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Nakajima Mariya

Post by Taiga » Mon Feb 21, 2022 9:58 am

NAKAJIMA MARIYA

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General Information Age: 16
Gender: Female
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 49KG
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Mariya has a sharp feline face with almond-shaped green eyes. She has a button nose and about average thickness lips. Her jet black hair is worn in a pixi cut. Beyond her eyes, Mariya looks more like her first father, Tada Banri then that of her second- Nakajima Hayate.
  • Body: Mariya is more on the "sporty" side than "supple", save a few curves. In extremely great shape, she manages to be attractive in a "peak human physicality" way akin to the way an Olympian acrobat is visually stunning- statuesque.
  • Notable Features: Mariya seems to have two permanent cowlicks on either side of her head- her hair juts up and out causing a "cat ear" like appearance to her otherwise short pixi-cut.
Clothing/Accessories: Preferring function over form Mariya wears a black shoulder-less shirt with a raised collar and a pair of black sports tights with red accenting. Over this she wears the standard Kumogakure flack jacket and a white forehead protector worn like a belt. Attached to the forehead protector are several pouches. For accessories, she wears long black gloves that start above her biceps and a pair of knee-high black rubber boots with red trimming. Last she tends to wear a pair of white sports goggles with a tinted-red visor.
Personality:
  • General: Mariya likes law and order. She also likes patterns and for things to go according to plan. To a degree her upbringing in Black Ops has left her with impairment when processing or trying to understand normal human emotion often leading others to believe she is insensitive. This is exhibited by behavior such as laughing when others are sobbing or crying- her inability to understand the correct emotional response in the heat of the moment.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Mariya's competitive spirit, imparted by Banri during her underground training, drives her to want to be "better" than her genetic originals, Nakajima Hayate and Tada Banri.
  • Fears: Mariya is deeply afraid that she is more like Tada Banri than Nakajima Hayate. Worse, she is afraid that is nothing but her genetic code to follow them both.
  • Combat Mentality: A trained black ops operative, Mariya is capable of suppressing her true personality in combat and taking a careful approach likened to that of a cat hunting a mouse- watching and waiting for the right moment to take a decisive strike. An unfortunate result of her abnormal upbringing so far, combat brings out the inhuman, clinical side of her.

Battle Information Village: Kumogakure no Sato
Rank: Jounin
  • Chakra Pool: 44
  • Endurance: 20
  • Control: 35
  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 30
  • Willpower: 20
Equipment:
White Ninja Poncho
Made of a mysterious material, it is a full white shinobi poncho with a hood that ends just above the feet, typical to the standard-issue ones shinobi villages use in rain or on travel. has 50 strength.

Left Thigh Holster
1x Brush Pen

Right Thigh Holster
1x Brush Pen

Belt Pouch 1 (Right Front)
- 5 kunai
- 10 shuriken
- 5 6cm x 10cm scrolls
- 5x Vials of Ink

Belt Pouch 2 (Left Back)
- 10m of wire
- 5 exploding tags
- 1 smoke bomb
- 1 flash bang


[Eight Tails Whip]
A leather whip with a 14cm handle and a 6-meter long tail that splits into 4 tails at the 4-meter mark. The outer tails have sharp chunks of wood embedded in them and the center tails have heavy stone counterweights embedded at their end. The whip however has a special effect in that upon striking, an "echo" of the whip will appear, making the exact same attack again at 50 speed in rapid succession leaving 8 imprints and giving it the namesake of "eight tails" rather than the physical four that it has.

Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Fuuinjutsu
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
[1] Harmonious Chakra
Mariya was sourced from several DNA sources including that of the Ninth Raikage Nakajima Hayate in an attempt by the infamous Tada Banri to create the ultimate soldier. Unbeknownst to Banri the tenketsu mutations of the Nakajima family were not something that could be controlled. Rather than the Raikage's "resonating chakra", Mariya got the mutation of harmonious chakra.

Harmonious chakra resonates so perfectly with any other chakra around it that it is impossible to, even with chakra sensory, discern it from any other chakra. Most incredible however is that functionally, others can use or even control jutsu cast by Mariya as if it was their own jutsu.
Concentrations
NinjutsuInk Style
TaijutsuBraided Weapons, Acrobatics, Perception
GenjutsuN/A

Jutsu
History
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While Mariya is physically assumed to be around the age of 16, she is less than 4 years old in reality because she was grown in a lab. Formerly known as Subject #42, under Program New Dawn in a Kumogakure BlackOps medical facility Mariya was created from the egg of an unknown woman and DNA comprised of Tada Banri and unbeknownst to him, Nakajima Hayate. Officially, she is the daughter of three people: Hayate, Banri, and an unknown female donor.

New Dawn had hoped to clone the Raikage in hopes of using his unique tenketsu and chakra mutations to allow the direct binding of spirits to each clone. This would allow the black ops to eliminate the need for Jinchuuriki and the instability the Genma and other spirits brought to their human hosts. With over 60 participants at various life stages and various genetic alterations, Subject #42 was the only one who managed to survive. As she grew at a hyper-altered pace in her pod, upon reaching adolescence and being taken out of the pod it was clear she was a mistake.

While Subject #42 possessed a chakra mutation it was not that of the Raikage Nakajima Hayate. This caused Banri to be furious. He ordered the complete culling of the entire program but through the efforts of researchers, Mariya was spared. Though she would not be a candidate for his super-soldier project her chakra made her nearly impossible to track- the perfect spy. This discovery led Banri to take a liking to the girl and to raise her as his own child. She was not the weapon he wanted but she was a weapon he could use. As abusive as Banri was the girl brought out a certain kind part of him- but a part that likely was due more to his love of himself which he saw in her.

When she was not in her pod or being prodded, poked, or tested, Banri would train the girl himself, however, the day for her debut as a Black Ops soldier never came. As the war progressed the researchers disappeared. The soldiers were gone and Banri never returned for her. Occasionally she would wake for moments in her pod only to find she was alone and fall back into her stasis. One day after the war, however, something happened. Something called to Mariya and she awoke in her pod and placed her hand on the glass, her eyes widely looking out but failing to adjust to the sudden light of her dark confines.

A hand met hers on the glass and she felt something- the chakra of her other father, Nakajima Hayate. Their chakra reacted in way he did not expect as the glass shattered and out came the girl- naked, shivering, and cold. Unaware of what he was the Raikage covered her in his cloak, but soon after as his forces raided the lair and obtained the details of Banri's heinous experiments they soon learned the truth of this girl. Despite a girl in need... confused... lost... Hayate struggled to see her as anything other than a monster. A weapon created from his DNA to likely kill him.

This man was father. But her earliest memories of him confused her. His kindness had quickly turned to a look of disgust and that would be etched in her mind forever if not for Hayate finally breaking the silence. Fighting everything he felt he gave her the benefit of being human.

"I think you're a Mariya. It's a beautiful name, do you like it?" he asked. And in that moment, the girl could do nothing more than nod and tug at his sleeve to leave.

"Let's go home, Mariya".

Those were the words she would always remember.

It has since been almost a year and Mariya has struggled to adapt to her surroundings as a normal teenager, however her innate strength and ability has landed her the rank of Chuunin.

Username: Hayate
Points: 0/0
Prestige Perks: 0/0
Stat Trainings: (0/75)
Last edited by Taiga on Sun Feb 27, 2022 8:25 pm, edited 4 times in total.


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Post by Taiga » Mon Feb 21, 2022 8:00 pm

155 - 60 (15 stats)
95 - 60 (Whip, echoes at 50 speed)
35 - 30 (5o strength poncho)
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Post by Zao » Thu Feb 24, 2022 8:54 am

Interesting Chakra Ability, want to see what you got planned for it.

Just doubt tapping pricing.

How is the whip creating the echo attack? Is the strength of the echo the same strength as the user, I'm presuming?

Basic Whip - 3 Ryo
Three extra ends - 3 ryo (used our chain pricing)
Did you want to give the whip a strength?
Speed of 50 = 25 (1st stat as 1/2)
Echo seems like a basic D-rank effect - 4x4 = 16

Total = 3+3+25+16 = 47ish


Can you describe the cloak a bit more?

Basic Cloak = 3 Ryo (Standard Equipment Price)
Strength of 50 = 25
Total = 28 Ryo
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Post by Taiga » Thu Feb 24, 2022 8:24 pm

Yeah, me too lol. It basically makes her pretty darn weak but I figure I can tweak it/fix it as I playtest her.

The whip was priced by Kabu, but I wouldn't argue against paying less. The strength would be the same as the user yep!

As for the cloak, done! It's basically like the ones all the Konoha ninja wear when traveling: https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/narut ... 0830234317


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Post by TheLacarix » Sun Feb 27, 2022 5:59 am

One small thing - If Mariya is in a crowd of chakra users it would be possible to tell her apart from anyone else in the crowd via sensory methods.

Do you meant wouldn't? It seemed the idea of this chakra was that it would blend into a crowd, just wanna double check before we move forward incase you did mean wouldn't.
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Post by Zao » Sun Feb 27, 2022 4:19 pm

Small note, nothing crazy. Guess the whip was priced with a B-rank archive, that's why it was 60. Is the echo from the whip through some mechanical means or just chakra magic?
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Post by Taiga » Sun Feb 27, 2022 8:30 pm

Quote:
One small thing - If Mariya is in a crowd of chakra users it would be possible to tell her apart from anyone else in the crowd via sensory methods.

Do you meant wouldn't? It seemed the idea of this chakra was that it would blend into a crowd, just wanna double check before we move forward incase you did mean wouldn't.
I just reworded the whole ability- I think that example wasn't needed as it's clear enough with just saying there is no way to distinguish her chakra from any other chakra near/around her.
Quote:
Small note, nothing crazy. Guess the whip was priced with a B-rank archive, that's why it was 60. Is the echo from the whip through some mechanical means or just chakra magic?
I'd rather it be mechanical, but I think this has to be chakra-based? I too am a bit wary that it's a B-rank- this effect is really probably D, but because the Henrin have it as a B-rank I think that was the frame of reference.

I think this jutsu
~Lingering Way – Trail of the Adept
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the Henrin will proceed to create a small chakra shell around their arms and legs. These chakra shells mimic the movements of the Henrin's arms and legs, creating a sort of tracer effect that moves with a strength and speed equal to the Henrin's [Control]. The Tracers are only usable in melee combat, adding a total of two additional impacts to any attack delivered for as long as the duration persists. These arm Tracers will last for a total of 4 posts before dissipating and they seem to passively exist within the Henrin's arms and legs when not following their movements.


I am also considering dropping the special effect or doing a different weapon, so don't accept just yet D:


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Post by TheLacarix » Mon Feb 28, 2022 11:36 am

I'll throw an extension, tell us when you're ready for us to take a look
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Post by Taiga » Wed Mar 02, 2022 4:30 am

Actually you can deny for now. Doesn't make sense to put her up this month...


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Post by Valkier » Wed Mar 02, 2022 9:53 am

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