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Post by Legacy » Sun Aug 08, 2021 7:28 am

Application: Senju, Takanobu

Change:

1) Raise Takanobu's Chakra pool from 13 to 15.


2) Raise Takanobu's control from 10 to 16

3)Add a 16 oz bottle of Chakra tempered Honey to Takanobu's equipment; usable to treat burn wounds at a rate of 1 degree if burn per 3 posts, stored in Tan item pouch. Useable as a food topping.

4) Add 6 inch foldable Bamboo Blow gun to Takanobu's equipment; stored in left sleeve.



5) Separate Konoha no Taijutsu spoiler from Flawless aim techniques, leaving each with their own respective spoilers. Then add the following to Konoha no Taijutsu:

*Ochiba • Dance Detour
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 10 Speed
A technique that relies highly on speed, the user will attempt to slap away any incoming melee strikes or projectiles with their kunai. The average of the user's speed and strength needs to be higher than the strength the projectile was thrown at, using the momentum of their own speed to deflect the strike.

7) Raise Takanobu's Endurance stat from 8 to 10.

8) After separating flawless aim techniques from Konoha no Taijutsu, add the following to Flawless aim spoiler/section:


*[Flawless Aim Style • Rapid Reload]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
After years of training, the practitioner has learned how to quickly and accurately access their ranged weapon stores at all times in combat. This cuts the effective "reload" time by half, up to a maximum speed equal to the practitioner's Speed score. This also applies to returning unused projectiles to their storage containers or switching between types of projectile weaponry.





Payment:
Episode 3: Rapid reloadShow
Episode 4: Lights out(Ochiba; Dance detour filler)Show
Control stat training : Control Stat training

16 points for stat raises

2 points for General equipment (honey)

3 points for blow gun.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Aug 13, 2021 4:57 pm

What does chakra tempered honey do? I'm not sure what that means tbh
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Post by Legacy » Mon Aug 16, 2021 11:52 am

It is honey with chakra added into it. Medically, it could be used to treat burn wounds and burn injuries; though may also be added as an ingredient for other medical solutions. It also goes well with food by itself.
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Post by Legacy » Wed Aug 18, 2021 3:27 am

Fixed order of operations. Ready for review.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Aug 18, 2021 7:34 pm

If the chakra honey has specific purposes like that, they need to be detailed in the description for it. We have no default effect fo chakra honey.
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Post by Legacy » Wed Aug 18, 2021 9:21 pm

No problem.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Aug 20, 2021 10:51 pm

3)Add a 16 oz bottle of Chakra tempered Honey to Takanobu's equipment; stored in Tan pouch.

4) Add 6 inch foldable Bamboo Blow gun to Takanobu's equipment; stored in left sleeve: Disposable. Uzd

Useable to treat burn wounds made by fire. Also a food topping .

I'm assuming "useable to . . . food topping" is meant to be attached to the Honey. In which case it should specify the rate in which it relieves burns so that it can be priced appropriately.

A blow gun isn't a disposable item, though darts for it would be. It'd likely be 3 ryo for a blow gun though.
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Post by Legacy » Fri Aug 20, 2021 11:08 pm

Updated. I initially looked at the blow gun as a one and done use but I understand your point. I'll end up buying the darts later or warning them in a thread.
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Post by Zao » Sat Aug 21, 2021 6:34 pm

Quote:
1) Raise Takanobu's Chakra pool from 13 to 15.

2) Raise Takanobu's control from 10 to 15.

5) RaiseTakanobu's control from 10 to 11.

7) Raise Takanobu's Endurance stat from 8 to 10.
Went through your control thread, you actually trained 6600ish words, enough for six stats instead of the five you asked for control. Also you mentioned raising control twice, did you mean another stat?
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Post by Legacy » Sun Aug 22, 2021 4:09 am

Whoops! Fixed that. Thank you for the catch.
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Post by Zao » Sat Aug 28, 2021 7:12 pm

You're only buying four stats now, 4x4 = 16 points for stats. Did you want to buy more than the +2 to End and +2 Chakra Pool
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Post by Legacy » Sun Aug 29, 2021 10:29 am

No thank you. Updated.
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Post by Valkier » Mon Aug 30, 2021 12:40 pm

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Post by Das Kirb » Sat Sep 04, 2021 8:38 pm

Before I do this I want to ask, are you getting any darts for that blowgun?

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Post by Legacy » Sun Sep 05, 2021 6:37 am

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Post by Das Kirb » Wed Sep 08, 2021 12:07 am

Done.

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