Inki

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Inki

Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Aug 25, 2020 1:10 am

Iziyoira, Inki
General Information Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 5’4"
Weight: 112lbs
Physical Features: Short dusty brown hair, Inki has been told all his life he looks blonde when in the sun (which is all the time). He has bright hazel eyes, and a small nose. A face free of blemishes, freckles, or scars, Inki’s elder sisters are often frustrated with his seemingly flawless skin, which has a slight olive tone to it. He is not overly fit, but is in better shape than his non-shinobi peers.
Clothing/Accessories: Inki wears rings on both his thumbs, with black opals as the gem on the rings. He wears a white tunic top that covers him and protects him from the harsh desert heat. Blue pants are worn, with black shinobi sandals.
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Personality: A Neutral Good person in many ways, Inki doesn’t really seem to have any sort of codified belief system. Young, he’s not yet had the time to develop an ideology beyond what he’s been taught in school. He simply wants to enjoy life, and spends much of his time looking for ways to have fun. He takes a lot of pride in being a shinobi of the great and mighty Sunagakure, and wants to uphold its image. Through his short time as a shinobi Inki has become aware of the idiosyncrasies of Sunagakure and how sometimes what they are taught goes against what the leadership around him is doing, but he doesn’t yet understand how to question them or why it would be. As a shinobi, Inki genuinely enjoys the thrill of combat, and while he hasn’t had to take a life yet, he understands the seriousness of the take. While fighting, Inki is often serious, suppressing the fun he’s having in order to treat it as seriousness of the situation. Within, however, he is extremely pleased to be engaging in battle, and views it as much of a mental battle as a physical one.

Battle Information Village: Sunagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 7
  • Endurance: 7
  • Control: 7
  • Strength: 7
  • Speed: 7
  • Willpower: 7
Equipment:
Inki wears a weaponry pouch on his left leg, within it he has 5 kunai, 5 exploding tags, and 20 senbon.

Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Katon
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Katon]
Taijutsu[Close Quarters Combat]
Genjutsu[Sight]
Fighting Style
A mixed fighter, Inki uses a combination of Katon and Genjutsu to corner his opponent into close quarters combat. The build up of damage from Katon and cornering them results in typically pretty easy wins.

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
KatonShow
– D-rank – Ignition Material
D-rank Katon Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals then focuses on a 3m area anywhere within 10m of him. This area becomes coated in a film of katon chakra for 5 posts that removes it’s need to have flammable material for the fires started by katon’s passive to spread.

Fireball
D-rank Katon Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals then exhales a fireball approximately 1x1x1m in size that flies forward with [Control] speed & strength.

Explosive
D-rank Katon Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals, created a baseball sized ball of fire in their hands. The fire can be held for 3 posts, and placed on any surface. At the end of the 3 posts it detonates, exploding with [Control] strength, but also throwing fire everywhere around it.

Footprints
D-rank Katon Ninjutsu
The user does a series of hand seals, channeling katon chakra to their feet. For the next 5 posts, they will release a foot print of katon with [Control] strength every time they step, littering the battlefield with katon and allowing the fire to spread.
TaijutsuShow
– D-rank – Hot Fist
D-rank NinTaijutsu Maneuver
[Close Quarters Combat]
Inki will throw a wide punch, moving his hand through any fire in his range as doing so, channeling and using chakra on his hand to grab the fire. When he strikes the target the chakra on his hand will release and attach to the opponent, igniting them.

In Step
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[Close Quarters Combat]
When the opponent takes a step back, Inki will mimic their movements, taking a step forward and placing his foot where theirs previously was, maintaining the exact amount of distance between the two of them. If Inki can match their speed, this can be used successfully in order to remove their ability to retreat.

Rotate
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[Close Quarters Combat]
When dodging a straight blow, Inki can take a step to the outside and do a 360 rotation around the strike. As he is doing so he’ll extend his arm, in preparation to strike his opponent on the back of the head. This gives him +3 Strength when striking, but reduces his Endurance by -3 as he isn’t able to see the opponent fully if they have rapidly successive blows.

Knock Back
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[Close Quarters Combat]
When striking, Inki can elect to twist his fist in such a manner that the strike has increased knock back power (+3 strength), but reduced ability to cause damage (-3 strength), effectively allowing him to push opponents backwards.
GenjutsuShow
Intensity
D-rank Illusion Genjutsu
Doing a series of hand seals, Inki will capture anyone who sees him doing this in the genjutsu. For the next 3 posts, all his katon jutsu will seem much brighter. Looking directly at them will cause most people to squint.

Open Flame
D-rank Illusion Genjutsu
Doing a series of hand seals, Inki will capture anyone who sees him doing so in the genjutsu. For the next 3 posts, all his katon jutsu and fire produced by them will appear 2x larger than they are.

Fizzle
D-rank Illusion Genjutsu
Inki can perform the hand seals for this technique, then perform a katon jutsu that can be launched or thrown. Anyone who sees the katon jutsu will be caught in this genjutsu. As the katon jutsu flies through the air, the flames will fizzle out revealing several kunai flying in its place. This can be used to cause improper defenses.

Wall
D-rank Illusion Genjutsu
Doing a series of hand seals, Inki can reach out in any direction and do an upwards motion with either hand capturing anyone who sees him do so in this genjutsu. For the next 3 posts it will appear as if the gesture caused a wall of katon to burst from the ground, 5m tall, 5m wide and 2m wide. This can be used to help push opponents into certain positions.

History
Historical AccountsShow
Born to two shinobi, Inki has raised to take the same path as his parents. His mother would unfortunately die on a mission during his younger years, leaving him with just his father. Inki is far from an excellent shinobi, but has a strong base in most skills. His father raised him in a safe and loving environment, and spent much time teaching the various principals and tenants that come with being a shinobi. Having gone through the academy, Inki was a middle of the road student, far from exceptional but still not a failure. Once graduating, he was placed on a team for 6 months, while out on a mission that had been mischaracterized to the village as a simply courier mission, Inki’s two teammates died when ambushed by missing ninja, the jounin leader only able to save Inki’s life. He’s not waiting to be placed on a new team, which has given him a new appreciation for life.

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Kemurigakure no Sato

Taishou of Iron Country
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Experiment 81 v2
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[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
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[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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Post by Das Kirb » Wed Aug 26, 2020 4:23 pm

Hot Fistb <-- Random b and also should probably say something about a channel or seal. Nothing complex but something non-the-less.

In Step <-- "Assuming speed allows."

Rotate <-- I'm having trouble understanding the stat buff. I feel it shouldn't increase the power for the strike. I also have no idea why endurance is being reduced. If anything it should be an effective buff of speed of strike at sacrifice of speed vs counter strikes.

Knock Back <-- Broken spoiler tag. Also, how is twisting the fist increasing knock back power? Twisting the fist would add torsion to the damage, causing more surface wounding but not actually provide additional force. Perhaps use more shoulder power for push through at sacrifice of something else? Also, should potentially have a stat check mentioned.

Open Flame/ <-- Broken bold tag I'm assuming.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Aug 26, 2020 7:54 pm

Fixed

Fixed

The rotation gives a boost to strength just like it does in real life, you get more power spinning a strike like that. It causes a - in Endurance because Endurance is how well you handle damage and Inki isn't able to protect himself here so he's less resilient to it.

Rasengen twists and it has lots of knockback. I mean its anime logic, I don't think it matters a ton does it ? Not sure a stat check is necessary because the stat check is inherent to taijutsu.

fixed
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Kirigakure No Sato
Kemurigakure no Sato

Taishou of Iron Country
Kirigakure No Sato
Genin
Experiment 81 v2
Sunagakure No Sato
Genin
The Soul Host
Iwagakure No Sato
Special Jounin
The Tungsten Princess
Sunagakure No Sato
Jounin
The Revolutionary
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[Kenketi Tenteki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Special Jounin]
[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
[Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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Post by Niro » Sat Aug 29, 2020 6:10 pm

random /spoiler between tai and gen
#MakeIwaGreatAgain
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Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Aug 30, 2020 1:44 pm

Fixed
Mistaki ShioShiimu KozanGekko IndraShoshiki HeiyaHizashi Ikinari
Kirigakure No Sato
Kemurigakure no Sato

Taishou of Iron Country
Kirigakure No Sato
Genin
Experiment 81 v2
Sunagakure No Sato
Genin
The Soul Host
Iwagakure No Sato
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The Tungsten Princess
Sunagakure No Sato
Jounin
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[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
[Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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Post by Nafan~ » Thu Sep 03, 2020 1:58 am

Hot Fistb
^ random B is still there. Should probably also be Katon as it involves manipulating fire.

Other than that looks good.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Sep 03, 2020 11:56 am

Fixed.

Not that it matters much for anything, but the jutsu uses chakra to grab fire, not produce it. So not Katon since it could use any fire. It’s just a chakra film so you can grab it. Too easy.
Mistaki ShioShiimu KozanGekko IndraShoshiki HeiyaHizashi Ikinari
Kirigakure No Sato
Kemurigakure no Sato

Taishou of Iron Country
Kirigakure No Sato
Genin
Experiment 81 v2
Sunagakure No Sato
Genin
The Soul Host
Iwagakure No Sato
Special Jounin
The Tungsten Princess
Sunagakure No Sato
Jounin
The Revolutionary
Past CharactersShow
[Kenketi Tenteki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Special Jounin]
[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
[Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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Post by Nafan~ » Thu Sep 03, 2020 11:23 pm

1/2

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