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CharactersShow
Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
Graw


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Username: Kitsui
Points: 25/85
Companions: (1/1)
Perks: Signature Technique [Used], Heirloom
Stat Trainings: (13/50)
Nonki
"The faceless spy"

-Code name: Y


"If only you knew half the truth."

Fame

"I don't know who Hotaru is but there's this spy out there that's very, very dangerous. Very hush hush work."
-Kumogakure Ghost

"There was this kid named Yoho that helped me and my child get home, I will never forget what those ninjas did for me, and I would gladly return the favor."
-Lightning Country Citizen

Summon King Yautja
The Predator

Age: ?
Gender: ?
Cover: ?
Type: Assertive.
Rank:Special Jounin
Village:Kumogakure
Specialty:[Taijutsu]
Affinity:[Fuuton]
Squad: [N/A]
Ghost Theme:
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Thief Theme:
phpBB [video]
Stalker Theme:
phpBB [video]
Assassin Theme:
phpBB [video]
AliasShow
Sakuran Hotaru Yoho
Honor-bound Theme:
phpBB [video]
Undercover Theme:
phpBB [video]
Loser Theme:
phpBB [video]
SakuranShow
Age: 20
Gender: Female.
Cover: Samurai
Type: Fearless, dedicated & honor-bound
HotaruShow
Age: 16
Gender: Female.
Cover: Whatever is needed.
Type: Lone wolf, spy.
YohoShow
Age: 16
Gender: Male.
Cover: Unemployed.
Type: Laid back, passive, support.
"I am the invisible hand of Kumogakure."
General Information
Age:Gender:Height:Weight:Hair:Eyes:
16 Female. 5'4" 130 Lbs. Black. Blue-gray-greenish.
DescriptionShow
Tanned, short and lean. She is fit and clear of any scars, she is small busted and has a small waist. A cool feature Hotaru has, is that her eyes change color depending on the light, ranging from blue to green and sometimes grey. On her free time the woman has her hair rugged and hanging down, a small ponytail mimicking the samurai and braids hidden on the back of her hair. This is used to cover up her long hear, when tied up this way it reaches down to her shoulders, although otherwise it the back hair would reach down to the center of her back. During missions Hotaru braids her hair to cornrows to keep it shorter, so she can wear different wigs.
Clothing/AccessoriesShow
Quote:
Casual
Yoho wears a yellow jacket that's always open, a white t-shirt, underneath that she wears full body bandage. Sporting black shorts and black sandals. She carries a "Medpack" on the back of the belt and carries a black scarf around her neck.[/center]
Quote:
Official Under Oath

Her official outfit consist of a black mask, a white flak vest. Under the flak vest Yoho wears a black long sleeved shirt, with black shorts and leg warmers the ninjas outfit is almost complete. During her official time she wears some minor protections and a cloak. Also wears the "Official pouch"
Quote:
Mission When it counts
During mission she wears her armor, white large shirt with a blue streaks and insignia all over it. Her arms are covered in armor from the hands all the way up to her shoulders in black decorated armor, she wears finger-less gloves for comfort and puffy black pants, finishing of with her black shoes. Her chest armor is decorated and almost appear unisex thanks to her flat chest. Hidden inside the cloak the woman has hidden her "Senbon carrier"
Quote:
Assassin Failure is not an option
She wears a white long sleeved white hooded shirt with it's back end hanging, over it she wears various trinkets that create low sound when moving, otherwise they create no noise when stealthing. Over her left shoulder she has a golden ornamented pauldron, and over her waist she wears a sash with brilliant colors, she wears black pants and knee high brown boots, her arms are decked with metallic arm guards to hide her sling and hidden blade. She sports black finger-less gloves various belts to hold up her many pouches.
EquipmentShow
All time
Quote:
[Black Mask/Night Hood

Dual masks that together work as one, the one beneath is a black glass mask, works as a visor for sensor/doujutsu and various hud sensor jutsu. The glass is fragile and can easily be shattered. Above the black glass is the metal guard, the second mask which acts as the basic defense for the glass. The metal guard vibrates out the force during collision in order to protect the glass beneath. Fuuinjutsu for breathing on the mask, listening as well.
A Spies Best Friend:
  • 1x Hidden blade, the blade slides out 10 centimeters out of the users wrist with a simple flick of the wrist at the speed of 3. Located on her right hand (Arm Guard).
  • 1x [15m] Metal cord + 1x Grapple Hook, strapped and hidden by her left hand (Arm guard).
  • 1x Nun-Chucks [32cm wooden branch and 2.5 cm chain] placed above her rear pouch.
  • 1x Lockpick, designed to look like her belt buckle.
  • 1x Binoculars, 2x/8x zoom, assemble from belt trinkets.
  • 1x Small mirror, hidden in her collar.
  • 30x Caltrops, hidden on the heels of her boots.
Back:
Back
  • 1x Black tanto, which she has sheathed in an upside down sword holster that runs along the spine so the handle doesn't stick out. The blade is 30 cm.
Shoulder
  • 1x Silver bow 1 meter length, strapped over the shoulder.
Quiver
  • 10x Arrows in quiver, over shoulder.
  • 2x Flash Noted Arrow.
  • 2x Smoke Noted Arrow.
  • 1x Explosive Noted Arrow.
  • 1x[15m] Metal corded arrow.
Hidden inside her sleeves:
Left Sleeve
  • 2x Smoke Bombs.
  • 14x Black Senbon.
  • 1x Flash Note.
Right Sleeve
  • 3x Smoke Bombs.
  • 16x Black Senbon.
  • 1x Flash Note.
Cloak
Shadow Stalker:
A black hooded cloak which Yoho wears, there are multiple hidden pockets within the cloak. The pockets are located on the inside, where her waist begins
Hidden Left Pocket by her left hip 1
  • 2x Black gloves hidden inside the cloak.
  • 1x Kumogakure no Sato headplate.
Hidden Right Pocket by her right hip2
  • Realistic blonde wig, shoulder length. In a plastic zip bag to save space.
  • Realistic brunette wig, jawline length. In a plastic zip bag to save space.
  • Realistic white wig, spikey hair, 12 inches. In a plastic zip bag to save space.
Hidden Center Pocket 3
  • 8x Empty Scrolls. 2x4
  • 2x Pens.
  • 1x 100 Page diary.
  • 1x Red lipstick
  • 1x Beige lipstick
  • Realistic Make-Up Kit
Casual
Fake Medpack:
Lower Back Pouch.
  • 15x Black Senbon.
  • 2x Needles.
  • 1x Flash note.
  • 1x 20 yards needle thread.
  • 1x 10 foot gauze.
  • 2x Splint applications.
Official
Armor:
  • 2x Metal shoulder pauldron
  • 2x Metal forearm guards.
  • 1x Black metal chest and back plate, padded to create less sound.
  • 1x Black Hawk Mask.
Official Pouch:
Two Back Pouches.
  • 5x Smoke Bombs.
  • 15x Black Kunai
  • 15x Senbon.
  • 15x Shuriken.
PersonalityShow
Hotaru’s personality is mostly being quiet. This shinobi rarely talks and she only does so when she needs to. Sometimes people think that Hotaru can’t speak. When enraged the girl will see that the enemy should be punished for enraging her and she will not stop until she sees it through. But that only happens on rare occasions because the girl is very calm and collected. As a "perfect spy" should be, or at least that's what she considers herself.

During battles Hotaru tends to analyze her enemies, she usually doesn't waste her chakra on unnecessary attacks and will most likely just try to escape unless she has no choice. When fighting with a partner she tends to act a bit more protective and tries to get everyone out of the situation, although she keeps her back covered since she doesn't really trust anyone.

Hotaru will try to avoid any confrontation if its possible, unless she is bugged enough to be provoked, off duty to test the waters and if the mission demands it. She is a firm believer that the mission goes first and will do anything to succeed. Her life goals are to become the greatest and help hidden cloud succeeded in its plans. No matter what!
HistoryShow
Somewhere in the Lightning Country a baby was born. This young girl was given a name Nonki, Hotaru. Her mother fell ill when she gave birth to her and died a couple of hours later. The girl grew up without a mother and instead was raised by her father. When she grew up she had to spend a lot of time at her neighbor because her father had to work hard all the time. They did not even have enough to let kid roll in to the academy so her father started robbing people as their main source of payment but it did not take long time before he was arrested.

The only course of action the young child could take was to run away and hide. During her time alone she figured it would be safer to start pretending that she was a boy. She had heard by her father what people could do to young girls. So as a "boy" she started picking up where her father left off, she started pick pocketing random strangers, using her size to her advantage. It was here the young girl learned to be stealthy, using the shadow as her friend. In fact at the time it was her only friend, it was during this time that the young girl started crafting her alter ego "Mumei", she would start using it instead of her original name, and not use her last name "Nonki" since it didn't really mean anything to her anymore. It didn't take long before she had mastered the art of staying hidden although this confidence lead to her biggest mistake/fortune. One of the targets the young girl had picked was a well known ninja that was passing by, to her surprise she managed to pick pocket the famed ninja but as she was making her way back to her hideout the theif was stopped by the ninja she had mugged.

He introduced himself as Hayate and he told her that he could see the potential in the young girl. He would protect her under his wing and train her to become the best in her craft.. So for the last couple of years the girl's life took a turn for the better. She would soon start her training among the shinobi she had dreamed of becoming part of. Although because she spent most of her time outside of the academy as a child she never really mastered the art of ninjutsu, although she did get the hang of genjutsu. However, she focused more on training her hand to hand combat skills and mostly her "ninja" skills. Ergo, she has trained to perfect her stealth abilities and believes to be one of the greater ninjas out there. Hopefully soon she could also become the best spy out there as well. She felt that she never really fit in within the village walls and living alone wasn't really making this transition any better. Since she was already invisible once she took a step inside the village the young girl used her skills to become invisible. Within the academy, Hotaru would spy on most of her class mates. Hiding by the shadows, watching the kids play with others, picking up information for later use and from time to time "Yoho" would bump in to them, apologize and continue on her path. Stealing minor objects from them, then plant them on other student's lockers, wanting to see how they would react.

It didn't take long before Hayate enrolled "Yoho" into the chuunin exam with a random team, although being a loner in the heart the girl performed her best and did what was necessary to rank up. It was during this time that the girl used her partners to lure out her target and do what was necessary, it didn't take long for the girl to win and become a chuunin. Most only know little about this young ninja, which was perfect. As an observer the girl grew up wanting to be the ultimate spy, but that would mean that only a few people would know Hotaru's real personality, although what she feared most that in the end she wouldn't be able to keep her alter egos apart, which prompted her to start writing in a diary.
Kumogakure no Sato
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"You don't know me and you will never know who I truly am, but I am willing to die for you and for what you believe in. For every Kumogakure, nay Lightning country."
Battle Information
Combat StyleShow
Not really a fighter, but if "Yoho" had to fight she would use her stealthy fighting style to her advantage, hiding in the shadows and striking when you least expect it. A true ninja in her art.
Abilities: 1/3Show
Chakra Void:
This ability allows Hotaru to stay out of sensors ability to read their target as long as her control is equal or higher than theirs. This Ability is always active, which ends up drawing -2 Chakra Pool from the user.
--N/A-- --N/A--
ConcentrationsShow
Taijutsu 8/8Show
Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.

Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.

Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Stealth:
The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focusing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Projectile Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Projectile Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Corded Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Corded Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu 3/3Show
Sight Initiation:
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.
Sound Initiation:
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.
Scent Initiation:
This user has learn to use smells to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to utilize and produce various scents to capture their targets in genjutsu.
Chakra Pool:Endurance:Control:Strength:Speed:Will Power:
13 (15-2) 25 25 20 40 30
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CharactersShow
Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
Graw


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TaijutsuShow
D-RankC-RankB-RankA-RankS-Rank
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The Art of Hand to HandShow
Wushu
A close quarter combat created by Hotaru, using the mind more than the body. A style about staying in harmony and releasing short burst of strikes to over come your foes. A style more focuses on defending and attacking the targets weak points when they think they have their advantage. Using Hotaru's Taijutsu to overcome stronger foes by attacking weak spots like knees, groin, blocks and other moves to prove that brain wins over brawn.

Req: CQC, Deft hands, Perception, Acrobatics.

D-Rank
[Wushu • Know Your Enemy]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prereq: Medicine
Having extensive experience and knowledge in martial arts and the anatomy, both through first-hand experience and theory, the user has managed to obtain and maintain great overall knowledge of the human body and its workings. This knowledge allows them easily to identify and target weak points, such as the backs of joints, organs, nose, jaw, etc.

[Wushu • Know Your Limits]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Enemy, Subtle Movements.
Having extensive knowledge over the human body's limitations, the user has managed to achieve great skill in the art of analyzing how well their own or their opponent's bodies may respond to a given situation, in terms of body length, size, ability, speed, strength. With this technique, one would be aware of how an opponent could respond in battle, such as a situation where the user has the opponent in a choke hold and the opponent may bend their legs to kick back. Although the user must see the targets movement.

[Wushu • Know The First Step]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Enemy, Know Your Limits
Hotaru can use her natural Instinct to anticipate and react to attacks to literally kick attacks from the air, as her feet are precise enough to meet other people's punches or kicks as they fly. Using her feet, she aims kicks at her opponents hands or feet when they attack, aiming to attempt to throw the attacks off or stop them completely. This can be kept up as long as Hotaru can see the attacks coming, But is only able to be used effectively against someone with opponents that aren't too strong, as she is flexible and fast enough with her feet to keep up with most attack chains but too much power will eventually overcome her.

[Wushu • Double]
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
An easy maneuver where the user rotates their body, using their speed to swing their arms up and punch their opponent at great speed. The user is able to do this while standing still and while running. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.

[Wushu • Know How to Rebound; Kip up]
D-rank Maneuver Taijutsu
This is an easy technique that allows the user to dodge incoming attacks by lying down on the ground then jumping up. The user rolls back to the ball on the neck before pushing up with their core and arms in a half moon circle. If performed correctly the user should be pushed back up to a standing position in no time.

[Wushu • Maximize Kick]
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Limits
This is an easy technique that allows the user to maximize their attack with use of their speed and planting. Once the user is at high speed they jump forward and perform a half handspring, then aims to kick their target on the stomach.
C-Rank
[Wushu • Know How to One-Two]
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Limits
With their high level in the art of manipulating and using their body and also high reflexes and strategic ability, the user has mastered their ability of avoiding quick strikes that come on short notice, finding little to no challenge in side-stepping punches, jumping over kicks, leaning back, among others. The user understands that fights have a tempo and is able to adapt him or herself into said tempo in order to dodge effectively.

[Wushu • Know Your Arsenal]
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know How to One-Two
The user, after many hours of practice, repetition and conditioning their body and mind, have obtained a high degree of muscle memory.They can shoot off any of their techniques practically at any time when not under special circumstances. They may also respond faster to and almost predict an enemy attack from a slight movement simply due to their understanding and comprehension of the anatomy and Taijutsu itself. This means they may have a chance at counter-attack a target with a lot more efficiency, using only the knowledge of their bodies, meaning it'll be a Speed vs Strength situation, not a Strength vs Strength situation.

[Wushu • Roundhouse]
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
An easy maneuver where the user is able to jump up and rotate their bodies, using their speed to swing their leg up and kick their opponent in the jaw. The user is able to do this while standing still and while running. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.

[Wushu • Know Your Defense]
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Enemy; Know Your Limits
Having attained a high level of Taijutsu, Taijutsu theory and reflexes themselves, the user is able to counter-attack the heaviest of blows without having to use impressive force themselves. Applying the use of angles, positioning, anatomy knowledge and overall Taijutsu knowledge itself, the user is able to block or deflect heavy blows without having to use force.

[Wushu • Know Your Techniques; One Hand]
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know The First Step, 5 Wushu techs
This is where the Wushu starts to shine, this fighting technique is for seasoned Wushu users as it can pose a threat to an inexperienced user. First of all the user trains to fight with one hand, this mentality forces the user to slow down his/her tempo but lowers enemies will power if they don't manage to overcome the humiliation (-3 Will Power) for as long as the user has their hand in their pocket. The user focuses on precision but comes with the cost of not being able to perform any Ninjutsu nor Genjutsu until using two hands.
B-Rank
[Wushu • Ying Yang]
B-Ranked Discipline Taijutsu
Through hard training and battling different Taijutsu styles, the user has learned to observe the targets combat style and determine what concentration the target has used after 4 posts of combat. This is a hard feat to pull off unless the user has full focus on the target and is a precursor discipline for grander Wushu techniques.

[Wushu • Know How to Counter]
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know How to One-Two
With their high level in the art of manipulating and using their body and also high reflexes and strategic ability, the user has mastered their ability of avoiding quick strikes that come on short notice, finding little to no challenge in side-stepping punches, jumping over kicks, leaning back, among others. The user understands that fights have a tempo and is able to adapt him or herself into said tempo in order to dodge effectively but instead of fully dodging the attacks the user is able to perform a quick counter, using the targets momentum against them. Often aiming for the solar plexus, an area that can cause damage and sustaining pain, (-3 Endurance, -3 Strength) for 5 posts.

[Wushu • Know Your Techniques; Two Hands]
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Techniques
This technique is the be used if the user can't defeat their opponent via one handed mode, forcing the user to get serious and fight for real, with the knowledge of the body the user is able to focus their mind and uncap an adrenaline charge once they are forced to cancel One Hand in which the technique has to be active for at least 3. This adrenaline boosts the user (3+ Endurance) and their strength (+6), although during this boost the user slows down a bit (-3 Speed) and loses their ability remain in perfect harmony (-3 Will Power, -3 Control).

[Wushu • The Step Down]
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
The user kicks the target on the inside of their hip with one leg then swings around to kick the outside of the knee with the other before delivering a side step thrust kick to the center of the target just as they lose balance. The user is able to do this while standing still and while running. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.
A-Rank
[Wushu • Dragon Rush]
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Double, The Step Down
This is a special combo attack utilizing a flurry of attacks to daze and confuse the target. The user delivers a 5 punch and 5 kick combo ending with a thrust kick to send the targets back. The user opens up with a flurry of punches on the upper body and ends them with kicks to the targets lower body before stepping in to thrust kick them. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.
"Ghost"
A weaponry style created by Hotaru in order to master the way of both stealth and armed combat. The user uses their wits and human knowledge to their advantage, to not only strike them when they are unprepared but also take them down before they manage get a full grip on the ever surprising trickster.

Req: Deft hands, Perception, Projectile, Sword, Acrobatics, Corded Weapons.

D-Rank
Ghost Draw
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Sword.
The user has mastered the ways of drawing their hidden sword slowly to reduce sound, though at this level the user can only unsheathe the blade without drawing attention.

Knife Proficiency
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Hidden-blade, knife.
The user has mastered the ways of wielding a knife on either grip side and is able to switch in between then with ease.

Bleeding Feet
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu.
A simple move where the user kicks the targets shin with an angle to cause their legs to bleed, this is used to track targets if they try to escape.

Paper Cut
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Bladed weapon.
The user aims to slash their targets arms in order to weaken then and leave the target open for followup attacks. These minor annoyances are overcome by either regeneration or minor wound treatments. If left untreated they will draw -1 strength from the target.

Switch it Up
D-Rank Stance Taijutsu
The user has mastered the ways of switching between her unarmed style to her armed variant and vice versa on the fly. By sheathing her weapons and using the blade as fist grip, allows her to stay one step ahead.
C-Rank
No signs
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Trained through the art of stealth, the user is aware of of any visible tracks that they have left behind and covers their trace. This is technique is the first of a long chain of Black Ops techniques created to make the user appear as a ghost and vanish without a trace.

Paper Slash
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Paper Cut, Bladed weapon.
The user aims to slash their targets upper body in order to weaken then and leave the target open for followup attacks. These annoyances are overcome by either regeneration or wound treatments. If left untreated they will draw -3 strength from the target.

Shank
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Knife Proficiency, Knife, Hidden-blade
The user precision stabs the target with their hidden-blade or knife, aiming to stab them by the guts in order to maximize the damage and cause internal bleeding. (-3 Endurance) The wound will go on bleeding until treated.

Dual Wielder
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Sword and Knife.
The user has mastered the way of wielding two separate weapons and work a way to use both at their advantage for both offensive and defensive purposes.

Blade Deflector
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Knife, Hidden-blade.
The user has mastered the way of deflecting bladed weapons with their knife, using the small size to throw their target off balance. This only works if her Speed is higher or equal to/than the targets Strength.
B-Rank
Rebellious Execution
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu.
Prerequisite: Hidden-Blade, 10 Wushu.
The user begins by moving within the targets guard before delivering a standing round house kick to their head, the user locks the opponents head instead of striking it by placing their head between their thigh and calf. Once their leg closes in on their target, they pull their body down to crash their head first to the ground, followed by a well placed dagger between the ribs. This devastating combo can be quiet lethal, especially if the wound is left untreated.

Ghost Strike
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Ghost Draw, Black Wolf, Sword, 25 Speed.
The user crouches down to a three point stand as they lock in on their target, once their mind is set, they will rush the next [Strength=meters] at top speed and lose the ability to change direction until their strike has either landed or been blocked. This grants the user the ability to vanish as a shadow if the targets speed is lower than the users.

Nun-Chucks Mastery
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Nun-Chucks
This is a simple Nun-Chucks discipline that allows the user to utilize the weapon without second thought, the user has become one with the weapon and since it moves at great speed the target has to have higher/equal Speed to/than the users in order to keep up with the weapons dance/strikes.

Bruce Force
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Nun-Chucks
A simple Nun-Chucks combo that starts with a strike to the stomach (-2 Endurance), knee (-2 Speed) then a swift move to strike the targets head, this is used to not only daze the target (-2 Will Power) but also weaken their bodies. This pummeling combination can be switched up in different orders to achieve the same effect. This effect lasts for 4 posts or until the target has regenerated from the damage received.

Reckless Abandon
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Switch it Up
This is an upgraded version of Switch it Up, which allows the user to switch between all of her weapons mid combo and change some of her styles without stopping to suit the needed tactic, such as starting a fight with Wushu, then tossing senbons at close range to finish up with a knife strike or nun-chuck combo.

Ghost Wolf
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Black Wolf., Blade.
The user must first find themselves either above or below an unsuspecting target, once they are in place and have them on lock on, they will pounce the opponent and strike them with their weapon/s between their ribs. If the wound is left untreated then it can lead to certain death.
A-Rank
Step it Up
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: The Step Up, Sword.
The user reverses The Step Up move set and begins the technique with a kick to the back of the targets knee, followed by using the same foot to kick the targets hip. The user follows with their target before surprising with a falling sword. The user aims at the targets solar plexus, using both their momentum and the targets powerless pose to their advantage.

Predator
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Ghost Wolf, Ghost Draw
The user sits at their vantage point and takes key notice of their targets whereabouts, they plan out their form of attack before picking out four targets that are within 20 meters range. Using their speed, wits and weaponry the target is able to keep up with four unsuspecting foes and use the surprise attack to her advantage. If the users Speed is higher/equal to/than the targets Speed the users movements will be hard to perceive due to unpreparedness for 3 posts.
S-Rank
Rise of the Dragon
S-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Dragon Rush, Sword, Nun-chucks, Grappling hook.
An upgraded version of Dragon Rush is a special combo attack utilizing a flurry of attacks and weaponry to fatally wound the target(s) (Up to Endurance stat/10 (max 5)] if users Speed is higher than targets Speed, though the outcome is that the user has to split the ten strike combo between the targets. The user throws a grappling hook to connect themselves with the first target, yanks them in to delivers 3 punches, a knife stab to the knee, then uses the sword to cut their stomach, followed by a 3 kick combo to their uninjured leg before using the nun-chuck to hit them across the chest and head before ending the combo with a thrust kick to send the target flying back. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion

Black OpsShow
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I Spy a Little Lie
A spy style Hotaru created to help her infiltrate, collect information, impersonate, hide and escape style. Having spent years studying people the spy has learned how to imitate and fortify information, switch personalities on the fly and vanish within seconds. The perfect style for a spy on the move.

Req: Stealth, Perception.

D-Rank
Lock Pick
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Mastering the art of using a lock pick, opening various locks, ranging from doors to cuffs.

Innocent
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Act like it
If the user has chosen to act like a cute character then Innocent can be used to attempt to trick the target into believing that they are innocent. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

Spies Intuition; Presence
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
The user performs a quick check in her surroundings every once awhile, this allows her to pick up if anyone is stalking her by recognizing faces/clothing.

Spy Make up
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Realistic Make-Up Kit
This is a basic spy technique that lets Hotaru perform minor changes in her appearance, she simply applies the make up which ends up pretty realistic. At this level Hotaru is able to make herself appear 2 years younger and up to 5 years older. More feminine or masculine.

Born To Find A Weapon
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Using her preying eyes to find the nearest weapon, whether it be a scroll, to a lethal weapon. The spy always has her eyes open for any potential weapon within her surroundings.

Pick Pocket; Minor Object
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Location of the item.
This is one of the most basic techniques the spy has in her archive, first it requires that the user knows where the item (1 post) is located on the person, then bumps into them and attempt to pick the targets pocket, if the target has lower taijutsu than Hotaru then they won't notice. If the target has a Speed equal to or greater than Hotaru's Speed, this technique is ineffective. This only works on object smaller than a kunai and she can't plant items on the target at this level.

C-Rank
Stealth; Black Wolf
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Hotaru has learned what she can step on, and how much noise it would make, using this to her advantage the spy can nearly sprint without making noise at (-6 Speed).

Act Like it; Theater Actor
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
This is a basic spy technique that lets Hotaru control her body to the point where she can act as a totally different person, using her will to come up with a different personality. The user seems very convincing, to perform this the user requires some extended information about the area and needs to write down some simple mental notes. At this level she can't impersonate. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

Pick Pocket; Intermediate Object
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Location of the item.
This is one of the most basic techniques the spy has in her archive, first it requires that the user knows where the item (1 post) is located on the person, then bumps into them and attempt to pick the targets pocket, if the target has lower Speed than the users Speed then they won't notice. This works on object smaller than a pouch and she cant plant items on the target at this level as well.

Speak Like it; Voice Acting
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
A basic spy technique that lets Hotaru alter her voice, whether she adds a different accent or changes the pitch of her tone. She can pull of male and female voices, although male voices will leave her throat soar. At this level she can't impersonate. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

Spies Intuition; The Hawk
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
The user starts focusing their mind at the price trying to obtain as much information as possible. This information process makes it harder for the user to move at full speed (-6 Speed) although the user still minds her surroundings.

B-Rank
Subtle Movements
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
The user is able to pick up subtle body language, this allows the user to tell if someone is lying, or hiding something.

Stealth; Silent Wolf
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Black Wolf
Hotaru has upgraded her previous jutsu and has now learned how to sprint at full speed without making noises.

Method Acting
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite:Theater Actor
To perform this taijutsu the user must spend at least half a post preparing for the role of her life and as long as she continues to play the role the more convinced she becomes that she is that character. With enough practice the woman could act like anyone she has gathered enough information of. Although at this level it leaves little room for improvisation. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

Master Voice Actor
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Voice Acting
To perform this taijutsu the user must spend at least half a post preparing, at this level there's no accent, tone of voice the spy can't hit, and no matter how high/low pitch her voice doesn't sore. This ranges from young boy/girl to old man/woman. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.
A-Rank
I Am Not
A-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Method Acting, Master Voice Actor.
To perform this taijutsu the user must spend at least half a post preparing for the role of her life and as long as she continues to play the role the more convinced she becomes that she is that character. With enough practice the woman could copy anyone's mannerism, characteristics, tone of voice and style of which she has gathered enough information of. At this level she is able perform great improvisations. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

Mind Reader
A-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Subtle Movements
Through the art of being able to read their subtle movements, readings of emotions and appear to "predict" the outcome of the situation making it appear as if they are reading their minds. In order for this connection to be linked, the user must study the target for 4 posts, gather enough information about the targets behavioral patterns, speech and it will only works if Hotaru has higher/equal Will Power to/than the target.

S-Rank
Born To Find A Way
S-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
By studying the target/area for more than 5 posts, the user gets a hub of possibilities that can be created, within this zone it almost appears as a playground for the user as they can chose to set up traps, find various ways to enter in through fortress, lead enemies into danger, etc. The user keeps a strong grip of the information flow, giving them data on almost anything within a max 1 mile, meaning any broken branches, new footsteps will be noticeable once she returns to that specific area and allow Hotaru to notice those small changes, though it can change to smaller sizes.

Black Swan
A Black ops projectile Style created by Hotaru, heavily support fire and meant to pin down multiple targets in order to lure them into traps and or defend from incoming attacks. This style aims to be the best out there. One worthy of a true Black Ops member.

Req: Upper body, Deft hands, Projectile weapons.

D-Rank
Clash
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
After training for hours on end the user has mastered the technique be able to toss a kunai/shuriken/senbon at an incoming projectile and change it's trajectory (If the users Taijutsu is high enough and strength is within 3 limit).

Short Range Toss
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
This technique allows the user to toss kunai/shuriken/senbon at short ranges, these tosses usually are ineffective once they reach 10 meters away. Although within this short range they are far more accurate (+3 Strength, -3 Speed).

Eagle
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
After hours of training the user has trained to track targets, training to estimate distance and speed. This technique helps the user keep task on other targets at the same time.

Dangerous
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
The difference between combat and training is danger and unpredictability. The user of this technique is experienced at loosing weapons from positions other than a set stance, maintaining offense even while acting on the defense or recovering from a fall. Such attacks are made at full Strength and accuracy.

3
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
After training for hours on end the user has mastered the technique to hand and throw three Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon with one arm at ease. They wont effect the speed/strength or aim.

6
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 3
Upgraded version of 3, where the user can carry twice as many Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon with one hand and be able to toss them at ease. They wont effect the speed/strength or aim.
C-Rank
Droplets
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 3
This is where the Black Swan style starts to show it's true colors. The user first fills both/one hand/s with either Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon, then proceeds to toss them at the target at great speed. During the toss the user is able to quickly reload without having to interrupt if they chose to place the weapon next to them or items from one pouch.

Bursting the seems
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Short Range Toss
This technique allows the user to toss kunai/shuriken/senbon at short ranges, these tosses usually are ineffective once they reach 15 meters away. Although within this short range they are far more accurate (+6 Strength, -6 Speed).

Weapon on Weapon action
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
This technique allows the user to toss kunai/shuriken/senbon another kunai/shuriken/senbon to arc it's trajectory, the user begins by throwing a set of projectiles before tossing another one that changes the first's directions up to 90 degrees.

Hand-Eye-Coordination
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Eagle.
Relying on the ability to discern distance and track targets, the user makes a ranged attack on a moving target. Assuming that the target's speed and direction remain the same, shots made with this technique "lead" the correct amount to almost certainly strike true.
B-Rank
Rain
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 3, Droplets 25 speed.
This is the upgraded version of Droplets. The user first fills both hands with either Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon, then proceeds to toss them at the target at great speed. During the toss the user is able to quickly reload without having to interrupt if they chose to place the weapons next to them or chose from multiple pouches and can continue until they run out of projectiles.

When it Rains
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Rain
The upgraded version of Rain, this is where the style really starts to shine. If the users Speed is higher/equal to/than the targets Speed they will be able to chose to use any jutsu rank lower than C-Rank to combine into their never ending onslaught of projectiles, allowing them to attack from various positions and angles. It takes a full post before the jutsu will fire off and the user must maintain the toss during the entire projectile rain.

Turret
B-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 25 Speed.
This technique relies on speed to unleash a rapid series of ranged attacks against one or more targets. The user draws and launches in one fluid motion, falling into a rhythm and maintaining it. Doing so can provide effective suppression fire, urging a quarry into a trap or setting up for a future technique. The user can also attempt to pin down a number of targets equal to the user's Speed Stat (Max being 25) for the duration, which lasts for as long as the user has ammunition and maintains the attack. The user's legs must remain stationary save to pivot.
A-Rank
It pours
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: When it Rains
The upgraded version of When it Rains, this is where the style really starts to shine. If the users Speed is higher/equal to/than the targets Speed they will be able to chose to use any jutsu rank lower than B-Rank to combine into their never ending onslaught of projectiles, allowing them to attack from various positions and angles. It takes a full post before the jutsu will fire off and the user must maintain the toss during the entire projectile rain.
S-Rank
Monsun
S-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Weapon on Weapon action, Hand-Eye-Coordination
The user plants their feet and begins to empty their weapon stash, they will keep their eye on a target and begin to swarm them with senbons/kunai/shuriken in order to weaken the foe. The overwhelming projectile weapons twists and turns as they bounce off walls and each other and the longer the target stays pinned within the area and get targeted then they lose 8 stats (-2 Endurance, Strength, Speed, Will) per post up till 5, the wounds lasts until they recover from the damage. This technique can only be used once per thread as it empties the users weapon stash, leaving them with only a handfull left.
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D-Rank
Expand
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru will grab a smoke bomb and toss it on the ground. If the target sees this then the smoke will expanding double its original size, for an easier escape. Last 3 post.

Minor tweaks
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru will swipe her hand over her face, if the target sees this, then they will be trapped within the genjutsu. Within the genjutsu, they will see that Hotaru has gone through a minor alter (change eye color, remove piercing, changing age, growing beard) Although this only works for the face. Last for 3 post.

Doppelganger
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to block an incoming attack, if the target sees her attempt to block the incoming attack then a clone created by a swarm of Fireflies will appear in her place,. This clone functions as a simple clone, created fake that the clone "takes" damage. The clone only completes the defense transaction and once the clone has been struck it will immediately puff into scattering fireflies, this genjutsu is merely used to distract the target while the real body attempts to evade the incoming attack. Last 1 post.
C-Rank
Wait What?
C-Rank Status Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to move in for an attack, if the target sees the user take a step towards them the genjutsu will initiate. Once triggered the target will forget what form of attack s/he planned for a brief second. Last 1 post.

Forgettable
C-Rank Status Genjutsu
Prereq: Sound Init.
Hotaru preforms the handseals needed and focuses chakra to her tongue for one post. She then whistles triggering the genjutsu. This is used to make quick escapes and evade others to hide the physical features such as body proportions, hair color, and facial structure proportions. Once the genjutsu ends after 2 posts the afflicted will remember the physical features and continue their pursuit.
B-Rank
Doppelganger II
B-Rank Warp Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init, Doppelganger.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to block an incoming attack, if the target sees her attempt to block the incoming attack then four clones are created by a swarm of Fireflies, the first one will appear in her place. This clone functions as a simple illusion clone, created to "take" the damage. The clone only completes the defense transaction and once the clone has been struck it will immediately puff into scattering fireflies, at this level it will give off the sensation of actually striking, the other three will roll out of the puff and initiate an attack that has the possibility of causing distress on the target. This genjutsu is merely used to distract the target while the real body attempts to evade or counter attack. Lasts for 1 post.
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Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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[b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=1516026/]Kitsui[/url]
[b]Points:[/b] 25/85
[b]Companions:[/b] (1/1)
[b]Perks:[/b] Signature Technique [Used], Heirloom
[b]Stat Trainings:[/b] (13/50)
[hr]
[table=3][center][size=150][size=100][color=black]Nonki[/color][/size][/size]
"[color=dimgray]The faceless spy[/color]"

[float=left][url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/5735000/1/#new][img=250,250]http://img3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100723034347/narutofanon/images/9/90/Amatsuki.png[/img][/url][/float]

-Code name: [color=#7FA08C]Y[/color][/center][c]
[center][img=300,450]https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/000/288/597/large/2014-01-16-09_-_NameLater.jpg?1415319818[/img]

"[color=dimgray]If only you knew half the truth.[/color]"

Fame[/center]
[hr]
[center]"I don't know who Hotaru is but there's this spy out there that's very, very dangerous. Very hush hush work."
[sub]-[url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/5546719/1/#new]Kumogakure Ghost[/url][/sub]

"There was this kid named Yoho that helped me and my child get home, I will never forget what those ninjas did for me, and I would gladly return the favor."
[sub]-[url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/5511550/1/#new]Lightning Country Citizen[/url][/sub][/center]
[hr][center][color=dimgray]Summon[/color][/center]
[center][url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/5820651/1/#new]King Yautja[/url]
[sub][color=dimgray]The Predator[/color][/sub][/center]
[hr][c]
[center][b]Age:[/b] ?
[b]Gender:[/b] ?
[b]Cover:[/b] ?
[b]Type:[/b] Assertive. [/center]

[table=2][b]Rank:[/b][c][color=black][s]Special Jounin[/s][/color][c][b]Village:[/b][c][color=Dimgray]Kumogakure[/color][c][b]Specialty:[/b][c][[color=Slategray]Taijutsu[/color]][c][b]Affinity:[/b][c][[color=darkslategray]Fuuton[/color]]
[c][b]Squad:[/b]
[c][[s]N/A[/s]][/table][b][color=Gray][i]Ghost[/i][/color] Theme:[/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=McjvF5MB_2I[/video][hr][b][color=dimGray][i]Thief[/i][/color] Theme:[/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KwymGUC-u4U[/video][hr][b][fade][i]Stalker[/i][/fade] Theme:[/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=StXbsIyV9_A[/video][hr][b][color=Black][i]Assassin[/i][/color] Theme:[/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sr1SvwH0Vbs[/video]
[/table]
[spoiler=Alias][table=3][center][b][color=Firebrick]Sakuran[/color][/b][/center]
[c][center][color=dimgray][u]Hotaru[/u][/color][/center]
[c][center][color=#7FA08C][i]Yoho[/i][/color][/center]
[c][center][b][color=Firebrick]Honor-bound[/color] Theme:[/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QvMcQ2Eejo[/video][/center]
[c][center][b][color=Dimgray][u]Undercover[/u][/color] Theme:[/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q4jmAuS4Jdc[/video][/center]
[c][center][b][color=#7FA08C][i]Loser[/i][/color] Theme:[/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1HjpJ1BHso[/video][/center]
[c][spoiler=Sakuran][center]
[b]Age:[/b] 20
[b]Gender:[/b] Female.
[b]Cover:[/b] Samurai
[b]Type:[/b] Fearless, dedicated & honor-bound[/center][/spoiler][c][spoiler=Hotaru][center][b]Age:[/b] 16
[b]Gender:[/b] Female.
[b]Cover:[/b] Whatever is needed.
[b]Type:[/b] Lone wolf, spy. [/center][/spoiler][c][spoiler=Yoho][center]
[b]Age:[/b] 16
[b]Gender:[/b] Male.
[b]Cover:[/b] Unemployed.
[b]Type:[/b] Laid back, passive, support.[/center][/spoiler][/table][/spoiler]

[center]"[color=dimgrey]I am the invisible hand of Kumogakure.[/color]"[/center]

[table=2,General Information][table=6][b]Age:[/b][c][b]Gender:[/b][c][b]Height:[/b][c][b]Weight:[/b][c][b]Hair:[/b][c][b]Eyes:[/b]
[c]16
[c]Female.
[c]5'4"
[c]130 Lbs.
[c]Black.
[c]Blue-gray-greenish.[/table]
[spoiler=Description][center]
Tanned, short and lean. She is fit and clear of any scars, she is small busted and has a small waist. A cool feature Hotaru has, is that her eyes change color depending on the light, ranging from blue to green and sometimes grey. On her free time the woman has her hair rugged and hanging down, a small ponytail mimicking the samurai and braids hidden on the back of her hair. This is used to cover up her long hear, when tied up this way it reaches down to her shoulders, although otherwise it the back hair would reach down to the center of her back. During missions Hotaru braids her hair to cornrows to keep it shorter, so she can wear different wigs. [/center][/spoiler][center]
[/center][spoiler=Clothing/Accessories][quote][center][u]Casual[/u][hr]
Yoho wears a yellow jacket that's always open, a white t-shirt, underneath that she wears full body bandage. Sporting black shorts and black sandals. She carries a "Medpack" on the back of the belt and carries a black scarf around her neck.[/center][/quote]

[quote][center][u]Official[/u][/center]
Under Oath
[img=250,400]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/300/1/0/cm__ritoru_by_chloeeh-d4e355i.png[/img][hr]
Her official outfit consist of a black mask, a white flak vest. Under the flak vest Yoho wears a black long sleeved shirt, with black shorts and leg warmers the ninjas outfit is almost complete. During her official time she wears some minor protections and a cloak. Also wears the "Official pouch"[/quote]

[quote][center][u]Mission[/u][/center]
When it counts
[hr]
During mission she wears her armor, white large shirt with a blue streaks and insignia all over it. Her arms are covered in armor from the hands all the way up to her shoulders in black decorated armor, she wears finger-less gloves for comfort and puffy black pants, finishing of with her black shoes. Her chest armor is decorated and almost appear unisex thanks to her flat chest. Hidden inside the cloak the woman has hidden her "Senbon carrier"[/quote]

[quote][center][u]Assassin[/u][/center]
Failure is not an option
[hr]
She wears a white long sleeved white hooded shirt with it's back end hanging, over it she wears various trinkets that create low sound when moving, otherwise they create no noise when stealthing. Over her left shoulder she has a golden ornamented pauldron, and over her waist she wears a sash with brilliant colors, she wears black pants and knee high brown boots, her arms are decked with metallic arm guards to hide her sling and hidden blade. She sports black finger-less gloves various belts to hold up her many pouches.
[/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Equipment][u]All time[/u]
[quote][center][b][b][big][big][big][[color=black]Black Mask[/color]/[color=Dimgray]Night Hood[/color][/big][/big][/big][/b][/b]
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Dual masks that together work as one, the one beneath is a black glass mask, works as a visor for sensor/doujutsu and various hud sensor jutsu. The glass is fragile and can easily be shattered. Above the black glass is the metal guard, the second mask which acts as the basic defense for the glass. The metal guard vibrates out the force during collision in order to protect the glass beneath. Fuuinjutsu for breathing on the mask, listening as well. [/quote][quote=A Spies Best Friend] [list][*]1x Hidden blade, the blade slides out 10 centimeters out of the users wrist with a simple flick of the wrist at the speed of 3. Located on her right hand (Arm Guard).
[*]1x [15m] Metal cord + 1x Grapple Hook, strapped and hidden by her left hand (Arm guard).
[*]1x Nun-Chucks [32cm wooden branch and 2.5 cm chain] placed above her rear pouch.
[*]1x Lockpick, designed to look like her belt buckle.
[*]1x Binoculars, 2x/8x zoom, assemble from belt trinkets.
[*]1x Small mirror, hidden in her collar.
[*]30x Caltrops, hidden on the heels of her boots.[/list][/quote]

[quote=Back] Back [list][*]1x Black tanto, which she has sheathed in an upside down sword holster that runs along the spine so the handle doesn't stick out. The blade is 30 cm.[/list]
Shoulder [list][*]1x Silver bow 1 meter length, strapped over the shoulder.[/list]
Quiver [list][*]10x Arrows in quiver, over shoulder.
[*]2x Flash Noted Arrow.
[*]2x Smoke Noted Arrow.
[*]1x Explosive Noted Arrow.
[*]1x[15m] Metal corded arrow.[/list][/quote]

[quote=Hidden inside her sleeves]
Left Sleeve[list][*]2x Smoke Bombs.
[*]14x Black Senbon.
[*]1x Flash Note.
[/list]
Right Sleeve[list][*]3x Smoke Bombs.
[*]16x Black Senbon.
[*]1x Flash Note.
[/list]
[/quote]

[u]Cloak[/u]

[quote=Shadow Stalker] A black hooded cloak which Yoho wears, there are multiple hidden pockets within the cloak. The pockets are located on the inside, where her waist begins
Hidden Left Pocket by her left hip [sub]1[/sub][list][*]2x Black gloves hidden inside the cloak.
[*]1x Kumogakure no Sato headplate.[/list]
Hidden Right Pocket by her right hip[sub]2[/sub][list][*]Realistic blonde wig, shoulder length. In a plastic zip bag to save space.
[*]Realistic brunette wig, jawline length. In a plastic zip bag to save space.
[*]Realistic white wig, spikey hair, 12 inches. In a plastic zip bag to save space.[/list]
Hidden Center Pocket [sub]3[/sub][list][*]8x Empty Scrolls. 2x4
[*]2x Pens.
[*]1x 100 Page diary.
[*]1x Red lipstick
[*]1x Beige lipstick
[*]Realistic Make-Up Kit[/list][/quote]

[u]Casual[/u]

[quote=Fake Medpack]
Lower Back Pouch.[list][*]15x Black Senbon.
[*]2x Needles.
[*]1x Flash note.
[*]1x 20 yards needle thread.
[*]1x 10 foot gauze.
[*]2x Splint applications.[/list][/quote]

[u]Official[/u]

[quote=Armor]
[list][*]2x Metal shoulder pauldron
[*]2x Metal forearm guards.
[*]1x Black metal chest and back plate, padded to create less sound.
[*]1x Black Hawk Mask.[/list][/quote]

[quote=Official Pouch]
Two Back Pouches.[list][*]5x Smoke Bombs.
[*]15x Black Kunai
[*]15x Senbon.
[*]15x Shuriken.
[/list][/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Personality]Hotaru’s personality is mostly being quiet. This shinobi rarely talks and she only does so when she needs to. Sometimes people think that Hotaru can’t speak. When enraged the girl will see that the enemy should be punished for enraging her and she will not stop until she sees it through. But that only happens on rare occasions because the girl is very calm and collected. As a "perfect spy" should be, or at least that's what she considers herself.

During battles Hotaru tends to analyze her enemies, she usually doesn't waste her chakra on unnecessary attacks and will most likely just try to escape unless she has no choice. When fighting with a partner she tends to act a bit more protective and tries to get everyone out of the situation, although she keeps her back covered since she doesn't really trust anyone.

Hotaru will try to avoid any confrontation if its possible, unless she is bugged enough to be provoked, off duty to test the waters and if the mission demands it. She is a firm believer that the mission goes first and will do anything to succeed. Her life goals are to become the greatest and help hidden cloud succeeded in its plans. No matter what![/spoiler]
[spoiler=History]Somewhere in the Lightning Country a baby was born. This young girl was given a name Nonki, Hotaru. Her mother fell ill when she gave birth to her and died a couple of hours later. The girl grew up without a mother and instead was raised by her father. When she grew up she had to spend a lot of time at her neighbor because her father had to work hard all the time. They did not even have enough to let kid roll in to the academy so her father started robbing people as their main source of payment but it did not take long time before he was arrested.

The only course of action the young child could take was to run away and hide. During her time alone she figured it would be safer to start pretending that she was a boy. She had heard by her father what people could do to young girls. So as a "boy" she started picking up where her father left off, she started pick pocketing random strangers, using her size to her advantage. It was here the young girl learned to be stealthy, using the shadow as her friend. In fact at the time it was her only friend, it was during this time that the young girl started crafting her alter ego "Mumei", she would start using it instead of her original name, and not use her last name "Nonki" since it didn't really mean anything to her anymore. It didn't take long before she had mastered the art of staying hidden although this confidence lead to her biggest mistake/fortune. One of the targets the young girl had picked was a well known ninja that was passing by, to her surprise she managed to pick pocket the famed ninja but as she was making her way back to her hideout the theif was stopped by the ninja she had mugged.

He introduced himself as Hayate and he told her that he could see the potential in the young girl. He would protect her under his wing and train her to become the best in her craft.. So for the last couple of years the girl's life took a turn for the better. She would soon start her training among the shinobi she had dreamed of becoming part of. Although because she spent most of her time outside of the academy as a child she never really mastered the art of ninjutsu, although she did get the hang of genjutsu. However, she focused more on training her hand to hand combat skills and mostly her "ninja" skills. Ergo, she has trained to perfect her stealth abilities and believes to be one of the greater ninjas out there. Hopefully soon she could also become the best spy out there as well. She felt that she never really fit in within the village walls and living alone wasn't really making this transition any better. Since she was already invisible once she took a step inside the village the young girl used her skills to become invisible. Within the academy, Hotaru would spy on most of her class mates. Hiding by the shadows, watching the kids play with others, picking up information for later use and from time to time "Yoho" would bump in to them, apologize and continue on her path. Stealing minor objects from them, then plant them on other student's lockers, wanting to see how they would react.

It didn't take long before Hayate enrolled "Yoho" into the chuunin exam with a random team, although being a loner in the heart the girl performed her best and did what was necessary to rank up. It was during this time that the girl used her partners to lure out her target and do what was necessary, it didn't take long for the girl to win and become a chuunin. Most only know little about this young ninja, which was perfect. As an observer the girl grew up wanting to be the ultimate spy, but that would mean that only a few people would know Hotaru's real personality, although what she feared most that in the end she wouldn't be able to keep her alter egos apart, which prompted her to start writing in a diary.[/spoiler][/table]
[center][color=#FF5416]Kumogakure no Sato[/color]
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"[color=#FF5416]You don't know me and you will never know who I truly am, but I am willing to die for you and for what you believe in. For every Kumogakure, nay Lightning country.[/color]"[/center]
[table=2,Battle Information][spoiler=Combat Style][center][img]https://media.giphy.com/media/5Yujcblng52OPmxnq7/giphy.gif[/img][/center]

Not really a fighter, but if "Yoho" had to fight she would use her stealthy fighting style to her advantage, hiding in the shadows and striking when you least expect it. A true ninja in her art.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Abilities: 1/3][table][center][quote=Chakra Void]This ability allows Hotaru to stay out of sensors ability to read their target as long as her control is equal or higher than theirs. This Ability is always active, which ends up drawing -2 Chakra Pool from the user.[/quote][/center]
[c][center]--N/A--[/center]
[c][center]--N/A--[/center][/table][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Concentrations][spoiler=Taijutsu 9/9][quote=Close Quarters Combat]The fundamental skill of [b][Close Quarters Combat][/b] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.[/quote][hr][quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote][hr][quote=Acrobatics]The fundamental skill of [b][Acrobatics][/b] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Stealth]The fundamental skill of [b][Stealth][/b] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Perception]The fundamental skill of [b][Perception][/b] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focusing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Sword Weapons] The fundamental skill of [b][Sword Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Projectile Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Projectile Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Corded Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Corded Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Medicine]The fundamental skill of [b][Medicine][/b] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote]
[/spoiler][spoiler=Genjutsu 3/3][quote=Sight Initiation]
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.[/quote][quote=Sound Initiation]
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.[/quote][quote=Scent Initiation]
This user has learn to use smells to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to utilize and produce various scents to capture their targets in genjutsu.[/quote][/spoiler][/spoiler]
[table=6][b]Chakra Pool:[/b][c][b]Endurance:[/b][c][b]Control:[/b][c][b]Strength:[/b][c][b]Speed:[/b][c][b]Will Power:[/b]
[c]13 (15-2)
[c]25
[c]25
[c]20
[c]40
[c]30[/table][/table]
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Karagata, Yuuto
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Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
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H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
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[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
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S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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Wushu
A close quarter combat created by Hotaru, using the mind more than the body. A style about staying in harmony and releasing short burst of strikes to over come your foes. A style more focuses on defending and attacking the targets weak points when they think they have their advantage. Using Hotaru's Taijutsu to overcome stronger foes by attacking weak spots like knees, groin, blocks and other moves to prove that brain wins over brawn.

Req: CQC, Deft hands, Perception, Acrobatics.

D-Rank
[Wushu • Know Your Enemy]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prereq: Medicine
Having extensive experience and knowledge in martial arts and the anatomy, both through first-hand experience and theory, the user has managed to obtain and maintain great overall knowledge of the human body and its workings. This knowledge allows them easily to identify and target weak points, such as the backs of joints, organs, nose, jaw, etc.

[Wushu • Know Your Limits]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Enemy, Subtle Movements.
Having extensive knowledge over the human body's limitations, the user has managed to achieve great skill in the art of analyzing how well their own or their opponent's bodies may respond to a given situation, in terms of body length, size, ability, speed, strength. With this technique, one would be aware of how an opponent could respond in battle, such as a situation where the user has the opponent in a choke hold and the opponent may bend their legs to kick back. Although the user must see the targets movement.

[Wushu • Know The First Step]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Enemy, Know Your Limits
Hotaru can use her natural Instinct to anticipate and react to attacks to literally kick attacks from the air, as her feet are precise enough to meet other people's punches or kicks as they fly. Using her feet, she aims kicks at her opponents hands or feet when they attack, aiming to attempt to throw the attacks off or stop them completely. This can be kept up as long as Hotaru can see the attacks coming, But is only able to be used effectively against someone with opponents that aren't too strong, as she is flexible and fast enough with her feet to keep up with most attack chains but too much power will eventually overcome her.

[Wushu • Double]
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
An easy maneuver where the user rotates their body, using their speed to swing their arms up and punch their opponent at great speed. The user is able to do this while standing still and while running. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.

[Wushu • Know How to Rebound; Kip up]
D-rank Maneuver Taijutsu
This is an easy technique that allows the user to dodge incoming attacks by lying down on the ground then jumping up. The user rolls back to the ball on the neck before pushing up with their core and arms in a half moon circle. If performed correctly the user should be pushed back up to a standing position in no time.

[Wushu • Maximize Kick]
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Limits
This is an easy technique that allows the user to maximize their attack with use of their speed and planting. Once the user is at high speed they jump forward and perform a half handspring, then aims to kick their target on the stomach.
C-Rank
[Wushu • Know How to One-Two]
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Limits
With their high level in the art of manipulating and using their body and also high reflexes and strategic ability, the user has mastered their ability of avoiding quick strikes that come on short notice, finding little to no challenge in side-stepping punches, jumping over kicks, leaning back, among others. The user understands that fights have a tempo and is able to adapt him or herself into said tempo in order to dodge effectively.

[Wushu • Know Your Arsenal]
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know How to One-Two
The user, after many hours of practice, repetition and conditioning their body and mind, have obtained a high degree of muscle memory.They can shoot off any of their techniques practically at any time when not under special circumstances. They may also respond faster to and almost predict an enemy attack from a slight movement simply due to their understanding and comprehension of the anatomy and Taijutsu itself. This means they may have a chance at counter-attack a target with a lot more efficiency, using only the knowledge of their bodies, meaning it'll be a Speed vs Strength situation, not a Strength vs Strength situation.

[Wushu • Roundhouse]
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
An easy maneuver where the user is able to jump up and rotate their bodies, using their speed to swing their leg up and kick their opponent in the jaw. The user is able to do this while standing still and while running. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.

[Wushu • Know Your Defense]
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Enemy; Know Your Limits
Having attained a high level of Taijutsu, Taijutsu theory and reflexes themselves, the user is able to counter-attack the heaviest of blows without having to use impressive force themselves. Applying the use of angles, positioning, anatomy knowledge and overall Taijutsu knowledge itself, the user is able to block or deflect heavy blows without having to use force.

[Wushu • Know Your Techniques; One Hand]
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know The First Step, 5 Wushu techs
This is where the Wushu starts to shine, this fighting technique is for seasoned Wushu users as it can pose a threat to an inexperienced user. First of all the user trains to fight with one hand, this mentality forces the user to slow down his/her tempo but lowers enemies will power if they don't manage to overcome the humiliation (-3 Will Power) for as long as the user has their hand in their pocket. The user focuses on precision but comes with the cost of not being able to perform any Ninjutsu nor Genjutsu until using two hands.
B-Rank
[Wushu • Ying Yang]
B-Ranked Discipline Taijutsu
Through hard training and battling different Taijutsu styles, the user has learned to observe the targets combat style and determine what concentration the target has used after 4 posts of combat. This is a hard feat to pull off unless the user has full focus on the target and is a precursor discipline for grander Wushu techniques.

[Wushu • Know How to Counter]
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know How to One-Two
With their high level in the art of manipulating and using their body and also high reflexes and strategic ability, the user has mastered their ability of avoiding quick strikes that come on short notice, finding little to no challenge in side-stepping punches, jumping over kicks, leaning back, among others. The user understands that fights have a tempo and is able to adapt him or herself into said tempo in order to dodge effectively but instead of fully dodging the attacks the user is able to perform a quick counter, using the targets momentum against them. Often aiming for the solar plexus, an area that can cause damage and sustaining pain, (-3 Endurance, -3 Strength) for 5 posts.

[Wushu • Know Your Techniques; Two Hands]
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Know Your Techniques
This technique is the be used if the user can't defeat their opponent via one handed mode, forcing the user to get serious and fight for real, with the knowledge of the body the user is able to focus their mind and uncap an adrenaline charge once they are forced to cancel One Hand in which the technique has to be active for at least 3. This adrenaline boosts the user (3+ Endurance) and their strength (+6), although during this boost the user slows down a bit (-3 Speed) and loses their ability remain in perfect harmony (-3 Will Power, -3 Control).

[Wushu • The Step Down]
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
The user kicks the target on the inside of their hip with one leg then swings around to kick the outside of the knee with the other before delivering a side step thrust kick to the center of the target just as they lose balance. The user is able to do this while standing still and while running. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.
A-Rank
[Wushu • Dragon Rush]
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Double, The Step Down
This is a special combo attack utilizing a flurry of attacks to daze and confuse the target. The user delivers a 5 punch and 5 kick combo ending with a thrust kick to send the targets back. The user opens up with a flurry of punches on the upper body and ends them with kicks to the targets lower body before stepping in to thrust kick them. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion.
"Ghost"
A weaponry style created by Hotaru in order to master the way of both stealth and armed combat. The user uses their wits and human knowledge to their advantage, to not only strike them when they are unprepared but also take them down before they manage get a full grip on the ever surprising trickster.

Req: Deft hands, Perception, Projectile, Sword, Acrobatics, Corded Weapons.

D-Rank
Ghost Draw
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Sword.
The user has mastered the ways of drawing their hidden sword slowly to reduce sound, though at this level the user can only unsheathe the blade without drawing attention.

Knife Proficiency
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Hidden-blade, knife.
The user has mastered the ways of wielding a knife on either grip side and is able to switch in between then with ease.

Bleeding Feet
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu.
A simple move where the user kicks the targets shin with an angle to cause their legs to bleed, this is used to track targets if they try to escape.

Paper Cut
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Bladed weapon.
The user aims to slash their targets arms in order to weaken then and leave the target open for followup attacks. These minor annoyances are overcome by either regeneration or minor wound treatments. If left untreated they will draw -1 strength from the target.

Switch it Up
D-Rank Stance Taijutsu
The user has mastered the ways of switching between her unarmed style to her armed variant and vice versa on the fly. By sheathing her weapons and using the blade as fist grip, allows her to stay one step ahead.
C-Rank
No signs
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Trained through the art of stealth, the user is aware of of any visible tracks that they have left behind and covers their trace. This is technique is the first of a long chain of Black Ops techniques created to make the user appear as a ghost and vanish without a trace.

Paper Slash
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Paper Cut, Bladed weapon.
The user aims to slash their targets upper body in order to weaken then and leave the target open for followup attacks. These annoyances are overcome by either regeneration or wound treatments. If left untreated they will draw -3 strength from the target.

Shank
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Knife Proficiency, Knife, Hidden-blade
The user precision stabs the target with their hidden-blade or knife, aiming to stab them by the guts in order to maximize the damage and cause internal bleeding. (-3 Endurance) The wound will go on bleeding until treated.

Dual Wielder
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Sword and Knife.
The user has mastered the way of wielding two separate weapons and work a way to use both at their advantage for both offensive and defensive purposes.

Blade Deflector
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Knife, Hidden-blade.
The user has mastered the way of deflecting bladed weapons with their knife, using the small size to throw their target off balance. This only works if her Speed is higher or equal to/than the targets Strength.
B-Rank
Rebellious Execution
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu.
Prerequisite: Hidden-Blade, 10 Wushu.
The user begins by moving within the targets guard before delivering a standing round house kick to their head, the user locks the opponents head instead of striking it by placing their head between their thigh and calf. Once their leg closes in on their target, they pull their body down to crash their head first to the ground, followed by a well placed dagger between the ribs. This devastating combo can be quiet lethal, especially if the wound is left untreated.

Ghost Strike
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Ghost Draw, Black Wolf, Sword, 25 Speed.
The user crouches down to a three point stand as they lock in on their target, once their mind is set, they will rush the next [Strength=meters] at top speed and lose the ability to change direction until their strike has either landed or been blocked. This grants the user the ability to vanish as a shadow if the targets speed is lower than the users.

Nun-Chucks Mastery
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Nun-Chucks
This is a simple Nun-Chucks discipline that allows the user to utilize the weapon without second thought, the user has become one with the weapon and since it moves at great speed the target has to have higher/equal Speed to/than the users in order to keep up with the weapons dance/strikes.

Bruce Force
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Nun-Chucks
A simple Nun-Chucks combo that starts with a strike to the stomach (-2 Endurance), knee (-2 Speed) then a swift move to strike the targets head, this is used to not only daze the target (-2 Will Power) but also weaken their bodies. This pummeling combination can be switched up in different orders to achieve the same effect. This effect lasts for 4 posts or until the target has regenerated from the damage received.

Reckless Abandon
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Switch it Up
This is an upgraded version of Switch it Up, which allows the user to switch between all of her weapons mid combo and change some of her styles without stopping to suit the needed tactic, such as starting a fight with Wushu, then tossing senbons at close range to finish up with a knife strike or nun-chuck combo.

Ghost Wolf
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Black Wolf., Blade.
The user must first find themselves either above or below an unsuspecting target, once they are in place and have them on lock on, they will pounce the opponent and strike them with their weapon/s between their ribs. If the wound is left untreated then it can lead to certain death.
A-Rank
Step it Up
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: The Step Up, Sword.
The user reverses The Step Up move set and begins the technique with a kick to the back of the targets knee, followed by using the same foot to kick the targets hip. The user follows with their target before surprising with a falling sword. The user aims at the targets solar plexus, using both their momentum and the targets powerless pose to their advantage.

Predator
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Ghost Wolf, Ghost Draw
The user sits at their vantage point and takes key notice of their targets whereabouts, they plan out their form of attack before picking out four targets that are within 20 meters range. Using their speed, wits and weaponry the target is able to keep up with four unsuspecting foes and use the surprise attack to her advantage. If the users Speed is higher/equal to/than the targets Speed the users movements will be hard to perceive due to unpreparedness for 3 posts.
S-Rank
Rise of the Dragon
S-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Dragon Rush, Sword, Nun-chucks, Grappling hook.
An upgraded version of Dragon Rush is a special combo attack utilizing a flurry of attacks and weaponry to fatally wound the target(s) (Up to Endurance stat/10 (max 5)] if users Speed is higher than targets Speed, though the outcome is that the user has to split the ten strike combo between the targets. The user throws a grappling hook to connect themselves with the first target, yanks them in to delivers 3 punches, a knife stab to the knee, then uses the sword to cut their stomach, followed by a 3 kick combo to their uninjured leg before using the nun-chuck to hit them across the chest and head before ending the combo with a thrust kick to send the target flying back. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion

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I Spy a Little Lie
A spy style Hotaru created to help her infiltrate, collect information, impersonate, hide and escape style. Having spent years studying people the spy has learned how to imitate and fortify information, switch personalities on the fly and vanish within seconds. The perfect style for a spy on the move.

Req: Stealth, Perception.

D-Rank
Lock Pick
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Mastering the art of using a lock pick, opening various locks, ranging from doors to cuffs.

Innocent
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Act like it
If the user has chosen to act like a cute character then Innocent can be used to attempt to trick the target into believing that they are innocent. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank or an appropriate technique to see through her lies.

Spies Intuition; Presence
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
The user performs a quick check in her surroundings every once awhile, this allows her to pick up if anyone is stalking her by recognizing faces/clothing.

Spy Make up
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Realistic Make-Up Kit
This is a basic spy technique that lets Hotaru perform minor changes in her appearance, she simply applies the make up which ends up pretty realistic. At this level Hotaru is able to make herself appear 2 years younger and up to 5 years older. More feminine or masculine.

Born To Find A Weapon
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Using her preying eyes to find the nearest weapon, whether it be a scroll, to a lethal weapon. The spy always has her eyes open for any potential weapon within her surroundings.

Pick Pocket; Minor Object
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Location of the item.
This is one of the most basic techniques the spy has in her archive, first it requires that the user knows where the item (1 post) is located on the person, then bumps into them and attempt to pick the targets pocket, if the target has lower speed than Hotaru then they won't notice. If the target has a Speed equal to or greater than Hotaru's Speed, this technique is ineffective. This only works on object smaller than a kunai and she can't plant items on the target at this level.

C-Rank
Stealth; Black Wolf
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Hotaru has learned what she can step on, and how much noise it would make, using this to her advantage the spy can nearly sprint without making noise at (-6 Speed).

Act Like it; Theater Actor
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
This is a basic spy technique that lets Hotaru control her body to the point where she can act as a totally different person, using her will to come up with a different personality. The user seems very convincing, to perform this the user requires some extended information about the area and needs to write down some simple mental notes. At this level she can't impersonate. The target needs a perception technique equivalent or an appropriate technique to the rank to see through her lies.

Pick Pocket; Intermediate Object
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Location of the item.
This is one of the most basic techniques the spy has in her archive, first it requires that the user knows where the item (1 post) is located on the person, then bumps into them and attempt to pick the targets pocket, if the target has lower Speed than the users Speed then they won't notice. This works on object smaller than a pouch and she cant plant items on the target at this level as well.

Speak Like it; Voice Acting
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
A basic spy technique that lets Hotaru alter her voice, whether she adds a different accent or changes the pitch of her tone. She can pull of male and female voices, although male voices will leave her throat soar. At this level she can't impersonate. The target needs a perception technique equivalent or an appropriate technique to the rank to see through her lies.

Spies Intuition; The Hawk
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
The user starts focusing their mind at the price trying to obtain as much information as possible. This information process makes it harder for the user to move at full speed (-6 Speed) although the user still minds her surroundings.

B-Rank
Subtle Movements
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
The user is able to pick up subtle body language, this allows the user to tell if someone is lying, or hiding something.

Stealth; Silent Wolf
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Black Wolf
Hotaru has upgraded her previous jutsu and has now learned how to sprint at full speed without making noises.

Method Acting
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite:Theater Actor
To perform this taijutsu the user must spend at least half a post preparing for the role of her life and as long as she continues to play the role the more convinced she becomes that she is that character. With enough practice the woman could act like anyone she has gathered enough information of. Although at this level it leaves little room for improvisation. The target needs a perception technique equivalent or an appropriate technique to the rank to see through her lies.

Master Voice Actor
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Voice Acting
To perform this taijutsu the user must spend at least half a post preparing, at this level there's no accent, tone of voice the spy can't hit, and no matter how high/low pitch her voice doesn't sore. This ranges from young boy/girl to old man/woman. The target needs a perception technique equivalent or an appropriate technique to the rank to see through her lies.
A-Rank
I Am Not
A-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Method Acting, Master Voice Actor.
To perform this taijutsu the user must spend at least half a post preparing for the role of her life and as long as she continues to play the role the more convinced she becomes that she is that character. With enough practice the woman could copy anyone's mannerism, characteristics, tone of voice and style of which she has gathered enough information of. At this level she is able perform great improvisations. The target needs a perception technique equivalent or an appropriate technique to the rank to see through her lies.

Mind Reader
A-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Subtle Movements
Through the art of being able to read their subtle movements, readings of emotions and appear to "predict" the outcome of the situation making it appear as if they are reading their minds. In order for this connection to be linked, the user must study the target for 4 posts, gather enough information about the targets behavioral patterns, speech and it will only works if Hotaru has higher/equal Will Power to/than the target.

S-Rank
Born To Find A Way
S-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
By studying the target/area for more than 5 posts, the user gets a hub of possibilities that can be created, within this zone it almost appears as a playground for the user as they can chose to set up traps, find various ways to enter in through fortress, lead enemies into danger, etc. The user keeps a strong grip of the information flow, giving them data on almost anything within a max 1 mile, meaning any broken branches, new footsteps will be noticeable once she returns to that specific area and allow Hotaru to notice those small changes, though it can change to smaller sizes.

Black Swan
A Black ops projectile Style created by Hotaru, heavily support fire and meant to pin down multiple targets in order to lure them into traps and or defend from incoming attacks. This style aims to be the best out there. One worthy of a true Black Ops member.

Req: Upper body, Deft hands, Projectile weapons.

D-Rank
Clash
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
After training for hours on end the user has mastered the technique be able to toss a kunai/shuriken/senbon at an incoming projectile and change it's trajectory (If the users Speed is high enough and strength is within 3 limit).

Short Range Toss
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
This technique allows the user to toss kunai/shuriken/senbon at short ranges, these tosses usually are ineffective once they reach 10 meters away. Although within this short range they are far more accurate (+3 Strength, -3 Speed).

Eagle
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
After hours of training the user has trained to track targets, training to estimate distance and speed. This technique helps the user keep task on other targets at the same time.

Dangerous
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
The difference between combat and training is danger and unpredictability. The user of this technique is experienced at loosing weapons from positions other than a set stance, maintaining offense even while acting on the defense or recovering from a fall. Such attacks are made at full Strength and accuracy.

3
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
After training for hours on end the user has mastered the technique to hand and throw three Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon with one arm at ease. They wont effect the speed/strength or aim.

6
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 3
Upgraded version of 3, where the user can carry twice as many Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon with one hand and be able to toss them at ease. They wont effect the speed/strength or aim.
C-Rank
Droplets
C-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 3
This is where the Black Swan style starts to show it's true colors. The user first fills both/one hand/s with either Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon, then proceeds to toss them at the target at great speed. During the toss the user is able to quickly reload without having to interrupt if they chose to place the weapon next to them or items from one pouch.

Bursting the seems
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Short Range Toss
This technique allows the user to toss kunai/shuriken/senbon at short ranges, these tosses usually are ineffective once they reach 15 meters away. Although within this short range they are far more accurate (+6 Strength, -6 Speed).

Weapon on Weapon action
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
This technique allows the user to toss kunai/shuriken/senbon another kunai/shuriken/senbon to arc it's trajectory, the user begins by throwing a set of projectiles before tossing another one that changes the first's directions up to 90 degrees.

Hand-Eye-Coordination
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Eagle.
Relying on the ability to discern distance and track targets, the user makes a ranged attack on a moving target. Assuming that the target's speed and direction remain the same, shots made with this technique "lead" the correct amount to almost certainly strike true.
B-Rank
Rain
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 3, Droplets 25 speed.
This is the upgraded version of Droplets. The user first fills both hands with either Kunai/Shuriken/Senbon, then proceeds to toss them at the target at great speed. During the toss the user is able to quickly reload without having to interrupt if they chose to place the weapons next to them or chose from multiple pouches and can continue until they run out of projectiles.

When it Rains
B-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Rain
The upgraded version of Rain, this is where the style really starts to shine. If the users Speed is higher/equal to/than the targets Speed they will be able to chose to use any jutsu rank lower than C-Rank to combine into their never ending onslaught of projectiles, allowing them to attack from various positions and angles. It takes a full post before the jutsu will fire off and the user must maintain the toss during the entire projectile rain.

Turret
B-Rank Stance Taijutsu
Prerequisite: 25 Speed.
This technique relies on speed to unleash a rapid series of ranged attacks against one or more targets. The user draws and launches in one fluid motion, falling into a rhythm and maintaining it. Doing so can provide effective suppression fire, urging a quarry into a trap or setting up for a future technique. The user can also attempt to pin down a number of targets equal to the user's Speed Stat (Max being 25) for the duration, which lasts for as long as the user has ammunition and maintains the attack. The user's legs must remain stationary save to pivot.
A-Rank
It pours
A-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: When it Rains
The upgraded version of When it Rains, this is where the style really starts to shine. If the users Speed is higher/equal to/than the targets Speed they will be able to chose to use any jutsu rank lower than B-Rank to combine into their never ending onslaught of projectiles, allowing them to attack from various positions and angles. It takes a full post before the jutsu will fire off and the user must maintain the toss during the entire projectile rain.
S-Rank
Monsun
S-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Weapon on Weapon action, Hand-Eye-Coordination
The user plants their feet and begins to empty their weapon stash, they will keep their eye on a target and begin to swarm them with senbons/kunai/shuriken in order to weaken the foe. The overwhelming projectile weapons twists and turns as they bounce off walls and each other and the longer the target stays pinned within the area and get targeted then they lose 8 stats (-2 Endurance, Strength, Speed, Will) per post up till 5, the wounds lasts until they recover from the damage. This technique can only be used once per thread as it empties the users weapon stash, leaving them with only a handfull left.
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D-Rank
Expand
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru will grab a smoke bomb and toss it on the ground. If the target sees this then the smoke will expanding double its original size, for an easier escape. Last 3 post.

Minor tweaks
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru will swipe her hand over her face, if the target sees this, then they will be trapped within the genjutsu. Within the genjutsu, they will see that Hotaru has gone through a minor alter (change eye color, remove piercing, changing age, growing beard) Although this only works for the face. Last for 3 post.

Doppelganger
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to block an incoming attack, if the target sees her attempt to block the incoming attack then a clone created by a swarm of Fireflies will appear in her place,. This clone functions as a simple clone, created fake that the clone "takes" damage. The clone only completes the defense transaction and once the clone has been struck it will immediately puff into scattering fireflies, this genjutsu is merely used to distract the target while the real body attempts to evade the incoming attack. Last 1 post.
C-Rank
Wait What?
C-Rank Status Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to move in for an attack, if the target sees the user take a step towards them the genjutsu will initiate. Once triggered the target will forget what form of attack s/he planned for a brief second. Last 1 post.

Forgettable
C-Rank Status Genjutsu
Prereq: Sound Init.
Hotaru preforms the handseals needed and focuses chakra to her tongue for one post. She then whistles triggering the genjutsu. This is used to make quick escapes and evade others to hide the physical features such as body proportions, hair color, and facial structure proportions. Once the genjutsu ends after 2 posts the afflicted will remember the physical features and continue their pursuit.
B-Rank
Doppelganger II
B-Rank Warp Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init, Doppelganger.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to block an incoming attack, if the target sees her attempt to block the incoming attack then four clones are created by a swarm of Fireflies, the first one will appear in her place. This clone functions as a simple illusion clone, created to "take" the damage. The clone only completes the defense transaction and once the clone has been struck it will immediately puff into scattering fireflies, at this level it will give off the sensation of actually striking, the other three will roll out of the puff and initiate an attack that has the possibility of causing distress on the target. This genjutsu is merely used to distract the target while the real body attempts to evade or counter attack. Lasts for 1 post.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Jul 22, 2020 12:06 pm

Chakra Void ability references stamina, shoul probably be CP. could probably drop it to a -2
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Post by Trusted Grader » Wed Jul 22, 2020 6:25 pm

Fixed and changed it to -2
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Doppelganger
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to block an incoming attack, if the target sees her attempt to block the incoming attack then a clone created by a swarm of Fireflies will appear in her place,. This clone functions as a simple clone, created to take in the damage. The clone only completes the defense transaction and once the clone has been struck it will immediately puff into scattering fireflies, this genjutsu is merely used to distract the target while the real body attempts to evade the incoming attack. Last 1 post.

The word of this is very confusing. It makes it seems like its actually making a clone that absorbs an attack?

Doppelganger II
B-Rank Warp Genjutsu
Prereq: Sight Init, Doppelganger.
After forming a set of hand seals, Hotaru attempt to block an incoming attack, if the target sees her attempt to block the incoming attack then four clones are created by a swarm of Fireflies, the first one will appear in her place. This clone functions as a simple clone, created to take in the damage. The clone only completes the defense transaction and once the clone has been struck it will immediately puff into scattering fireflies, the other three will roll out of the puff and initiate an attack that has the possibility of causing distress on the target. This genjutsu is merely used to distract the target while the real body attempts to evade or counter attack. Lasts for 1 post.

Same with this one.

[Wushu • Know Your Enemy]
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Having extensive experience and knowledge in martial arts and the anatomy, both through first-hand experience and theory, the user has managed to obtain and maintain great overall knowledge of the human body and its workings. This knowledge allows them easily to identify and target weak points, such as the backs of joints, organs, nose, jaw, etc.

I mean this specifies human body and such so seems it should require Arts of Medicine.

Rise of the Dragon
S-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Pre-Requirements: Dragon Rush, Sword, Nun-chucks, Grappling hook.
An upgraded version of Dragon Rush is a special combo attack utilizing a flurry of attacks and weaponry to fatally wound the target(s) (Up to Endurance stat/10 (max 5)] if users Speed is higher than targets [Will Power+Speed]/2 though the outcome is that the user has to split the ten strike combo between the targets. The user throws a grappling hook to connect themselves with the first target, yanks them in to delivers 3 punches, a knife stab to the knee, then uses the sword to cut their stomach, followed by a 3 kick combo to their uninjured leg before using the nun-chuck to hit them across the chest and head before ending the combo with a thrust kick to send the target flying back. This technique is used with Know How series to create maximum damage with minimum exertion

Lists an average, we no longer do averages. I'm also not sure why Will Power would be in consideration here.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Thu Jul 30, 2020 1:05 pm

Fixed, removed the averages, and these genjutsu only fake a hit, D-Rank gives no sensation while B-Rank gives off a fake sensation of striking :)
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Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Aug 04, 2020 8:45 pm

The wording for those genjutsu are still very confusing, to the point where I'm not even understanding what its supposed to be doing so that I can offer a correction.

Innocent
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Act like it
If the user has chosen to act like a cute character then Innocent can be used to attempt to trick the target into believing that they are innocent. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

or an appropriate technique

Pick Pocket; Minor Object
D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Location of the item.
This is one of the most basic techniques the spy has in her archive, first it requires that the user knows where the item (1 post) is located on the person, then bumps into them and attempt to pick the targets pocket, if the target has lower taijutsu than Hotaru then they won't notice. If the target has a Speed equal to or greater than Hotaru's Speed, this technique is ineffective. This only works on object smaller than a kunai and she can't plant items on the target at this level.

References the taijutsu stat

Speak Like it; Voice Acting
C-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
A basic spy technique that lets Hotaru alter her voice, whether she adds a different accent or changes the pitch of her tone. She can pull of male and female voices, although male voices will leave her throat soar. At this level she can't impersonate. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

Or an appropriate technique.


I Am Not
A-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Method Acting, Master Voice Actor.
To perform this taijutsu the user must spend at least half a post preparing for the role of her life and as long as she continues to play the role the more convinced she becomes that she is that character. With enough practice the woman could copy anyone's mannerism, characteristics, tone of voice and style of which she has gathered enough information of. At this level she is able perform great improvisations. The target needs a perception technique equivalent to the rank to see through her lies.

Same as above

Mind Reader
A-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Subtle Movements
Through the art of being able to read their subtle movements, readings of emotions and appear to "manipulate" the outcome of the situation making it appear as if they are reading their minds. In order for this connection to be linked, the user must study the target for 4 posts, gather enough information about the targets behavioral patterns, speech and it will only works if Hotaru has higher/equal Will Power to/than the target.

I don't understand what this actually does. How does this manipulate outcomes

Clash
D-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
After training for hours on end the user has mastered the technique be able to toss a kunai/shuriken/senbon at an incoming projectile and change it's trajectory (If the users Taijutsu is high enough and strength is within 3 limit).

References taijutsu stat
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Genin
Experiment 81 v2
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Iwagakure No Sato
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Jounin
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Post by Trusted Grader » Wed Aug 05, 2020 5:39 am

Fixed!

The mind reader technique is just a jutsu that allows the user to better predict the targets reactions and movement due to deep study of a character. Think Jojo and how they say "Now your going to say, this is impossible."

Then the character says it, except it won't be as meta.
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Post by ShinobiTruth » Wed Aug 12, 2020 11:20 am

Mind Reader <==== I get what you mean, but this isn't really a form of manipulation with the way you're doing it. You're taking this from Joseph Joestar, and much of his manner of combat also involved a lot of excessive conversation and taunting of his opponent. It wasn't any sort of subtle, unspoken manipulation; rather, it was agressive, verbose mental conditioning to force the opponent into an aggravated and unstable mindset, much like conditioning a bad habit in a fighting game. In its current form, you'd be more accurate to say "predict the outcome", not manipulate.

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Post by Trusted Grader » Wed Aug 26, 2020 3:55 pm

Changed to "predict"
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Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
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The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
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S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Post by Kabu » Sat Aug 29, 2020 6:07 pm

[Wushu • Know The First Step] <- This should have a speed vs speed check, though you could add in a line that says certain perception techniques would make it easier to succeed overall.

[Wushu • Know Your Techniques; One Hand] <- I don't think this really makes a whole lot of sense as a debuff. My suggestion would be to just say the user has learned to more effectively fight with one hand, freeing up the other for other purposes.
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