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[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:54 am
by Sia
Username: Sia
Owner: Muramasa, Maido
Rashu
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| Age: | Gender: | Height: | Weight: | Fur: | Eyes:
| | 3 weeks?
| Female
| 1 foot long
| smoll baby
| Black and white Mottled
| Amber |
Rashu is a tiny puppy with wings that have claws on the end of them. These wings however are folded into the back and generally aren't noticeable due to the fur shrouding Rashu. They do not currently allow flight, but will do so once the companion achieves a Stat Average of 10. A mottle of black and white, Rashu appears very wolf-like in apperance, yet with eyes of a great serpent. Fur as scales and claws as talons, it is a walking creature of the utmost oddit.
Rashu is much like a normal puppy. Wild with play, eager to please, a joy to cuddle. Rashu listens to Maido, Hisayo, and Kayoko explicitily. Rashu is a newborn tiny wolf-dragon animal spirit thing. A life-saving effort from Maido, it is the merging of a small wolf and the heart of a dragon.
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A tiny Pup, Rashu has little combat experience.
Trinity Heart:From the ashes, a new beginning. Like a shell, Rashu has a heart. It is the dragons shell. Should the shell be destroyed, they should both die. But this is with benefits to them both. By living a symbiotic life such as Maido does with her Faisa, Rashu can be bound to the child, Malicite. Malicite, the young dragon, will provide benefits of transformation in a special blend of dragon's fire and wolf's fur; a hybrid. A small creature with heart of dragon and wolf. To coexist, is the only way to live. Should this shared [core] be improperly treated, Maido and her followers are the only beings able of saving them, her being the only living practitioner of Kakujutsu ensures it. No other character may match it without her personally teaching them. This merging will dedicate Rashu's stamina into a [core], shaped like a dragon's egg, but the size of a wolfs heart. The owner of this ability has a very light layer of fur that are as hard as dragon's scales but feel suede like metal to the nail. Through the utilization of transformations and jutsu, this body can transform into several forms of draconian and canine appearance, but with the aforementioned fur appearing instead of scales. They will be able to access elements available to them, this form will not grant them any. At will, through the use of proper jutsu, they may turn their body into any of their elements and any physical strike made by the owner of this ability will apply all elemental passives, utilizing their [control] stat to apply said passives. This ability makes the owner susceptible to both Kakujutsu and Tenkujutsu, as well as Chiton. If the owner of this ability requires lungs to breathe, they may freely breathe Smoke, Dust, and Fire [/color]
Kemuriton:Kemuriton, or smoke style, is a Katon Extension in affinity, but shares many attributes with other elemental jutsu. It is susceptible to anything known to displace the likes of Mist, Fog, Gas, Ash, or other particulates. Fuuton in particular tends to displace it quite well. Smoke has no temperature naturally, and the caster of Kuriton techniques cannot increase or decrease the temperature during cast. However, smoke jutsu are all susceptible to changes in temperature. Being in contact with Katon, Hiton, Raiton, Ash, Kaenton, Hyouton,Yugeton, or Youton will case the smoke jutsu to copy the passive of the element in question and apply it within the structure of the smoke appropriately. Smoke otherwise has no passive and in copying another elements passive it does not negate the incoming jutsu by any means. By default, Kuriton jutsu are a dark black in color but once absorbing and copying an elemental passive the smoke will change color to that of the chakra type in question, appropriately. When taking on the passives of another element, the the average of the Smoke caster and the other elements casters [conntrol] will be used to determine the appropriate passive stats, rounded down if only 1 caster participated, but rounding up if more than 1 caster participated. | ,1 |
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| Rank: | Village: | Primary Chakra Affinity: | Secondary Chakra Affinity: | Tertiary Chakra Affinity:
| | D-Ranked Pet
| Kirigakure
| Fuuton
| Katon
| Doton |
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| Chakra Pool: | Endurance: | Control: | Strength: | Speed: | Willpower:
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D-Ranked:
†Kemuriton: Produce Smoke
D-Ranked Kemuriton
After having a human form the necessary hand seals, this companion will begin to breathe out thick smoke into a an area up to 10 m x 10 m x 10 m. The smoke limits the visibility of those inside to 4 meters in any direction. This technique lasts a number of posts equal to 1/2 the user's Chakra Pool.
†Kemuriton: Move Smoke
D-Ranked Kemuriton
After having a human form the necessary hand seals, this companion will cause the smoke to shift and move in whatever direction they please. This smoke moves at [Control] speed, and while casting this technique the companion cannot move or cast other techniques. This does not allow them to change the shape of the smoke, and may only be used on D-Ranked Smoke Jutsu (Or Chakraless pre-existing smoke sources).
†Kemuriton: Smoke Anchor
D-Ranked Kemuriton
After having a human form the necessary hand seals, this companion will let out a deep breath, stabilizing the smoke they are residing in. [Control] or lower strength fuuton jutsu will still work in the smoke, but will no longer displace it, allowing the smoke jutsu to be maintained easier. Additionally, the duration of the smoke will be extended by 2 posts.
†Kemuriton: Smoke Fade
D-Ranked Kemuriton
After having a human form the necessary hand seals, this companion can control the transparency of the smoke they are residing in to become much more lucid or clear in a 2x2x2m area. If this is used on a blanket of smoke with another's chakra within it, it requires a higher [Control] strength than the caster. This increased visibility lasts for up to 3 posts.
†Kemuriton: Smoke Hide
D-Ranked Kemuriton
After having a human form the necessary hand seals, this companion will become engulfed in smoke, constantly exuding smoke from itself in a radius equal to 1/2 their [control] in meters, exuding from them at a speed of [control], for a number of posts equal to up to half their [chakra pool].
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Oct 04, 2020 11:02 pm
by Nafan~
Your conc calls the element Kuriton and the jutsu are labelled Kemuriton. Just thought I'd point out the discrepancy.
As for your element itself, it's going to need to specify whether it copies passives at the original jutsu's strength or the kuri/kemuri jutsu's strength.
Kemuriton: Move Smoke
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
^ This is going to need to be a lot more defined, cause atm it could read as Kinesis-lite(tm). Perhaps specify that it targets a single body of smoke of a particular size, and you can't cause it to change shape etc?
Kemuriton: Smoke Anchor
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
^ Two techs have this name. They both have the same issue. Again probably specify a single body of smoke.
Kemuriton: Smoke Hide
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
^ I'm probably not going to give you Cont in Meters for a D-rank. You can have half that. Also it needs a speed of spread.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2020 10:32 am
by Sia
Fixed.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2020 7:18 am
by TheLacarix
I'm going to put this on hold for now as I'm not entirely sure what is happening with Maido and the companions you have on your mod. I don't want things getting mixed up!
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2020 7:33 pm
by Forte
This is already ready to be accepted. Revamped into new system. Its a d- rank New pet. Don't even need a mod for it right? Its separate
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sat Oct 17, 2020 9:23 pm
by Sia
Forte: ↑Sat Oct 17, 2020 7:33 pm
This is already ready to be accepted. Revamped into new system. Its a d- rank New pet. Don't even need a mod for it right? Its separate
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2020 4:35 am
by TheLacarix
But you have new companions in your mod, so it's all very confusing what you're actually doing
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2020 8:55 am
by Sia
They are getting revamped and are not new.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2020 2:41 pm
by TheLacarix
They are not on your previous app.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2020 6:20 pm
by Forte
Whoops. Meant to quote something
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2020 5:57 am
by Sia
That's not really relevant to this application though.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2020 1:10 pm
by TheLacarix
It is, as you now have multiple new comapnions all over the place. Once you've sorted it all out message on the discord and I'll go over it all properly.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2020 5:46 pm
by Sia
Got it. This should be good now
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2020 3:11 pm
by Niro
Rashu is a tiny puppy with wings that have claws on the end of them. These wings however are folded into the back and generally aren't noticeable due to the fur shrouding Rashu. They do not currently allow flight, but will do so once the companion achieves a Stat Average of 10. A mottle of black and white, Rashu appears very wolf-like in apperance, yet with eyes of a great serpent. Fur as scales and claws as talons, it is a walking creature of the utmost oddit. <-just remove the stat average part and give it wings when it can use them. Claws/teeth should go in equipment if they're capable of dealing damage too.
Trinity Heart<-Kakujutsu works on cores and beings that house them like elemental bodies and puppet bodies. This being is neither elemental body nor puppet body but has a core for some reason? It having a core makes no sense systemically, it should just be a heart. To place another beings heart in a spirit would require both iijutsu, organ transplant, and tenkujutsu. You mention stamina not CP. Being as hard as dragon scales without a stat tie in means nothing. It should still have the elements on its sheet, even if a specific form is required to access one of them. Not being an ebody and then turning your body into an element would be an ability by itself and they for some reason have immunities to particulates stacked on.
Smoke would be an Extension of Katon
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2020 6:21 am
by Sia
Will fix accordingly It has a core, the size of a heart, the shape of an egg. I'll clarify.
Quote:This merging will dedicate Rashu's stamina into a [core], shaped like a dragon's egg, but the size of a wolfs heart.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2020 10:23 am
by Ace Trainer
The ability is too wordy, all the lore doesn't need to be in the ability. It can just be "Because fused with demon, Rashu has x, y, z" way easier to read that way.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2020 7:46 pm
by Sia
Will slim it down soon then.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:52 am
by Sia
That should be better
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2021 6:56 pm
by Gilak
Trinity Heart <-- Ability is still full of Lore/Fluff, not exactly sure that we can allow this ability to use every single passive. If i recall correctly this is why Glitter Style was perma banned from the site.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2021 12:50 pm
by Ace Trainer
5 days.
[Companion] Rashu
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:32 pm
by Ace Trainer
Denied