Mondai improves his swordsmanship

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Mondai improves his swordsmanship

Post by Mre-face » Sun Sep 05, 2021 6:27 am

Application: Yūgana,Mondai
Change:Added jutsu from training and changed one jutsu that was trained "Zornhut" since it was rather redundant and replaced it with "Change Guard" for the mod instead!
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"Vomtag" High guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
The High Guard is a useful technique for downward slashes but it can do a number of different things. The high guard is where they have the sword pointed upwards in a slight angle backward over the head. But can be used on either left, over the head, or right side. As for the nature of the stance, the downward cut is almost completely non-telegraphed but due to the sword being pointed overhead it's also rather predictable than a downward strike.

"Ochs" Ox guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Ox guard is mostly used to block higher cuts rather than low ones. Additionally, this guard also allows attacks from many different angles. This stance is assumed by putting the weapon's hilt upwards over the head then putting the blade towards the outside right or left. While having the sword point aimed at the person's head or throat with a slightly diagonal twist resembling the horns of an ox.

"Langort" Long point
D-rank Taijutsu stance
A stance where the user has their arms extended forward far and facing the opponent right down the middle giving it balance for blocking high and low. Mostly used to keep the opponent away and create distance but can be used for and at the end of thrusts and cuts.

"Alber" Fool's guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Alber is primarily a batting stance, Fooling the opponent to attack in a predictable way. Alber is assumed by lowering the guard and pointing downwards and does not really have defensive body language. If the opponents have a perception technique of equal or higher level than Mondai's they will see through the ruse.

"Wechsel" Change guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Wechsel is mostly used after the end of a downward cut. Wechsel can be used to chain into other attacks mostly staring with a harassing slashing motion from the bottom up but it has many other uses as well. Wechsel is initiated by having the blades flat downward and the point of the blade is aimed between the opponent's feet.   C-rank
Yūgana fluidity.
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Longsword or Sword and shield, A great wall and you will pay for it all.
After extensive use of his longsword and sword and shield, Mondai has learned to combine multiple cuts into one fluid combo. This combo ranges from 3-5 hits and deals tons of damage if everything lands. The combos can also be used to confuses foes by doing the same combo multiple times and then switching it up mid-combo. It can also be used to pressure and keep the foes on the defensive by continuously slashing. When he does this with his shield he keeps his shield in front of his hands and angled in a way to keep his sides safe.

Mastercuts: "Zorthau" Wrath cut
C-rank Taijutsu maneuver
Prerequisite: Longsword, Zornhut, Wrath guard
The mastercuts are a series of cuts designed to attack and defend at the same time. This can be used to regain control of a fight, breakthrough someone's guard, or counterattack. The Zornhau is an aggressive cut used to break someone's line of attack. By stepping forward with the back leg and essentially switching his back leg to a front leg stance. The user can create a lot of leverage and reach which results in a lot of power. Anyone with lower strength than Mondai will have their weapon smacked away and fly away if Mondai has 5 more strengths. If the opponent is within 5 strength they will instead be knocked back an equal amount of meters equal to the difference in their strength.

Mastercuts: "Krumphau" Crooked cut
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Longsword
The mastercuts are a series of cuts designed to attack and defend at the same time. This can be used to regain control of a fight, breakthrough someone's guard, or counterattack. This attack is where you strike in a crooked manner by stepping in one direction but cutting in the other, usually with crossed hands using the false edge. This is mostly used to knock away swords away and set up for other attacks, however, it can be used to attack if hands or arms are exposed.

Mastercuts: "Schielhau" Squinting cut
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Longsword
The mastercuts are a series of cuts designed to attack and defend at the same time. This can be used to regain control of a fight, breakthrough someone's guard, or counterattack. This attack is essentially used in one of two ways as an attack or counter. Schielhau is a diagonal strike twisting at the same time to strike with the back edge in order to get superior leverage and angle where a single edge couldn't, a thrust is also possible from this position. While doing this Mondai also at the same time steps in towards the outside to further take advantage of this fact. This is mostly designed to defend against diagonal or horizontal attacks. This can be either aimed toward the head, neck, shoulder, or hand depending on the situation.

Mastercuts: "Scheitelhau" Crown cut
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Longsword
The mastercuts are a series of cuts designed to attack and defend at the same time. This can be used to regain control of a fight, breakthrough someone's guard, or counterattack. An attack that designed to go over an opponent's guard or block. The crown cut is an over-cut but instead of following through Mondai keeps his arm extended and as such keeps his opponents away with his reach and keeping himself safe

Mastercuts: "Zwerchhau" Thwarting cut
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Prerequisite: Longsword
The mastercuts are a series of cuts designed to attack and defend at the same time. This can be used to regain control of a fight, breakthrough someone's guard, or counterattack. When the enemy cuts downwards on Mondai, he catches the front one-third of the enemy's blade is blocked by the last one-third of his blade. This leads to him gaining more leverage to push the opponents' blade aside as he cuts horizontally towards his head, as most opponents are likely to resist. While this doesn't outright kill it if blocked directly it can cause bleeding and enough blunt force trauma to daze an opponent, impairing their combat effectiveness. If Mondai's strength exceeds their endurance and this connects it will cause the opponent to have blurred vision and see double for the next 3 posts.
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From this: Wrath guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
In this guard, his shield is stretched out as far as possible at an angle. While keeping the elbows slightly bent to absorb blows. And the sword is raised above his head pointing over his shoulder. this helps in protecting his head like the sword could be used to protect his head.  

To this:  "Zorthut" Wrath Ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
In this guard, his shield is stretched out as far as possible at an angle. While keeping the elbows slightly bent to absorb blows. And the sword is raised above his head pointing over his shoulder. this helps in protecting his head like the sword could be used to protect his head. The sword version is similar but different he has his blade resting on his shoulder while having his shoulder and hips cocked towards the right or left. This stance is used against advancing targets or defensive fighters in order to smash right through their guard.
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Post by Zao » Fri Sep 17, 2021 8:09 pm

High Guard - "As for the nature of the stance, the downward cut is almost completely not telegraphed. But due to the nature of the stance, it is predictable on what attack it will be." This is a bit contradictory, can you explain a bit more what you're trying to say here?

"Ochs" Ox guard and Long point- This really isn't doing anything?

"Alber" Fool's guard - This should read that they need a perception technique of equal rank to see through the ruse, willpower (to my knowledge) doesn't really apply in a situational like this.

"Wechsel" Change guard - Sounds like a slashing attack, so more of a maneuver than a stance.

Yūgana fluidity - What is the combo being used?

Mastercuts: "Zorthau" - "The user can create a lot of leverage and reach which results in a lot of power. Anyone with lower strength than Mondai will have their weapon smacked away and fly away if Mondai has 5 more strength than his opponent anyone else will just be knocked away." The last part should read something more on the lines of "Opponents hit with this technique who have a [Strength] not within five points of Mondai's [Strength] with be knocked back a number of meters equal to the difference in their strength. "

Mastercuts: "Thwarting - Schielhau" Squinting cut - These are more or less the exact same attack and movement just with a few added words. You can do the same thing with Thwarting as with the latter technique honestly. Since it sounds like a side step to the outside of an attack followed by a slash to the upper torso area.

Mastercuts: "Scheitelhau" Crown cut - Over cut? Like an overhand strike from above or a downward thrust from above? Little hard to understand.
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Post by Mre-face » Sat Sep 18, 2021 5:52 pm

Changed most of the descriptions in order to be more clear and concise.

Yūgana fluidity no specific combo is being used it's more of a freestyle thing.
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Post by Gilak » Tue Sep 28, 2021 1:53 am

Yūgana fluidity - If this isn't a specific combo, then you might want to rewrite it into a Dicipline. It would cover the free form style you are looking for and can be branched out from easier
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Post by Mre-face » Sun Oct 03, 2021 9:04 am

Gilak:
Tue Sep 28, 2021 1:53 am
Yūgana fluidity - If this isn't a specific combo, then you might want to rewrite it into a Dicipline. It would cover the free form style you are looking for and can be branched out from easier
I actually tried a while ago for my other character but they deemed it better to be a maneuver. *Shrug*
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