Hana Revamp

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Hana Revamp

Post by Zao » Sun Jun 14, 2020 12:42 am

Application: Hana
Change:

Removed Jutsu

d - 1 = 2 points
c - 0
b - 5 = 25 points
a - 3 = 21 points
s - 3 = 30 points

Point Refund = 78
Buying 26 stats for 78 points.

- Changed image and description.
- Removed previous ability, using perk for kinesis, replacing with dwarfism.
- Revamped jutsu.
- Converted stats, 146 total after buying stats.
- Added to history.

Payment: Points from jutsu into buying stats.

HanaShow
Hitohana



General Information
Type: Hybrid Spirit Plant
Gender: Female
Age: 4
Appearance:
  • Face/head: The head of the new plant spirit hybrid resembles a combination partly bloomed rose with layers of petals with the lower face of a young woman with sun kissed skin.
    • Body: The young spirit plant's body appears to be a golden vine that consists of since main 3/in thick vine running from the rose like flower head. Upon looking closer one can see a feminine shaped body of the plant spirit hybrid. A smaller set of golden vines can be found grown from the spirit's back, the size of the plant spirit over all being just larger than ones palm for her humanoid body, but over a meter in length including her vines.
      • Notable Features: Looks like a tiny rose-like flower fairy .
      Personality:
      • General: Being young, the plant hybrid is still developing its own personality, but is fiercely loyal to its master (Zao) due to him being the only thing that she has known about since its 'birth', being cared for and raised by the Suna-nin. She can be playful and curious at times, still attempting to figure out the world. Doesn't particularly like cold weather places, preferring hot and dry climates like the place it was born Through this binding process used by Zao, the creature is able to communicate mentally with its master and vice versa.
        • Hopes/Dreams: Hasn't really developed any at this time
          • Fears: Mainly the creature fears katon, being its main weakness as a plant based spirit.
            • Combat Mentality: Primary relied upon its ability to use elemental ninjutsu, mainly doton, fuuton, and sand to attack and defend against opponents at mid-to-long range
            Battle Information Rank: A
            Stats 146/200
            • Chakra Pool: 45
            • Endurance: 10
            • Control: 45
            • Strength: 10
            • Speed: 15
            • Instinct: 21
            Equipment: None
            Elemental Affinities: Doton
            Abilities and Concentrations
            Abilities
            First Ability
            Dwarfism:
            Dwarfism Ability
            This creature has unique properties in its being that allow it to contain massive amounts of chakra within it without forcing it to grow, typically causing it to be much smaller than other creatures of similar classification.
            Concentrations
            Ninjutsu[Doton, Fuuton, Suiton, Sand, Sand Kinesis]
            Taijutsu[Place them here]
            Genjutsu[Sight, Sound ]

            Jutsu
            NinjutsuShow
            SandShow

            [Sand Cloud]
            D-Ranked Ninjutsu
            After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will expelling a strong breath full of sand. The sand will then move to cover a 10 meter radius around the user, creating a cloud of sand that floats for 3 posts before settling. Comments at a speed and strength of [Control], resisting against objects or people attempting to move through the cloud at [Control] strength.

            [Minor Suna Infusion]
            D-rank Ninjutsu
            The user channels chakra into a body of sand with five meters of themselves or if no sand is available the user can materialize sand, capable of infusing up to a two cubic meter sized mass of Sand to be manipulated with Sunakinesis, this infusion lasts three posts.

            [Sand Ninja Tools]
            D-Rank Ninjutsu
            After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a set of up to 10 basic projectiles, such as kunai, shuriken, or senbon, in their hand(s) from sand. These tools have a strength of [Control] and last for up to four posts.

            [Explosive Sand Shuriken]
            D-Rank Ninjutsu
            After channeling chakra the user will form a shuriken of sand, that can be thrown, which are approximately 6 centimeters in diameter in their hand. Upon impact or when kai'd, this shuriken explodes with a force equal to [Control] and covers the immediate area in a cloud of sand. If not consumed, this technique lasts for three posts.

            [Sand Beneath One’s Feet]
            D-Rank Ninjutsu
            The spirit plant will channel chakra through her body, before then sending this chakra into the ground beneath her or her master’s feet in order to create sand to utilize with other sand techniques sand. The pulse starts at the feet of the plant or her master and moves outwards through the earth at a speed of [Control] , converting all the dirt and rock within a 10 meter radius into sand, including up to 10 meters beneath the spirit. This sand does nothing on its own but remains infused with the spirit’s chakra for up to four posts.



            *[Sand Clone]
            C-Ranked Ninjutsu
            After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of Sand. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.

            [Sand Wave]
            C-Ranked Ninjutsu
            With the correct hand seals formed, the user will thrust their hands up, causing a wave of sand to form in front of them. The wave shoots up and travels forward at [Control]
            speed and strength, and traveling up to 25 meters before collapsing. The wave is only twenty meters in size.

            [Sand Landmine]
            C-Rank Ninjutsu
            After performing the correct hand seals the user will tap their foot on the ground covered in sand, charging a two meter radius around their foot with explosive chakra. This is armed at a speed of [Control]. For the next three posts if anyone steps on that area it or kai is used it will explode with a force equal to [Control] filling the blast radius with a thick cloud of sand afterwards.

            *[Desert’s Spire]
            C-Rank Ninjutsu
            After forming the necessary handseals, the user will channel chakra into the sand in a 2 meter area beneath an opponent’s feet within 25 meters of them. After a moment, the sand in this area will violently burst from the ground and form an 8 meter tall spike of sand at [Control] Speed. This spike is capable of piercing an opponent’s body with [Control] Strength and leaving sand in the wounds it creates, causing irritation and pain of the wound. After the spire is formed it remain for 3 posts before turning back into sand.

            [Swirl Sand Wall]
            C-Rank Ninjutsu
            After performing the necessary hand seals the spirit will channel chakra, causing for sand to swirl herself or any ally in a small tornado of sand two meters away from the target forming with a speed and strength of [Control]. The tornado is five meters tall and one meter thick, capable of moving with the targets movements for the next five posts.



            [Desert’s Spear]
            B-Rank Ninjutsu
            With the correct seals done, the user will hold their hand , forming sand into a sort of spear shaped projectile that is 10 meters long and nearly a foot in diameter from their palm. This spear hovers beside the user before they form an extra hand seal to launch it at their enemy, flying at a speed and strength of [Control]. This can travel up to 40 meters and lasts for three posts, or until it is used.

            [Desert Coffin]
            B-Ranked
            After forming the needed hand seals, the user will cause a small wave of sand to rise from the ground at their feet and roll towards the intended target up to 40 meters away. If the target doesn't avoid this jutsu they will be ensnared by sand that starts to wrap around their legs. The sand will then rise up to fully encase the target, holding the target in place for up to 3 posts unless they can break the sand. Forms at a Speed and Strength of [Control]. The entire time they're captured, the sand is grinding the target, causing extensive damage.



            [Sand Kinesis]
            A-Ranked Ninjutsu
            A-rank Ninjutsu
            Having achieved notable mastery over [Sand], the user is capable of shaping, directing, and manipulating existing bodies of the element without the need of hand seals or an existing technique. The range at which the user can manipulate the element is equal to the user's [Controlx2] meters to a Speed and Strength of [Control].

            [Superior Suna Infusion]
            A-rank Ninjutsu
            The user channels chakra into a body of sand with five meters of themselves or if no sand is available the user can materialize sand, capable of infusing up to a ten cubic meter sized mass of Sand to be manipulated with Sunakinesis, this infusion lasts until the end of the thread.
            TaijutsuShow
            Place Taijutsu in here
            GenjutsuShow
            Place Genjutsu in here

            History The current history of the creature is rather short as it hasn't been alive for long or it might be more appropriate to state that its hasn't been created long. It was created through a follow on experiment of the Suna-nin, Saisuko Zao, a tenkujutsu user and his previous experiences with one of the families from the Naegi clan and their experiment which created his first plant based companion, Toge. Using the knowledge gained from the previous attempt Zao performed this fusion of a powerful Desert Sand elemental spirit he'd captured and a strange chakra rose that he'd brought back from his exploration of the strange and mysterious country of Juu. Being more careful and prepared then the previous sealing, the new rose plant spirit hybrid was bound through the use of his personal binding Tenkujutsu more or less forcing the vine into becoming a loyal companion of the former Suna jounin. Since that time the plant has been learning to slowly control its ability and mastering its ninjutsu finding that it had a odd fluency in Sand based ninjutsu. Her master, Zao, has told her that he will soon use a technique to increase her ability to utilize her Sand more easily.

            Soon the man used the spirit essence of a sand based spirit to increase Hana's affinity for Sand techniques which allowed for the flower spirit pet. Allowing the hybrid to grasp the art of kinesis of her sand. Traveling through various spirit worlda with her owner, she began to grow stronger physically and mentally, becoming aware of the state of the world and its dangers. No danger more real than the chaotic spirit realms, which her master would find himself within adter venturing to the demon realm. Zao was trapped and his soul sealed allowing for the demon Hegemon to take the bannin's body as his own as a vessel to once more return to the human world. His dark chakra corrupting the flower spirit to the Hegemon's will, becoming one od his retainers.



            Username: Zao
            Owner: Zao
            Stat Trainings: (0/25)

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            [center][big][big][b]Hitohana[/b][/big][/big]
            
            [img]https://i.postimg.cc/43f5Z2R4/f97dbc65454f0ee67d2f11612325225b.jpg[/img]
            
            [b][big]General Information[/big][/b][/center]
            [b]Type:[/b] Hybrid Spirit Plant
            [b]Gender:[/b] Female
            [b]Age:[/b] 4
            [b]Appearance:[/b]
            [list][*][i]Face/head:[/i] The head of the new plant spirit hybrid resembles a combination partly bloomed rose with layers of petals with the lower face of a young woman with sun kissed skin.  
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Body:[/i] The young spirit plant's body appears to be a golden vine that consists of since main 3/in thick vine running from the rose like flower head. Upon looking closer one can see a feminine shaped body of the plant spirit hybrid. A smaller set of golden vines can be found grown from the spirit's back, the size of the plant spirit over all being just larger than ones palm for her humanoid body, but over a meter in length including her vines. 
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Notable Features:[/i] Looks like a tiny rose-like flower fairy .[/list]
            
            [b]Personality:[/b] 
            [list]
            [*][i]General:[/i] Being young, the plant hybrid is still developing its own personality, but is fiercely loyal to its master (Zao) due to him being the only thing that she has known about since its 'birth', being cared for and raised by the Suna-nin.  She can be playful and curious at times, still attempting to figure out the world. Doesn't particularly like cold weather places, preferring hot and dry climates like the place it was born Through this binding process used by Zao, the creature is able to communicate mentally with its master and vice versa.
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Hopes/Dreams:[/i] Hasn't really developed any at this time
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Fears:[/i] Mainly the creature fears katon, being its main weakness as a plant based spirit.
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Combat Mentality:[/i] Primary relied upon its ability to use elemental ninjutsu, mainly doton, fuuton, and sand to attack and defend against opponents at mid-to-long range [/list]
            
            [center][b][big]Battle Information[/big][/b][/center]
            [b]Rank:[/b] A
            [b]Stats[/b] 146/200
            [list]
            [*][b]Chakra Pool:[/b] 45
            [*][b]Endurance:[/b] 10
            [*][b]Control:[/b] 45
            [*][b]Strength:[/b] 10
            [*][b]Speed:[/b] 15
            [*][b]Instinct: [/b] 21
            [/list]
            [b]Equipment:[/b] None
            [b]Elemental Affinities:[/b] Doton
            [hr]
            [center][b][big]Abilities and Concentrations[/big][/b][/center]
            [table=2, Abilities][b]First Ability[/b][c]
            [quote=Dwarfism]
            Dwarfism Ability
            This creature has unique properties in its being that allow it to contain massive amounts of chakra within it without forcing it to grow, typically causing it to be much smaller than other creatures of similar classification.
            [/quote]
            [/table]
            
            [table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][Doton, Fuuton, Suiton, Sand, Sand Kinesis][c]
            [b]Taijutsu[/b][c][Place them here][c]
            [b]Genjutsu[/b][c][Sight, Sound ][/table]
            
            [hr]
            [center][b][big]Jutsu[/big][/b][/center]
            [spoiler=Ninjutsu]
            [spoiler=Sand]
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Cloud][/color][/b]
            D-Ranked Ninjutsu
            After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will expelling a strong breath full of sand. The sand will then move to cover a 10 meter radius around the user, creating a cloud of sand that floats for 3 posts before settling. Comments at a speed and strength of [Control], resisting against objects or people attempting to move through the cloud at [Control] strength. 
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Minor Suna Infusion][/color][/b]
            D-rank Ninjutsu
            The user channels chakra into a body of sand with five meters of themselves or if no sand is available the user can materialize sand, capable of infusing up to a two cubic meter sized mass of Sand to be manipulated with Sunakinesis, this infusion lasts three posts.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Ninja Tools][/color][/b]
            D-Rank Ninjutsu
            After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a set of up to 10 basic projectiles, such as kunai, shuriken, or senbon, in their hand(s) from sand. These tools have a strength of [Control] and last for up to four posts.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Explosive Sand Shuriken][/color][/b]
            D-Rank Ninjutsu
            After channeling chakra the user will form a shuriken of sand, that can be thrown, which are approximately 6 centimeters in diameter in their hand. Upon impact or when kai'd, this shuriken explodes with a force equal to [Control] and covers the immediate area in a cloud of sand. If not consumed, this technique lasts for three posts.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Beneath One’s Feet][/color][/b]
            D-Rank Ninjutsu
            The spirit plant will channel chakra through her body, before then sending this chakra into the ground beneath her or her master’s feet in order to create sand to utilize with other sand techniques sand. The pulse starts at the feet of the plant or her master and moves outwards through the earth at a speed of [Control] , converting all the dirt and rock within a 10 meter radius into sand, including up to 10 meters beneath the spirit. This sand does nothing on its own but remains infused with the spirit’s chakra for up to four posts.
            
            
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F]*[Sand Clone][/color][/b]
            C-Ranked Ninjutsu
            After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of Sand. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Wave][/color][/b]
            C-Ranked Ninjutsu
            With the correct hand seals formed, the user will thrust their hands up, causing a wave of sand to form in front of them. The wave shoots up and travels forward at [Control] 
            speed and strength, and traveling up to 25 meters before collapsing. The wave is only twenty meters in size.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Landmine][/color][/b]
            C-Rank Ninjutsu
            After performing the correct hand seals the user will tap their foot on the ground covered in sand, charging a two meter radius around their foot with explosive chakra. This is armed at a speed of [Control]. For the next three posts if anyone steps on that area it or kai is used it will explode with a force equal to [Control] filling the blast radius with a thick cloud of sand afterwards.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F]*[Desert’s Spire][/color][/b]
            C-Rank Ninjutsu
            After forming the necessary handseals, the user will channel chakra into the sand in a 2 meter area beneath an opponent’s feet within 25 meters of them. After a moment, the sand in this area will violently burst from the ground and form an 8 meter tall spike of sand at [Control] Speed. This spike is capable of piercing an opponent’s body with [Control] Strength and leaving sand in the wounds it creates, causing irritation and pain of the wound. After the spire is formed it remain for 3 posts before turning back into sand.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Swirl Sand Wall][/color][/b]
            C-Rank Ninjutsu
            After performing the necessary hand seals the spirit will channel chakra, causing for sand to swirl herself or any ally in a small tornado of sand two meters away from the target forming with a speed and strength of [Control]. The tornado is five meters tall and one meter thick, capable of moving with the targets movements for the next five posts.
            
            
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Desert’s Spear][/color][/b]
            B-Rank Ninjutsu 
            With the correct seals done, the user will hold their hand , forming sand into a sort of spear shaped projectile that is 10 meters long and nearly a foot in diameter from their palm. This spear hovers beside the user before they form an extra hand seal to launch it at their enemy, flying at a speed and strength of [Control]. This can travel up to 40 meters and lasts for three posts, or until it is used.
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Desert Coffin][/color][/b]
            B-Ranked
            After forming the needed hand seals, the user will cause a small wave of sand to rise from the ground at their feet and roll towards the intended target up to 40 meters away. If the target doesn't avoid this jutsu they will be ensnared by sand that starts to wrap around their legs. The sand will then rise up to fully encase the target, holding the target in place for up to 3 posts unless they can break the sand. Forms at a Speed and Strength of [Control]. The entire time they're captured, the sand is grinding the target, causing extensive damage.
            
            
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Sand Kinesis][/color][/b]
            A-Ranked Ninjutsu
            A-rank Ninjutsu
            Having achieved notable mastery over [color=#FFA54F][Sand][/color], the user is capable of shaping, directing, and manipulating existing bodies of the element without the need of hand seals or an existing technique. The range at which the user can manipulate the element is equal to the user's [Controlx2] meters to a Speed and Strength of [Control].
            
            [b][color=#FFA54F][Superior Suna Infusion][/color][/b]
            A-rank Ninjutsu
            The user channels chakra into a body of sand with five meters of themselves or if no sand is available the user can materialize sand, capable of infusing up to a ten cubic meter sized mass of Sand to be manipulated with Sunakinesis, this infusion lasts until the end of the thread.
            
            [/spoiler]
            [/spoiler]
            [spoiler=Taijutsu]Place Taijutsu in here[/spoiler]
            [spoiler=Genjutsu]Place Genjutsu in here[/spoiler]
            
            [hr]
            [center][b][big]History[/big][/b][/center]
            
            The current history of the creature is rather short as it hasn't been alive for long or it might be more appropriate to state that its hasn't been created long. It was created through a follow on experiment of the Suna-nin, Saisuko Zao, a tenkujutsu user and his previous experiences with one of the families from the Naegi clan and their experiment which created his first plant based companion, Toge. Using the knowledge gained from the previous attempt Zao performed this fusion of a powerful Desert Sand elemental spirit he'd captured and a strange chakra rose that he'd brought back from his exploration of the strange and mysterious country of Juu. Being more careful and prepared then the previous sealing, the new rose plant spirit hybrid was bound through the use of his personal binding Tenkujutsu more or less forcing the vine into becoming a loyal companion of the former Suna jounin. Since that time the plant has been learning to slowly control its ability and mastering its ninjutsu finding that it had a odd fluency in Sand based ninjutsu. Her master, Zao, has told her that he will soon use a technique to increase her ability to utilize her Sand more easily.
            
            Soon the man used the spirit essence of a sand based spirit to increase Hana's affinity for Sand techniques which allowed for the flower spirit pet. Allowing the hybrid to grasp the art of kinesis of her sand. Traveling through various spirit worlda with her owner, she began to grow stronger physically and mentally, becoming aware of the state of the world and its dangers. No danger more real than the chaotic spirit realms, which her master would find himself within adter venturing to the demon realm. Zao was trapped and his soul sealed allowing for the demon Hegemon to take the bannin's body as his own as a vessel to once more return to the human world. His dark chakra corrupting the flower spirit to the Hegemon's will, becoming one od his retainers.
            
            
            [hr]
            [hr]
            
            [b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=2056587]Zao[/url]
            [b]Owner:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8118184/1/]Zao[/url]
            [b]Stat Trainings:[/b] (0/25)
            [hr]
            
            
            Last edited by Zao on Sun Jun 14, 2020 12:47 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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