Zao on a training spree

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Zao on a training spree

Post by Zao » Sat Oct 16, 2021 11:00 pm

Application: Zao
Change: Trained some Ninjutsu, Fuuin, Spacetime, and some Puppetry Techniques. Mostly customs with a few archives mixed in.
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Space Time techniquesShow

Expand Space: Squeezing Through The Gap
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area within a 30 meters of themselves where there is a small gap between two points that is too small for them to normally move between. This technique allows for the user to expand the space in question, creating a gap in space using Spacetime's ability to 'Expand Space', doing so for up to five meters for up to two posts. After which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them as if it had never happened. Allowing for the user and others to move past objects and spaces that they would not normally be able to.




Open Space: Body Portal
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come allow their spacetime chakra to flow through their body. This allows their body to act temporarily just like a portal would for the next two posts. When an object or person touches the user, it or they will pass into the user's body and reappear through a portal that the user will manifest within 65 meters of their current location at the same speed and strength that it was moving prior to entering the portal.




Erase Space: Suiton
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Water. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of water will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a short rain will appear from nowhere for the next 2 posts. The targeted body of Water can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

Erase Space: Doton
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Earth. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of earth will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of it’s speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of varying size rocks and hills of dirt will appear from nowhere in a hundred meter area from where the jutsu was cast over the course of 2 posts. The targeted body of Earth can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

Erase Space: Raiton
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Lightning. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of lightning will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of lightning will strike violently across the sky above the user over the course of the next two posts. The targeted body of Lightning can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

Erase Space: Katon
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Fire. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of Fire will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of strong gusts of hot wind will flow through the area over the course of the next two posts elevating the temperature slightly within a hundred meter area. The targeted body of Fire can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

Erase Space: Fuuton
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Wind. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of wind will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of strong gusts of Wind will flow through the area over the course of the next two posts. The targeted body of Wind can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.




*Close Time: Mist
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then throw their arms into the air. For the next 4 posts, everything airborne within a 80m radius of the user will have time closed around it. This means for jutsu, their post counts are paused. This technique includes jutsu, particulates, and projectiles of all forms. Everything is Closed by it’s strength, and requires more than it’s strength in order to move it. This means that particulates which are suspended purely by their weight, are easy to move through, by weapons which are thrown at a strength, would required more strength than that to move beyond it. At the end of the 4 posts, Time will Open and everything will resume as it was.

Puppetry TechniquesShow

*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Ventriloquism Technique]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
A fairly simple jutsu, this one uses the strings of chakra to carry the puppeteer's voice to the puppet, so it will sound as if the puppet is talking when in reality it is the puppeteer's words. If it is equipped with a sound vibrating device, the voice can also be changed to whatever the user wishes it to be.

*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Transformation Technique]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Much like the original Transformation Jutsu, the puppeteer does the needed hand seals and causes their puppet to take on the appearance of their own body and their own body into the appearance of their puppet. By consistently emitting chakra throughout their body, the user is able to keep their appearance adjusted at the cost of their Chakra Pool draining over time. As this technique is quite strenuous to uphold, experienced shinobi may see more clearly through this delusive disguise. This technique lasts for a number of posts equal to that of the user's Chakra Pool.




*[Puppetry Style • Manipulate Advancing Blades]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *[Initiate Puppetry Technique]
By attaching multiple chakra strings to their kunai, the puppeteer is able to hover multiple kunai around them before throwing them all forward. The puppeteer is able to hold an amount of kunai equal to their [Control].

*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Senses]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Required: *[Puppetry Style • Initiate Puppetry Technique]
By connecting a chakra string from a part of a puppet or person, the puppeteer is able to transfer their senses from their body to whichever part the strings are connected to on the puppet or human. This allows the puppeteer from ‘see’ and ‘hear’ from the perspective of what is connected to the string.

[Puppetry Style • Chakra Thread Transfer]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Required: *[Puppetry Style • Initiate Puppetry Technique] or high level Puppetry Technique
By connecting a chakra string from a part of a puppet or person, the puppeteer is able to use the thread in a supplementary manner to transfer Fuuinjutsu through the chakra thread from the user to the target as though it was their hand touching the target. Allowing for the user to apply fuuin techniques at range through their chakra threads.

[Puppetry Style • String Toggle Transfer Technique]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By releasing less chakra into his chakra strings, [Zao] is able to utilize the ability of the original string toggle technique. When an object the user is using in combination with their chakra thread techniques clashes against another person or another person's weapons/tools they can transfer one or more of the chakra threads onto to them or their item. These threads effectively appear to have been to 'turned off' turning them invisible to the naked eye as they transfer to the person or object, in turn giving them no ability to pull or retract anything in this state. In order to accommodate this, the strings will lengthen and shorten automatically so they don't react to anything that they are attached to. The strings can be reactivated by putting a bit of chakra into them, letting the user use them again.





*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Separation Technique]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Puppet with detachable parts.
This is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppet masters. The ability to control a multitude of separate objects with chakra strings is a difficult one, but once mastered it can be most useful. That way, the puppeteer is able not only to give his puppet a better chance to avoid attacks by simply separating its various parts, but also the ability to attack an enemy from several angles all at once.




*[Puppetry Style • Perfection of Puppetry Technique]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: *[Puppetry Style • Advanced Puppetry Technique]
Perfection of Puppetry is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppeteers. By releasing chakra from their Tenketsu, the puppeteer is able to release chakra strings from their finger. These strings are able to move 100 meters away. This jutsu allows the puppeteer to attach their chakra strings to humans or animals arms and legs at [Control] Speed, using every part of the puppet to its max potential. In order to break out from this technique, the target must be willing to break out and have at least [Control] strength to resist the puppeteer’s control. While being controlled, the target is unable to move on their own and the puppeteer can move their arms and legs in any way.

[Puppetry Style • Advanced Puppet Invisibility Technique]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra to a puppet, the puppeteer is able to form a chakra coating over the puppet. This coating causes the puppet to become completely invisible as long as the puppet is moving at a maximum speed equal the user's [Control] or less. Lasts for up to five posts.

*[Puppetry Style • Human Puppet Technique]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 10 Iijutsu, Human Puppetry Concentration
Human Puppet is a Ninjutsu technique used by a Puppet Master. This technique allows the user to make a puppet which can contain and use chakra. The user does this by making a dead shinobi into a puppet. This puppet will maintain the same chakra its original body held when alive. If the original ninja was highly skilled, its puppet can retain these abilities as well. Even the ninja unique body traits will be passed on to its puppet form. Thus, the puppeteer can learn jutsu to use through the puppet.

FuuinjutsuShow

Augment Fuuinjutsu • Chakra Disruption Area Seal
A-Rank Fuuinjutsu
After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will cause for a series of fuuin for form at their feet contained five seals different seals within it. This series of seals then expands outwards at [Control] speed out to fifty meters in radius. Those that enter the area and come into contact with the seal, will find their chakra disrupted by the seal for one post, disturbing their chakra flow and blocking it, essentially making the target incapable of utilizing their chakra for jutsu as long they remain within the boundary of the sealed area. Leaving the boundary of the seal or contact with the seal will allow for the user's chakra flow to return after the one post disruption duration. The seal lasts for up to six posts and has a two meter circle in the middle of it where the user is standing during creation that is not effected by the seal's chakra disruption.
NinpouShow

[Basic Weapon Multiplication]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will form hand seals then channel their chakra into a weapon they are in contact with that is no larger than one meter in size, after releasing/throwing the weapon a puff of smoke will burst outwards from the weapon before revealing a 10x10x10m cloud of the identical weapon moving at the same speed and strength as the original. These new weapons disappear after two posts.



[Advanced Weapon Multiplication]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will form hand seals then channel their chakra into a weapon they are in contact with that is no larger than two meters in size, after releasing/throwing the weapon a puff of smoke will burst outwards from the weapon before revealing a 25x25x25m cloud of the identical weapon moving at the same speed and strength as the original. These new weapons disappear after two posts.

[Ninjutsu • Underworld Guardian Spikes]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will cause their hair to rapidly grow and cocoon their body for protection. The hair does this at a speed and strength of [Control and when done, will have formed thick layers of rigid hair to protect the user from attacks. Upon completely cocooning the user, the user can choose to have the spikes of hair on the cocoon fire outwards in all directions with [Control] Strength and Speed. The user can disconnect their hair from the newly ground hair at any time, leaving it at it's original length. This guardian cocoon of spiky hair holds its strength for up to four posts.





[Ninjutsu • Greater Concealment]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout his body the user is able to turn their body completely invisible and allows the user to hide their chakra signature against up to S-rank sensory techniques without the need to limit their movement speed. This lasts for up to seven posts before fading.

[Ninjutsu • Chaotic Chakra Blast]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming hand seals the user condenses an enormous amount of chakra into the palm of their hand, causing the space around the palm to tremble with the raw power contained within the palm of the user's hands. From there the user is able to push the palm forward instantly releasing the chakra in the form of an outwards explosion of chakra without any form of manipulation, the explosion covering up to a one hundred and sixty meter area in size in front of the user at [Control] strength. Can be held in the palm for four posts before it must be released.

[Chaotic Sundering Rasengan]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 50 Control
One of the ultimate techniques created by Suna Bannin Zao that demonstrates the true peak of Ninjutsu. By channeling an immense amount of chakra throughout his body the user will then funnel it into a single hand. Doing so he will manifest a swirling orb of terrible, destructive power, incredibly dense this orb of rotating chakra causes the spacetime to tremble around it. This orb fits comfortably in the palm of Zao's hand and is noticeably thick with an oppressive feeling coming from the chakra, so much so that it is entirely opaque and crackles with unbridled power. When the shinobi attacks pushing his palm and the godly orb of destruction forward towards a target it will expand to encapsulate the enemy as long as the enemy is within a diameter of 160 meters before ravaging their entire body with [Control] strength, shredding their bodies with sharp force strong enough to rip even the heartiest of shinobi apart from all sides.

Finally, after eviscerating the target over the course of three posts, the orb will blast the last of its power into the target, pushing their remains away from Zao with [Control] strength. The damage caused physical and internally is to the point regeneration abilities are unable to heal the wounds sustained, the target also suffers a debuff of [-7] Speed, Strength, and Control until they have received medical treatment. Zao can hold on to this orb for 5 posts before it dissipates on it's own. He can also choose to launch it as a projectile at [Control] Speed, if he so wishes, doing so he can choose to Kai it is causing the orb to expands and go through its full actions as if it had been thrust out from his palm.

NocodeShow


[b][color=#666699]Expand Space: Squeezing Through The Gap[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area within 30 meters of themselves where there is a small gap between two points that is too small for them to normally move between. This technique allows for the user to expand the space in question, creating a gap in space using Spacetime's ability to 'Expand Space', doing so for up to five meters for up to two posts. After which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them as if it had never happened. Allowing for the user and others to move past objects and spaces that they would not normally be able to.




[b][color=#666699]Open Space: Body Portal[/color][/b]
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come allow their spacetime chakra to flow through their body. This allows their body to act temporarily just like a portal would for the next two posts. When an object or person touches the user, it or they will pass into the user's body and reappear through a portal that the user will manifest within 65 meters of their current location at the same speed and strength that it was moving prior to entering the portal.




[b][color=#666699]Erase Space: Suiton[/color][/b]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Water. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of water will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a short rain will appear from nowhere for the next 2 posts. The targeted body of Water can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

[b][color=#666699]Erase Space: Doton[/color][/b]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Earth. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of earth will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of it’s speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of varying size rocks and hills of dirt will appear from nowhere in a hundred-meter area from where the jutsu was cast over the course of 2 posts. The targeted body of Earth can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

[b][color=#666699]Erase Space: Raiton[/color][/b]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Lightning. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of lightning will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of lightning will strike violently across the sky above the user over the course of the next two posts. The targeted body of Lightning can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

[b][color=#666699]Erase Space: Katon[/color][/b]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Fire. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of Fire will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of strong gusts of hot wind will flow through the area over the course of the next two posts elevating the temperature slightly within a hundred-meter area. The targeted body of Fire can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

[b][color=#666699]Erase Space: Fuuton[/color][/b]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a body of Wind. The moment they come in contact with it, the body of wind will vanish, up to 100x100x100m worth, regardless of its speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a series of strong gusts of Wind will flow through the area over the course of the next two posts. The targeted body of Wind can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself.

[b]*[color=#666699]Close Time: Mist[/color][/b]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then throw their arms into the air. For the next 4 posts, everything airborne within a 80m radius of the user will have time closed around it. This means for jutsu, their post counts are paused. This technique includes jutsu, particulates, and projectiles of all forms. Everything is Closed by its strength and requires more than its strength in order to move it. This means that particulates which are suspended purely by their weight, are easy to move through, by weapons which are thrown at a strength, would require more strength than that to move beyond it. At the end of the 4 posts, Time will Open, and everything will resume as it was.





[b]*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Ventriloquism Technique][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
A fairly simple jutsu, this one uses the strings of chakra to carry the puppeteer's voice to the puppet, so it will sound as if the puppet is talking when in reality it is the puppeteer's words. If it is equipped with a sound vibrating device, the voice can also be changed to whatever the user wishes it to be.

[b]*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Transformation Technique][/b]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Much like the original Transformation Jutsu, the puppeteer does the needed hand seals and causes their puppet to take on the appearance of their own body and their own body into the appearance of their puppet. By consistently emitting chakra throughout their body, the user is able to keep their appearance adjusted at the cost of their Chakra Pool draining over time. As this technique is quite strenuous to uphold, experienced shinobi may see more clearly through this delusive disguise. This technique lasts for a number of posts equal to that of the user's Chakra Pool.




[b]*[Puppetry Style • Manipulate Advancing Blades][/b]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
[b]Prerequisite:[/b] [b]*[Initiate Puppetry Technique][/b]
By attaching multiple chakra strings to their kunai, the puppeteer is able to hover multiple kunai around them before throwing them all forward. The puppeteer is able to hold an amount of kunai equal to their [Control].

[b]*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Senses][/b]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
[b]Required: *[Puppetry Style • Initiate Puppetry Technique][/b]
By connecting a chakra string from a part of a puppet or person, the puppeteer is able to transfer their senses from their body to whichever part the strings are connected to on the puppet or human. This allows the puppeteer from ‘see’ and ‘hear’ from the perspective of what is connected to the string.

[b][Puppetry Style • Chakra Thread Transfer][/b]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Required: *[Puppetry Style • Initiate Puppetry Technique] or high-level Puppetry Technique
By connecting a chakra string from a part of a puppet or person, the puppeteer is able to use the thread in a supplementary manner to transfer Fuuinjutsu through the chakra thread from the user to the target as though it was their hand touching the target. Allowing for the user to apply fuuin techniques at range through their chakra threads.

[b][Puppetry Style • String Toggle Transfer Technique][/b]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By releasing less chakra into his chakra strings, [Zao] is able to utilize the ability of the original string toggle technique. When an object the user is using in combination with their chakra thread techniques clashes against another person or another person's weapons/tools they can transfer one or more of the chakra threads onto to them or their item. These threads effectively appear to have been to 'turned off' turning them invisible to the naked eye as they transfer to the person or object, in turn giving them no ability to pull or retract anything in this state. In order to accommodate this, the strings will lengthen and shorten automatically so they don't react to anything that they are attached to. The strings can be reactivated by putting a bit of chakra into them, letting the user use them again.





[b]*[Puppetry Style • Puppet Separation Technique][/b]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
[b]Prerequisite: Puppet with detachable parts.[/b]
This is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppet masters. The ability to control a multitude of separate objects with chakra strings is a difficult one, but once mastered it can be most useful. That way, the puppeteer is able not only to give his puppet a better chance to avoid attacks by simply separating its various parts, but also the ability to attack an enemy from several angles all at once.




[b]*[Puppetry Style • Perfection of Puppetry Technique][/b]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
[b]Prerequisite: [/b][b]*[Puppetry Style • Advanced Puppetry Technique][/b]
Perfection of Puppetry is a Ninjutsu technique used by puppeteers. By releasing chakra from their Tenketsu, the puppeteer is able to release chakra strings from their finger. These strings are able to move 100 meters away. This jutsu allows the puppeteer to attach their chakra strings to human or animal arms and legs at [Control] Speed, using every part of the puppet to its max potential. In order to break out from this technique, the target must be willing to break out and have at least [Control] strength to resist the puppeteer’s control. While being controlled, the target is unable to move on their own and the puppeteer can move their arms and legs in any way.

[b][Puppetry Style • Advanced Puppet Invisibility Technique][/b]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra to a puppet, the puppeteer is able to form a chakra coating over the puppet. This coating causes the puppet to become completely invisible as long as the puppet is moving at a maximum speed equal the user's [Control] or less. Lasts for up to five posts.

[b]*[Puppetry Style • Human Puppet Technique][/b]
A-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 10 Iijutsu, Human Puppetry Concentration
Human Puppet is a Ninjutsu technique used by a Puppet Master. This technique allows the user to make a puppet which can contain and use chakra. The user does this by making a dead shinobi into a puppet. This puppet will maintain the same chakra its original body held when alive. If the original ninja was highly skilled, its puppet can retain these abilities as well. Even the ninja unique body traits will be passed on to its puppet form. Thus, the puppeteer can learn jutsu to use through the puppet.






[b]Augment Fuuinjutsu • Chakra Disruption Area Seal[/b]
A-Rank Fuuinjutsu
After forming the necessary hand seals, the user will cause for a series of fuuin for form at their feet contained five seals different seals within it. This series of seals then expands outwards at [Control] speed out to fifty meters in radius. Those that enter the area and come into contact with the seal, will find their chakra disrupted by the seal for one post, disturbing their chakra flow and blocking it, essentially making the target incapable of utilizing their chakra for jutsu as long they remain within the boundary of the sealed area. Leaving the boundary of the seal or contact with the seal will allow for the user's chakra flow to return after the one post disruption duration. The seal lasts for up to six posts and has a two-meter circle in the middle of it where the user is standing during creation that is not affected by the seal's chakra disruption.





[b][color=#80A0FF][Basic Weapon Multiplication][/color][/b]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will form hand seals then channel their chakra into a weapon they are in contact with that is no larger than one meter in size, after releasing/throwing the weapon a puff of smoke will burst outwards from the weapon before revealing a 10x10x10m cloud of the identical weapon moving at the same speed and strength as the original. These new weapons disappear after two posts.




[b][color=#80A0FF][Advanced Weapon Multiplication][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will form hand seals then channel their chakra into a weapon they are in contact with that is no larger than two meters in size, after releasing/throwing the weapon a puff of smoke will burst outwards from the weapon before revealing a 25x25x25m cloud of the identical weapon moving at the same speed and strength as the original. These new weapons disappear after two posts.

[b][color=#80A0FF][Ninjutsu • Underworld Guardian Spikes][/color][/b]
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will cause their hair to rapidly grow and cocoon their body for protection. The hair does this at a speed and strength of [Control and when done, will have formed thick layers of rigid hair to protect the user from attacks. Upon completely cocooning the user, the user can choose to have the spikes of hair on the cocoon fire outwards in all directions with [Control] Strength and Speed. The user can disconnect their hair from the newly ground hair at any time, leaving it at its original length. This guardian cocoon of spiky hair holds its strength for up to four posts.





[b][color=#80A0FF][Ninjutsu • Greater Concealment][/color][/b]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout his body the user is able to turn their body completely invisible and allows the user to hide their chakra signature against up to S-rank sensory techniques without the need to limit their movement speed. This lasts for up to seven posts before fading.

[b][color=#80A0FF][Ninjutsu • Chaotic Chakra Blast][/color][/b]
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
After forming hand seals, the user condenses an enormous amount of chakra into the palm of their hand, causing the space around the palm to tremble with the raw power contained within the palm of the user's hands. From there the user is able to push the palm forward instantly releasing the chakra in the form of an outwards explosion of chakra without any form of manipulation, the explosion covering up to a one-hundred-and-sixty-meter area in size in front of the user at [Control] strength. Can be held in the palm for four posts before it must be released.

[b][color=#80A0FF][Chaotic Sundering Rasengan][/color][/b]
S-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 50 Control
One of the ultimate techniques created by Suna Bannin Zao that demonstrates the true peak of Ninjutsu. By channeling an immense amount of chakra throughout his body the user will then funnel it into a single hand. Doing so he will manifest a swirling orb of terrible, destructive power, incredibly dense this orb of rotating chakra causes the spacetime to tremble around it. This orb fits comfortably in the palm of Zao's hand and is noticeably thick with an oppressive feeling coming from the chakra, so much so that it is entirely opaque and crackles with unbridled power. When the shinobi attacks pushing his palm and the godly orb of destruction forward towards a target it will expand to encapsulate the enemy as long as the enemy is within a diameter of 160 meters before ravaging their entire body with [Control] strength, shredding their bodies with sharp force strong enough to rip even the heartiest of shinobi apart from all sides.

Finally, after eviscerating the target over the course of three posts, the orb will blast the last of its power into the target, pushing their remains away from Zao with [Control] strength. The damage caused physical and internally is to the point regeneration abilities are unable to heal the wounds sustained, the target also suffers a debuff of [-7] Speed, Strength, and Control until they have received medical treatment. Zao can hold on to this orb for 5 posts before it dissipates on its own. He can also choose to launch it as a projectile at [Control] Speed, if he so wishes, doing so he can choose to Kai it is causing the orb to expand and go through its full actions as if it had been thrust out from his palm.




CharactersShow
Active
Tsukino Hisato - Kiri Chuunin - Seven Swordsman Dagger

Saisuko Zao - Suna Bannin - Spirit Weapon Saint

Kyōhō Ken - The White Snake Sage - S Rank Assassin/Bounty Hunter

Aburame Hisato S-rank Mn / Inactive

Old CharactersShow
Inactive/Dead

Arashiyama Ning - Kumo Chuunin - Weilder of the Ghost Spear

Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

Genso - Elemental Crafting Shaman - A Rank Monk - Inactive

Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

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Post by Nick » Sun Nov 14, 2021 4:39 pm

-Erase space techniques maybe need to go down in size? The archive "Drought" which these are based off of does 65x65x65. However, the rules say that the amount of space erased just increases chakra expendeture, so I guess theoretically you could have a C-rank erase 10000x10000x10000 and it would just cost a lot, which makes the connection of complexity to jutsu in question. ANYWAY. The size is probably fine as long as it's kept in mind it's a particularly draining technique.

-Chakra thread transfer is dope, however I think this falls under the concentration for ranged fuuin, even though the application of the technique feels like it should maybe get around that. If there's precedent for it, IDC, but otherwise getter done.

-Chakra Disruption Area Seal should probably have a control battle associated with it. Also please read over it for spelling real quick ;). Cool technique. How would it impact E-bodies and similar?

-Both weapon multiplication techniques should probably offer a specific number of projectile copies rather than a size cloud of them. I believe the ninjutsu rules have direct rank associations with the number of projectiles you can make with them.

-Your ninpou invisibility (and maybe puppet too?) could probably use a downgrade somehow. A-ranks are allowed invisibility at no speed defecit, but you're doing sight invisibility AND sensory invisibility in the same jutsu with no downside.
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Post by Zao » Mon Nov 15, 2021 12:17 am

Erase Space - Just used the most up to date jutsu sizes for these, the archive ones still have the old jutsu sizes.

Transfer - No real president honestly, feel like since he is having to touch actually them with his chakra threads to apply the fuuin it doesn't really fall into the Range Fuuin.

Disruption - Based it off the fuuin technique that does the same thing with no stat battle. Plus they have to be standing on the ground (the seal) for it to take effect, doesn't affect anything above the seal like a zone or area. As for E-Bodies, I won't lie, I've really designed this technique to fight against them as without the ability to control their chakra e-bodies would be unable to move. Perhaps even reverting to just their core for the duration of the technique. Let me know what you think. If I need to I can bump it up to a S-rank if that helps.

Multi - This is how we've been doing this kind of technique, just giving it a static space like X by X.

Stealth - What's up with the puppet one? For the Ninpou, Honestly didn't realize I wrote chakra sensory blocking into it. Bumped it up to S-rank to compensate for blocking two things.
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Post by Nick » Sun Nov 21, 2021 4:05 pm

Just wanted to make sure your intentions were the same (or not, in this case) for the puppet one for stealth.

I don't like the static space idea because it makes math impossible for breaking defenses, but if that's the way it is, that's the way it is.

@disruption, also hate that it has no stat battle, but if that's the precedent that's been set, lmao. Just clarify what it does to e-bodies, reverting to core form makes total sense to me given the context of the ability.
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Post by Zao » Tue Nov 30, 2021 10:47 pm

Made the puppet one an A-rank for full invisibility.

It's just how we've been doing it for some reason, I'm not opposed for us taking the topic to staff since I can definitely see what you mean.
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Post by Nick » Sat Dec 04, 2021 10:53 am

Not gonna hold it up with a staff topic since it's a precedent that's already been set.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Dec 07, 2021 6:16 pm

Going to agree w/ Nick's initial call on the erase-space stuff. The range rules specify some jutsu may not have their full range. Honestly I feel like 100x100x100m of something is reaching the range of expending enormous amounts of chakra.
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Post by Zao » Sun Dec 12, 2021 3:11 am

It is a A rank that already cost an S-rank worth of chakra due to the control requirements of Spacetime.
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Post by Niro » Sat Dec 18, 2021 7:24 pm

If Onu is suggesting it'd cost even more than that, I'd agree with him. I'd suggest upping them S entirely tbh.
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Niro:
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If Onu is suggesting it'd cost even more than that, I'd agree with him. I'd suggest upping them S entirely tbh.
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Upped them to S-rank
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Post by Niro » Thu Dec 30, 2021 9:02 am

Erase Space: Fuuton <- mentions body of lightning

Erase Space: Doton <- mentions body of water
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Thanks man
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Nocode added. Thanks
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