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Ghost Puppet Update

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Zao
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Post by Zao » Mon Aug 03, 2020 11:40 pm

Application: Ryu
Change: Adding two mechanism to 'Ghosting', 4 -> 6 to allow it to block S-rank sensory. Adding new mechanism 'Razor Wire Fingers. Please replace puppet body spoiler for the Ghost puppet with the nocode below. Thank you.
Payment: 30 points
Puppet Body MK-3: GhostShow
<General Info

Description: Built in the image of him as a young child, the body of the puppet has been crafted with extreme attention to detail in order to appear human. Slender framed, the 'child' has shaggy grey hair and an almost depressed looking expression on its face most of the time. Dark eyes and soft looking lightly tanned skin, the puppet gives the impression of someone around the age of ten or eleven, standing four feet in height and weighting about sixty pounds. Designed to be able to blend in with normal people and for reconnaissance or spy missions.


Picture: Base Mechanisms: 15
Mechanisms Per Rank Trained/Bought
  • Genin 3/4
  • Chuunin 0/4
  • Special Jounin 0/4
  • Jounin 0/4
  • Bannin 0/4
Total Mechanism: 18
Mechanisms in Use: [18/18]
Ghosting (6 Mechanism)Show

Description: The body of Hyoryu's Ghost body is constructed with a special chakra blocking material that shields the body from sensory techniques of S-Rank and below. Giving the sensory user the false impression that nothing is within their sensory range.
Dead Quiet (1 Mechanism)Show

Description: A type of material used in the creation of the body's "skin"and rubber padding has been added throughout the body of the small puppet to ensure that it makes no auditable sounds from the movement of the body or its internal parts while can be heard while moving. Those with an [Instinct] stat equal to or greater than the puppet's [Deftness] stat will still be able to pick up on the sounds of movement from the puppet body.

Wrist Senbon Launcher - Right Arm (1 Mechanism)Show
Description: A wrist mounted senbon launcher that goes around the wrist and takes up the entire length of the child like forearm, stored within a [Puppet Storage] skill inscribed on the forearm of the right arm. Able to fire senbon in rapid succession at a speed and strength equal to the puppets [Deftness] and [Strength] with a rate of fire equal to the user's [Deftness/4]. Contains 120 senbon.
Extendable Wrist Blade - Left Arm (1 Mechanism)Show
Description: A wrist mounted extendable dual sided blade crafted half from Neutronium and half from Yuudoku with the respected poison on either side of the blade, capable of extending twice to a full length of eighteen inches and up to three inches in width at the base of the blade as it tapers to the sharp tip. When not in use it is stored away on a [Puppet Storage] fuuin on the left forearm. Able to be deployed with a speed and strength equal to the puppet's [Deftness] and [Strength]
Ghost's Cloak (4 Mechanism)Show
Description: A hooded black cloak that covers the small puppet's body from head to toe. It is normally stored in a [Puppet Storage] seal on the puppet's stomach when not in use. The special ability of the cloak is that its unique material fibers naturally shift in color and appearance in order to blend in with the surroundings of the wearer. Allowing for the user to become invisible to the naked eye as long as the user's moves at a [Speed] that doesn't exceed 3/4 of their [Deftness] .
No Odor (1 Mechanism)Show

Description: Through the use of a special chemical, the user has been able to nigh completely eliminate the smell of the puppet body, shielding the puppet user from smell based techniques unless the target has advanced smell techniques or discipline is equal to or greater than the user's [Deftness] while using this body.
Spying Eye (1 Mechanism)Show

Description: Contained within the left eye of the puppet and when activated by the user channeling chakra into it and shutting the other eye this allows for the puppet eye to extend the vision of the user out to a maximum of (Deftness)/5 miles, but causes for their vision to become tunneled.
Spying Ears (1 Mechanism)Show

Description: A mechanism contained within the ears of the puppet and when activated by the user this allows for the puppet user to extend their hearing out to (Deftness)/2 meters, allowing for them to hear even the faintest of sounds and/or whispers within their range. Normally used for eavesdropping on the conversation of others.
Spy Fiber Obtics (1 Mechanism)Show
Description Each finger tip on the left hand is able to open up to allow a small one eighth inch fiber optic cable to extend within the hand and into the forearm up to fifteen meters. Each cable has a tiny camera/eye located on the tip allow for the puppet body to see through them as if they were his own normal eyes. They are able to be controlled at a [Deftness] and [Strength] equal to the puppet body's. These allow for the puppet body user to easily spy through cracks in a wall, under doors, or around corners without the need to expose its body or compromise itself during a mission.
Razor Wire Fingers (1 Mechanism) Right Hand 1Show
Description: The finger tips of the hand are each able to disconnect from the fingers at the first knuckle and extend to reveal a thin piece of razor wire attaching the end of the fingertips together with their finger. Each of the fingertips and attached razor wire can be manipulated at a speed and strength equal to the Deftness of the puppet body user. Each wire is capable of extending up to fifteen meters and retracting from the concealed spools with the forearm. The razor wire has a cutting edge like that of a traditional knife or kunai and is useful when dealing with unarmored or unarmed targets using the wires to envelop the target or targets. Thee of the wires are forged from Neutronium and two from Yuudoku, each with their respected poisoned applied.


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[Spoiler=Puppet Body MK-3: Ghost]

[center][big]<General Info[/big][/center] 

[b]Description:[/b] Built in the image of him as a young child, the body of the puppet has been crafted with extreme attention to detail in order to appear human. Slender framed, the 'child' has shaggy grey hair and an almost depressed looking expression on its face most of the time. Dark eyes and soft looking lightly tanned skin, the puppet gives the impression of someone around the age of ten or eleven, standing four feet in height and weighting about sixty pounds. Designed to be able to blend in with normal people and for reconnaissance or spy missions. 


[b]Picture:[/b] 
[center]
[img]https://i.postimg.cc/4NLPVD96/20190831-085036.jpg[/img]
[/center]

[b]Base Mechanisms[/b]: 15
[B]Mechanisms Per Rank Trained/Bought[/b]
[List][*]Genin 3/4
[*]Chuunin 0/4
[*]Special Jounin 0/4
[*]Jounin 0/4
[*]Bannin 0/4
[/list]

[b]Total Mechanism[/b]: 18
[b]Mechanisms in Use[/b]: [18/18]

[spoiler=Ghosting (6 Mechanism)]

[B]Description: [/b] The body of Hyoryu's Ghost body is constructed with a special chakra blocking material that shields the body from sensory techniques of S-Rank and below. Giving the sensory user the false impression that nothing is within their sensory range.

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Dead Quiet (1 Mechanism)]

[B]Description: [/b] A type of material used in the creation of the body's "skin"and rubber padding has been added throughout the body of the small puppet to ensure that it makes no auditable sounds from the movement of the body or its internal parts while can be heard while moving. Those with an [Instinct] stat equal to or greater than the puppet's [Deftness] stat will still be able to pick up on the sounds of movement from the puppet body. 


[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Wrist Senbon Launcher - Right Arm (1 Mechanism)]

[Center] [Img]
https://i.postimg.cc/Y0DhFRBN/4a90018baf3dd9112229954dd2e1e2d1.jpg
[/img][/center]

[B]Description: [/b] A wrist mounted senbon launcher that goes around the wrist and takes up the entire length of the child like forearm, stored within a [Puppet Storage] skill inscribed on the forearm of the right arm. Able to fire senbon in rapid succession at a speed and strength equal to the puppets [Deftness] and [Strength] with a rate of fire equal to the user's [Deftness/4]. Contains 120 senbon.

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Extendable Wrist Blade - Left Arm (1 Mechanism)]

[Center] [Img]
https://i.postimg.cc/QCdFVPwx/20190908-224116.jpg
[/img][/center]

[B]Description: [/b] A wrist mounted extendable dual sided blade crafted half from Neutronium and half from Yuudoku with the respected poison on either side of the blade, capable of extending twice to a full length of eighteen inches and up to three inches in width at the base of the blade as it tapers to the sharp tip. When not in use it is stored away on a [Puppet Storage] fuuin on the left forearm. Able to be deployed with a speed and strength equal to the puppet's [Deftness] and [Strength]

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Ghost's Cloak (4 Mechanism)]

[center][img]

[/img][/center]

[b]Description[/b]: A hooded black cloak that covers the small puppet's body from head to toe. It is normally stored in a [Puppet Storage] seal on the puppet's stomach when not in use. The special ability of the cloak is that its unique material fibers naturally shift in color and appearance in order to blend in with the surroundings of the wearer. Allowing for the user to become invisible to the naked eye as long as the user's moves at a [Speed] that doesn't exceed 3/4 of their [Deftness] .

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=No Odor (1 Mechanism)]

[b]Description:[/b] Through the use of a special chemical, the user has been able to nigh completely eliminate the smell of the puppet body, shielding the puppet user from smell based techniques unless the target has advanced smell techniques or discipline is equal to or greater than the user's [Deftness] while using this body.

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Spying Eye (1 Mechanism)]

[Center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/0NwxF0Xs/20190806-211239.jpg[/img][/center] 
[b]Description[/b]: Contained within the left eye of the puppet and when activated by the user channeling chakra into it and shutting the other eye this allows for the puppet eye to extend the vision of the user out to a maximum of (Deftness)/5 miles, but causes for their vision to become tunneled.

[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Spying Ears (1 Mechanism)]

[b]Description[/b]: A mechanism contained within the ears of the puppet and when activated by the user this allows for the puppet user to extend their hearing out to (Deftness)/2 meters, allowing for them to hear even the faintest of sounds and/or whispers within their range. Normally used for eavesdropping on the conversation of others.

[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Spy Fiber Obtics (1 Mechanism)]

[center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/SRmC2ZZJ/20191027-133652.jpg[/img][/center]

[b]Description[/b] Each finger tip on the left hand is able to open up to allow a small one eighth inch fiber optic cable to extend within the hand and into the forearm up to fifteen meters. Each cable has a tiny camera/eye located on the tip allow for the puppet body to see through them as if they were his own normal eyes. They are able to be controlled at a [Deftness] and [Strength] equal to the puppet body's. These allow for the puppet body user to easily spy through cracks in a wall, under doors, or around corners without the need to expose its body or compromise itself during a mission. 

[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Razor Wire Fingers (1 Mechanism) Right Hand 1]

[Center][img]https://i.postimg.cc/7hn57dfP/c26eead716c091b7aa57d3b75e16f968.jpg[/img][/center]

[B]Description[/b]: The finger tips of the hand are each able to disconnect from the fingers at the first knuckle and extend to reveal a thin piece of razor wire attaching the end of the fingertips together with their finger. Each of the fingertips and attached razor wire can be manipulated at a speed and strength equal to the Deftness of the puppet body user. Each wire is capable of extending up to fifteen meters and retracting from the concealed spools with the forearm. The razor wire has a cutting edge like that of a traditional knife or kunai and is useful when dealing with unarmored or unarmed targets using the wires to envelop the target or targets. Thee of the wires are forged from Neutronium and two from Yuudoku, each with their respected poisoned applied. 


[/spoiler]
[/spoiler]

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Saisuko Zao - Suna Bannin - Spirit Weapon Saint

Kyōhō Ken - The White Snake Sage - S Rank Assassin/Bounty Hunter

Aburame Hisato S-rank Mn / Inactive

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Arashiyama Ning - Kumo Chuunin - Weilder of the Ghost Spear

Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

Genso - Elemental Crafting Shaman - A Rank Monk - Inactive

Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

Naegi, Chin - A-rank MN / Inactive







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Post by Das Kirb » Thu Aug 06, 2020 2:29 pm

Seems simple enough. 1/2

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Post by Niro » Mon Aug 10, 2020 5:17 pm

Did you talk to Nafan about adding this during the event? If not, this'll be stuck on hold until it's over.
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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Post by Zao » Mon Aug 10, 2020 6:58 pm

This is for after the event
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Tsukino Hisato - Kiri Chuunin - Seven Swordsman Dagger

Saisuko Zao - Suna Bannin - Spirit Weapon Saint

Kyōhō Ken - The White Snake Sage - S Rank Assassin/Bounty Hunter

Aburame Hisato S-rank Mn / Inactive

Old CharactersShow
Inactive/Dead

Arashiyama Ning - Kumo Chuunin - Weilder of the Ghost Spear

Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

Genso - Elemental Crafting Shaman - A Rank Monk - Inactive

Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

Naegi, Chin - A-rank MN / Inactive







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Post by TheLacarix » Fri Aug 14, 2020 8:11 am

1/2
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The White Eyed Demon of the Leaf
Aizawa, Yoru
S-Rank - Bannin
Konohagakure - ANBU

Shiazu, Ico
D-Rank - Genin
Kirigakure

Aono, Ikuto
A-Rank - Shogun
Land of Tea

Hondo (Aizawa), Haru
C-Rank
Land of Tea

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Post by Niro » Fri Aug 14, 2020 1:54 pm

Accepted
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Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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