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Orik Seiei

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Orik seiei
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Post by Orik seiei » Wed Nov 11, 2020 7:11 pm

Seiei Orik


[Nindo]May the spirit be with you

General Information Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 123
Physical Features: Small stature, but a tough, slight muscular build with a slim body.
  • Face/head:fai, average with no distinguished features.
  • Body: Thin, yet mescular
  • Notable Features:----
His spear that is always with him no matter where he goes, gifted to him from a monk.
Clothing/Accessories:All in picture.
Picture:
Personality: Laid back, and slow and with a good perception or sixth sense if you will. Seeks justice, freedom, and peace Although very hard to anger he can be passionate about helping those in need.
  • General:
  • Hopes/Dreams:To go on missions and do his village proud.
  • Fears: spiders
  • Combat Mentality:------------

Battle Information Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool:10
  • Endurance:10
  • Control:10
  • Strength:5
  • Speed:10
  • Willpower:10
Equipment:20 Kunai, 10 Smoke bombs, 20 Shuriken, 10 paper bombs.
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity:Lightning
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
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Overlay Genjutsu:
This user has learn to create entire worlds in the heads of their targets. These genjutsu allow the user to completely recreate reality within the heads of their target, and interact with them in various ways through the techniques. Overlay stand out as a threat in genjutsu users as they lapse on a single second in real time, but can last extremely long in the heads of the target.
Requires One Genjutsu Concentration Slot.
Requires Genjutsu Initiator Concentration, Status and Warp Concentratios
User cannot have Jikukan, Heavenly Tai or Kinesis Concentrations.

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Warp Genjutsu:
This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target.
Requires One Genjutsu Concentration Slot.
Requires Genjutsu Initiator Concentration
Taijutsu The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Polearm Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Polearm Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with staves, spears, halberds, pikes, scythes and other like weapons. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.

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Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.

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Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

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Rigid Structure:
The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

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Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
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TaijutsuShow
*Fault Line
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The practitioner throws a palm strike towards an opponents leg utilizing all their momentum and force by swinging their shoulders and hips, targeting the opponent's thigh. Landing this strike causes immense discomfort and a hairline fracture in one of the bones, and if the opponent continues to heavily use and strain the targeted leg, the hairline fracture can degrade into a full severe fracture. The practitioner's Strength must be 5 points higher than the opponent's Strength to achieve the desired effect of this technique.

*Quaker
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 10 strength.
This taijutsu utilizes the weaker spot of the fibula in the calf to snap the soft bone. This creates intense pain in their calf, making them unable to stand, and it causes immense pain on the damaged leg. The practitioner's Strength must be 5 points higher than the opponent's Strength to achieve the desired effect of this technique.

*Stop Pointing
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
This technique requires the practitioner to get close and personal, grabbing the opponent and forcing them into an armbar. Once the opponent is forced into an armbar, the practitioner must then open up their fingers and bend them back with immense force until they break or dislocate. This prevents the opponent from forming handseals unless they relocate their fingers or mend the bone breakage. The practitioner's Strength must be 5 points higher than the opponent's Strength to achieve the desired effect of this technique.

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Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Place them here]
Taijutsu[The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.]
Genjutsu[Sound Initiated Genjutsu This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.
This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.
Requires One Genjutsu Concentration Slot
Requires genjutsu Initiator Concentration
GenjutsuShow
*[Genjutsu • Paranoid]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then whistle. Anyone who hears the whistle will be captured in this genjutsu. For the following 4 posts, the target will see a shadow in the corner of their eyes, constantly shifting out of view when they attempt to look at it.
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then within the next post, snap their fingers. Anyone who hears the snapping will hear an explosion in the distance behind them. This works as an effective distraction, or a scare tactic, if properly utilized.
*[Genjutsu • Doubt]
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then whistle, initiating the genjutsu in anyone who hears the whistle. For the next three posts, the victims of this technique will feel tinges of doubt when listening to other people talk. While the doubt isn't strong, it creates a slight feeling that can be used to dissuade them from following instructions of other people if utilized properly.
*[Genjutsu • Dull Pain]
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu
The user does the needed hand seals, and then locks eyes with the target to trap the target in the genjutsu. For the next 10 posts, any pain that the target feels as if nothing really happened, effectively lessening all pain and nerve responses. The target would still be damaged, but any damage done to them would feel as though it is far less severe than it actually it, and as such they will usually overestimate their own stamina.
*[Genjutsu • Scatter and Run]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
If the genjutsu user ever needs to run, this is the ideal technique to use. The target simply has to see them take their first step to run after the user has performed the hand seals. If the target saw the first step to run, the genjutsu caster will suddenly split into 90 "clones." This will allow the genjutsu caster to run away amidst the confusion, as the mass of clones run in every single direction at a speed of 20. Of course, touching one of these "clones" will cause them to disperse in a cloud of smoke, but they will do everything in their power to avoid making contact. If the clones aren't touched, the jutsu lasts for up to 6 posts.
*[Genjutsu • Fear]
B-Ranked Status Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, the wink at their target. Should the target see them wink, they'll be caught in the genjutsu. For the next 4 posts, the target will have a sense of fear originating from the user and things they do. If the user takes a step forward, the target will be more inclined to take a step back, threats will have a higher efficacy, and they'll be more inclined to simply do what they can to avoid having to fight the user.

History
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Growing up in the land of water Orik became a fishermen in his early childhood. Making money from a young age he saved all he could. With a strong sense of justice, and discipline although he seems and acts lazy at times. He grew up with two loving parents, always spending time when they could together. He had a good and average growing up, he took the entrance exams and passed the academy years later. His parents called away on a mission one sunny day; were tasked with escorting a prisoner back to his land for sentencing. So they set off, and Orik was left alone to fend for himself until they returned. AS his first act of independence he patrolled the village. Breaking up bar fights, walked the drunk home, helping old ladies, and finding peoples lost pets and other errands. While he was out on patrol he came across a silent monk in trouble simply out numbered Orik came to his aid without a request for it. The monk was injured from a previous instance of unknow origin. He was unable to fight and it seemed he was just passing though. After several minutes Orik with some bruises and scrapes defended the monk the best he could. When the fight was over Orik noticed a kunai in his leg; the monk pressed his hands together and held them over the wound. As it healed Orik thanked him but the monk was silent. Before departing he left Orik with the spear he had been carrying as a gift for his birthday. With a note saying cherish life, and live with peace. The monk had departed, disappearing into the distance with the sunrise. Orik waited for his parents return day after day, practicing with the spear and one day a letter was received. His family had been killed in battle. From that day forward Oeik began searching for team members to watch his back, and a new family.

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Post by Legacy » Sat Dec 19, 2020 11:41 am

You seem to have misplaced a few things on your template. Where you have a list of your concentrations currently are not supposed to go inside if your ability section as that is an area reserved for unique things such as body modifications, special properties of your avatar like Kekkei Genkai or Kekkei Tota. I'd like to encourage you to have a look at the template found on the character creation section of the Saigen sub forum for more examples of what I mean.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Dec 25, 2020 9:47 am

I just wanted to double down on the suggestions Strategist made, let us know if you have any questions.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Jan 08, 2021 5:58 pm

5 days to update
Mistaki ShioShiimu KozanGekko IndraShoshiki HeiyaHizashi Ikinari
Kirigakure No Sato
Kemurigakure no Sato

Taishou of Iron Country
Kirigakure No Sato
Genin
Experiment 81 v2
Sunagakure No Sato
Genin
The Soul Host
Iwagakure No Sato
Special Jounin
The Tungsten Princess
Sunagakure No Sato
Jounin
The Revolutionary
Past CharactersShow
[Kenketi Tenteki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Special Jounin]
[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
[Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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HonchkrOnu
ArticOnu
RichardUnknown
RichardGreen
RichardRed
RichardBlack
RichardGold
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ReallyisOnu
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Post by Das Kirb » Sat Jan 23, 2021 2:04 pm

Sorry mah dude.

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