Kori rework

[Das Kirb]

Application:Korialstraz
Change: Updated stats. Updated ability.
Payment: Revamp

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Username: Das Kirb
Owner: Artemisu, Katsu
Stat Trainings: (0/25)

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Korialstraz; The Tyrrant Wyrm


General Information Type: Henchman
Gender: Male
Age: 37
Appearance:

• Korialstraz looks less human and more like a perverted hybrid between a man and a dragon. His face resembles that of a terrible lizard with preditory teeth. Yellow eyes flicker with traces of orange with slitted pupils. Two large horns sprout from the temples, curving forward to rest just off from the jaw. Instead of hair, a fin rises from his skull and moves backwards, ending just below his neck.
  
  The body shows the same reptilian influence but has a much more human shame. Two arms and legs are in proportion with his frame. An exception of his legs being digigrade. The whole body is covered in dark scales, ranging from onyx along the outside of extremities to ash along the underside and belly. His build is similar to an average 6'4" working man though lacking much of the same fat.
  
  More evidence of the draconic nature are additional appendages. From the spinal base comes a long and surprisingly dexterous tail. It extends a total of 7' before terminating. About a foot back from the tip is an odd set of stiff serrations, one spike on the top facing backwards and about 6" worth on the bottom facing forwards. Along with this tail is a large set of webbed wings anchored to the back on a modified clavicle. These wings are incapable of flight on their own, requiring a B ranked jutsu, but can aid in jumping or gliding just fine.

Personality:

• General:The world is a beautiful place to the beast, though his concept of beauty is vastly different from others. He thrives on the concepts of predation and conquest. He adores the chasing down of pray and the final struggles of a desperate victim. Cruelty is Kori's breath and passion, but he displays it in strange ways.
  
  While the tyrant will relish in the dying words and cries of an overpowered victim, he does recognize sometimes others simply can not defend themselves. Be it by circumstance or condition he will recognize when a target is unfit for a challenge and simply move on, paying them no mind. While he will spare them his wrath, he will ALMOST NEVER take pity on them, instead just ignoring them and moving on.
  
  Those who find themselves in desperate situations and still stand to challenge impossible odds inspire him though, fostering in the beast a begrudging respect and sense of honor. Such a display could sway his sense of loyalty, causing him to fight beside them. Should such spirit be display repeatedly he will grow genuinly friendly and even respectful of them, forming a strong alliance.
  
  Towards those who he considers allies he has a very brusque attitude. He speaks plainly, often insultingly so. While he'll commend one for their achievements, he will not hesitate to berate them on their failures either. Though he doesn't do this out of malice towards allies, he will towards any others. No, he wishes to see them keep improving and becoming better for he truly believes only the strong deserve to thrive in such a beautiful and cruel world
• Hopes/Dreams: The dragon wishes to roam the material world at his leisure. His desire for true freedom is so great he will go to any extreme to achieve it. That desire gave him his current shape. While he's free to roam the material as long as he desires, never being forced back to the spirit world, he's trapped to a semi-human form, only able to return to his titanic glory for brief periods. He seeks a way to change this, being able to retain his draconic nature while still being free on this plane.
• Fears: Korialstraz is extremely hydrophobic. Even though this body doesn't require the constant heat of his internal furnace, he still hesitates. Due to nearly drowning when a whelp he refuses to go into waters that he can not see a shore or the depths without companion. His pride could overcome this, but it's difficult even for a dragon.
• Combat Mentality:Intimidation and overwhelming force are Kori's forte in combat. Against a perceived inferior opponent he'll initially toy with them, barely putting any effort into his attacks or defense. However, greater challenges are met with an excitement belonging to a sociopathic monster. He'll delight in damage taken just as much as damage caused. Massive destructive attacks are used to wipe out armies, as well as giving minimal chance to dodge.

Battle Information Rank: A
Stats

• Chakra Pool: 20
• Endurance: 25
• Control: 25
• Strength: 30
• Speed: 5
• Willpower: 15

Equipment:

• Natural Equipment
  • Talons - Each finger and toe tip has a 4' talon bade of hardened keratin. They are hard enough to block weapons from anything Kori could sustain. However, they're sharpened like a rock causing punctures or tearing more than cuts or slashes. While full dragon these claws each grow to roughly 60".
  • Teeth - Each tooth is 1-3" and hardened to be able to break boulders should Kori have the jaw strength to do so. In full dragon each of these grow to 30-42".
  • Tail - The 7' tail is extremely dextrous, being able to perform complex maneuvers and wrap around objects to act like a third "hand". A 5" barb on the top can be used as a spike, same with serration-like 3" barbs on the bottom. In full dragon this tail loses all dexterity and becomes like a battering club, growing to 72' in length with each barb quadrupling in size.
  • Scales - In humanoid shape Kori's scales offer no additional protection, being too small to effectively stop blades or spears. In full dragon they function like hardened steel armor, effectively reducing the impact of blunt attacks by half. Piercing or slashing attacks become blunt attacks unless they have a strength equal to 3/4 Kori's own. They also reduce the effectiveness of fire-based attacks, causing burns to be 2 degrees less severe.
  • Wings - Each wing is roughly 6'6", causing a total wingspan of 13' from end to end. They are anchored to a modified clavicle with muscle structures spanning the whole back. They can be used to deflect or block many attacks, though Kori's stats determine their effectiveness. In full dragon these wings grow to 60' each. In either form a B rank taijutsu is required for flight.
  • Horns - Each horn comes off the temple and begins at roughly 5" diameter. They curve outwards and down to expire just beside the jaw, a total of about 2'. They are hard enough to sustain blows from blades so long as Kori could resist them naturally. In full dragon these horns grow to about 24' total and starting at a diameter of 80".
• Manufactured Equipment
  • Swordlance - This weapon is a total of 7' long with 4' being a shaft and 3' being a large sword-like blade. The blade is dual edged and tapered to a spear-like point with a base width of roughly 14". A "cross guard" rests about 3" behind the blade and is 18" wide, providing a good point to stomp when thrusting downwards for extra force. On the back end is a weighted steel sphere designed to act as a counterbalance as well as a mace.
  • 15 Black Firebombs - A small 1" sphere containing a powder charge fortified with katon chakra. When thrown they will burst upon impact, causing an explosion of fire with the concussive force of an explosive tag and sending fire in all directions for 5 meters. These flames can cause first degree burns and ignite any flammable material. These are carried on his belt circling his waist. Special capsules were made from hardened steel and cushioned within specifically to prevent unintended detonation.
  • Plate Cuirass - A blackened steel breastplate with sloping armor from the center of the chest outward to the sides. The armor is 1/4" thick. It covers from the belly to the shoulders and neckline as well as all sides. The back has a separate plate that is attached later and gives space for Kori's wings, sacrificing some protection for full mobility. Pauldrons cover the shoulders on either side with 3" spikes pointing away from the head. Leather rests beneath the metal to offer nominal protection to the lower belly without sacrificing mobility
  • Plate Armguards - Each bicep is covered in a 1'4" plate of blackened steel. These plates cover from the elbow to the shoulder, ending a couple inches below the armpits. Leather rest beneath these plates for comfort as well as offering modest protection to the back of the elbow. faceted with a slide to the plate is a domed plate of 1/4" blackened steel to protect the outside of the elbow without sacrificing mobility.
  • Plate Vambraces - Each forearm is covered with a 1'4" plate of blackened steel. These plates wrap all the way around the arm and goes from wrist to elbow with leather beneath for comfort. On the top of these is a 2" ridge-like blade that starts just above the wrist and slightly back over the elbow about 1".
  • Skirt of Plates - A leather skirt hangs from Kori's waist down just past his knees. The pleated skirt has 1/4" thick blackened steel plates riveted onto it that're roughly 4" wide each with 2" between each plate.
  • Plate Greaves - Each leg is covered by 1/4" blackened steel plates with separate plates at the knees for flexibility. They cover from ankle to just below the groin and wrap all the way around. Leather rest beneath it and at the joins to allow mobility. 3" above the ankles small 2" spikes start along the shin up to the knee, spaced an inch apart.

Elemental Affinities:

• Youton
• Katon
• Doton

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Abilities and Concentrations

Possession of the Tyrant Wyrm

The host has been completely overtaken by the spirit of Korialstraz, a titanic dragon. The host is effectively brain dead, allowing Kori absolute control of the body. Any previous memories, skills, or personality from the original host are utterly destroyed. Should Kori be removed from the host for whatever reason, the host dies and Kori is once again forced as a mass-less spirit without ability to affect or communicate with the material world. Korialstraz's influence is obvious to any observer. He's physically altered the body to extremes (described in the physical description section). Though many draconic influences are pressent, the dragon retains a humanoid form for day to day living. He may do jutsu using the host body as normal. However, his Youton jutsu are impossible to use in this state. To unlock his Youton jutsu he must temporarily take his original Goliath (20m tall from foot to top of shoulder, 20m long from base of neck to base of tail, 14m wide from shoulder to shoulder.) form. This transformation can be sustained for his Endurance in posts. This form comes with significant natural weapons and armor.

Concentrations
Ninjutsu	Doton Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect. Passive (Enduring)Show Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters. Katon Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect. Passive (Ingition)Show Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the ninjutsu stat requirement. 1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns 15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns 25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns 35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns
Taijutsu	The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc. The fundamental skill of [Polearm Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with staves, spears, halberds, pikes, scythes and other like weapons. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

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Jutsu

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[color=darkorange][b]Username:[/color][/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=931693]Das Kirb[/url]
[color=darkorange][b]Owner:[/color][/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8103939/1/]Artemisu, Katsu[/url]
[color=darkorange][b]Stat Trainings:[/color][/b] (0/25)
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[center][big][big][color=darkorange][b]Korialstraz; The Tyrrant Wyrm[/color][/b][/big][/big]
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[b][big][color=darkorange]General Information[/color][/big][/b][/center]
[b][color=darkorange]Type:[/color][/b] Henchman
[b][color=darkorange]Gender:[/color][/b] Male
[b][color=darkorange]Age:[/color][/b] 37
[b][color=darkorange]Appearance:[/color][/b]
[list]Korialstraz looks less human and more like a perverted hybrid between a man and a dragon. His face resembles that of a terrible lizard with preditory teeth. Yellow eyes flicker with traces of orange with slitted pupils. Two large horns sprout from the temples, curving forward to rest just off from the jaw. Instead of hair, a fin rises from his skull and moves backwards, ending just below his neck.

The body shows the same reptilian influence but has a much more human shame. Two arms and legs are in proportion with his frame. An exception of his legs being digigrade. The whole body is covered in dark scales, ranging from onyx along the outside of extremities to ash along the underside and belly. His build is similar to an average 6'4" working man though lacking much of the same fat.

More evidence of the draconic nature are additional appendages. From the spinal base comes a long and surprisingly dexterous tail. It extends a total of 7' before terminating. About a foot back from the tip is an odd set of stiff serrations, one spike on the top facing backwards and about 6" worth on the bottom facing forwards. Along with this tail is a large set of webbed wings anchored to the back on a modified clavicle. These wings are incapable of flight on their own, requiring a B ranked jutsu, but can aid in jumping or gliding just fine.[/list]
[b][color=darkorange]Personality:[/color][/b] [list][*][i][color=darkorange]General:[/color][/i]The world is a beautiful place to the beast, though his concept of beauty is vastly different from others. He thrives on the concepts of predation and conquest. He adores the chasing down of pray and the final struggles of a desperate victim. Cruelty is Kori's breath and passion, but he displays it in strange ways.

While the tyrant will relish in the dying words and cries of an overpowered victim, he does recognize sometimes others simply can not defend themselves. Be it by circumstance or condition he will recognize when a target is unfit for a challenge and simply move on, paying them no mind. While he will spare them his wrath, he will ALMOST NEVER take pity on them, instead just ignoring them and moving on.

Those who find themselves in desperate situations and still stand to challenge impossible odds inspire him though, fostering in the beast a begrudging respect and sense of honor. Such a display could sway his sense of loyalty, causing him to fight beside them. Should such spirit be display repeatedly he will grow genuinly friendly and even respectful of them, forming a strong alliance.

Towards those who he considers allies he has a very brusque attitude. He speaks plainly, often insultingly so. While he'll commend one for their achievements, he will not hesitate to berate them on their failures either. Though he doesn't do this out of malice towards allies, he will towards any others. No, he wishes to see them keep improving and becoming better for he truly believes only the strong deserve to thrive in such a beautiful and cruel world
[*][i][color=darkorange]Hopes/Dreams:[/color][/i] The dragon wishes to roam the material world at his leisure. His desire for true freedom is so great he will go to any extreme to achieve it. That desire gave him his current shape. While he's free to roam the material as long as he desires, never being forced back to the spirit world, he's trapped to a semi-human form, only able to return to his titanic glory for brief periods. He seeks a way to change this, being able to retain his draconic nature while still being free on this plane.
[*][i][color=darkorange]Fears:[/color][/i] Korialstraz is extremely hydrophobic. Even though this body doesn't require the constant heat of his internal furnace, he still hesitates. Due to nearly drowning when a whelp he refuses to go into waters that he can not see a shore or the depths without companion. His pride could overcome this, but it's difficult even for a dragon.
[*][i][color=darkorange]Combat Mentality:[/color][/i]Intimidation and overwhelming force are Kori's forte in combat. Against a perceived inferior opponent he'll initially toy with them, barely putting any effort into his attacks or defense. However, greater challenges are met with an excitement belonging to a sociopathic monster. He'll delight in damage taken just as much as damage caused. Massive destructive attacks are used to wipe out armies, as well as giving minimal chance to dodge.[/list]

[center][b][big][color=darkorange]Battle Information[/color][/big][/b][/center]
[b][color=darkorange]Rank:[/b][/color] A
[b][color=darkorange]Stats[/b][/color]
[list]
[*][b][color=darkorange]Chakra Pool:[/color][/b] 20
[*][b][color=darkorange]Endurance:[/color][/b] 25
[*][b][color=darkorange]Control:[/color][/b] 25
[*][b][color=darkorange]Strength:[/color][/b] 30
[*][b][color=darkorange]Speed:[/color][/b] 5
[*][b][color=darkorange]Willpower:[/color][/b] 15
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[b][color=darkorange]Equipment:[/color][/b]
[list][*][color=darkgray][b]Natural Equipment[/b][/color][list][*][color=darkgray]Talons[/color] - Each finger and toe tip has a 4' talon bade of hardened keratin. They are hard enough to block weapons from anything Kori could sustain. However, they're sharpened like a rock causing punctures or tearing more than cuts or slashes. While full dragon these claws each grow to roughly 60".
[*][color=darkgray]Teeth[/color] - Each tooth is 1-3" and hardened to be able to break boulders should Kori have the jaw strength to do so. In full dragon each of these grow to 30-42".
[*][color=darkgray]Tail[/color] - The 7' tail is extremely dextrous, being able to perform complex maneuvers and wrap around objects to act like a third "hand". A 5" barb on the top can be used as a spike, same with serration-like 3" barbs on the bottom. In full dragon this tail loses all dexterity and becomes like a battering club, growing to 72' in length with each barb quadrupling in size.
[*][color=darkgray]Scales[/color] - In humanoid shape Kori's scales offer no additional protection, being too small to effectively stop blades or spears. In full dragon they function like hardened steel armor, effectively reducing the impact of blunt attacks by half. Piercing or slashing attacks become blunt attacks unless they have a strength equal to 3/4 Kori's own. They also reduce the effectiveness of fire-based attacks, causing burns to be 2 degrees less severe.
[*][color=darkgray]Wings[/color] - Each wing is roughly 6'6", causing a total wingspan of 13' from end to end. They are anchored to a modified clavicle with muscle structures spanning the whole back. They can be used to deflect or block many attacks, though Kori's stats determine their effectiveness. In full dragon these wings grow to 60' each. In either form a B rank taijutsu is required for flight.
[*][color=darkgray]Horns[/color] - Each horn comes off the temple and begins at roughly 5" diameter. They curve outwards and down to expire just beside the jaw, a total of about 2'. They are hard enough to sustain blows from blades so long as Kori could resist them naturally. In full dragon these horns grow to about 24' total and starting at a diameter of 80".[/list]
[*][color=silver][b]Manufactured Equipment[/color][/b]
[list][*][color=silver]Swordlance[/color] - This weapon is a total of 7' long with 4' being a shaft and 3' being a large sword-like blade. The blade is dual edged and tapered to a spear-like point with a base width of roughly 14". A "cross guard" rests about 3" behind the blade and is 18" wide, providing a good point to stomp when thrusting downwards for extra force. On the back end is a weighted steel sphere designed to act as a counterbalance as well as a mace.
[*][color=silver]15 Black Firebombs[/color] - A small 1" sphere containing a powder charge fortified with katon chakra. When thrown they will burst upon impact, causing an explosion of fire with the concussive force of an explosive tag and sending fire in all directions for 5 meters. These flames can cause first degree burns and ignite any flammable material. These are carried on his belt circling his waist. Special capsules were made from hardened steel and cushioned within specifically to prevent unintended detonation.
[*][color=silver]Plate Cuirass[/color] - A blackened steel breastplate with sloping armor from the center of the chest outward to the sides. The armor is 1/4" thick. It covers from the belly to the shoulders and neckline as well as all sides. The back has a separate plate that is attached later and gives space for Kori's wings, sacrificing some protection for full mobility. Pauldrons cover the shoulders on either side with 3" spikes pointing away from the head. Leather rests beneath the metal to offer nominal protection to the lower belly without sacrificing mobility
[*][color=silver]Plate Armguards[/color] - Each bicep is covered in a 1'4" plate of blackened steel. These plates cover from the elbow to the shoulder, ending a couple inches below the armpits. Leather rest beneath these plates for comfort as well as offering modest protection to the back of the elbow. faceted with a slide to the plate is a domed plate of 1/4" blackened steel to protect the outside of the elbow without sacrificing mobility.
[*][color=silver]Plate Vambraces[/color] - Each forearm is covered with a 1'4" plate of blackened steel. These plates wrap all the way around the arm and goes from wrist to elbow with leather beneath for comfort. On the top of these is a 2" ridge-like blade that starts just above the wrist and slightly back over the elbow about 1".
[*][color=silver]Skirt of Plates[/color] - A leather skirt hangs from Kori's waist down just past his knees. The pleated skirt has 1/4" thick blackened steel plates riveted onto it that're roughly 4" wide each with 2" between each plate.
[*][color=silver]Plate Greaves[/color] - Each leg is covered by 1/4" blackened steel plates with separate plates at the knees for flexibility. They cover from ankle to just below the groin and wrap all the way around. Leather rest beneath it and at the joins to allow mobility. 3" above the ankles small 2" spikes start along the shin up to the knee, spaced an inch apart.[/list][/list]

[b][color=darkorange]Elemental Affinities:[/color][/b][list][*][color=#800000]Youton[/color]
[*][color=orangered]Katon[/color]
[*][color=saddlebrown]Doton[/color][/list]
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[center][b][big][color=darkorange]Abilities and Concentrations[/color][/big][/b][/center]
[table=2, Possession of the Tyrant Wyrm]The host has been completely overtaken by the spirit of Korialstraz, a titanic dragon. The host is effectively brain dead, allowing Kori absolute control of the body. Any previous memories, skills, or personality from the original host are utterly destroyed. Should Kori be removed from the host for whatever reason, the host dies and Kori is once again forced as a mass-less spirit without ability to affect or communicate with the material world.

Korialstraz's influence is obvious to any observer. He's physically altered the body to extremes (described in the physical description section). Though many draconic influences are pressent, the dragon retains a humanoid form for day to day living. He may do jutsu using the host body as normal. However, his [color=#800000]Youton[/color] jutsu are impossible to use in this state. To unlock his Youton jutsu he must temporarily take his original Goliath (20m tall from foot to top of shoulder, 20m long from base of neck to base of tail, 14m wide from shoulder to shoulder.) form. This transformation can be sustained for his endurance in posts. This form comes with significant natural weapons and armor.[c][/table]
[table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][quote=Doton][color=saddlebrown][b]Doton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive [color=saddlebrown][i]enduring[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Enduring)]Doton has a passive effect of [b]Endurance[/b], which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.[/spoiler][/quote][quote=Katon][color=orangered][b]Katon Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive [color=orangered][i]ignition[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Ingition)]Katon's effect is [b]ignition[/b], which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own.

Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the ninjutsu stat requirement. [list][*]1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns[*]15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns[*]25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns[*]35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns[/list][/spoiler][/quote][c]
[b]Taijutsu[/b][c][quote=Close Quarters Combat]The fundamental skill of [b][Close Quarters Combat][/b] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.[/quote][quote=Polearm Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Polearm Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with staves, spears, halberds, pikes, scythes and other like weapons. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][quote=Rigid Structure]The fundamental skill of [b][Rigid Structure][/b] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][/table]
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[center][b][big][color=darkorange]Jutsu[/color][/big][/b][/center]

[TheLacarix]

There is no endurance stat on the other equipment and armour. You also have two abilities in one a body mod and a fusion.

[Das Kirb]

Kori was accepted by Niro in this thread. I don't know if there was a change that makes Kori impossible now. I had not considered that when registering him for this system update.

What would be a reasonable endurance for the manufactured armors? I'm unfamiliar with changes to armor, and the old go too was "say what its made out of and we'll figure it out from there based on logic". I also am unable to find anything specific in the rules but may just be blind.

[TheLacarix]

You're ability is two abilities, needs to be one.

Your endurance of your armour is up to you, but it needs to be priced. At the moment, the armour is just 'clothes' and offers no protection.

[Das Kirb]

Due to my confusion and the nature of this situation I went and spoke privately with Shinobitruth, looking for guidance. I do not wish to cause a wave but I do want to ask for escalation of the rework. I am willing to wait as needed. Concerning the ability, I found the original conversation as well and would like Niro to weigh in as he's the one who originally worked on it with me. However, I do see the points made, I simply don't understand cause it conflicts with what I was told previously. Thank you for your time.

ShinobiTruth: I'd recommend just requesting an escalation of the check. I don't think the steel armor's an issue, and it seems like your ability falls under spirit possession, by what I can tell.

[Diatenshi]

The ability is fine as a paid ability.

Noticed a typo in your ability:To unlock his Youton jutsu he must temporarily take his origional golieth←should be spelled goliath

[Das Kirb]

Thank you Dia.

Fixed the error.

[ShinobiTruth]

Possibly a stupid question, but just wanting to confirm that the lack of any jutsu whatsoever is intentional.

Other than that, 1/2.

[Niro]

Ok so there's a lot packed into this ability that's allowed due to it being a paid ability (which are still around, you just can't buy access to fusions/extensions like you previously could). Which is easy enough to solve. Youton + body mod as base, Bigism as +15.

The kicker is the whole spirit possessing someone. There's two options on how to do that if you still want to keep it instead of being summoned.

1. 2 Applications. 1 for the henchman being that's husked who's ability would be the permanent spirit possession + dragon body mod. 1 for Kori the spirit which has bigism + youton.

2. Jinchuuriki that's given over control to the Spirit and unlocks more of it's original abilities as it levels the stat. Each Mastery unlock would grant 1 of body mod, bigism, youton, etc.

[Niro]

Going to Move this to Completed for now, let me know when you've worked out whatever and I'll move it back.