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Change: Adding his new ability, adding a spec stat, purchasing +45 spec stats, removing Katon and Raiton, and removing a few ninjutsu that are no longer relevant to his character, adding some concs (will do jutsu later)
Payment:
Removing 12 D-ranks: +24 points
Removing 7 C-ranks: +21 points
Buying 49 spec stats: -147 points
Please give 10 points Lac for making my Fuuinjutsu thingy for me
New point total should be: 344/712
Only posting the code for his second post cause nothing in the first is changing for this mod
Satori Revamp - Part 3
Satori Revamp - Part 3
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Sunakimi, Yozora | D-rank Ronin | Minor Country | #D2A846 | ▶ |
Senju, Yamabiko | Genin | Konohagakure no Sato | #9370D8 | ▶ |
Satori Revamp - Part 3
Chakra 45 | Strength 25 | Speed 45 |
Control 50 | Endurance 40 | Will 45 |
Gintsugi 50 |
Sandals Satori wears a pair of black, wooden sandals. They have two 3-inch tall slats on the bottom that run the full width of the sole and are space 2 inches apart. While they do not appear unordinary, they have been chakra treated to the hardness and durability of steel. |
Sentofuuinjutsu • Gintsugi [Sage Seal • Silver Joinery] The unsealing of the Enchougenma had a detrimental effect on Satori's body. Small fragment's of the beasts chakra were left imbedded in Satori's chakra circulatory system, disrupting the flow of chakra between his tenketsu and preventing him from using any elemental ninjutsu. This technique is Satori's solution to this problem: by blending principals of Fuuinjutsu, Tenkujutsu, and Senjutsu, Satori devised a way to repair his chakra circulatory system. First, a Fuuinjutsu on Satori's chest passively pulls in Senjutsu chakra from the surrounding area and redirects it into his chakra circulatory system. This Senjutsu chakra is used to reflow his chakra circulation, connecting his tenketsu to the Enchougenma fragments that remain in his body- effectively making these fragments into new tenketsu, transforming them from an obstruction of his chakra circulation into an integral part of it. Incorporating the fragments into his chakra circulation allowed Satori to once again use Shiton [Salt Release], his primary elemental release as the Enchougenma Jinchuuriki. It also allows him to use the extensions Gekkōton [Moonlight Release] and Shimoton [Frost Release]. However, this solution is not perfect and does imposes limitations on the way in which Satori is able to manipulate elemental chakra. Satori is completely incapable of manipulating the 5 basic chakra natures. While he is able to take on additional elemental releases, his inability to use basic chakra natures does not free him from the requirements of said style. Example: in order to use Jikiton, Satori must still take on the Raiton concentration despite being unable to use Raiton Ninjutsu. Senninka • Tsuki no Usagi [Sage Mode Transformation • Moon Rabbit] In addition to repairing his chakra circulatory system, Satori is able open the seal on his chest to increase the flow of Senjutsu chakra in order to facilitate a Sage Mode transformation. While in Sage Mode, the Fuuinjutsu seal on Satori's chest stretches out across his body in thin lines. These lines vent off excessive Senjutsu chakra that the Gintsugi seal pulls into his body, making it appear as though Satori's body has formed cracks. The chakra vented is a pale blue-grey. He grows 6 inches in height and gains slightly elongated limbs, exaggerating his already lanky appearance. His pupils disappear into his irises, which take on the same pale-blue grey color of his Senjutsu chakra.
Satori is able to utilize Shiton, a particulate elemental release that allows him to create and manipulate Salt. Shiton has a passive draining effect, lowering the endurance stat of anyone who is struck by a Shiton technique based on the strength of the jutsu used.
Satori is able to utilize Gekkōton, an elemental release that allows him to create and manipulate Moonlight. Moonlight is a chakra substance which is liquid-like in its behavior. It's a soft, translucent gray-blue in color and casts a soft white light. Gekkōton has a passive radiance effect, which causes it to burst into beams of light in all directions upon impact, with a speed and strength equal to the strength of the jutsu. Shimoton [Frost Release] Satori is able to utilize Shimoton, a particulate elemental release that allows him to create and manipulate Frost. Frost is comprised of small particles of ice. Shimoton has a passive biting effect, which causes frostbite on those who are struck by it. The severity is dependent on the strength of the jutsu.
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Fuuinjutsu [Storage and Force] Satori is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy. Fuuinjutsu [Charge and Augment] Satori able to utilize Charge & Augment Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Charge & Augment Classification. Charge Fuuinjutsu are used to create jutsu-like effects using seals. Augment Fuuinjutsu are used to enhance or limit the power of whatever they are placed on. Jikiton [Magnetism Release] Satori is able to utilize Jikiton, an advanced form of Raiton, and can make and use any archived jutsu that require the Jikiton affinity. Jikiton has a magnetizing effect. Jikiton makes use of electrical current to magnetize anything they target with their techniques, allowing them to cause things to be at the whim of their jutsu. Jikiton is extremely proficient at disabling and disarming, taking control of the battlefield and the opponent. |
Genjutsu [Sight Initiation] This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu. Genjutsu [Sound Initiation] This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu. Genjutsu [Scent Initiation] This user has learn to use smells to intiate genjutsu. Allowing them to utilize and produce various scents to capture their targets in genjutsu. Genjutsu [Sensor Initiation] This user has learned to use their chakra's presence to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to initiate genjutsu in people who notice them with sensory techniques. Genjutsu [Warp] This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target. Genjutsu [Status] This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target. Genjutsu [Illusion of Force] This user has learned to add a physical component when using genjutsu, allowing them to create the sensation of pulling, pushing, or evoking some force against their target. |
Tenkujutsu [Spirit Style] The users of this style have a strong affinity towards spirits, and are able to utilize certain chakra techniques based off of spirits. Those with the affinity have a Maroon color tint to their chakra when using these techniques. |
Shiton NinjutsuShow Gekkōton NinjutsuShow Shimiton NinjutsuShow Jikiton NinjutsuShow |
FuuinjutsuShow Audio Seal D-rank Storage Fuuinjutsu A seal used for holding a specialized audio recording device. When the seal is unlocked via channeling, the recording device inside of it activates while remaining inside the seal, allowing Satori to secretly record a conversation or event. Minor Seal Destruction D-rank Removal Fuuinjutsu By channeling chakra and touching his hand to a seal, Satori is able to destroy a D-rank or below fuuinjutsu and render it useless. SenjutsuShow TenkujutsuShow |
Genjutsu • Sight InitiationShow Genjutsu • SoundShow Genjutsu • Scent InitiationShow Genjutsu • SensorShow |
Sunakimi, Yozora | D-rank Ronin | Minor Country | #D2A846 | ▶ |
Senju, Yamabiko | Genin | Konohagakure no Sato | #9370D8 | ▶ |
Satori Revamp - Part 3
Gekkōton [Moonlight Release] <-Some hubbub about this being Hiton which I...don't really see. Be aware you won't be able to manipulate the light this gives off, only the chakra liquid substance itself which is what some seem worried about.
Shimoton [Frost Release] <-People worry this is too close to Aisu and how it is rn I'm inclined to agree it should be a Hyouton extension. My suggestion is change the entire release to actual Ice release, Suiton extension. Have it generate and produce ice with no 'cold'/'chilling'/'frostbite' to it and give it the passive of Shattering, each time a jutsu ends/is destroyed the Ice 'explodes' into shards with 1/2 the Strength of the original technique.
Shimoton [Frost Release] <-People worry this is too close to Aisu and how it is rn I'm inclined to agree it should be a Hyouton extension. My suggestion is change the entire release to actual Ice release, Suiton extension. Have it generate and produce ice with no 'cold'/'chilling'/'frostbite' to it and give it the passive of Shattering, each time a jutsu ends/is destroyed the Ice 'explodes' into shards with 1/2 the Strength of the original technique.
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Name | Village | Rank | Team |
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b] | Iwa | Tsuchikage | Team 18 Jousai |
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b] | Iwa | Bannin | Jousai |
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b] | Iwa | Genin | Team 7 |
Ashura [color=coral][b] | Suna | Genin | |
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b] | Kiri - MN | D-Rank | |
Yamato [color=#C71585][b] | Kiri | A-Rank |
Satori Revamp - Part 3
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Name | Village | Rank | Team |
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b] | Iwa | Tsuchikage | Team 18 Jousai |
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b] | Iwa | Bannin | Jousai |
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b] | Iwa | Genin | Team 7 |
Ashura [color=coral][b] | Suna | Genin | |
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b] | Kiri - MN | D-Rank | |
Yamato [color=#C71585][b] | Kiri | A-Rank |