Toge Revamp

Plant pet gets a makeover

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Toge Revamp

Post by Zao » Fri Jun 19, 2020 12:38 am

Application: Toge

Change:

- Appearance and picture updates.
- Stats revamped for basic A-rank companion for revamp. (120)
- Updated/Fixed wording of ability.
- Added a little in personality and history.
- Reworked jutsu for site revamp.
- Removed 1 E Rank and 3 B Rank Taijutsu = 16 points
- Using those points on 5 stats (125), 1 point left over.


Payment: N/a
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Toge

General Information Type: Spirit Pet
Gender: Male
Age: 6
Appearance:
  • Face/Head/Body: After being corrupted by the Hegemon, the spirit plant demon had transformed from its original thorn vine appearance to that of a Venus flytrap looking plant that is darker grey in color. It's body in its natural state is main body vine four-to-five meters in length with six other vines growing off the main vine that are four meters in length, which have venus flytrap style mouths filled with sharp serrated teeth. The plant still doesn't sport any eyes. Each of the mouths are each about the size of an adult male's hand attached to the ends of the thorny vines. Coming off each of the six vines are two 'arm-like' vines which are somewhat thinner and sport a three inch long thorn spike at the end of each.
  • Notable Features: Flytrap style heads, thorny body.
Personality:
  • General: The demon plant personality comes mainly from the demon spirit sealed within the plants body. Which contains a bit of mischievousness mixed with a need to constantly be seeking out its next meal. Though it is fiercely loyal to its master, Zao, not only because the man didn't destroy it when he recaptured it after its escape but also because of the binding tenkujutsu used upon it by the man in the place of a normal contract. It was through this binding process that allows the creature to also communicate mentally with its master.

    After its corruption from the demon Hegemon, the demon plant has turned into a type of ravenous beast with a single master capable of controlling him, only desiring to hunt and feed on the enemies of its new lord.
  • Hopes/Dreams: None really at this time.
  • Fears: Mainly the creature fears fire, being its main weakness being a plant based creature.
  • Combat Mentality: Most of its mentality coming into combat are commands given to it via its mental link with Zao or through its basic carnivorous instincts that the spirit gained from merging with the carnivorous plan to pin point then lash out and bind its prey by surprise from underground if possible. Using its steel like thorns to literally shred a captured target to death as it devours the target's body as food.
Battle Information Rank: A Rank
Total Stats: 125/200
Trainings: 0/25
Stats:
  • Chakra Pool: 16 [21-5]
  • Endurance: 25
  • Control: 4
  • Strength: 25
  • Speed: 25
  • Will Power: 25
Equipment:

- None

Elemental Affinities: Doton
Abilities
First Ability
Demon Hegemon's Gift:

Toge was born through the experimental fusing of a demon spirit and a carnivorous plant conducted between Zao and the Naegi clan. With the Demon Hegemon's now controlling the Suna Bannin's body, the demon plant has been bestowed the Hegemon's gift mutating the plant spirit pet's appearance to a more demon like form. Still retaining the ability to increase its size via transformation techniques to a traditional spirit's size depending on the spirit pet's chakra pool. The demon pet is able to maintain its transformation state for a number of posts equal to 3/4 of its Chakra Pool. The Hegemon's chakra also grants the plant the ability to actively regenerate damage it received based on [Control] at a constant Chakra Pool drain of [-5]
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Place them here]
Taijutsu[Plant Body, Close Quarter Combat, Perception, Stealth, Sword]
Genjutsu [Touch, Sound]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
Plant Style • Miracle Grow
D-Rank Transformation Ninjutsu
Channeling Chakra into its body the demon plant is able to activate its transformation ability and grow to the size limit of a spirit of its Chakra pool.

[Plant Style • Thorn Daggers]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the end of each of the plant's limb, the spirit plant is able to cause a thorn at the end of each vine limb to grow larger. The size which the thorns can increase up to is six inches in its normal form or up to five meters in it's transformed state. Lasting for to three posts before the chakra in the thorn dissipates and the thorns shrinks back to their normal size.

[Plant Style • Miracle Grow Version 2]
D-Rank Transformation Ninjutsu
Channeling chakra into its body the plant spirit is able to activate its transformation ability. This technique works as a catalyst technique for Toge’s ability and only allows the plant to transform to a larger form, increasing its size comparable to a spirit of its chakra pool with gigantism. Grows two additional Venus fly trap mouth vines and each mouth vine grows an addition 'arm vine'. This effect last a number of post equal to 3/4 the plant spirit's Chakra Pool, as stated in the spirit's ability.

[Plant Style • Thorn Shuriken]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into one or more of plant's limbs, the spirit plant is able to cause for up to ten thorns, per limb, to loosen. With a whip like motion of the limb(s) the spirit plant is able to throw the loose thorns from the limb(s) as though they were shuriken towards target. These thorns will then regrow themselves under the minor wound column of the Regeneration Rules.
TaijutsuShow
Thorn Style:
A style of combat that relies on the creature utilizing the long reach of its vines and strong thorns to capture and tear at targets in either surprise attacks from beneath the ground or in attacks that are based to entangle or overwhelm the target. Concentrations included in this style are [Plant Body], [Stealth], and [Perception].
Entangle
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
This is an easy taijutsu to perform, using its numerous vines, the plant demon will attempt to use one or more of its vines to lash out and attempt to entangle enemies in range.

Unseen Approach
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
The creatures, due to its plant nature, is effectively able to "swim" underground using it's raw strength (max speed stat) to move about, through rock and dirt, creating small tunnels after itself as it moves around.

Silent Approach
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
A fundamental skill in a predator's repertoire, the user has learned to move at a walking pace without their movements making any discernible sounds. Even in thick foliage they are able to identify and navigate around fragile twigs and dry leaves and step on vegetation in a way as to not make a sound.

[Seamless Skill]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
A skill utilized by those on the path to mastery over the control of the body, users of Seamless Skill are actively able to transition efficiently between offensive and defensive actions during combat. By transitioning so seamlessly, the user is able to save a marginal amount of energy while attacking.

Toss
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
A simple technique which can be used with an object or target, the plant grasp hold of a opponent or object and then proceed to launch the object/target with its full strength into the air or at a specific location.

Unsteady Ground
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The creature will stand straight up, then the large vine will slam it's body to the ground and causes a minor, localized earthquake. For opponents with a [Strength] less then the plant's [Strength] will find it hard to keep their footing. The quake reaches out in a diameter equal to the creature's strength up to 20 meters in normal form and up to 50 meters in its transformed state (due to the plants size increase).

Surrounded
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
An ambush technique that is used by the plant creature as it surrounds an opponent underground then launches an assault with the majority of its supplementary vines that burst from the ground all around the designated target in an attempt to bind then shred the target if caught.

Z Shake
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The plant creature is able to immediate change the direction and movement speed of the different portion of its body when striking the plant is able to 'shake' around attacks by changing the direction of their attack or dodge mid movement to compensate for the opponent's strike.

Get Hooked
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
A simple technique that utilizes the main vine of the plant's body to attempt and attack the foundation of its opponent while they are occupied dealing with attacks from the larger main vine the creature then utilizes one or more of its supplementary vines to attempt and strike/bind an opponent with an attack from the side.

Fighting Blind
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The plant creature will strike the ground with the main vine with great force, dragging it in a line. This will fling a cloud of dirt, rock and dust up into their opponent’s eyes as if the user had thrown it. This enables the plant to then immediate launch a follow up strike at either a blinded opponent or an opponent that is quite predictably dodging the debris.

Wave of the Vine
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
A defensive strike designed to ward against ranged attacks. By raising its main vine high and sweeping it downwards the action creates a powerful wall of wind that deflects most incoming attacks as if it was deflected by 1/2 of his [Strength]. The “wall” of air is directly in front of plant and only as tall as they are, leaving its sides and back still undefended.

Entangle the Attack
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Utilizing the creatures speed and agility the plant will meet an on coming straight line attack from an opponent by forming their body into a coil that allows the attack to pass through the empty space in the middle of the coil before the plant then attempts to bind around the limb or weapon used in the attack.

Sensing Vibrations
A-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
The plant is very adept with sensing vibrations through the earth and air allowing for him to be able to pick up on the general direction of movement within a 80 meter radius of itself, even in the absence of any sound. Bring able to precisely do so at a range of up to 40 meters.

King of this Land
A-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The plant will lift the upper portion of its vine into the air in a type of defensive or warning posture. This stance concentrates a lot of the plant's power and agility into its slender body, enabling the creature to dash short distances (5m max) at maximum speed without acceleration time after a moment’s preparation.

Tornado of the Thorns
S-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
By spinning rapidly like a top the plant extends its supplementary vines outward creating a vortex of vines around itself and outside the vines a vacuum forms. This vacuum creates a suction large enough to pull everything in a radius equal to their [Strength]/5 in yards at their full strength. This suction is nearly instantaneous and can cause significant damage if living creatures are caught in the area, collapsing their lungs if their [Endurance] isn't higher than the adept's [Strength]. In addition, anything caught in this vacuum will be assaulted by the powerful thorns as well. This can last as long as the user has Endurance to keep it going or until disrupted.
GenjutsuShow
Place Genjutsu in here

History The current history of the creature is rather short as it hasn't been alive for long or it might be more appropriate to state that its hadn't been created for to long. It was created through the combined efforts of a young Suna-nin, Saisuko Zao, a tenkujutsu user and one of the families from the Naegi clan as an experiment which was suppose to create a plant based companion for that branch of the clan in an attempt to strengthen them. The original spirit was a powerful spirit ranked as an A-rank spirit that was identified by the clan and later captured with the help of Zao whom then brought the spirit back in a temporary housing item to the clan. The carnivorous thorn vine was also a creation of the clan which had been breeding various carnivorous plant as they worked to strength their offensive plant based technique by using the seeds from this specific plant. Then using a special technique which was passed down by members of the Naegi clan whom had attempted to do the same thing many, many years ago though it was never successful completed then. But they relied on not only the skill of Zao as a tenkujutsu user but also his researching skills as he complied scroll after scroll on not only the ancient technique but possible flaws with the technique and possible solution to those problems. After several months of research and trial and error Zao and the clan attempted to fuse the spirit and the carnivorous vine together using the experimental technique.

To their surprise the fusion of the two separate creatures, which was similar to a permanent possession style of tenkujutsu, actually worked. Though when it did the creature created was a powerful thorny vine of a golden hue that had grown from its previous four meters to up to nearly fifteen meters in length and its thickness increased in accordance to its newly massive size. This sudden growth allowed for the creature to obtain the strength to break free from its shackles and binds which had been placed upon it causing it to lash out and injury many of the nearby clansmen and escape through burrowing into the ground. Though it was tracked down by Zao and his sensory techniques and later in a battle defeated by the young man and bound through the use of his personal binding Tenkujutsu more or less forcing the vine into becoming a loyal companion of the former Suna jounin.

Afterwards the groups decided that it would be best to be more caution and utilize weaker demons to judge the effects of the technique more closely upon the carnivorous plants and their merged spirits. Also, Zao would pass on a variation of his binding technique as well that was more suited for use by the clan along with working with some of the Tenkujutsu users of the clan to help modify it even further so that in the future they would not need his assistance.

After its master was sealed away by the Demon Hegemon, the plant had its violent tendencies fully released by the Demon and its body corrupted by the spirit's dark chakra, transforming the simple looking thorn vine into a truly monstrous plant creature with some resemblance to the of a Venus flytrap with multiple mouths and vines to devour its prey...

Username: Zao
Owner: Saisuko Zao
Stat Trainings: 0/25

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[center][big][big][b]Toge[/b][/big][/big]

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[center][b][big]General Information[/big][/b][/center]
[b]Type:[/b] Spirit Pet
[b]Gender:[/b] Male 
[b]Age:[/b] 6
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[list][*][i]Face/Head/Body:[/i] After being corrupted by the Hegemon, the spirit plant demon had transformed from its original thorn vine appearance to that of a Venus flytrap looking plant that is darker grey in color. It's body in its natural state is main body vine four-to-five meters in length with six other vines growing off the main vine that are four meters in length, which have venus flytrap style mouths filled with sharp serrated teeth. The plant still doesn't sport any eyes. Each of the mouths are each about the size of an adult male's hand attached to the ends of the thorny vines. Coming off each of the six vines are two 'arm-like' vines which are somewhat thinner and sport a three inch long thorn spike at the end of each. 

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[*][i]Notable Features:[/i] Flytrap style heads, thorny body.[/list]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[list][*][i]General:[/i] The demon plant personality comes mainly from the demon spirit sealed within the plants body. Which contains a bit of mischievousness mixed with a need to constantly be seeking out its next meal. Though it is fiercely loyal to its master, Zao, not only because the man didn't destroy it when he recaptured it after its escape but also because of the binding tenkujutsu used upon it by the man in the place of a normal contract. It was through this binding process that allows the creature to also communicate mentally with its master.

After its corruption from the demon Hegemon, the demon plant has turned into a type of ravenous beast with a single master capable of controlling him, only desiring to hunt and feed on the enemies of its new lord. 

[/list][list]

[*][i]Hopes/Dreams:[/i] None really at this time.

[/list][list]

[*][i]Fears:[/i] Mainly the creature fears fire, being its main weakness being a plant based creature. 

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[*][i]Combat Mentality:[/i] Most of its mentality coming into combat are commands given to it via its mental link with Zao or through its basic carnivorous instincts that the spirit gained from merging with the carnivorous plan to pin point then lash out and bind its prey by surprise from underground if possible. Using its steel like thorns to literally shred a captured target to death as it devours the target's body as food.[/list]

[center][b][big]Battle Information[/big][/b][/center]

[b]Rank:[/b] A Rank
[b]Total Stats:[/b] 125/200
[b]Trainings:[/b] 0/25
[b]Stats:[/b]
[list]
[*][b]Chakra Pool:[/b] 16 [21-5]
[*][b]Endurance:[/b] 25
[*][b]Control:[/b] 4
[*][b]Strength:[/b] 25
[*][b]Speed:[/b] 25
[*][b]Will Power:[/b] 25
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[b]Equipment:[/b]

- None

[b]Elemental Affinities:[/b] Doton
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[table=2, Abilities][b]First Ability[/b][c]
[quote=Demon Hegemon's Gift] 
Toge was born through the experimental fusing of a demon spirit and a carnivorous plant conducted between Zao and the Naegi clan. With the Demon Hegemon's now controlling the Suna Bannin's body, the demon plant has been bestowed the Hegemon's gift mutating the plant spirit pet's appearance to a more demon like form. Still retaining the ability to increase its size via transformation techniques to a traditional spirit's size depending on the spirit pet's chakra pool. The demon pet is able to maintain its transformation state for a number of posts equal to 3/4 of its Chakra Pool. The Hegemon's chakra also grants the plant the ability to actively regenerate damage it received based on [Control] at a constant Chakra Pool drain of [-5]
[/quote]
[/table]
[table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][c]
[b]Taijutsu[/b][c][Plant Body, Close Quarter Combat, Perception, Stealth, Sword][c]
[b]Genjutsu[/b] [c][Touch, Sound][/table]
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[center][b][big]Jutsu[/big][/b][/center]
[spoiler=Ninjutsu]
[b]Plant Style • Miracle Grow[/b]
D-Rank Transformation Ninjutsu
Channeling Chakra into its body the demon plant is able to activate its transformation ability and grow to the size limit of a spirit of its Chakra pool.

[Plant Style • Thorn Daggers]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the end of each of the plant's limb, the spirit plant is able to cause a thorn at the end of each vine limb to grow larger. The size which the thorns can increase up to is six inches in its normal form or up to five meters in it's transformed state. Lasting for to three posts before the chakra in the thorn dissipates and the thorns shrinks back to their normal size.

[Plant Style • Miracle Grow Version 2]
D-Rank Transformation Ninjutsu
Channeling chakra into its body the plant spirit is able to activate its transformation ability. This technique works as a catalyst technique for Toge’s ability and only allows the plant to transform to a larger form, increasing its size comparable to a spirit of its chakra pool with gigantism. Grows two additional Venus fly trap mouth vines and each mouth vine grows an addition 'arm vine'. This effect last a number of post equal to 3/4 the plant spirit's Chakra Pool, as stated in the spirit's ability.

[b][Plant Style • Thorn Shuriken][/b]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into one or more of plant's limbs, the spirit plant is able to cause for up to ten thorns, per limb, to loosen. With a whip like motion of the limb(s) the spirit plant is able to throw the loose thorns from the limb(s) as though they were shuriken towards target. These thorns will then regrow themselves under the minor wound column of the Regeneration Rules.

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Taijutsu]
[quote=Thorn Style]
A style of combat that relies on the creature utilizing the long reach of its vines and strong thorns to capture and tear at targets in either surprise attacks from beneath the ground or in attacks that are based to entangle or overwhelm the target. Concentrations included in this style are [Plant Body], [Stealth], and [Perception].[/quote]

[b]Entangle[/b]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver 
This is an easy taijutsu to perform, using its numerous vines, the plant demon will attempt to use one or more of its vines to lash out and attempt to entangle enemies in range.

[b]Unseen Approach[/b]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline 
The creatures, due to its plant nature, is effectively able to "swim" underground using it's raw strength (max speed stat) to move about, through rock and dirt, creating small tunnels after itself as it moves around.

[b]Silent Approach[/b]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
A fundamental skill in a predator's repertoire, the user has learned to move at a walking pace without their movements making any discernible sounds. Even in thick foliage they are able to identify and navigate around fragile twigs and dry leaves and step on vegetation in a way as to not make a sound.

[Seamless Skill]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
A skill utilized by those on the path to mastery over the control of the body, users of Seamless Skill are actively able to transition efficiently between offensive and defensive actions during combat. By transitioning so seamlessly, the user is able to save a marginal amount of energy while attacking.

[b]Toss[/b]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver 
A simple technique which can be used with an object or target, the plant grasp hold of a opponent or object and then proceed to launch the object/target with its full strength into the air or at a specific location.

[b]Unsteady Ground[/b]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver 
The creature will stand straight up, then the large vine will slam it's body to the ground and causes a minor, localized earthquake. For opponents with a [Strength] less then the plant's [Strength] will find it hard to keep their footing. The quake reaches out in a diameter equal to the creature's strength up to 20 meters in normal form and up to 50 meters in its transformed state (due to the plants size increase).

[b]Surrounded[/b]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver 
An ambush technique that is used by the plant creature as it surrounds an opponent underground then launches an assault with the majority of its supplementary vines that burst from the ground all around the designated target in an attempt to bind then shred the target if caught.

[b]Z Shake[/b]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The plant creature is able to immediate change the direction and movement speed of the different portion of its body when striking the plant is able to 'shake' around attacks by changing the direction of their attack or dodge mid movement to compensate for the opponent's strike.

[b]Get Hooked[/b]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
A simple technique that utilizes the main vine of the plant's body to attempt and attack the foundation of its opponent while they are occupied dealing with attacks from the larger main vine the creature then utilizes one or more of its supplementary vines to attempt and strike/bind an opponent with an attack from the side.

[b]Fighting Blind[/b]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The plant creature will strike the ground with the main vine with great force, dragging it in a line. This will fling a cloud of dirt, rock and dust up into their opponent’s eyes as if the user had thrown it. This enables the plant to then immediate launch a follow up strike at either a blinded opponent or an opponent that is quite predictably dodging the debris.

[b]Wave of the Vine[/b]
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
A defensive strike designed to ward against ranged attacks. By raising its main vine high and sweeping it downwards the action creates a powerful wall of wind that deflects most incoming attacks as if it was deflected by 1/2 of his [Strength]. The “wall” of air is directly in front of plant and only as tall as they are, leaving its sides and back still undefended.

[b]Entangle the Attack[/b]
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Utilizing the creatures speed and agility the plant will meet an on coming straight line attack from an opponent by forming their body into a coil that allows the attack to pass through the empty space in the middle of the coil before the plant then attempts to bind around the limb or weapon used in the attack.

[b]Sensing Vibrations[/b]
A-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
The plant is very adept with sensing vibrations through the earth and air allowing for him to be able to pick up on the general direction of movement within a 80 meter radius of itself, even in the absence of any sound. Bring able to precisely do so at a range of up to 40 meters. 

[b]King of this Land[/b]
A-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The plant will lift the upper portion of its vine into the air in a type of defensive or warning posture. This stance concentrates a lot of the plant's power and agility into its slender body, enabling the creature to dash short distances (5m max) at maximum speed without acceleration time after a moment’s preparation. 

[b]Tornado of the Thorns[/b]
S-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
By spinning rapidly like a top the plant extends its supplementary vines outward creating a vortex of vines around itself and outside the vines a vacuum forms.  This vacuum creates a suction large enough to pull everything in a radius equal to their [Strength]/5 in yards at their full strength. This suction is nearly instantaneous and can cause significant damage if living creatures are caught in the area, collapsing their lungs if their [Endurance] isn't higher than the adept's [Strength]. In addition, anything caught in this vacuum will be assaulted by the powerful thorns as well. This can last as long as the user has Endurance to keep it going or until disrupted.

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Genjutsu]Place Genjutsu in here[/spoiler]

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[center][b][big]History[/big][/b][/center]

The current history of the creature is rather short as it hasn't been alive for long or it might be more appropriate to state that its hadn't been created for to long. It was created through the combined efforts of a young Suna-nin, Saisuko Zao, a tenkujutsu user and one of the families from the Naegi clan as an experiment which was suppose to create a plant based companion for that branch of the clan in an attempt to strengthen them. The original spirit was a powerful spirit ranked as an A-rank spirit that was identified by the clan and later captured with the help of Zao whom then brought the spirit back in a temporary housing item to the clan. The carnivorous thorn vine was also a creation of the clan which had been breeding various carnivorous plant as they worked to strength their offensive plant based technique by using the seeds from this specific plant. Then using a special technique which was passed down by members of the Naegi clan whom had attempted to do the same thing many, many years ago though it was never successful completed then. But they relied on not only the skill of Zao as a tenkujutsu user but also his researching skills as he complied scroll after scroll on not only the ancient technique but possible flaws with the technique and possible solution to those problems. After several months of research and trial and error Zao and the clan attempted to fuse the spirit and the carnivorous vine together using the experimental technique.

To their surprise the fusion of the two separate creatures, which was similar to a permanent possession style of tenkujutsu, actually worked. Though when it did the creature created was a powerful thorny vine of a golden hue that had grown from its previous four meters to up to nearly fifteen meters in length and its thickness increased in accordance to its newly massive size. This sudden growth allowed for the creature to obtain the strength to break free from its shackles and  binds which had been placed upon it causing it to lash out and injury many of the nearby clansmen and escape through burrowing into the ground. Though it was tracked down by Zao and his sensory techniques and later in a battle defeated by the young man and bound through the use of his personal binding Tenkujutsu more or less forcing the vine into becoming a loyal companion of the former Suna jounin.

Afterwards the groups decided that it would be best to be more caution and utilize weaker demons to judge the effects of the technique more closely upon the carnivorous plants and their merged spirits. Also, Zao would pass on a variation of his binding technique as well that was more suited for use by the clan along with working with some of the Tenkujutsu users of the clan to help modify it even further so that in the future they would not need his assistance.

After its master was sealed away by the Demon Hegemon, the plant had its violent tendencies fully released by the Demon and its body corrupted by the spirit's dark chakra, transforming the simple looking thorn vine into a truly monstrous plant creature with some resemblance to the of a Venus flytrap with multiple mouths and vines to devour its prey...
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[b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=2056587/]Zao[/url]
[b]Owner:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8118184/1/]Saisuko Zao [/url]
[b]Stat Trainings:[/b] 0/25
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Toge Revamp

Post by TheLacarix » Sat Jun 20, 2020 6:02 pm

We don't do averages anymore, example > (strength+Endurance)/2 all those will need fixing up.
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Toge Revamp

Post by Zao » Sun Jun 21, 2020 12:49 am

Fixed
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Post by TheLacarix » Sun Jun 28, 2020 7:23 am

Plant Style • Miracle Grow < Even to just activate the transformation is probably at least D-rank, normally transformations are C-rank but as it’s an ability it’s likely fine.


[Plant Style • Thorn Daggers] < Likely 3 posts.

[Plant Style • Growing Anew] & [Plant Style • Thorn Shuriken] < I think you should look at the regen table and make it part of the ability, for anything that ‘regrows’ as part of his body.
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Post by Zao » Sun Jun 28, 2020 11:26 am

- Swapped out the Miracle Grow with the Growing Anew, gaining one extra point.
- Lowered Daggers to three posts.
- Added regeneration to the spirit's ability
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Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

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Post by Kabu » Mon Jun 29, 2020 11:22 pm

I feel like the summon and zao being able to mentally communicate should be expressed through a tech of some kind.
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Post by Zao » Tue Jun 30, 2020 12:42 am

It's because of the sealing/binding technique used by Zao on the spirit pet that he can.
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Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

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Post by Gilak » Tue Jun 30, 2020 6:24 pm

im not finding the Sealing/Binding technique you are referring to for the telepathic link
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Post by Zao » Tue Jun 30, 2020 6:44 pm

Sorry, meant Zao's second ability.
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The second unique ability of the Demon Hegemon who has taken over the Suna Bannin's body. Using his demonic chakra, the demon is able to take over the bodies of others by directly connecting this life like chakra to heart and its body right after death, normally. When used on a living target the target can resist this claim if their [Control] or [Strength] is equal to or greater than the Hegemon's [Control]. This demonic chakra transforms the body of the target into that of a demon that holds some resemblance to the original heart's owner, which is then merged with the Hemegon's shadow world becoming one of his eternal slaves.

The armored like demons give off the same dark purple chakra of the Demon Hegemon. Their concentrations, abilities, jutsu, stats and anything else that was a part of their original body is retained by them in this demonic rebirth with the exception of their former free will. (Follows the body snatching rules, allowing the slaves to only keep one ability slot from their previous life and being limitedto the companion stat cap. )

The demonic chakra can be used to even corrupt the chakra of other spirits or lesser creatures (pets), transforming them into demonic spirits or demonic pets in turn causing quantitative alterations their physical bodies on a larger scope than those the demon slaves undergo upon their rebirth. They are then bound to the user and his shadow realm, becoming mere pets of the Hegemon to unleash upon his foes. Spirits and pets can resist this claim if their [Control] or [Strength] is equal to or greater than the Hegemon's [Control].

These Demon slaves, spirits, and pets are able to share a hive style mind with the Hegemon, the demon's mind and consciousness extending throughout the various creatures, and as a result, each of their senses can be linked as needed with his own and each other, allowing the demons to perceive the sensory input of each others telepathically. The user is also able to speak through his retainers or slaves, if he desires.
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Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

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Post by Gilak » Tue Jun 30, 2020 6:47 pm

1/2 on this summon
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Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
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