[REvamp] Chikara

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[REvamp] Chikara

Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Feb 13, 2021 6:25 pm

Application: https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/vie ... &t=8084876
Change: Revamping character, aged him up, updated the archive jutsu and fixed the app.
  • Fixed
  • Changed stats
  • Changed to Ryo
  • Aged up
  • Description and picture change
  • Stats matching system and perk from revamp guide
  • Pauldron update
  • Jutsu update to match archives
  • Extended range on doujutsu as the price or it is higher than the exchange, added a "current" set up.
5 Control: Can only see one extra pair within 25 meters.
10: Can only see through two extra pairs within 50meters.
20: 3 pairs in 100 meter area.
25: 4 Pairs 150 meter area.
30: 5 Pairs 300 meter area.
35: 500 meter area.
40: 1000 meter area.
45: 1500 meter area.
50: 2000 meter area.

Payment: :)
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Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
Graw


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[REvamp] Chikara

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Username: Kitsui
Ryo: 43/72
Stat Trainings: (1/50)
Prestige Perks: 1/1 Beastmaster
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Nara, Chikara
Kara

"Loverboy"
The Mercenary
"Victory is your greatest deception, the only way to win is to be satisfied from within."
Wanted: Dead or Alive
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Height: 5'7
Weight: 150 pounds
Physical Features:
Face/head:
Chikara has a youthful face yet a carries a determined exterior, his black and magenta eyes captures his prays gaze and his black messy hair catches the spiteful comments from others. His jet black hair is spiky and all over the place. It now reaches down to his rear, the front is cut around his jawline,

Body:
Slim yet physically fit for a man his age, scar-free body except for one running across his face, right below his eyes. His body is built for speed.

Notable Features:
A menacing stare that commands attention, whether its from ninjas that he leads into battle or anyone trying to flirt with him and Konoha symbols tattooed on his shoulders.

Clothing/Accessories:
Chikara wears a form fitted black body suit that reveals his arms and most of his legs. Above it he wears his old flak vest and a hooded red rainproof vest tossed over it, with a bunch of zippers running down the shoulders and middle. He wears dark green baggy cargo pants and uses his old head plate as his belt, two pouch belts hang of the sides with a large one centered in the back to cap off his ninja utilities. He wears black ninja sandals and white bandages that are wrapped around his biceps and forearms. He has two Kunai's holstered on the front of his vest and two Katana's on his back.

Chikara has changed to a simpler outfit consisting of brown slacks covered in white bandage, a yellowish shirt that is covered by a brown shirt that is wrapped by a maroon sash. His left arm is exposed yet his forearms are covered in bandages that are topped off with black gloves. He wears different head plates depending on the region the travels and mostly wears black glasses to best hide his strange eyes. He wears his cauldron on his right shoulder and his two swords on his back.
Personality:
Chikara can be seen as a hard head who wants, nay, demands things to go his way. A true believer in that he knows what's best and will fight for his vision of whatever is right. That's not to say that he can't be swayed to think otherwise, it's just that it's hard or the person has to be very convincing/an old friend. He doesn't believe that fighting is the right way to solve things and believes that manipulating people is a better way to get your thoughts across.
He used to be a bit of an alcoholic, whenever he wasn't on duty he tried to stay semi sober and stay or at least act clean when called on duty, even going as far as staying awake for multiple days not to miss his cue, although he is well aware of the damage he is putting his body through. He is a firm believer in that winning is the only true goal of any fight, which coincidentally also makes him into a bit of a gambler and a massive cheater at that as well. He isn't afraid of using genjutsu to get his will to fall through and will cast a spell on anyone trying to get the best out of him. If he was forced to describe himself in one word then he would probably go with goofy as it takes some time to win him over.

Hopes/Dreams:
To create a positive legacy.

Fears:
To be forgotten and fall back in the list like the ones before him.

Combat Mentality:
He will go any length in a fight, using his genjutsu to psychologically scar his enemies. Chikara only believes that winning is the true reason to fight.

Battle Information
Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: A-Rank Missing Nin
Affinity: Katon
Hive mind
[Chie]
[Wakana]
[Yasu]
[Ayuma]
[Shiryoku]
Stats:
Chakra Pool: 22 (25-3)
Endurance: 20
Control: 40
Strength: 20
Speed: 35
Will Power: 38 (40-2)
Equipment:
Fearless:
34 inch blade and 6 inch black hilt, it's a hollow katana that is lighter than the usual thing, it creates a special sound when it clashes with other weapons. The blade also has two curved prongs and a small cat bell attached to the end of the hilt. The blade is sheathed on his back.

Doubtless:
34 inch blade and 6 inch white hilt, it's a hollow katana that is lighter than the usual thing, it creates a special sound when it clashes with other weapons. The blade also has two curved prongs and a small cat bell attached to the end of the hilt. The blade is sheathed on his back.

Chest holsters:
2x Kunai's strapped to his flak vest.

Back pouch:
2x Kunai's Explosive note x Flash note.
2x Kunai's Smoke bomb x Explosive note.
2x Kunai's Flash note x Cat bell.
1x Kunai Explosive note x Cat bell.
1x Kunai Smoke bomb x Flash Note.
1x Kunai Cat bell x Smoke bomb.
1x Kunai Cat bell.
15x Kunai's
3x three small scrolls containing various information, ranging from a wanted list, cooking guide and gambling tips.
Emperor Reizei’s Pauldron
A pauldron often worn over the right shoulder with an attachment that actually clamps into the body to function. When engaged with an opponent, the pauldron acts as a stat shifter. Splitting the users stats into two groups: Control and Willpower versus Speed and Strength. Every post the Pauldron reduces the highest stat on the wearer in the first group, by 2 points, and increases one of the stats in the second group, whichever is highest on the opponent, by 2 points, until the second stat matches that of the opponent. Then it continues on with the 2nd highest stat for the wearer and opponent, so on for 10 posts. At the end of 10 posts, the user’s stats become locked as they are until they are disengaged from combat with that opponent. In battles with multiple opponents, the Pauldron elects a target with the highest stat total, should it be tied the user can select a target, but cannot change it unless the chosen target disengages.


Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Dream VisionShow
Bijon no Kanshi:
Bijon no Kanshi The all seeing eye is a doujutsu unlocked by Chikara and Chie at a later stage in their lives. The doujutsu shares the vision of the user and willing hosts, allowing them to see what the others are seeing. This gives Chikara and the other users a greater viewing field and a greater understanding of their surroundings. This doujutsu is always active and strenuous on the user if images overlap for a prolonged time. If the other pair of eyes are visually impaired via jutsu or other means then the collective hive-minds eye is affected as well. The Doujutsu draws -3 Chakra and -2 Will Power (-1 Per Extra Pair) from the user for always being active. The Doujutsu also allows the wearer to ability channel.
  • 5 Control: Can only see one extra pair within 25 meters.
  • 10: Can only see through two extra pairs within 50meters.
  • 20: 3 pairs in 100 meter area.
  • 25: 4 Pairs 150 meter area.
  • 30: 5 Pairs 300 meter area.
  • 35: 500 meter area.
  • 40: 1000 meter area.
  • 45: 1500 meter area.
  • 50: 2000 meter area.
Pets can't view others in their minds eye and can only pass on visual information. While Henchmen and Summons are able to share vision.
Second Ability
AvailableShow
Available:
N/A
Third Ability
AvailableShow
Available:
N/A
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
1/1Show
Eiketsu:
Eiketsu
The members of the Nara house are able to manipulate both their own shadows and shadows in the surrounding area. This chakra allows them to use various techniques that allow them to create effective traps to use against an opponent as long as there is enough light in the area to create the shadows needed to do so. If there is absolutely no light present in the area of the Nara member, they are unable to use their shadow techniques. The range at a clan member can manipulate shadows is dependent on their control stat:
  • 5: Can control their own shadow.
  • 10: 20 Meter Area
  • 15: 30 Meter Area
  • 20: 40 Meter Area
  • 30: 60 Meter Area
  • 40: 80 Meter Area
  • 50: 100 Meter Area

Katon:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
Passive (Ignition)Show
Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own.

Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the strength stat of the individual jutsu.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns
Taijutsu
5/5Show
Upper Body:
The fundamental skill of the [Upper Body] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their arms, chest and head in various ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.

Lower Body:
The fundamental skill of [Lower Body] indicates the user’s proficiency in using their legs and feet in many different ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.

Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.

Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu
9/9Show
Sleepy Hollow:
Chikara has found a way to control his genjutsu and how they act once they have targeted his opponent. This concentration allows the user to "cancel" his own genjutsu while in reality the genjutsu goes dormant only to be triggered again. Works only for Illusions/Status/Warp genjutsu and has to be triggered again between the time the genjutsu is active. Chikara has to have higher control then the target in order for Sleepy Hollow to work.
RankControlDormant
B-Rank25 B:2 Post/s
A-Rank35 B:3, A:2 Post/s
S-Rank45 B:4, A:3, S:2 Post/s

Overlay Genjutsu:
This user has learn to create entire worlds in the heads of their targets. These genjutsu allow the user to completely recreate reality within the heads of their target, and interact with them in various ways through the techniques. Overlay stand out as a threat in genjutsu users as they lapse on a single second in real time, but can last extremely long in the heads of the target.

Warp Genjutsu:
This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target.

Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any genjutsu that is designed to be channel, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method. To get this concentration the user must be a Genjutsu Specialist, and have picked Control as one of their specialized stats. Channeled Genjutsu cause the user to be surrounded in an aura of chakra while channeling the genjutsu, until the genjutsu is initiated.

Illusion of Force Genjutsu:
This user has learned to add a physical component when using genjutsu, allowing them to create the sensation of pulling, pushing, or evoking some force against their target.

Sight Initiation:
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Sound Initiation:
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Touch Initiation:
This user has learn to use physical sensations to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to physical touch the target, or touch them with objects to capture their targets in genjutsu.

Taste initiation:
This user has learn to use taste to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to use flavors to capture their targets in genjutsu.
Special
1/1Show
Tenkenjutsu:
The users of this style have a strong affinity towards spirits, and are able to utilize certain chakra techniques based off of spirits. Those with the affinity have a Maroon color tint to their chakra when using these techniques. Tenkujutsu jutsus fall underneath their own pyramid, and do not have ties to Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, or Genjutsu.


Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
[Short range Kai Release]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 5 Control.
A short range technique that allows the user to release allies from a genjutsu. The stat requirements for this technique can be found in the genjutsu rules. -5 Genjutsu per 5 meters with a maximum distance of 15 meters.
ShadowShow
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D-rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a sequence of hand seals and will hold the final seal, the user will send their shadow out across any surface toward a target at a speed equal to the users [Control] up to 10 meters, aiming to connect with a targets shadow. If contact is made, they can then hold the target in place, they are unable to move if their [Strength] is higher than the users [Control]. The user also cannot move whilst in this technique, lasts for 3 posts.
TaijutsuShow
Careless StyleShow
Careless Style:

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This style focuses on overwhelming opponents defenses with great speed and accuracy while chipping away at their opponent’s stamina and keeping their own at the highest possible. Most attacks well choreographed to almost appear as if the user is dancing, trying to control the battle rhythm to turn close quarter combats in his favor.
  • Requires: [Upper Body], [Deft Hands], [Sword], [Lower Body] [Acrobatics]
[Odoriko • Ambidexterity]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
After practising for a long amount of time with the concept of using both of their hands with equal skill, the user has developed a level of ambidexterity that allows them to utilize their preferred weaponry without any sort of issue. This extends to other methods of combat or simple everyday life as well.

[Odoriko • Low Sweep]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Chikara bends down to a three point stance before swinging both his legs to around back to their former position, attacking the targets legs in order to sweep them off their feet.

[Odoriko • Flinch]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
With a quick feint, the user quickly draws their sword down in an arc with the nature of the technique's movement, it would make it easily read, prompting the target to avoid or dodge while the user fakes the attack.

[Odoriko • Kip up]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This technique allows the user to get back up on their feet in no time, with a quick kip up the user springs back from laying on their back to back on their feet.

[Odoriko • Flip Kick]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user kicks the target either on their legs or face with one leg as the other pushes off the ground to perform a spinning flip. This technique is used to daze the target or to open them up for following attacks.

[Odoriko • Handspring]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The user handsprings, a simple maneuver used to either dodge an incoming attack or prepare for the following onslaught.

[Odoriko • Bring it in]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 15 Speed
The user focuses on kicking the inside of the knees to open up for a one two combo, two flurries of punches are sent after to finish up the combination. This technique is mostly used to open up for following up combos.

[Odoriko • Back to Back]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
A rather simple technique that has great versatility but comes with great risk, the user begins by planting his/her back against their opponent and follows the flow of their movement, trying to stay a step ahead of them as they attempt to spin around. The user presses against the foe until they can find an opening to either attack or attempt to escape.

[Odoriko • Raw Cut]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Leg lock.
Using the momentum of locking the targets leg with the user, they swing up their body and attempts to draw their blade during the swing back. This is a simple yet lethal move if the target is blind to the incoming slash. This technique is used to create a cut that aims to severe some muscle tissue (-3 Strength), the wound and debuff stays until the wound has been treated as muscle veins has been snapped.

[Odoriko • Leg lock]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Low Sweep.
The user sweeps the legs down low, but instead of sweeping past the legs per usual, the user instead focuses on targeting the back of the opponents knee and lock it with their own leg. This typically opens up for other attacks as this attack doesn't intend on holding the target down for long and instead works as an opener.

[Odoriko • Flip Draw]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Sword.
With this technique the user is able to flip in any direction and draw their blade, slashing towards the targets chest area. Used to create a cut that aims to cut off some muscle tissue (-3 Strength), the wound and debuff stays until the wound has been treated as muscle veins has been snapped.
[Odoriko • Spin around]
B-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 25 Speed
The user spins around on their back and sweep the feet or weapon off any target surrounding him although this technique leaves the user vulnerable to other targets, especially if they don't keep their opponent close as the user spins around.
Reckless StyleShow
Reckless Style:
Reckless Style is an upgraded version of Careless style, utilizing both taijutsu and short term genjutsu in order to overwhelm the opponents psyche, and by shortening the length of the jutsu the user is able to focus on attacking and casting. This style utilizes both his sword, hand to hand and acrobatic as trigger points.
  • [Requires: [Bijon no Kanji], [Sleepy Hollow], [Advanced Genjutsu Channeling] [Close Quarter Combat], [Deft Hands], [Sword] [Acrobatics]
Ghoul Shock
C-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Warp Maneuver
Chikara channels chakra to his leg before he swipes it at his targets head, if the target witness this action whether it connects or not then they will be caught within the genjutsu. A shadowy version of Chikara will appear to meld through his body and swipe his leg in the opposite direction, aimed to shock them more han injure them with the strike. Lasts for one post.

Page Rip
C-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Illusion Maneuver
Prerequisite: Flip Draw.
Chikara channels chakra to his blade before flipping in the air to swipe at his opponent, if the target witnesses this strike then a mark in the air will linger and show a rip in the air that shows another reality (Appearing to peer into any mundane modern city street). Lasts for 3 posts.

Enter the Zone
C-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Warp Maneuver
Prerequisite: Handspring.
Chikara channels chakra throughout his body before allowing his body to move at full speed, timing the channeling to perform a dodge. If any foe witness this action then their vision will turn inverted, and flashes will darken the world. This jutsu clings onto the targets stress receptors and makes the situation feel off. Lasts for 3 posts.

Flip Shot
C-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Illusion Maneuver
Prerequisite: Flip Draw.
Chikara channels chakra to his blade before flipping in the air to swipe at his opponent, if the target witnesses this strike will see a perfectly frozen copy of the user occupy the air space, while the real body moves around in real time. Lasts for 3 posts.

Ghoul Drop
B-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Illusion of force Maneuver
Chikara channels chakra to his leg before he swipes it at his targets chest, then at their legs, if the target witness this action whether it connects or not then they will be caught within the genjutsu. A shadowy version of Chikara will appear to meld through his body and swipe his leg in the opposite direction, followed by another to the opposite legs then at their chest, at this level the kicks start to hurt. Lasts for 1 post.

Ghoul Lock
B-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Illusion Maneuver
Prerequisite: Leg Lock.
Chikara channels chakra to his leg before attempting to leg lock their opponent, if they manage to capture their target then they will be caught within the genjutsu. A shadowy version of Chikara will appear behind the target on the opposite, the shadow will use a kunai to cut their stomach an then aim to slit their throat. This jutsu lasts for 1 post.

Soul Flinch
B-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Illusion Maneuver
Prerequisite: Flinch.
Chikara channels chakra to his blade before flinching, if any target witnesses this action then they will feel their "soul" take a full step back and give them a third perspective of their bodies, allowing them to see the back of their body and outwards. Lasts for 3 posts.

Enter the Mindscape
A-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Warp Maneuver
Chikara channels chakra throughout his body before allowing his body to move at full speed, timing the channeling to perform a dodge. If any foe witness this action then their vision will turn inverted, and flashes will darken the world. Time will start to slow down, allowing the them to be at odds with their thoughts and body movement, this can also be quite nauseating for the weak minded. Lasts for 5 posts.

Ghoul Flinch
A-Rank TaiGen Dormant-Illusion of Force Maneuver
Prerequisite: Flinch, Previous Ghoul jutsu
Chikara channels chakra to his blade before flinching, if any target witnesses this action then all the previous Ghoul jutsu will attack in a perfect combo, this time each strike will hurt properly. Lasts for 3 posts.

Until you can not[see] it
S-Rank TaiGen Overlay Maneuver
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanji, Bring it in, Leg Lock, 35 Speed
Chikara channels chakra to his leg, arms and eyes before focuses on kicking the inside of the knees to open up for a one two combo, two flurries of punches then attempting to leg lock their opponent, then look them in the eyes, if they manage to capture their target then they will be caught within the genjutsu. Within this overlay the target will find themselves sliding down massive piercing blades as they witness what caught them in a repeated loop for what feels lik days on end. Lasts for 6 posts.
GenjutsuShow
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Paranoia
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Cat bell.
The user will do a series of hand seals, should the target hear the bell, they'll be captured in this genjutsu. For the following 4 posts, the target will see a shadow in the corner of their eyes, constantly shifting out of view when they attempt to look at it.

Teary bastard
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After performing a set of hand seals then proceeds to clap his hands, if the victim sees this action they will be trapped in this genjutsu. This genjutsu causes the victims vision to become blurry, like their eyes are watery and shortens their view distance. Lasts for 4 posts.

Side step
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals Chikara holds the last seal as he side steps, if the target witness this action they will be trapped within the genjutsu. This genjutsu makes everything move two inches to the side Chikara chose to step, this genjutsu lasts for 3 post.

Smoke everywhere man!
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Smoke bomb, Explosive note.
The user starts with a set of hand seals before tossing a kunai tagged with an explosive note and smoke bomb. If the target sees the explosion then they will be tagged inside the Genjutsu, they will see smoke cover the battlefield as far as their eyes can see. Lasts for 4 posts.

This bitch is stronger than he looks!
D-Rank Illusion Genjutsu
Chikara performs a short set of hand seals before grabbing his blade, then swings it towards his target. If they see this maneuver and feel the vibration caused by the sword then they will be trapped in the genjutsu. The force of Chikara strikes feels stronger each blow although the target won't be anymore fatigued as its only fictional. The genjutsu lasts for 5 posts.
*[Genjutsu • Heaven Earth Swap]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and making eye contact with the opponent, the user will initiate this genjutsu. For the following four posts, the target’s vision will seem to be flipped, so that up is down and down is up.
Shadow Bind
A-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
Prerequisite: 30 Control, ~Eiketsu • Holding.
Chikara uses Shadow Hold as a sight trigger for this genjutsu, if the target was to see the shadow move then the genjutsu will be initiated. The shadow will move at immense speed and hold them in place (30 Strength). Lasts for 3 posts.
Shadow Bond
S-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
Prerequisite: 40 Control, ~Eiketsu • Holding[/b].
Chikara uses Shadow Hold as a sight trigger for this genjutsu, if the targets was to see the shadow move then the genjutsu will be initiated. The shadow will move at immense speed, the shadow will rise up off the ground in the form of 20 tendrils, each one about 3 inches in diameter. The tendrils grabs hold of them in place (40 Strength) and the target/s has 1 post to release themselves, if they fail then the genjutsu will last for 5 posts.
StatusShow
This s^*t is delicious
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Taste Initiation.
After performing the necessary hand seals, Chikara will touch the food/drink substance and once the target has consumed it within one post, it causes the target to begin to enjoy the taste. This genjutsu mekes the target more inclined to liking the taste. This genjutsu lasts for three (3) posts.

Ugh! Rotten!
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Taste Initiation.
After performing the necessary hand seals, Chikara will touch the food/drink substance and once the target has consumed it within one post, it causes target to dislike the food believing that any bite will taste worst than the first. The jutsu can cause sensation of nausea. This genjutsu lasts for three (3) posts.
WarpShow
Hypnosis
C-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
Chikara first channels chakra to his tongue then begins to perform a short freestyle, if the target looks at Chikara and hears the trigger word "Hypnosis" then the genjutsu will trigger. This genjutsu causes both auditory and visual genjutsu that stimulates the mind into wanting to listen to him rap rather than to attack. They start to hear a faint beat play around his rap and colors start to meld together around the user almost giving them a stereoscopic view. This technique is one of the milder genjutsu in his catalog and is used to calm his targets. The genjutsu lasts for 3 posts before fading back to normal.

Don't breathe in
C-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Smoke bomb, Flash note.
The user starts with a set of hand seals before tossing a kunai tagged with a flash note and smoke bomb. If the target sees the flash then they will be tagged inside the Genjutsu, they will see white poisoned smoke instead of the gray one and will believe if that if they breathe in the smoke they will be poisoned. Lasts for 4 posts.
Shook'd by the halfway crook
B-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Flash Note, Cat bells.
The user starts with a set of hand seals before tossing a kunai tagged with a Flash note and a cat bell. If the target hears bell and sees the flash explosion then they will be tagged inside the Genjutsu. The target will hear a loud noise that nauseates and see after images of everything within their eye sight. This genjutsu can cause the targets to believe that the flash notes are vastly more powerful than regular ones. Lasts for 5 posts.

*[Genjutsu • Calm]
B-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
The user does the needed hand seals, and then breaths out, expelling their breath onto their target. If successful, a 4 post long genjutsu will begin on the target. Over the course of the genjutsu, the target won't be able to feel any wind, and if it's raining, the rain will appear and feel like a light drizzle, regardless of how intense it really it. The target will also feel a sense of calm course through their body, as if all their senses have been slightly dulled, usually causing them to relax, be less stressed, and less inclined to combat. Originally created for the use of execution in combative prisoners, the technique now proves to be an effective method in combat to regain control of the battle field.

Psychosis
B-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
Chikara first channels chakra to his tongue then begins to perform a short freestyle, if the target looks at Chikara and hears the trigger word "Psychosis" then the genjutsu will trigger. This genjutsu causes both auditory and visual genjutsu that stimulates the mind into wanting to listen to him rap rather than to attack. They start to hear a beat play around his rap and colors start to meld together around the user giving them a stereoscopic view. After the first post the sound grows louder until it almost becomes unbearable while the vision remains the same. This technique is a stronger version of his Hypnosis and tend to work well together. The genjutsu lasts for 4 posts before fading back to normal.
*[Genjutsu • Temple of Nirvana]
A-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
This is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into an unconscious state by performing the hand seals and whistling loudly. Once the targets hear the whistle, they will see feathers falling down, and, if the opponent realizes this is a genjutsu, they just need a genjutsu stat of 12 to break out of it. If they don't break out of the genjutsu, the target will fall asleep at the end of that post.

Sneak attack!
A-Rank Warp Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Cat Bells.
After a set of hand seals the user takes a step forwards, causing the bells to ring at a certain note. If the target hears the bell then the target will be trapped in the genjutsu. Here they will witness a shadow clone grab them from behind, holding them in a standing position. They have a short window to form hand seals before the clone relentlessly holds them in a standing shoulder lock position, by placing one of the clones arm between the targets neck and shoulders (25 Strength). Panic will soon ensue as they now visualize themselves being trapped by a sneaking shadow clone being held against their will. The Clone disappears as swarm of doves that poof as they fly away whenever the user closes in to attack his target. Last for 3 post.
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River of Souls
S-Rank Overlay Genjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals and thrusting his hand forward toward the target, the user will target the person who saw the hand pointing at them. Once initiated, the target will enter an overlay in which the entire world crumbles away and is replaced with the user holding the target by the throat over a chasm. The new scene will be lit with a pale, ghostly green light, and the wailing of thousands of damned souls will be heard from below the target's feet. If they look down, they will see that they are being held over a river of souls, all crying out in agony and torment. The user will have the chance to talk to the target, but at the user's will, the target will be dropped into the river of souls. The river will feel like acid upon their skin, and it will feel as if the souls are grabbing weakly at them, trying to drown them in their misery. The river flows in a circle down to a bright green light. Each post feels like a ten hours and after five posts (50 hours), the target will reach the light and then be released from the genjutsu.
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Bijon no Ninjutsu
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[Bijon to Kanshi]
E-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels chakra to their doujutsu which causes the doujutsu to twirl around, mostly used as genjutsu trigger as it can make the doujutsu appear more alluring. Lasts for as long as the user channels chakra to the eyes.
[Cut transmission]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels chakra to their doujutsu which allows them to cuts the visual feed sent to the others close by. The transmission cutout can be held for 5 posts.

Bijon no Genjutsu
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[What are those eyes?]
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanshi.
After forming a set of hand seals or channeling chakra, if the target makes eye contact they will be caught within the genjutsu. For every moment that they don't attack and stare the user in the eyes they will feel the tension rising, which in the end can make them jumpy. This genjutsu last for 6 post.

[Your eyes don't deceive you]
B-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanshi.
To start the genjutsu the ninja does the hand seals and then makes eye contact with the target, if they lock eyes then the target will be trapped within the genjutsu. The target will both see and feel Chikara's presence grow, as if something hidden within him is trying to get out, after one post they will start to see purple chakra coating his skin before, shaping into a octopus man with six purple octopus arms that can reach up to 5 meters. His lower body and legs are in the shape of two extra long tentacles. This new appearance can creep targets out and make them fearful of what else this squid-like appearance is capable off. The octopus tentacles attaches themselves onto their target if they manage to grapple the foe and holds them at the strength of 20. The genjutsu lasts for 5 posts before the user returns to his normal appearance.

[Your eyes sees the truth]
B-Ranked Status Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanshi.
Chikara first channels chakra and once the target has stared into the doujutsu eyes for one post, the genjutsu will initiate. Within the status genjutsu, they will see feel as if they are not strong enough to fight Chikara, as if they are becoming overwhelmed by the thought of engaging in a battle with him. Lasts for 5 posts.

[What lies behind your eyes?]
B-rank Overlay Tenkujutsu
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanshi.
After forming the needed hand seals, if the target locks eyes with the user and as long as the user has more control than the jinchuriki's mastery or spirit's control the overlay will take place. This projects the user into the subconscious of the host, allowing them to see and interact with the host and spirit sealed within. During this post, the user is able to talk and discuss with the spirit and host. During the overlay anytime the user places their hand over the spirit and squeezes, the spirit will "shatter" and the spirits power feels weakened afterwards. During the next 5 posts afterwards, this will cause a drop in available forms by 2. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts and neither the host nor the user are able to move in real time unless provoked by an outside source.

[Get those eyes away from me!]
B-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanshi.
Chikara first channels chakra and once the target has stared into any of the doujutsu eyes for one post, the genjutsu will initiate. Within the warp genjutsu, they will see his Doujutsu around them they appear rather large and can cause the target to feel unnerving. The constant monitoring can cause even the strongest fighters to feel overwhelmed for no matter where they go the eyes are still on them. Lasts for 5 posts.
[Not even your shadow sees you]
A-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanshi.
The user first channels chakra and then makes eye contact with the target. A black hand grows from the opponents shadow and starts to grab the opponent in the belly, pulling out black goo from it. As the black goo slowly falls down to the opponent’s shadow they start to feel weaker. As if they were dying, they feel that their chakra and strength is drawn in, that the black goo is what is keeping them alive. This genjutsu will effect for 5 posts before canceling, either by using kai.
[Kaleidescope]
S-Ranked Overlay Genjutsu
Prerequisite: Bijon no Kanshi..
Chikara first channels chakra and once the target has stared into any of the doujutsu eyes for one post, the genjutsu will initiate. The target will first see the world elongate along a center point of their vision, until the world appears to be spinning towards a black hole. Time folds around the target and soon they will see the surrounding world around them shatter into thousands of shards, each mirror revealing their dark secrets, alternative choices and reflections of what could be their true self. In this state of abyss, the target will find themselves unable to escape the shortcomings of their lives, the guilt that has been stored for years resurface in one long grueling torture that ends with the target being forced to concede that their lives was misused. This horrifying experience lasts for what feels like days on end (5 posts), during those days the user is able to taunt the victim and make them feel powerless to the life choices they have made.

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Chikara was born to a Nara family that lived within the walls of Konohagakure no sato, born as the fourth child in the family, he was raised always to look up to his older siblings. Most of them turned their poor lives into a decent life while Chikara and his oldest brother became ninjas. As a youngling he obsessed with the thought of being someone recognized and wanted to build a lasting legacy. His biggest fear was to be forgotten and worked hard to become a prankster and a strong leader, this resulted in his clashing with almost everyone he met, although he didn't care as he saw this as a way for them to remember her, one way or the other.

Once he joined the academy, he spent most of his time trying to lecture his fellow classmates about how important it was to remember the legends and what they had done for the country, how important it was that they also left a lasting legacy to show that they existed. He believed that it was important because otherwise they would sacrifice their own lives for naught. Being the hotheaded one, he was forced to team up with ignorant ones to train his patience but it always seemed to fail, that and he was exceptionally bad at ninjutsu, almost embarrassingly so.

Yet he was determined to finish class at the top of something, he first attempted taijutsu but was held back due to the lack of physical strength, but had speed down. He struggled to find something he was good at other than history, it wasn't until his brother thought his own genjutsu that he truly found his niche and began to shine brighter than the stars. Chikara excelled at Genjutsu and finished top of his class, something he was proud of. Being embarrassed over his lack of ninjutsu skills, he set out to master the art of illusion and soon began taking missions where he could fool his targets to his bidding. He teamed up with a Senju named Kokorozashi once he graduated and soon they would go on missions together, team 96 as they where called helped form a perfect bond and a great merge between ninjutsu mastery and genjutsu, their third ally was a formidable taijutsu user, making the team feared throughout the lands.

Chikara worked hard with his team to master the world around them, their team soon found themselves at the rank of Chuunin. They where a team to fear as they could handle opponents higher ranked than themselves thanks to their different mastery. Although whenever the team was split up they quickly found how weak they where, this was the ultimate factor that kept Chikara as a Chuunin for a long time, yet he still fought hard to stay head strong, to keep the will of fire which was slowly fading within him as he grew. It was around this time that he first began dabbling with the idea of creating a specialized team that mastered their ways of the force, a sort of mercenary squad that worked under no thumb, for he began to feel sick of taking orders and being told what to train and the likes.

Over the years, Chikara made a name for himself and soon found himself in the ranks of Jounin, although he had gained a lot, he had lost more along the way. The passing of his parents hit his hard, but the death of his oldest brother hit his the hardest. This sent his spiraling towards addiction and gambling, something he frowned upon but soon began to excel at gambling. He spent a long time wasting his potentials and soon found himself wishing that he had used up his time better, he wondered why he hadn't ranked up to Bannin a long time ago and wondered if this life was going to lead to his legacy or not, all he knew was that only time would tell.

Being stuck within village did nothing to help him find his way back to glory, with his legacy on his mind he knew that if he stayed behind then nothing would be accomplished. Even though they offered to help him with his problems multiple times he refused to see it as such, instead he focused on getting himself to the level he always dreamed of. His home country was now starting to weigh him down, yet he had nothing but love for his fellow comrades and having to reject their help was slowly starting to bug him. So he took the biggest gamble in his life and made a daring run for it, just to see how long he would last. So during one mission, he headed out to the border of Fire Country and crossed the line he had promised himself never to cross. To try a life on the run and start up the mercenary idea he had been considering for years. The sudden rush of knowing that you could be hunted any day gave his a new lease in life, one that he dearly needed. Now came the real question, how long would he last?
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The Cryomancer
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sat Feb 13, 2021 7:00 pm

You cannot have more than 75 points of jutsu or 25 jutsu, whichever comes last, in a mod. As this is a revamp you’ll either need to do it in pieces or specify what exactly is changing.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Feb 13, 2021 7:31 pm

But all the jutsu are the same as before o.o.

I only edited the shadow version one to the current archive.
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[Lightblue]
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Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
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S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Kijo, Nehan
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Chishiki
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sat Feb 13, 2021 10:35 pm

Then you should annotate that? How would I know that lol
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Post by Trusted Grader » Mon Feb 15, 2021 12:23 pm

Added what exactly changed.
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Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
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Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Kijo, Nehan
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Chishiki
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1/2
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Accepted
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Genin
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[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
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