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For Shi

Post by Zao » Mon Jun 29, 2020 9:16 am

Application: Shi

Change:

- Appearance and picture updates for puppet body
- Stats revamped for basic A-rank companion for revamp. (120)
- Edited ability.
- Moving his puppet body from Zao's equipment to his own section. Adding two new mechanisms with unused mechanism slots, Booster and Elemental Blaster. Edited Elemental shoulder Cannon's wording some too.

- Added a little in personality and history.
- Removed all Raiton jutsu.

5 D - 10 points
5 C - 15 points
3 B - 15 points
2 A - 14 points
1 S - 10 points

Total = 64 point

- Buying 21 stats for 63 jutsu points and updating puppet stats to reflect additional stats bought. Leaving 1 point left over.



Payment: N/a

ShiShow
Shi

[The Storm Dragon]




General Information
Type: Storm Dragon Spirit
Gender: Male
Age: 354
Appearance:
  • Face/head: The large dragon snake has a very snake like head, mainly a crimson color in its scales with black stripping across its head, a set of slit like orange eyes can be found on either side of the large four meter head. Growing from the intersection of the head and body of the flying serpent are long golden feathers that are between three and four meters in length.
    • Body: The body contained the same color pattern for the most part as the head, crimson with black stripping and spot, the scales are more akin to armor plates instead of smaller interlocking scales. The under side of the creature differing from the rest of the body being a off white hue. About five meters behind the head are a pair of large wings with a wing span of around twenty meters sporting long golden feathers. About five meters behind that set of winds is another pair of matching wings. Unlike a traditional snake, the dragon snake has two sets of limbs that align with the positioning of the wings on its back that are like four claws hands or feet depending on how you look at it with them being about five meters and the clawed hands stretching about a meter across. The rest of the body tappers down over the last ten meters to a spiky tail that takes up the last three meters of the flying serpents tail.
      • Notable Features:Flying snake, two sets of golden wings with long golden feathers, spiked tip tail.
      Personality:
      • General: Despite the spirit's time being sealed away for such a extended period of time, Shi could be said to have a to lighthearted and good spirited, which had been the opposite of his hardened brother. One to make jokes and act a bit younger then his true age, sometime more comparable to a teenage than the three and a half century old self. Even after being placed within a puppet body by his new master, Zao, the spirit remains the same. But still harbors internal hatred for human because of the actions of the people of Juu who sealed it away, having worked past his brother being sealed into a weapon because at least he wasn't killed. It has taken a bit of time to adjust to his new master but he's growing to especially respect the young man as a surprisingly remarkable warrior and protector of his friends and village. Seeing many of the same qualities of himself in the man who he believes that he could in the future regard as a close friend, as the man reminds him of how his brother treated him. Despite not being native to Wind Country Shi has already started to love the land almost as much as his own home, this coming from how his master treats him not as a spirit or weapon but as a friend and companion.
        • Hopes/Dreams: Hopes to be reunited with his brother in the future as promised by his new master once their services are no longer needed.
          • Fears: Being imprisoned like before when the mysterious men from Juu sealed it away.
            • Combat Mentality:Using its natural ability to fly, the spirit will use its elemental ninjutsu at mid-to-long range to combat most foes.
            Battle Information Rank: A
            Stats 141/200
            • Chakra Pool: 45
            • Endurance: 10
            • Control: 26
            • Strength: 10
            • Speed: 10
            • Will Power: 40
            Equipment:
            Puppet Body - Code Name:JuukiShow
            General Info
            Description: The current puppet has a somewhat humanoid shape to its large frame, being two and a half meters tall and just over a meter wide at the shoulders. Created from chakra tempered metal with thick features that are designed to deal with the puppet's heavy weight in preparation for holding numerous weapons giving it a more mechanical armor look than the traditional puppet design. Developed to be a mid-to-long ranged combat puppet body combining physical and elemental attacks. Puppet has four power looking mechanical arms and two think legs.

            Rank: B
            Puppet Stats: 59
            • Durability: 10
            • Mobility: 10
            • Strength: 19
            • Deftness: 20
            Sealed Spirit: Shi - The Storm Dragon
            Joruri Stats: 141/200
            • Durability: 11
            • Mobility: 25
            • Strength: 10
            • Deftness: 50
            • Chakra Pool: 45
            Total Mechanisms: 14
            Mechanisms in Use: [12/14]
            Tri Kunai Launcher (1 Mechanisms)Show
            Description: The right shoulder acts as the base for a three part kunai launder. Each part of the launcher is made up of five "barrels" connected in a circle with the parts forming a triangle before joining together the upon the lower back is a large circular mechanism competes the launcher storingthe launchers anmo as it feeds up to tge launcher. Inside the circular mechanism is where the additional kunai are stored and loaded into the launchers. Each of the three parts are capable of launching a volley of five kunai up to twice per post, taking half a post to reload for each of the three parts of the kunai launcher. Holds a total of a 120 kunai in total. Capable of firing its projectiles at a speed and strength equal to the puppet's [Deftness].
            Senbon Blaster (2 Mechanisms)Show
            Description: A senbon launcher capable of launching a blast of senbon creating a small cloud of the steel needles. Attached to the lower portion of the lower left arm, the launcher operates in a cylinder style manner rotating through 'ammo pods' that contain twenty senbon within each. The launcher sprays forth all twenty of the senbon found within the pod in one blast. Capable of firing its projectiles at a speed and strength equal to the puppet's [Deftness]. After firing the cylinder rotates feeding a new pod into the firing mechanisms. Currently the weapon cylinder holds thirteen of the senbon 'ammo pods'.
            Wings (1 Mechanism)Show
            Description: A Set of two meter long and one meter wide wings that are affixed on either side of the upper back, extending up past the shoulders of the puppet that allow for the puppet to fly at a speed equal to the [Deftness] stat of the puppet, up a maximum of the puppet's [Mobility] stat.
            Elemental Shoulder Cannons (3 Mechanism)Show
            Description: A trio of side by side, shoulder mounted cannons that consists of two parts, the cannon portion and a turbine portion. The turbine in each is able to be activated by the spirit instilling the correct elemental chakra into the turbine which will then rapid spin building up a charge of the respected element concentration the spirit possesses. Once the charge is built up the cannon acts as a means to direct the built up elemental blast by releasing it in a forward blast. That power of the attack coming from the stats of the puppet, able to be released with a speed and strength equal to the [Deftness] of the puppet. The size of the blast having a diameter equal to [Deftness /3] and a range of [Deftness x2] in meters.
            Each cannon can only be fired once per post then incurs a one post cool down period between uses. For each cannon being fired past one simultaneously the launcher is treated as having [-5] Deftness per additional cannon.The cannon's have the ability to move in order to track target's independent of the body or the other cannons and when not in used that are able to be retracted back on the left shoulder blade.
            Spirit Core (1 Mechanism)Show
            Description: A heart sized core contained the sealed spirit Shi, this core is housed within the chest cavity of the puppet and has a durability equal to the [Durability] stat of the spirit sealed within it. This turns the puppet into a Joruri allowing the spirit to fully control the puppet as though it was its own body based on the Jouri's new stats.
            Elemental Blaster (3 Mechanism)Show



            A one meter long, one handed elemental hand cannon that hangs from a holster on the right hip. The blaster cannon consists of two parts, the cannon portion and a turbine portion with an elemental storm crystal Zao discovered while adventuring in the spirit realms. The turbine in each is able to be activated by the spirit instilling elemental chakra into the turbine which will then rapid spin building up a charge of the respected element concentration the spirit possesses. Once the charge is built up the cannon acts as a means to direct the built up elemental blast by releasing it in a forward blast.

            That cannon released a large wave attack at a shorter range than the other cannons. Able to be released the blast wave with a speed and strength equal to the [Deftness] of the puppet. The size of the blast having a diameter equal to [Deftness] and a range of [Deftness] in meters. Each blast of the cannon incurs a three post cool down period between uses. While being used with storm related Ninjutsu the techniques recieve a passive [+10] Deftness boost to the blast wave released.
            Booster (1 Mechanism)Show
            Description: A rudimentary engine is located in the back of the shoulders. When activated, the armor on the back of each shoulder opens up like a revealing nozzles which then blast a short duration jet of air. When used in conjunction with a booster on the opposite side of the body, the user is able to create lift allowing for the puppet to fly a Speed equal [Deftness] but it cannot exceed the user's Mobility stat. Or used individually to create a blast of air at [Deftness] speed and strength that can be used offensively against opponents or defensively to thrust the puppet in a single directly at a speed equal to the puppet's [Deftness] for a number of meters equal to the [Deftness] of the puppet body. These jets can be maintained for up to ten posts with a matching cool down period for the number of posts used, when used one at a time each use causes a one post cool down for that booster.
            Fuuin Inscribed on Puppet:
            • [Fuuinjutsu • Strength of Steel] - Located on puppet's upper back between its wings.
            • [Tsukimogami: Living Puppet] - On the spirit core located inside the puppet, containing the spirit.
            Tsukimogami Sealed into Puppet:

            Elemental Affinities: Raiton
            Abilities and Concentrations
            Abilities
            Ranton:
            Ranton [Storm Release] is a unique elemental affinity available to the storm dragon spirit. By mixing it's natural affinities for Raiton [Lightning Release] and Suiton [Water Release] the spirit is able to create a liquid-like plasma called storm.
            Passive (Splashing)Show
            Ranton has a splashing nature, which causes it to break into ribbons on impact, and distribute over an area. Ranton splashes on impact, and breaks into X number of ribbons with X strength, where X is equal to 1/2 the [Control] of the jutsu (rounded up) and distributes over an area of Y meters, where Y is equal to 1/4th the [Control] of the jutsu (rounded up). These ribbons retain the effect of their original jutsu, so a Ranton jutsu used to pierce would create ribbons that stab and pierce anything they strike, while a Ranton jutsu that is wrap would create ribbons that wrap. Like Raiton, Ranton jutsu are electrical, and cause nerve damage on contact base on the ninjutsu requirement for the jutsu, seen below:
            • 1-14 Control Requirement: Hair stands up.
            • 15-24 [Control] Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
            • 25-34 [Control] Requirement: Loss of Sensation.
            • 35+ [Control] Requirement: Localized Paralysis.

            Concentrations
            Ninjutsu[Raiton, Fuuton, Katon, Suiton, Ability Channeling]
            Taijutsu[Perception]
            Genjutsu[Place them here]

            Jutsu
            NinjutsuShow
            Place Ninjutsu in here
            TaijutsuShow
            Place Taijutsu in here
            GenjutsuShow
            Place Genjutsu in here

            History
            A tale of imprisonmentShow
            As a young spirit the flying serpent was actually part of a small family that resided within the dragon realm, the family being a result of the breeding of a lightning serpent and a lightning dragon. The flying dragon serpent being the result of that interbreeding of different species. Shi had many siblings when he was born, though he was only close to one his brother of the same age named Shinji, the pair would go out and explore and hunt within the Dragon realm together but neither would expect that only after being alive a decade or so to be capture by mysterious humans and brought back to the human realm. These human belongs to a powerful society within the country of Juu who's spirit user's sealed the two powerful lightning serpents into one of their defense mechanisms. A weapon of sorts to deal with invades that was placed around the powerful wall the country had built.

            While sealed within that trap the two brothers were unable to do much aside from practice their natural ability of having a high insight into raiton. Over the course of over three centuries the pair were able to push their skills in Raiton and Fuuton to such a level that they were then able to combine them creating a form of ninjutsu known as Denjiton. His brother Shinji was the first to accomplish this magnificent feat and would afterwards teach Shi how to also combine the two elements and after ten years of perfecting the fusion process would also learn how to wield this Disruptive style of chakra. Less than a year ago from the present day, someone who was exploring an underground passage within the deserts of Wind country would stumble upon the mechanism which held not only the two dragon serpents but over a hundred different spirits.

            Unknowingly, the group of explorers would unleash these spirits and suffer horrible deaths in the process as they were quickly overrun by the sheer number of spirits which had been released because of their curiosity. This was an event that would shake the two neighboring village's of Suna and Konoha as the numerous spirits spread out and went on a rampage of sorts that would effect the lands of the two villages who were forced to combine their strengths to defeat and seal away the wild spirits. In the confusion created by their release the two brothers were separated and by the time Shi was able to locate his brother the spirit was embroiled in a battle with several Suna shinobi. While at the same time he was discovered by a group of Suna and Konoha nin who engaged him, forcing him into retreat as he witnessed his brother being sealed away by a child like shinobi (Xiao Li).

            It was on that day that he would swear to avenge his brother by either killing that shinobi who had sealed him away or freeing him from the imprisonment that had once more been bestowed upon them. The spirit would search for nearly a years worth of time before he would once more find the shinobi in what he thought was a venerable state as he traveled with a white haired man, the two shinobi on their return trip from the Fur country festival. Rage over take it the fly serpent would attack with all its might but in the end was severely wounded to the point it thought death was the only things that awaited it, but in the end the white haired man (Zao) would bind the creature with a powerful sealing technique before then sealing the creature into a puppet body creating a puppet bodied Joruri out of the spirit.

            In a turn of events the creature's master was fate to a devious trap laid by the Demon Hegemon of the Demon realm resulting in the Suna nin's body becoming the new vessel for the diabolical spirit and his goals towards humanity. This couldn't have pleased the storm dragon more as he quickly submitted himself as a retainer of the Demon King in order to help exact his own revenge and find his brother. Patiently awaiting the time till the storm descends upon the human realm...

            Username: Zao
            Owner: Zao
            Stat Trainings: (0/25)

            Code: Select all

            
            [center][big][big][b]Shi
            
            [The Storm Dragon][/b][/big][/big]
            
            [img]https://i.postimg.cc/qvpK1cs3/9ced23f0d8d6ffaf13c6201f4e2a9343.jpg[/img]
            
            [b][big]General Information[/big][/b][/center]
            [b]Type:[/b] Storm Dragon Spirit
            [b]Gender:[/b] Male
            [b]Age:[/b] 354
            [b]Appearance:[/b]
            [list][*][i]Face/head:[/i] The large dragon snake has a very snake like head, mainly a crimson color in its scales with black stripping across its head, a set of slit like orange eyes can be found on either side of the large four meter head. Growing from the intersection of the head and body of the flying serpent are long golden feathers that are between three and four meters in length.
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Body:[/i] The body contained the same color pattern for the most part as the head, crimson with black stripping and spot, the scales are more akin to armor plates instead of smaller interlocking scales. The under side of the creature differing from the rest of the body being a off white hue. About five meters behind the head are a pair of large wings with a wing span of around twenty meters sporting long golden feathers. About five meters behind that set of winds is another pair of matching wings. Unlike a traditional snake, the dragon snake has two sets of limbs that align with the positioning of the wings on its back that are like four claws hands or feet depending on how you look at it with them being about five meters and the clawed hands stretching about a meter across. The rest of the body tappers down over the last ten meters to a spiky tail that takes up the last three meters of the flying serpents tail. 
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Notable Features:[/i]Flying snake, two sets of golden wings with long golden feathers, spiked tip tail.[/list]
            [b]Personality:[/b]
            [list][*][i]General:[/i] Despite the spirit's time being sealed away for such a extended period of time, Shi could be said to have a to lighthearted and good spirited, which had been the opposite of his hardened brother. One to make jokes and act a bit younger then his true age, sometime more comparable to a teenage than the three and a half century old self. Even after being placed within a puppet body by his new master, Zao, the spirit remains the same. But still harbors internal hatred for human because of the actions of the people of Juu who sealed it away, having worked past his brother being sealed into a weapon because at least he wasn't killed. It has taken a bit of time to adjust to his new master but he's growing to especially respect the young man as a surprisingly remarkable warrior and protector of his friends and village. Seeing many of the same qualities of himself in the man who he believes that he could in the future regard as a close friend, as the man reminds him of how his brother treated him. Despite not being native to Wind Country Shi has already started to love the land almost as much as his own home, this coming from how his master treats him not as a spirit or weapon but as a friend and companion.
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Hopes/Dreams:[/i] Hopes to be reunited with his brother in the future as promised by his new master once their services are no longer needed.
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Fears:[/i] Being imprisoned like before when the mysterious men from Juu sealed it away.
            [list][/list]
            [*][i]Combat Mentality:[/i]Using its natural ability to fly, the spirit will use its elemental ninjutsu at mid-to-long range to combat most foes.[/list]
            
            [center][b][big]Battle Information[/big][/b][/center]
            [b]Rank:[/b] A
            [b]Stats[/b] 141/200
            [list]
            [*][b]Chakra Pool:[/b] 45
            [*][b]Endurance:[/b] 10
            [*][b]Control:[/b] 26
            [*][b]Strength:[/b] 10
            [*][b]Speed:[/b] 10
            [*][b]Will Power:[/b] 40
            [/list]
            [b]Equipment:[/b]
            [spoiler=Puppet Body - Code Name:Juuki]
            [big][center][b]General Info[/b][/center][/big]
            
            [center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/NfhHH16q/20200627-182249.jpg[/img][/center]
            
            [b]Description[/b]: The current puppet has a somewhat humanoid shape to its large frame, being two and a half meters tall and just over a meter wide at the shoulders. Created from chakra tempered metal with thick features that are designed to deal with the puppet's heavy weight in preparation for holding numerous weapons giving it a more mechanical armor look than the traditional puppet design. Developed to be a mid-to-long ranged combat puppet body combining physical and elemental attacks. Puppet has four power looking mechanical arms and two think legs. 
             
            [b]Rank[/b]: B
            [b]Puppet Stats[/b]: 59
            [list][*]Durability: 10
            [*]Mobility: 10
            [*]Strength: 19
            [*]Deftness: 20
            [/list]
            
            [b]Sealed Spirit:[/b] Shi - The Storm Dragon
            [b]Joruri Stats[/b]: 141/200
            [list][*]Durability: 11
            [*]Mobility: 25
            [*]Strength: 10
            [*]Deftness: 50
            [*]Chakra Pool: 45
            [/list]
            
            [b]Total Mechanisms[/b]: 14 
            [b]Mechanisms in Use[/b]: [12/14]
            [spoiler=Tri Kunai Launcher (1 Mechanisms)]
            [center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/zGnXjDnt/20181219_225715.jpg[/img][/center]
            [b]Description[/b]: The right shoulder acts as the base for a three part kunai launder. Each part of the launcher is made up of five "barrels" connected in a circle with the parts forming a triangle before joining together the upon the lower back is a large circular mechanism competes the launcher storingthe launchers anmo as it feeds up to tge launcher. Inside the circular mechanism is where the additional kunai are stored and loaded into the launchers. Each of the three parts are capable of launching a volley of five kunai up to twice per post, taking half a post to reload for each of the three parts of the kunai launcher. Holds a total of a 120 kunai in total. Capable of firing its projectiles at a speed and strength equal to the puppet's [Deftness].
            
            [/spoiler]
            [spoiler=Senbon Blaster (2 Mechanisms)]
            [center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/s2sf0FmV/20181221_132600.jpg[/img][/center]
            [b]Description[/b]: A senbon launcher capable of launching a blast of senbon creating a small cloud of the steel needles. Attached to the lower portion of the lower left arm, the launcher operates in a cylinder style manner rotating through 'ammo pods' that contain twenty senbon within each. The launcher sprays forth all twenty of the senbon found within the pod in one blast. Capable of firing its projectiles at a speed and strength equal to the puppet's [Deftness]. After firing the cylinder rotates feeding a new pod into the firing mechanisms. Currently the weapon cylinder holds thirteen of the senbon 'ammo pods'.
            [/spoiler]
            [spoiler=Wings (1 Mechanism)]
            [center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/HkGkX878/20181221_132456.jpg[/img][/center]
            [b]Description[/b]: A Set of two meter long and one meter wide wings that are affixed on either side of the upper back, extending up past the shoulders of the puppet that allow for the puppet to fly at a speed equal to the [Deftness] stat of the puppet, up a maximum of the puppet's [Mobility] stat.
            [/spoiler]
            [spoiler=Elemental Shoulder Cannons (3 Mechanism)]
            [center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/qq712ZGY/20190113-125450.jpg[/img][/center]
            [b]Description[/b]: A trio of side by side, shoulder mounted cannons that consists of two parts, the cannon portion and a turbine portion. The turbine in each is able to be activated by the spirit instilling the correct elemental chakra into the turbine which will then rapid spin building up a charge of the respected element concentration the spirit possesses. Once the charge is built up the cannon acts as a means to direct the built up elemental blast by releasing it in a forward blast. That power of the attack coming from the stats of the puppet, able to be released with a speed and strength equal to the [Deftness] of the puppet. The size of the blast having a diameter equal to [Deftness /3] and a range of [Deftness x2] in meters. 
            Each cannon can only be fired once per post then incurs a one post cool down period between uses. For each cannon being fired past one simultaneously the launcher is treated as having [-5] Deftness per additional cannon.The cannon's have the ability to move in order to track target's independent of the body or the other cannons and when not in used that are able to be retracted back on the left shoulder blade.
            [/spoiler]
            [Spoiler=Spirit Core (1 Mechanism)]
            [b]Description[/b]: A heart sized core contained the sealed spirit Shi, this core is housed within the chest cavity of the puppet and has a durability equal to the [Durability] stat of the spirit sealed within it. This turns the puppet into a Joruri allowing the spirit to fully control the puppet as though it was its own body based on the Jouri's new stats.
            [/spoiler]
            [spoiler=Elemental Blaster (3 Mechanism)] 
            [img]https://i.postimg.cc/dVgfrNVm/20200627-215449.jpg[/img]
            
            A one meter long, one handed elemental hand cannon that hangs from a holster on the right hip. The blaster cannon consists of two parts, the cannon portion and a turbine portion with an elemental storm crystal Zao discovered while adventuring in the spirit realms. The turbine in each is able to be activated by the spirit instilling elemental chakra into the turbine which will then rapid spin building up a charge of the respected element concentration the spirit possesses. Once the charge is built up the cannon acts as a means to direct the built up elemental blast by releasing it in a forward blast. 
            
            That cannon released a large wave attack at a shorter range than the other cannons. Able to be released  the blast wave with a speed and strength equal to the [Deftness] of the puppet. The size of the blast having a diameter equal to [Deftness] and a range of [Deftness] in meters. Each blast of the cannon incurs a three post cool down period between uses. While being used with storm related Ninjutsu the techniques recieve a passive [+10] Deftness boost to the blast wave released. 
            
            [/spoiler]
            
            [/spoiler]
            
            [spoiler=Booster (1 Mechanism)]
            
            [center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/d08VHY3K/20191007-223547.jpg[/img][/center]
            
            [b]Description[/b]: A rudimentary engine is located in the back of the shoulders. When activated, the armor on the back of each shoulder opens up like a revealing nozzles which then blast a short duration jet of air. When used in conjunction with a booster on the opposite side of the body, the user is able to create lift allowing for the puppet to fly a Speed equal [Deftness] but it cannot exceed the user's Mobility stat. Or used individually to create a blast of air at [Deftness] speed and strength that can be used offensively against opponents or defensively to thrust the puppet in a single directly at a speed equal to the puppet's [Deftness] for a number of meters equal to the [Deftness] of the puppet body. These jets can be maintained for up to ten posts with a matching cool down period for the number of posts used, when used one at a time each use causes a one post cool down for that booster.
            
            [/spoiler]
            
            [b]Fuuin Inscribed on Puppet[/b]: 
            [list][*][Fuuinjutsu • Strength of Steel] - Located on puppet's upper back between its wings.
            [*][Tsukimogami: Living Puppet] - On the spirit core located inside the puppet, containing the spirit.
            [*]
            [*]
            [/list]
            
            [b]Tsukimogami Sealed into Puppet[/b]: 
            [list][*]
            [*]
            [*]
            [*]
            
            [/list]
            [/spoiler]
            
            
            [b]Elemental Affinities:[/b] Raiton
            [hr]
            [center][b][big]Abilities and Concentrations[/big][/b][/center]
            [table=2, Abilities][b][quote=Ranton][color=#00B7C6][b]Ranton [Storm Release][/b][/color] is a unique elemental affinity available to the storm dragon spirit. By mixing it's natural affinities for [color=#fe0][b]Raiton [Lightning Release][/b][/color] and [color=#1E90FF][b]Suiton [Water Release][/b][/color] the spirit is able to create a liquid-like plasma called storm.
            [spoiler=Passive (Splashing)]Ranton has a [b]splashing[/b] nature, which causes it to break into ribbons on impact, and distribute over an area. Ranton splashes on impact, and breaks into X number of ribbons with X strength, where X is equal to 1/2 the [Control] of the jutsu (rounded up) and distributes over an area of Y meters, where Y is equal to 1/4th the [Control] of the jutsu (rounded up). These ribbons retain the effect of their original jutsu, so a Ranton jutsu used to pierce would create ribbons that stab and pierce anything they strike, while a Ranton jutsu that is wrap would create ribbons that wrap. Like Raiton, Ranton jutsu are electrical, and cause nerve damage on contact base on the ninjutsu requirement for the jutsu, seen below:[list][*]1-14 Control Requirement: Hair stands up.[*]15-24 [Control] Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.[*]25-34 [Control] Requirement: Loss of Sensation.[*]35+ [Control] Requirement: Localized Paralysis.[/list][/spoiler][/quote]
            [/b][c][/table]
            [table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][Raiton, Fuuton, Katon, Suiton, Ability Channeling][c]
            [b]Taijutsu[/b][c][Perception][c]
            [b]Genjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][/table]
            [hr]
            [center][b][big]Jutsu[/big][/b][/center]
            
            [spoiler=Ninjutsu]Place Ninjutsu in here[/spoiler]
            
            [spoiler=Taijutsu]Place Taijutsu in here[/spoiler]
            
            [spoiler=Genjutsu]Place Genjutsu in here[/spoiler]
            
            [hr]
            
            [center][b][big]History[/big][/b][/center]
            [spoiler=A tale of imprisonment]
            As a young spirit the flying serpent was actually part of a small family that resided within the dragon realm, the family being a result of the breeding of a lightning serpent and a lightning dragon. The flying dragon serpent being the result of that interbreeding of different species. Shi had many siblings when he was born, though he was only close to one his brother of the same age named Shinji, the pair would go out and explore and hunt within the Dragon realm together but neither would expect that only after being alive a decade or so to be capture by mysterious humans and brought back to the human realm. These human belongs to a powerful society within the country of Juu who's spirit user's sealed the two powerful lightning serpents into one of their defense mechanisms. A weapon of sorts to deal with invades that was placed around the powerful wall the country had built. 
            
            While sealed within that trap the two brothers were unable to do much aside from practice their natural ability of having a high insight into raiton. Over the course of over three centuries the pair were able to push their skills in Raiton and Fuuton to such a level that they were then able to combine them creating a form of ninjutsu known as Denjiton. His brother Shinji was the first to accomplish this magnificent feat and would afterwards teach Shi how to also combine the two elements and after ten years of perfecting the fusion process would also learn how to wield this Disruptive style of chakra. Less than a year ago from the present day, someone who was exploring an underground passage within the deserts of Wind country would stumble upon the mechanism which held not only the two dragon serpents but over a hundred different spirits. 
            
            Unknowingly, the group of explorers would unleash these spirits and suffer horrible deaths in the process as they were quickly overrun by the sheer number of spirits which had been released because of their curiosity. This was an event that would shake the two neighboring village's of Suna and Konoha as the numerous spirits spread out and went on a rampage of sorts that would effect the lands of the two villages who were forced to combine their strengths to defeat and seal away the wild spirits. In the confusion created by their release the two brothers were separated and by the time Shi was able to locate his brother the spirit was embroiled in a battle with several Suna shinobi. While at the same time he was discovered by a group of Suna and Konoha nin who engaged him, forcing him into retreat as he witnessed his brother being sealed away by a child like shinobi (Xiao Li). 
            
            It was on that day that he would swear to avenge his brother by either killing that shinobi who had sealed him away or freeing him from the imprisonment that had once more been bestowed upon them. The spirit would search for nearly a years worth of time before he would once more find the shinobi in what he thought was a venerable state as he traveled with a white haired man, the two shinobi on their return trip from the Fur country festival. Rage over take it the fly serpent would attack with all its might but in the end was severely wounded to the point it thought death was the only things that awaited it, but in the end the white haired man (Zao) would bind the creature with a powerful sealing technique before then sealing the creature into a puppet body creating a puppet bodied Joruri out of the spirit. 
            
            In a turn of events the creature's master was fate to a devious trap laid by the Demon Hegemon of the Demon realm resulting in the Suna nin's body becoming the new vessel for the diabolical spirit and his goals towards humanity.  This couldn't have pleased the storm dragon more as he quickly submitted himself as a retainer of the Demon King in order to help exact his own revenge and find his brother. Patiently awaiting the time till the storm descends upon the human realm...
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            Post by Niro » Mon Jun 29, 2020 11:35 am

            Which mechanisms are new?
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            Post by Zao » Mon Jun 29, 2020 4:37 pm

            The last two, Elemental Blaster and Booster ones are new. Also just edited the Elemental Shoulder Cannon's wording some too, it'll need to be looked over to.
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            Post by Niro » Tue Jun 30, 2020 11:31 am

            Shoulder Cannon range should be dropped to Deftnessx2 to stay at 3 mechs
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            Post by Zao » Tue Jun 30, 2020 12:07 pm

            Fixed
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            Interesting Puppet Body

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