical bodies on a larger scope than those the demon slaves undergo upon their rebirth. They are then bound to the user and his shadow realm, becoming mere pets of the Hegemon to unleash upon his foes. Spirits and pets can resist this claim if their [Control] or [Strength] is equal to or greater than the Hegemon's [Control].

These Demon slaves, spirits, and pets are able to share a hive style mind with the Hegemon, the demon's mind and consciousness extending throughout the various creatures, and as a result, each of their senses can be linked as needed with his own and each other, allowing the demons to perceive the sensory input of each others telepathically. The user is also able to speak through his retainers or slaves, if he desires. 


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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Jun 14, 2020 2:20 am

So two things.

You can't manipulate your shadow, full stop since thats Nara.

Second; " For the demon slaves created by the Demon Hegemon, one ability spot from the revived demon will be used and if the target of the technique already has three abilities one will be removed to make room for the demon rebirth ability. "

In misc. rules is specifies that body snatching abilities effectively turn them into companions, meaning if this ability gives them an ability, they will lose all their abilities, and the 1 slot they have will be replaced with this ability thingy.

But based on the description of this ability, turning someone into a demon slave wouldn't really take an ability, it seems like its an aesthetic thing, and you can offload the "can be stored in your shadow realm" onto this ability, not onto them.
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Post by Zao » Sun Jun 14, 2020 6:43 pm

Thanks for the insight man. I'll be working on this tonight.

Edit: Did some rewording. How does it sound now?
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Post by Niro » Sun Jun 28, 2020 5:22 pm

Hegemon's Corruption, Demonic Rebirth: <-Needs a bit more detail on the initial takeover and what ways there are to resist during takeover

Shadow World: <-Get the feeling this could be a Realm Summoning jutsu instead of an ability slot.
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Post by Zao » Sun Jun 28, 2020 11:09 pm

Now that you mention it, that makes sense. Taking that out.

Resisting - For the body snatching part, I wanted to use it on resently killed targets. For living targets it would be his [Control] vs the target's [Control] or [Strength], whichever is higher.
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Post by Niro » Mon Jun 29, 2020 11:45 am

So the permanent spirit possession + body mod will need to be an ability on Zao. If the Demon Hegemon has its own app this could be its ability unless you also want to use it on Zao's sheet.

There's no mention of this being able to be used on recently deceased, only alive.
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Post by Zao » Mon Jun 29, 2020 4:28 pm

I've separated them into two seperate abilities to go on Zao's sheet. Added the dead part and also resisting the ability portion to. Everything else sound okay?
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