Shuryō Mottomō hageshī

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Shuryō Mottomō hageshī

Post by Shuryo Groove » Mon Nov 29, 2021 7:57 pm

Shuryō, Mottomō hageshī |最も激しい


General Information Age: 10
Gender: Male (Shark humanoid)
Height: 59 inches or four feet and ten inches.
Weight: 50kgs or 70lbs.
Physical Features: Like many of his kind Mottomo, ceremoniously named Shuryō, exhibits many characteristics of aquamarine life forms; most notably, the shark. His skin color and texture both embody the rough and intimidating style of the down under, being turquoise blue and incredibly rugged. Despite appearing young (because he is) Shuryō possesses an extremely durable body in part due to a bloodline limit and a harsh warrior lifestyle as is customary to those sharing blood ties.
  • Face/head: Shuryō may be characterized as "shark" looking if one were to go based upon his eyes alone. They are perfectly round with intense grey pupils that often adjust in side depending on the time of day. Short and deep turquoise colored hair slightly tapered on the sides and back help to add a measure of uniqueness and personality to Shuryō; suggesting perhaps that he, his name and general appearance all share a theme: fierceness. Each cheek possesses a set of gills with which may be used either to breath indefinitely under water or simply as a way of identifying him.
  • Body: Not unlike his Father; Shuryō,Yudai who even now is recognized for his impressive build, Shuryō, Mottomō hageshī appears both lean and firm despite his youth. While nowhere near the Calibre of his father, Shuryō stands to be recognized among shark country children and many foreigners who lay eyes upon him. Surprisingly enough, by many Shuryō standards he is still considered frail.
  • Notable Features:
  • Round grey colored eyes
  • Rugged turquoise colored skin
  • Strong jaw as defined by three rows of razor sharp teeth
  • Short, turquoise colored hair tapered around the sides and back.
Clothing/Accessories: In all climates and geographical regions when applicable Shuryō will most notably be observed wearing a singular colored [black] outfit of which is absent of sleeves and bound by magenta colored stirrups from the ankle up until mid-calf. Similarly, like colored forearm warmers typically are worn when applicable and the outfit generally rounds off with open toed black sandals.

Personality: As one might expect of the son of Shuryō,Yudai; Shuryō, Mottomō hageshī carries with him an intense hunger for conquest. Desiring only to become string enough to best his Father, Shuryō constantly seeks new ways to push himself to his limits and then beyond. Fortunately, his lineage is one that welcomes this sort of behavior and with each battle or contest entered, he praises the sea Kai. Showing a firm foundation in his nation's root beliefs even in youth.
  • General: On a good day Shuryō may challenge anyone to battle if only for the sport of it. On a bad day, he will beg and plead with his father to go and hunt animals of the Laughing desert as a reminder of his true dream.
  • Hopes/Dreams: To become Katarite and restore Shark country to its true former glory.
  • Fears: Women of Shuryō.
  • Combat Mentality:
  • Wear down an adversary and then crush them!
  • Grind an opponent to ribbons!
  • Strike hard. Strike fast. Strike true.

Battle Information Village: Shark country to Mizu no Kuni; Kirigakure no sato
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 5
  • Endurance:10
  • Control:5
  • Strength:12
  • Speed:8
  • Willpower:10
  • Power Rank:
Equipment: No items to equip 100% space.
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Suiton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Umihada
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The user permanently takes on the characteristics of a shark. Their entire body is covered from head toe in hard, durable scales that are locked tightly against one another and act as an armor. These scales are incredibly sharp and give the user a passive grinding ability. These scales are equal to the user’s [Endurance] and will protect the user until broken. However, underneath their skin is quite soft, giving a -5 [Endurance] until the scales are repaired. (Usually the entirety of the thread.) They also have up to three rows of sharp teeth. They have a natural Lateral Line across their spine, meaning when In contact with water they are sensitive to electronic signals and can pick up their location, 3 Metres per [Endurance] to anything else in physical contact with the water. They may breathe under water indefinitely and their pupils can also dilate at will, increasing how much light and darkness they take in; being able to see in even the darkest of areas.
Passive (Grinding)Show
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Minor scrapes and cuts, minor bleeding.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Scrapes, removal of skin, moderate bleeding.
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Removal of upper muscle, heavy bleeding.
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Grinding of flesh, removal of deep tissue, profuse bleeding.
  • 45+ Strength Requirement: Grinding of flesh, removal of deep tissue, profuse bleeding, muscle and bone.
    Second AbilityLocked until further notice
    Third Ability Locked until further notice
    Concentrations
    Ninjutsu
    Suiton:
    Suiton Affinity
    A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive enveloping effect.
    Passive (Enveloping)Show
    Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of times (i.e, exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with the 3/4th strength of the technique, rounded down. This means that if a suiton wave is shot forward with 17 strength, it will envelope and move anything with it that does not have more than 12 strength to resist it. This allows Suiton to fill a very powerful role in eliminating tools from opponent's access and capturing targets.
    Taijutsu
    Close Quarters Combat:
    The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
    Rigid Structure:
    The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
    Perception:
    The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
    Stealth:
    The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
    Genjutsu
    Touch Initiation:
    This user has learn to use physical sensations to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to physical touch the target, or touch them with objects to capture their targets in genjutsu.

    Jutsu
    NinjutsuShow
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    *[Basic Jutsu • Clone Technique]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    After completing a set of handseals, the user forms a slight chakra 'body', thus creating a single, massless clone. The clone created from this technique is very basic and will dissipate when hit with anything. These clones do not possess vital signs or a unique chakra signature, meaning they don't disrupt the environment, and anything on their person is superficial. The clone has 1 in each stat. They are limited to basic movements.

    *[Basic Jutsu • Transformation Technique]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    After completing the needed handseals, the user of this technique will be able to alter their physical appearance to match that of another person. By consistently emitting chakra throughout their body, the user is able to keep their appearance adjusted at the cost of their Chakra Pool draining over time. As this technique is quite strenuous to uphold, experienced shinobi may see more clearly through this delusive disguise. This technique lasts for a number of posts equal to that of the user's (Chakra Pool/2).

    *[Basic Jutsu • Chakra Kai]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    A jutsu used with the purpose of activating seals and a range of devices and weapons, this technique begins with a single handseal. Once this has been performed, the user will focus a dollop of their chakra into what they are looking to activate in order to complete the task. Seals activated with this technique must be within 10 meters of the user's position.

    *[Basic Jutsu • Act of Tree Climbing]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    By focusing chakra into his/her feet, the user is able to walk up trees and other vertical surfaces in a similar fashion to walking along the ground. This chakra amount must be precise, and although all shinobi learn this technique, the user's control stat will determine how well this jutsu can be executed. Users with low control 2 or lower will often fall during the use of this technique, while users with average control 3 or higher will be able to use this technique functionally. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.

    *[Basic Jutsu • Act of Water Surface Walking]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    A variation of the Act of Tree Climbing technique, this jutsu requires the user to focus a precise and balanced amount of charka into the soles of his/her feet. By doing so, the user is able to walk on the surface of water as though it were a solid surface. Users with low control 2 or lower are much more likely to fall through the surface of the water, while users with average control 3 or higher will be able to use this technique functionally. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.

    *[Basic Jutsu • Kai Release]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    A rather simple technique that allows the user to escape from a genjutsu. The user will form a single ram seal and focus to reset their chakra system to purge themselves of foreign chakra. The stat requirements for this technique can be found in the genjutsu rules.

    *[Basic Jutsu • Change of Body Stance Technique]
    D-Ranked Ninjutsu
    After completing the necessary handseals, the user is able to quickly substitute his/her body with a nearby object that is at least 2/3rds his/her size, but no bigger than their body. This substitution allows the object to take the force of the attack that was meant for the user, additionally allowing the user to create distance between him/her and the opponent. The object used in this jutsu may not be objects that are imbued with chakra or controlled by it, and they may also only be single, solid objects within a 10 meter radius of the user. This technique may only be used a total of one time in a single thread, give or take how many times Shunshin no Jutsu has already been used.
    TaijutsuShow
    ChiageyaShow
    Chiageya:
    Chiageya
    A taijutsu style unique to the Shuyro Clan, using their large, powerful, frame and their unique physical traits allowing them to use their appendages and teeth as powerful weapons, ripping their opponents fresh from their bones that will rival even the most powerful Kenjutsu users. Unleashing a flurry of powerful aggressive attacks.
    Requires [Rigid Structure] & [Close Quarters Combat]
    ~Chiageya • Barbed Vise
    D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
    The user is capable of up upraising the scales on their knuckles, creating sharp spikes that stick out up to two inches. They are as sharp as steel, however once they make contact with an opponent they will dislodged in their body and will continued to cause their pain until they remove them.

    ~Chiageya • Grazing Fin
    D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
    A rather simple technique, though if successful can cause quite a bit of damage. The user will wind back their arm, making their attack obvious and will swing forward with a cross punch. This obvious punch is actually a feint, as the target moves their head out of the way they user will quickly adjust their positioning running their arm across the users cheek, hopefully ripping away the flesh in turn.
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    History
    Historical AccountsShow
    preludeShow
    The laughing Desert
    Once upon a time within the mythical and awe inspiring lands of a place by the name of Shark country, there existed the kind of spectacle that one would have had to live a thousand life times in order to witness. It's soil were rich and fruitful, yielding to its settlers crops that could and would sustain life for eons. As though to be carved out especially by the heavens, Shark country appeared to be a place of true utopian wonder; with no short supply of wildlife ranging in all types, meandering across its humble and welcoming land for consumption or companionship. Its climate though mild at times, remained welcoming and by the time of its first settlers, a nomadic family by the name of Shuryō, Shark country had already endured many centuries of relative peace.

    The nomadic warriors and settlers of Shuryō seemed to fit right in with their new home; with body's acclimated to both sea and land, enabling them to quickly bring about order along with a new dynasty. With each new month up until late winter, those of the Shuryō worked tirelessly to build homes and docks, establish forms of government and even reproduce up until at long last, theirs was a civilization who'd so noticeably been meant to stay. Subduing first the creatures and animals of the land, prominent hunters of the Shuryō began to establish traditions and challenge one another in friendly but highly competitive sport in the interest of creating only the strongest protectors and establishing among them, who could carry on the Shuryō name. In this way, years down the line, a singular leader or Katarite would finally be selected; a powerful warrior by the name of Shuryō, Yudai.

    Under Yudai's strong leadership, the continent which had been Nameless received its title. Shuryō, in honor of those who'd first settled and established themselves by bringing creatures both of the land , and sea, to heel. Yudai were about to experience his first true challenge, however and the loyalties of the Shark people would be tried by a new settled who'd set his eyes upon the continent's desert region; a man by the name of Duan Liao.

    Duan Liao, unlike those of the Shuryō, bore not the strong resemblance to any creature of the sea. However, his reputation as a fierce and formidable warrior stretched even as far as the great ocean dwellings from which the Shuryō had come and there were none on the continent who had not in some way, come across a story in which the warlord couldn't conquer an opposing military. Many of the Shuryō, though quite tenacious in their will to fight, grew wary and eventually both Yudai and Liao would come face to face for the first time in an area splitting the laughing Desert. To Yudai's surprise, Liao had with him a woman of such entrancing beauty and poise that he questioned how the warlord planned to wage battle.

    "What is the meaning of this?!" Yudai would shout,"have you brought this woman here to be slain? Have you no honor?" Rather than be invited to anger and quip quickly, as many men might have in the same position, Liao simply smiled and then said to Yudai; "You've gravely mistaken, Shuryō. It is because this woman is with me that I will be victorious today."

    Yudai for all of his might and ferocity were unable to understand at the time how one woman could make so great a difference in battle but dares not to take her lightly. After all, this was Duan, Liao. Conquerer of many lands and reputable warlord; surely, he had a trick or three up his sleeve. As an extended courtesy known only to leadership battles between Yudai and Duan Liao were fought in one on one fashion, with no interference from either party despite being waged till the death.

    As time passed, it became all too clear that neither Duan Liao or Shuryō Yudai could best one another in mortal Kombat. In the end both came to an agreement that neither would encroach upon each other's lands to end needless bloodshed and that despite bitter resentment from those who'd had family and loved ones die in the war that no such retaliation would be made without provocation if either could act in time enough to stop it. Sweetening the deal, Duan Liao offered the hand of his Maiden's blood sister to Yudai who accepted in a warrior's Gambit.

    Decades later, it is from that fateful union that Shuryō, Mottomō hageshī is born. Named fiercest as his existence had stemmed from the armstice of two of the continent's most powerful warriors and their chosen Maidens.
    Shuryō of ShukutōShow
    It is the year 1229. Shuryō country, once held under firm control of the Shark people by sea, is sieged by Kirigakure no sato; Mizu no kuni's Shinobi village, and conquered. For centuries it'd been thought that there existed no greater nation and that those of the Shuryō would enjoy endless peace. Instead, when several naval fleets of strange and mysterious origin made land at the Sand white beaches known to Shuryō settlers, they found only despair. Despite their strength and unique skills, the Shuryō were powerless to combat Kirigakure's regulates use of Ninjutsu combined with Genjutsu.

    Warriors of the sea people though determined in their fight and eager to battle until a bitter end, were swayed by Yudai. With twenty thousand lives to consider and a wife carrying his first ever son, the Katarite bent a knee before a representative of Kirigakure; an act that not only gaurenteed Shuryō survival by granting them refuge elsewhere, but ensured a brighter future than he ever could have provided for the baby. And so it were from thence onward that the Shuryō would serve Water country and Kirigakure no sato, under a family by the name of Shukutō. As fortune would have it, the Shukutō family were a class of nobility who's influence had been so much within Kirigakure's council of other families, that the Shuryō name and bloodline could be spared rather than killed away. Thus, the family survived and a new Shuryō legacy would begin in the village of Kirigakure; however, only a year later, what was formerly recognized as shark country under water country's rule, would be wiped out.
    Enter Shuryō, Mottomō hageshīShow
    The year is 1232 and much has changed in the world. Katarite or former leader of the shark people; Shuryō, Yudai has Fathered a son to the sister of Duan Liao's maiden. Though He and his wife are thorough natives of former Shark country, their child, Shuryō Mottomō hageshī is born as a naturalized Kirigakure and Water country citizen. In spirit and In genetics, their child carries the Shuryō bloodline strong as ever. Their child is taught in the ways of Shuryō so that in order for him never to forget where he came from; though, a new set of principles and values are also introduced so that he may integrate with those with generations of Kirigakure citizenship.

    Word spreads quickly of a clan brought into the village by way of a new Noble family and Shuryō is enrolled into Kirigakure's ninja academy. Quietly, almost as though to be a creeping Shadow, the Shuryō handles each task given. By the time of graduation ten year old Shuryō has hands stained with blood. He is now Shuryō, bled for the Shukutō family.


    Username: Shuryō Groove
    Ryo: 2/50
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    Start up ryo spent on raising willpower from 5 to 10, strength from 7 to 12, and two D rank techniques from his Clan [10 ryo - 8 ryo] This leaves Shuryō with two [2] ryo left remaining at start up

    Prestige Perks: 0/0
    Stat Trainings: (0/75)
    Last edited by Shuryo Groove on Tue Nov 30, 2021 5:30 pm, edited 3 times in total.

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    Shuryō Mottomō hageshī

    Post by Nick » Tue Nov 30, 2021 10:00 am

    12 stats x 4 ryo each = 48 ryo total.
    2 D-rank jutsu = 8 ryo total.

    This puts you 6 points over your starting allotment.
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    Shuryō Mottomō hageshī

    Post by Shuryo Groove » Tue Nov 30, 2021 1:17 pm

    I've adjusted Shuryō to have a chakra pool parameter of five [5] so that in order for him to retain two D rank techniques. This makes the statement of two ryo remaining true and not false.

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    Shuryō Mottomō hageshī

    Post by Nick » Tue Nov 30, 2021 2:05 pm

    Sick. As discussed last night, I know nothing about the history of shark country, but from a systematic standpoint this is solid now.

    From a role play standpoint, you'll need to decide if you're officially a ward of kirigakure, IE a ninja inside of it, or if your character is out of the village somewhere.

    As discussed last night, the events of the Shuryo joining the village happened about 2 years ago IC. If you wanted to role play out becoming accustomed to the village or etc, you could do this with flashbacks or otherwise no problem, but your app should represent if the character is either in or out of the village in current day.

    Please amend this in your history, and if you're having him in the village, reflect it in the village section and by marking him as a genin rather than D-rank.

    Should be good after that.
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    Shuryō Mottomō hageshī

    Post by Shuryo Groove » Tue Nov 30, 2021 5:39 pm

    I've added another chapter which addresses Shuryō and the role to be played involving Kirigakure no sato, within Mizu no kuni.

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    Shuryō Mottomō hageshī

    Post by Nick » Tue Nov 30, 2021 5:50 pm

    Yep, works for me.

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    Post by Zao » Tue Nov 30, 2021 9:31 pm

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