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Patience phpBB [video] Rage phpBB [video] Kijo, Nehan Angel of Death. "Divine judgement awaits heathens ignorant to the pain of others." Rank S-Rank Village Konohagakure no Sato Age 38 Gender Female Wanted: Dead -Attempted Hericide- -Genocide- -Religious hostage takeover- -Theological extinction- -Mercenary activities- DescriptionShow Pale, medium height and fit. She has a very feminine body type, sporting D cup's and fine shaped bottom, no visible scars nor damage on her skin. Her luscious raven black hair has turned pure white and hangs all the way down past the center of her back by an half of an inch. She wears an orange brosch shaped like a rose on the side of her hair. Where formally she had a facial tattoo, over the years it has healed and now reveals her once beautiful face. She carries a Jashin triangle necklace hidden under her poncho at all times, pulls it out when she needs to pray. VoodooShow Voodoo Auto Tattoo This version of the tattoo only appears once she eats human meat or when she has cursed a target. Her ink sunk into her subconscious even though her regen removed the tattoos a long time ago. Her tattoos crawl back to life, to reveal her infamous ominous appearance. Behind ear Tattoo FuuinjutsuShow [Fuuinjutsu: Kai Transfer] D rank Charge Fuuinjutsu A fuuinjutsu that Kenji places on a target's head, this seal was made for the purpose of aiding those who need him to free them from a Genjutsu without him needing to be in the fray of combat. By creating the seal, Kenji stores a genjutsu Kai within the seal, allowing him to activate it later as long as he is within range to Kai the seal. In doing so, he can release someone from a genjutsu with his stats at a -5 Genjutsu. PersonalityShow Nehan is more free spirited, happy and content with helping people out as long as its for a good purpose. She will gladly sit back from the battlefield and help out her allies heal, within the battles and outside. She believes that if she travels far enough in the world and heal as many people as possible then she can one day truly heal the planet. Nirvana likes to pray to Jashin in her private time as she doesn't feel that the world is ready for it's return yet. Then there are the downsides of being the mix of both crazy and collected. If angered the woman can act up on her anger and attack those who don't stop annoying her. She doesn't go rampage and clear streets but will beat the person down to the point of where she has to heal them back. Which can sometimes be a strain but she sees it as anger management. Over the course of two years, the wicked witch managed to calm her feisty temperament, using meditation and different sort of techniques to calm her down. She has started to focus on delivering her message, rather than pure destruction, although if provoked enough, she will make sure that they get their repercussions, as punishment. Nehan is more or less a sociopath. She is very calm and collective during her free time, she often speaks in riddles or in rhyme to confuse the ones engaging with her so that she can leave or test them. Thanks to her tattooed face she wears a happy mask to bring up her own mood, feeling that without it she can't be genuinely happy. Without it, oh. . . She becomes a freak. . It's as if it unleashes something out of her weirdest imagination. She becomes a cocky hot shot believing she can take anyone down but knows when she is clearly outmatched Furious yet happily laughing, she becomes the total opposite, thinking she's number one, her mental snap made her believe she could reach another form of heaven to escape all the pain. While unknowingly drawn closer to the evil lord, this has caused her to become somewhat of an adrenaline junkie, feeding of the fight to keep going. There's only one way out, although she is not entirely reckless, she knows when it's best to attack from distance, a little switcheru. Nehan is a religious woman and puts her beliefs over anything. Although she is a believer of Jashinism, she doesn't practice it like most do, rather she sits by dead corpses after and talks to them, but she only does this if possible. Believing that she can speak to the other side, it's a psychological tic she got after watching her parents parish. From time to time she used to visit Minoru, the only one that talked to her anymore, the real her. Although she was raised to be a non-believer but she was never someone who liked to follow orders. Nehan is more of a loner, believing that putting her trust and love on someone else would only bring them bad luck, so for most of her free time she spends at the morgue. Nehan is manipulative during her battles. She is known to stare at her enemies to freak them out but what they do not know is that Nehan is collecting battle data so she can plan out her next move. Clothing/AccessoriesShow incognito Nehan wears a white linen tank top, over that she wears a ragged black hooded robe that covers most of her body. She carries her "Happy" mask, a tanned mask with black eyebrows, it has two holes where the eyes are and blood streaks the eyes, simulating tears of blood. The mask is custom fitted to match her face, made out of porcelain. Sporting a nice band, so she can wear it around her neck. She sports various of roses on her hair to contrast with her bleak face color. At all times Wears sport bras to support that are supported by her back over that the missing nin wears a black and red shirt, that covers most of her top. It stops short above her waist, which she has tied black bands and her old head plate around said waist. Sporting black tight breathable leggings and black sandals, the ninja has hidden all her the rest with black bandage wrapped tightly around her body. A large pouch where she has stored all of her hidden items. Her Jashin pendant around her stomach, strings covered in beads and various animal teeth she has collected along the way. She also wears a thumb ring on her right hand, given to her by her partner in crime. EquipmentShow All time Pouch 2x Black gloves hidden inside the shirt. 5x Shuriken 7x Empty Scrolls. 2x4 2x Pens. 3x Voodoo dolls 1x Retractable Spear, 3 Inches retracted, 12 inches elongated. 1x Body Preservation Seal [20x4 foot][Fukurou Body] 1x Heart 5x Organs 15x Skin/Muscle Left Sleeve 4 Smoke Bombs. 4x Black Kunai. 3x Explosive Noted Black Kunai. 7x Colored Pins. Right Sleeve 4x Flash Notes. 3x White Kunai. 4x Explosive Noted White Kunai. 6x Colored Pins. 1x Black, Metal shoulder pauldron, left shoulder. 2x Black, Metal forearm guards. 1x Happy Mask, a Caucasian mask with brown hair and brown eyebrows, it has two holes where the eyes are AlmaShow PurgaShow PesadillaShow AlmanitaShow PurgelitoShow PesaShow Alma is a half moon shaped scythe, it's from the toe to the heel the blade is 70 cm long also hammer head back side, that's a weight to add more force to the blows and can be used as a bludgeon. The metal shaft that is shaped like bones which is five feet long. The scythe is connected to a metal wire which reaches about 10 meters at max, the wire is connected to a coil that is placed near her waist. When yanking on the wire it starts to reel in whether it is reeling her towards the scythe (35 strength) or the scythe to her (35 speed), the head is connected to another coil and when the user pulls it the blade collapses on itself, turning into a makeshift axe, Pesadilla or a spear, Purga . This is used for hiding purposes, the handle can also collapse making it appear as a Kama, Sword and one handed axe. The small bladed metal box is slung over her right shoulder with the blade downwards facing to the left. Alma is coated with her poison as well, which makes the already deadly weapon a fearsome weapon to behold. Golden and jewel covered mouthpiece that aren't really for flash but to hide and store small needles on the back of each tooth. The grill covers the lower front row and two fangs. It's a rather simple device that needs the right amount of pressure the bite in order for them to eject poison, so the user doesn't over swallow her own venom The First Kiss D-rank Poison The lowest level of her poisoned entrapped fangs, this poison can only be injected via blood stream and starts working after the initial bite post. Once it has intruded the victims blood stream it will start to effect the targets mind, causing him/her to feel a bit woozy -1 Will. At this level it causes minor disturbances but won't really impede the targets fighting abilities. This poison can't cause effects if digested and it last's for 5 post before fading. The poison is also coated on her weapon. The Pain of Knowing C-Rank Poison Prerequisite: The First Kiss The second lowest levels of her poisoned fang, this too has to be injected via blood stream and starts working after the initial bite post. This one causes the target to start feeling a slowly increasing headache to go with the dizziness caused by the weakest in the link. This headache and the dizziness will drop the targets -3 Will. This poison can't cause effects if digested and it last's for 5 post before fading. The poison is also coated on her weapon. The Journey Towards A Slow. . B-Rank poison Prerequisite: The Pain Of Knowing A poison located in her grill fangs and starts working after the initial bite post. At this level it is where the poison starts to take effects start kicking in, once it's inside the targets blood stream, the targets temperature will slowly rise, starting from the bite wound outwards, making the target feel clammy and sick, that mixed with a headache and dizziness starts to impede with the targets fighting capabilities -2 Speed, 4 - Will. This poison can't cause effects if digested and it last's for 5 post before fading. The poison is also coated on her weapon. HistoryShow Pain Theme: phpBB [video] Nehan "What lies under my mask, the truth of my past" Born under the name Nehan, the girl was raised to be a non-believer, because her mother did not want her to become a lunatic who is out on a killing spree, having already witnessed her first born lose his mind over a religion. This god was famous in this little village far away from Konohagakure no Sato. Only a few who lived here followed it. However, most of them where low level followers. It has been told that this god walked once on this very earth, but the misled humans until they eventually killed anyone who wasn't under his command. Having vanished by the lack of followers the evil figure laid rest. Nehan was a good girl and soon was allowed to study. Nehan was a good students when she was young. She followed all the rules and did all her homework on time, proving to be a well raised young girl. She did anything to make her parents happy and when she graduated as an above average student she was finally allowed to move to the Konoha to train as a ninja, believing that she would be able to return and protect her parents. Nehan moved into a cosy appartment that she kept as tidy as possible, believing that being neat was a special feat. She ranked up to genin in no time and moved on to a loving team. Her sensei was a chuunin, not much older than she was. The chuunin thought her to be able to control certain wind, her first affinity. Up till that point she had only been working on training up her ninjutsu. Just an average genin and nothing else, the adolescent was not sure if she wanted to join the chuunin exam since she was afraid that she would end up dying since her class mates surpassed her in every feat. She was the one that made the team look weak but her teammates told her that it was okay, that they did not care about that and that they would need her. Unsure of what to think of the ninja told them that she needed time to think. Nehan walked home, feeling ashamed of her weakness. Two weeks before the exam, the girl had not decided if she would join, and had pondered about it for a while. She had returned home one night, that night the girl went out one night to take a walk. She found the Jashin shrine and was intrigued, she had never entered it before, even though she lived a couple of blocks away from the temple. Nehan went to take a closer look and in there she found a scroll, where it contained of information about this god. The girl got interested and took one of the scrolls home. There she started to worship this god on her own. She found her new religion, the girl chose to participate in the tournament, believing that she had a place in the after life. The exam of death! Just one week left to the chuunin exam, the fourteen year old genin signed up. Her teammates got happy and this time she was the one that told them it would all be okay. They all passed the first exam with ease; however, they did not know that the next test would be ten times harder. Nehan went on meeting a lot of obstacles and foe’s. Along the way, one of the team mates were seriously injured, leaving Nehan to carry the wounded genin. One injured, one fatigued and one without a scratch on. The god seemed to help her, it seemed like he would protect her. Or so she thought. The god was smart, he knew that she could not kill in the exam or when she was a chuunin, but instead opted to wait until she got older, or for the perfect trigger. Nehan had to fight another leaf ninja. It seemed like the rival was going to take her down in a second but the overly confident ninja was beaten by Nehan. She overpowered him by tricking him, throwing a smoke bomb that her team mate gave her before the match then used her fuuton to force his fires back at him. The enemy shinobi stuck in the smoke, while his friends screamed to warn him, but it was too late. Because Nehan already picked up his weapon and sent it trough his chest. It seems like Nehan killed on her own will. This got Jashin to like the girl a bit more. Figuratively. The examiner looked at the bloody body, closed his eyes, and confirmed that he was dead and therefore Nehan was the winner. His friends shed tears, screamed and cursed at the newly ranked chuunin. They threatened that they would kill her one day, an eye for an eye. Her teammates were shocked at seeing her being capable of taking a life, but smiled eventually as they realized that they all had ranked up. They all won their match even the wounded one. At the end of the exam, Nehan had already earned her first nickname “Daughter of death”. For her uncanny ability to walk out of the exam without a scratch. For years they went on missions and became known as the lucky duo, that always managed to get away. As Chuunin the team roamed the fire country and completed multiple missions, making a little name out of themselves. The team tackled on harder and harder missions, proving to be a worthy trio. The rising team had a nemesis hiding in their shadow, scheming on a terrible revenge, but in order for it to work they needed time, they needed to grow stronger. After a while they ranked up to Jounin, and when they thought it was all going to be fine, that incident happen. Turning point! Months after, Nehan would fight the shady ninjas from the exam. But this time it would be outside the village and more personal, It was the kids who had threatened her. They had gone rogue just after losing their friend and figured that there was no point in staying back in Konoha now that they had lost their aspiring ring leader. One night they raided a small village, murdered raped and pillaged it clean, during a distress call Nehan was sent there with her newly ranked team mates. According to the back up Jounin, that where sent a week after. They didn't find her body so they figured that she had become a rogue ninjas that killed her team mates and her family. Her comrades died during the event which left no other witness to this event, and her story would sound realistic enough. Not according to her, it would seem too easy . No. . She wouldn't stay at the psyche ward. Anyway, it left her alone with the deranged lunatic. He managed to over power her and store her in a cellar. For days the rogue starved her, beat her and did unforgiving things to the adolescent beautify. Hair ragged, tears covering her eyes and blood across her lips, it was here she consulted with Jashin for the first time, meaning every word she said. Spending all her time praying to her god, hoping that he would respond. The missing nin tattooed a skull, reminding her of his old comrade. To remind her of what she really was "Daughter of death" the one that killed his best friend. One night she got free of her bond, crept out of the basement and out towards her old home. She wanted to see if her parents where still alive, but alas they where dead. Their skulls cut out of their heads, during this horrific shock the ninja went into a crazy frenzy. At that very moment Nehan wasn't home, only Jashin. She woke up above the corpse of the ninja, with her bloody hands digging in his guts and his skin around her teeth. She had killed and eaten parts of him. When the jounin arrived they believed that starvation might have been the cause for her eating the missing nin. They didn't find her anywhere but believed that she ran away to escape from the ninjas in pursuit. Wake up! WAKE UP! Nehan would only wake up in a cell for eating a person, tattooed like a freak, teeth filled with blood. She snapped, she was someone else in her own. . Skin? Ink. . Trap! She was trapped inside herself, she needed a way out and felt like she was dying. Hiding in the woods, alone, It didn't help her regain her sanity. During this escapade, Nehan ate anything she could pick up and eventually the starving missing run away ninja picked up some psychological mushrooms. She consumed them and lost herself in her own thoughts and found another reason to fight. She "spoke" to Jashin, within trip. There he told her to focus to become stronger, that she was truly his warrior, she had survived this far. Unfortunately the missing ni run away nin was caught by a pack of samurai and threw her inside a prison in River Country. Where she would spend months for going on a frenzy during her trip, they gave her mask and a poncho to cover self up as best as possible. It seemed to calm the poor girl down and made her manageable. Prison life wasn't going to be easy. A new life Nehan was freed by another missing nin that had heard of her ability to regenerate from insane combat wounds, which in turn she promised him that she would help him on his quest. She swore a life debt to Kenji and together they set out to start working on his malicious plans. They started a small mercenary band called Bikou and started recruiting members to their team. They started by finding the notorious snake-man known as Yaksha, it was then and there that Nehan found a major flaw in her fighting style as it was the only time that she had actually lost a fight. With the continued plan of helping Kenji, they would soon run into a missing nin that had a special ability, the ability Kenji had been hunting for nearly a year. Once they had gotten what they wanted out of him, he would spend time perfecting the jutsu while Nehan ventured out and began growing closer to the snake-man Yaksha. It was during that time that she also stumbled upon a Kirigakure ninja by the name of Karagata, Shiv. A man that she laid with and was impregnated by, a fact which she kept secret to most of her fellow Bikou members about. She would soon run into trouble yet again, Yoru, from Konohagakure had ventured out to try to make her come back to her old village, an invitation which she answered with gusto. A fight broke out and she eventually forced the man back were he came from as she believed that killing him would only cause more problems for her team. Having joined Bikou and then Zenchou in the span of a couple of months, she knew that she would rocket up on the wanted list and she had enough problems as it was. That and her partner had finally unlocked the path to his ultimate power, she had helped the madman create an ability which had turned him into a monster the world should fear. What she didn't expect was that he would almost kill her once he turned and worst of all was that he began spending time with their newest recruit, Akane, a fact that bugged Nehan as it almost felt like he had found a new lab rat. Ignoring the thoughts, she began taking on more dangerous missions and soon wound up hunting down other missing nins and collected their organs for her own sadistic plans. On her path to a hunt she would find an abandoned Jashin temple, where her fellow believers had been lead astray by a priest that had chosen not to inflict pain onto himself yet gladly watched others go the path he deterred from. An angered Nehan made short works of the man and soon she found herself in a priestess role. There she found her first follower, Eriasu and together they began running the temple together. This new task had kept her busy and before she knew it she had given birth to a healthy baby boy by the name of Yuuto, working as a priestess and as a mother kept Nehan busy for two years. Time seemed to move faster than she actually expected, and that wasn't the only change that had occurred. Her hair had turned from black to white over the course of her mercenary activities, she blamed it on all of her wounds and associated it with the pain her body had endured, which made her wonder what would happen next to her hair, especially if she continued down the rabbit hole. She changed her persona to Nirvana to reflect on her new found self as a priestess and mother and hoped that the world would offer her a new chance to introduce herself, even though she had caused massive damage that could be considered irreparable. Though her Nirvana persona was short lived, all of her repenting thoughts was ruined the day she set foot in Fire country and squared off with none other than the current standing Hokage, Takeo. His actions against the now peaceful woman, triggered her to snap back to her old persona. Their battle continued until both their backup arrived, effectively separating them. With a new mindset, the wicked witch from Konoha had now a new lease in life and she was going to make sure to reach the goal where she can one day sacrifice her new rival; Natsuki, Takeo. "From shade to light, I'll reap, by my hand, you'll weep" Battle Information Combat StyleShow Hoshi created this style after leaving her homeland, Konohagakure, she uses the chain to control the scythe from longer range than usual. This style helps Nehan fight in short range to medium range, this style also lets Nehan change the style of play as well. The scythe can also turn into a spear and instead of learning a new way to use both of them, Nehan learned this style by utilizing the scythes ability to change form and the chain that is attached to the scythe, wiping the chain around to move the scythe when it is not in her hands. Believing in that a true follower are born with the ability to heal themselves, the daunting ninja has thought herself a way to combine both healing and fighting but at a greater cost and at a slower pace. This style is created to find openings where she can heal and times when she should go full out ballistic using her adrenaline. Using her creepy ninjutsu tech to open the target up for an attack using her scythe. Or the scythe to attack her targets as she flies in with her ninjutsu. Or you know. . Use her skills to overwhelm the targets. Abilities: 2/3Show An ability special to Nehan, having been born with this special ability which allows her body to regenerate at all times. For this to work she needs to lessen the effects, make it slower and require more concentration, in order to be able to fight while recovering. Fatal wounds should have mandatory focus as the slowed down version can take too long to regenerate. If focused on regenerating then Nehan exponentially harder to kill. Each level of heal takes different time and requires different types of techniques to build up a perfect pyramid. -5 Stam for always being on. Being attuned with the more obscure side of life and existence, Nehan has discovered how to create a link, a bond with another living being, binding their souls together. This link is created via the consumption of blood or via body part that may contain the victim's identity, which then allows for the bond to be formed with chakra. She may also perform this ritual by applying this “identification” to a doll--Can't kill target when linked to a doll.-- or herself, thus forging a link between it and her target. Via the usage of Ninjutsu, this allows the user to gather multiple information on the victim's current state. Having gained the ability to perfectly and soundly bond with another life source, Nehan has taken a step further into the art of the obscure. Utilizing said ability and after creating a bond, La Bruja is able to physically influence her victim through this link via the usage of Ninjutsu. After creating a bond, she may apply and plant a multitude of curses on her bonded enemies, such as stabbings and shake ups. However, the way this is done is affected by how she has created the bond. If she herself has consumed her victim's identification, to physically influence them, she must start with herself. If the bond has created between the victim and the doll, the physical influence must start with the doll itself. This dark ability has altered Nehan's chakra color to Green N/A ConcentrationsShow Ninjutsu 3/3Show Fuuton Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect. This concentration allows for the user to user chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for it's advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiate from normal techniques by the faint light green colour of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques. This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy. Taijutsu 9/9Show The fundamental skill of the [Upper Body] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their arms, chest and head in various ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Lower Body] indicates the user’s proficiency in using their legs and feet in many different ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways. The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of a Hafted Weapons indicated the user’s proficiency with various axes, blunt weapons, flails and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Polearm Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with staves, spears, halberds, pikes, scythes and other like weapons. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Corded Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skills of [Heavenly Body Control] cannot be mastered by those with less than 35 Taijutsu, Strength and Speed. These skills include those required to create almost ninjutsu-equivalent effects simply from the movement of one’s body such as animal shaped blasts of compressed air from especially positioned hands and other similar feats which are beyond reality. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu, and requires Taijutsu Specialist. Rank: Village: Primary Chakra Affinity: Secondary Chakra Affinity: Tertiary Chakra Affinity: S-Rank Konohagakure [Fuuton] [N/A] [N/A] Chakra Pool: Endurance: Control: Strength: Speed: Will Power: 30 (35 - 5) 50 50 50 35 30

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[hr][table][table=2][center][color=maroon]Patience[/color]
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[center][big][big][big][big][color=seagreen]Kijo[/color], [color=White]N[color=brown]e[/color][color=dimgray]h[/color][color=brown]a[/color]n[/color][/big][/big][/big][/big]
[color=black][i]Angel[/i][/color] of [b]Death[/b].
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"[color=Maroon]Divine judgement awaits heathens ignorant to the pain of others.[/color]"
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[color=seaGreen][s]Konohagakure no Sato[/s][/color]
[u][i]Age[/i][/u]
38
[u][i]Gender[/i][/u]
Female

[b][big][u]Wanted: [color=maroon][i]Dead[/i][/color][/u][/big][/b][/center][hr][center]-[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8101294/1/]Attempted Hericide[/url]-
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Pale, medium height and fit. She has a very feminine body type, sporting D cup's and fine shaped bottom, no visible scars nor damage on her skin. Her luscious raven black hair has turned pure white and hangs all the way down past the center of her back by an half of an inch. She wears an orange brosch shaped like a rose on the side of her hair. Where formally she had a facial tattoo, over the years it has healed and now reveals her once beautiful face. She carries a Jashin triangle necklace hidden under her poncho at all times, pulls it out when she needs to pray.

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Voodoo Auto Tattoo[/center]
This version of the tattoo only appears once she eats human meat or when she has cursed a target. Her ink sunk into her subconscious even though her regen removed the tattoos a long time ago. Her tattoos crawl back to life, to reveal her infamous ominous appearance.[/spoiler]

Behind ear Tattoo
[spoiler=Fuuinjutsu][b][color=#444F51][Fuuinjutsu: Kai Transfer][/color][/b]
D rank Charge Fuuinjutsu
A fuuinjutsu that Kenji places on a target's head, this seal was made for the purpose of aiding those who need him to free them from a Genjutsu without him needing to be in the fray of combat. By creating the seal, Kenji stores a genjutsu Kai within the seal, allowing him to activate it later as long as he is within range to Kai the seal. In doing so, he can release someone from a genjutsu with his stats at a -5 Genjutsu.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
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Nehan is more free spirited, happy and content with helping people out as long as its for a good purpose. She will gladly sit back from the battlefield and help out her allies heal, within the battles and outside. She believes that if she travels far enough in the world and heal as many people as possible then she can one day truly heal the planet. Nirvana likes to pray to Jashin in her private time as she doesn't feel that the world is ready for it's return yet.

Then there are the downsides of being the mix of both crazy and collected. If angered the woman can act up on her anger and attack those who don't stop annoying her. She doesn't go rampage and clear streets but will beat the person down to the point of where she has to heal them back. Which can sometimes be a strain but she sees it as anger management.

Over the course of two years, the wicked witch managed to calm her feisty temperament, using meditation and different sort of techniques to calm her down. She has started to focus on delivering her message, rather than pure destruction, although if provoked enough, she will make sure that they get their repercussions, as punishment.

Nehan is more or less a sociopath. She is very calm and collective during her free time, she often speaks in riddles or in rhyme to confuse the ones engaging with her so that she can leave or test them. Thanks to her tattooed face she wears a happy mask to bring up her own mood, feeling that without it she can't be genuinely happy. Without it, oh. . . She becomes a freak. . It's as if it unleashes something out of her weirdest imagination. She becomes a cocky hot shot believing she can take anyone down but knows when she is clearly outmatched

Furious yet happily laughing, she becomes the total opposite, thinking she's number one, her mental snap made her believe she could reach another form of heaven to escape all the pain. While unknowingly drawn closer to the evil lord, this has caused her to become somewhat of an adrenaline junkie, feeding of the fight to keep going. There's only one way out, although she is not entirely reckless, she knows when it's best to attack from distance, a little switcheru.

Nehan is a religious woman and puts her beliefs over anything. Although she is a believer of Jashinism, she doesn't practice it like most do, rather she sits by dead corpses after and talks to them, but she only does this if possible. Believing that she can speak to the other side, it's a psychological tic she got after watching her parents parish. From time to time she used to visit Minoru, the only one that talked to her anymore, the real her.

Although she was raised to be a non-believer but she was never someone who liked to follow orders. Nehan is more of a loner, believing that putting her trust and love on someone else would only bring them bad luck, so for most of her free time she spends at the morgue.

Nehan is manipulative during her battles. She is known to stare at her enemies to freak them out but what they do not know is that Nehan is collecting battle data so she can plan out her next move.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Clothing/Accessories][u]incognito[/u]
Nehan wears a white linen tank top, over that she wears a ragged black hooded robe that covers most of her body. She carries her "Happy" mask, a tanned mask with black eyebrows, it has two holes where the eyes are and blood streaks the eyes, simulating tears of blood. The mask is custom fitted to match her face, made out of porcelain. Sporting a nice band, so she can wear it around her neck. She sports various of roses on her hair to contrast with her bleak face color.

[u]At all times[/u]
Wears sport bras to support that are supported by her back over that the missing nin wears a black and red shirt, that covers most of her top. It stops short above her waist, which she has tied black bands and her old head plate around said waist. Sporting black tight breathable leggings and black sandals, the ninja has hidden all her the rest with black bandage wrapped tightly around her body. A large pouch where she has stored all of her hidden items. Her Jashin pendant around her stomach, strings covered in beads and various animal teeth she has collected along the way. She also wears a thumb [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8099611/1/#new]ring[/url] on her right hand, given to her by her partner in crime. [/spoiler]
[spoiler=Equipment][u]All time[/u]

[u]Pouch[/u]
[quote]
[list][*]2x Black gloves hidden inside the shirt.
[*]5x Shuriken
[*]7x Empty Scrolls. 2x4
[*]2x Pens.
[*]3x Voodoo dolls
[*]1x Retractable Spear, 3 Inches retracted, 12 inches elongated.[/list][img]http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100713020039/ztreasureisle/images/c/c0/Voodoo_Doll-icon.png[/img][/quote]

[quote=Silver Scroll][list][*]1x Body Preservation Seal [20x4 foot][[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5724993/1/#new]Fukurou Body[/url]]
[*]1x Heart
[*]5x Organs
[*]15x Skin/Muscle[/list][/quote][list]


[/list][quote=Hidden inside her sleeves]
Left Sleeve[list][*]4 Smoke Bombs.
[*]4x Black Kunai.
[*]3x Explosive Noted Black Kunai.
[*]7x Colored Pins.
[/list]
Right Sleeve[list][*]4x Flash Notes.
[*]3x White Kunai.
[*]4x Explosive Noted White Kunai.
[*]6x Colored Pins.
[/list]
[/quote]

[quote=Vida Amor]
[list][*]1x Black, Metal shoulder pauldron, left shoulder.
[*]2x Black, Metal forearm guards.
[*]1x Happy Mask, a Caucasian mask with brown hair and brown eyebrows, it has two holes where the eyes are[/list][/quote]

[quote=Vengeance][table=3][spoiler=Alma][center][img=250,250]https://imgur.com/WuzKsIa[/img][/center][/spoiler][c][spoiler=Purga][center][img=150,250]https://imgur.com/hENyorQ[/img][/center][/spoiler][c][spoiler=Pesadilla][center][img=200,250]https://imgur.com/IWwjwQA[/img][/center][/spoiler][c][spoiler=Almanita][center][img=250,250]https://imgur.com/B9achXK[/img][/center][/spoiler][c][spoiler=Purgelito][center][img=150,250]https://imgur.com/XrGu3l7[/img][/center][/spoiler][c][spoiler=Pesa][center][img=200,250]https://imgur.com/KPb7Czm[/img][/center][/spoiler][/table]

[i][color=white]Alma[/color][/i] is a half moon shaped scythe, it's from the toe to the heel the blade is 70 cm long also hammer head back side, that's a weight to add more force to the blows and can be used as a bludgeon. The metal shaft that is shaped like bones which is five feet long. The scythe is connected to a metal wire which reaches about 10 meters at max, the wire is connected to a coil that is placed near her waist. When yanking on the wire it starts to reel in whether it is reeling her towards the scythe (35 strength) or the scythe to her (35 speed), the head is connected to another coil and when the user pulls it the blade collapses on itself, turning into a makeshift axe, [i][color=Black]Pesadilla[/color][/i] or a spear, [i][color=brown]Purga[/color][/i] . This is used for hiding purposes, the handle can also collapse making it appear as a Kama, Sword and one handed axe. The small bladed metal box is slung over her right shoulder with the blade downwards facing to the left. Alma is coated with her poison as well, which makes the already deadly weapon a fearsome weapon to behold.[/quote]
[quote=Sangre][center][img=250,250]https://i.imgur.com/JfS6mWJ.jpeg[/img][/center][hr]Golden and jewel covered mouthpiece that aren't really for flash but to hide and store small needles on the back of each tooth. The grill covers the lower front row and two fangs. It's a rather simple device that needs the right amount of pressure the bite in order for them to eject poison, so the user doesn't over swallow her own venom[hr][color=firebrick]The First Kiss[/color]
D-rank Poison
The lowest level of her poisoned entrapped fangs, this poison can only be injected via blood stream and starts working after the initial bite post. Once it has intruded the victims blood stream it will start to effect the targets mind, causing him/her to feel a bit woozy -1 Will. At this level it causes minor disturbances but won't really impede the targets fighting abilities. This poison can't cause effects if digested and it last's for 5 post before fading. The poison is also coated on her weapon.

[color=firebrick]The Pain of Knowing[/color]
C-Rank Poison
Prerequisite: [color=firebrick]The First Kiss[/color]
The second lowest levels of her poisoned fang, this too has to be injected via blood stream and starts working after the initial bite post. This one causes the target to start feeling a slowly increasing headache to go with the dizziness caused by the weakest in the link. This headache and the dizziness will drop the targets -3 Will. This poison can't cause effects if digested and it last's for 5 post before fading. The poison is also coated on her weapon.

[color=firebrick]The Journey Towards A Slow. .[/color]
B-Rank poison
Prerequisite: [color=firebrick]The Pain Of Knowing[/color]
A poison located in her grill fangs and starts working after the initial bite post. At this level it is where the poison starts to take effects start kicking in, once it's inside the targets blood stream, the targets temperature will slowly rise, starting from the bite wound outwards, making the target feel clammy and sick, that mixed with a headache and dizziness starts to impede with the targets fighting capabilities -2 Speed, 4 - Will. This poison can't cause effects if digested and it last's for 5 post before fading. The poison is also coated on her weapon.[/quote][/spoiler]
[spoiler=History][hr][center][b][big][color=White]Pain Theme:[/color][/big][/b]
[video=200,30]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8GG_Mp27gk[/video]
[color=White]N[color=brown]e[/color][color=dimgray]h[/color][color=brown]a[/color]n[/color]
[img=500,350]https://imgur.com/E9YEAyO[/img][/center][center]

"[color=dimgray]What lies under my mask, the truth of my past[/color]"[/center][hr]

Born under the name Nehan, the girl was raised to be a non-believer, because her mother did not want her to become a lunatic who is out on a killing spree, having already witnessed her first born lose his mind over a religion. This god was famous in this little village far away from Konohagakure no Sato. Only a few who lived here followed it. However, most of them where low level followers. It has been told that this god walked once on this very earth, but the misled humans until they eventually killed anyone who wasn't under his command. Having vanished by the lack of followers the evil figure laid rest.

Nehan was a good girl and soon was allowed to study. Nehan was a good students when she was young. She followed all the rules and did all her homework on time, proving to be a well raised young girl. She did anything to make her parents happy and when she graduated as an above average student she was finally allowed to move to the Konoha to train as a ninja, believing that she would be able to return and protect her parents. Nehan moved into a cosy appartment that she kept as tidy as possible, believing that being neat was a special feat. She ranked up to genin in no time and moved on to a loving team.

Her sensei was a chuunin, not much older than she was. The chuunin thought her to be able to control certain wind, her first affinity. Up till that point she had only been working on training up her ninjutsu. Just an average genin and nothing else, the adolescent was not sure if she wanted to join the chuunin exam since she was afraid that she would end up dying since her class mates surpassed her in every feat. She was the one that made the team look weak but her teammates told her that it was okay, that they did not care about that and that they would need her. Unsure of what to think of the ninja told them that she needed time to think. Nehan walked home, feeling ashamed of her weakness.

Two weeks before the exam, the girl had not decided if she would join, and had pondered about it for a while. She had returned home one night, that night the girl went out one night to take a walk. She found the Jashin shrine and was intrigued, she had never entered it before, even though she lived a couple of blocks away from the temple. Nehan went to take a closer look and in there she found a scroll, where it contained of information about this god. The girl got interested and took one of the scrolls home. There she started to worship this god on her own. She found her new religion, the girl chose to participate in the tournament, believing that she had a place in the after life.

[u]The exam of death![/u]

Just one week left to the chuunin exam, the fourteen year old genin signed up. Her teammates got happy and this time she was the one that told them it would all be okay. They all passed the first exam with ease; however, they did not know that the next test would be ten times harder. Nehan went on meeting a lot of obstacles and foe’s. Along the way, one of the team mates were seriously injured, leaving Nehan to carry the wounded genin. One injured, one fatigued and one without a scratch on. The god seemed to help her, it seemed like he would protect her. Or so she thought. The god was smart, he knew that she could not kill in the exam or when she was a chuunin, but instead opted to wait until she got older, or for the perfect [i]trigger[/i]. Nehan had to fight another leaf ninja. It seemed like the rival was going to take her down in a second but the overly confident ninja was beaten by Nehan. She overpowered him by tricking him, throwing a smoke bomb that her team mate gave her before the match then used her fuuton to force his fires back at him.

The enemy shinobi stuck in the smoke, while his friends screamed to warn him, but it was too late. Because Nehan already picked up his weapon and sent it trough his chest. It seems like Nehan killed on her own will. This got Jashin to like the girl a bit more. [i]Figuratively[/i]. The examiner looked at the bloody body, closed his eyes, and confirmed that he was dead and therefore Nehan was the winner. His friends shed tears, screamed and cursed at the newly ranked chuunin. They threatened that they would kill her one day, an eye for an eye. Her teammates were shocked at seeing her being capable of taking a life, but smiled eventually as they realized that they all had ranked up. They all won their match even the wounded one. At the end of the exam, Nehan had already earned her first nickname “Daughter of death”. For her uncanny ability to walk out of the exam without a scratch. For years they went on missions and became known as the lucky duo, that always managed to get away.

As Chuunin the team roamed the fire country and completed multiple missions, making a little name out of themselves. The team tackled on harder and harder missions, proving to be a worthy trio. The rising team had a nemesis hiding in their shadow, scheming on a terrible revenge, but in order for it to work they needed time, they needed to grow stronger. After a while they ranked up to Jounin, and when they thought it was all going to be fine, that incident happen.

[u]Turning point![/u]

Months after, Nehan would fight the shady ninjas from the exam. But this time it would be outside the village and more personal, It was the kids who had threatened her. They had gone rogue just after losing their friend and figured that there was no point in staying back in Konoha now that they had lost their aspiring ring leader. One night they raided a small village, murdered raped and pillaged it clean, during a distress call Nehan was sent there with her newly ranked team mates. According to the back up Jounin, that where sent a week after. They didn't find her body so they figured that she had become a rogue ninjas that killed her team mates and her family. Her comrades died during the event which left no other witness to this event, and her story would sound realistic enough. Not according to her, it would seem too easy . No. . She wouldn't stay at the psyche ward.

Anyway, it left her alone with the deranged lunatic. He managed to over power her and store her in a cellar. For days the rogue starved her, beat her and did unforgiving things to the adolescent beautify. Hair ragged, tears covering her eyes and blood across her lips, it was here she consulted with Jashin for the first time, meaning every word she said. Spending all her time praying to her god, hoping that he would respond. The missing nin tattooed a skull, reminding her of his old comrade. To remind her of what she really was "Daughter of death" the one that killed his best friend.

One night she got free of her bond, crept out of the basement and out towards her old home. She wanted to see if her parents where still alive, but alas they where dead. Their skulls cut out of their heads, during this horrific shock the ninja went into a crazy frenzy. At that very moment Nehan wasn't home, only Jashin. She woke up above the corpse of the ninja, with her bloody hands digging in his guts and his skin around her teeth. She had killed and eaten parts of him. When the jounin arrived they believed that starvation might have been the cause for her eating the missing nin. They didn't find her anywhere but believed that she ran away to escape from the ninjas in pursuit.

[i]Wake up![/i]

[i]WAKE UP![/i]

Nehan would only wake up in a cell for eating a person, tattooed like a freak, teeth filled with blood. She snapped, she was someone else in her own. . Skin? Ink. . Trap! She was trapped inside herself, she needed a way out and felt like she was dying. Hiding in the woods, alone, It didn't help her regain her sanity. During this escapade, Nehan ate anything she could pick up and eventually the starving [s]missing[/s] run away ninja picked up some psychological mushrooms. She consumed them and lost herself in her own thoughts and found another reason to fight. She "spoke" to Jashin, within trip. There he told her to focus to become stronger, that she was truly his warrior, she had survived this far. Unfortunately the [s]missing ni[/s] run away nin was caught by a pack of samurai and threw her inside a prison in River Country. Where she would spend months for going on a frenzy during her trip, they gave her mask and a poncho to cover self up as best as possible. It seemed to calm the poor girl down and made her manageable. Prison life wasn't going to be easy.

[u]A new life[/u]

Nehan was freed by another missing nin that had heard of her ability to regenerate from insane combat wounds, which in turn she promised him that she would help him on his quest. She swore a life debt to Kenji and together they set out to start working on his malicious plans. They started a small mercenary band called Bikou and started recruiting members to their team. They started by finding the notorious snake-man known as Yaksha, it was then and there that Nehan found a major flaw in her fighting style as it was the only time that she had actually lost a fight. With the continued plan of helping Kenji, they would soon run into a missing nin that had a special ability, the ability Kenji had been hunting for nearly a year. Once they had gotten what they wanted out of him, he would spend time perfecting the jutsu while Nehan ventured out and began growing closer to the snake-man Yaksha. It was during that time that she also stumbled upon a Kirigakure ninja by the name of Karagata, Shiv. A man that she laid with and was impregnated by, a fact which she kept secret to most of her fellow Bikou members about.

She would soon run into trouble yet again, Yoru, from Konohagakure had ventured out to try to make her come back to her old village, an invitation which she answered with gusto. A fight broke out and she eventually forced the man back were he came from as she believed that killing him would only cause more problems for her team. Having joined Bikou and then Zenchou in the span of a couple of months, she knew that she would rocket up on the wanted list and she had enough problems as it was. That and her partner had finally unlocked the path to his ultimate power, she had helped the madman create an ability which had turned him into a monster the world should fear. What she didn't expect was that he would almost kill her once he turned and worst of all was that he began spending time with their newest recruit, Akane, a fact that bugged Nehan as it almost felt like he had found a new lab rat.

Ignoring the thoughts, she began taking on more dangerous missions and soon wound up hunting down other missing nins and collected their organs for her own sadistic plans. On her path to a hunt she would find an abandoned Jashin temple, where her fellow believers had been lead astray by a priest that had chosen not to inflict pain onto himself yet gladly watched others go the path he deterred from. An angered Nehan made short works of the man and soon she found herself in a priestess role. There she found her first follower, Eriasu and together they began running the temple together. This new task had kept her busy and before she knew it she had given birth to a healthy baby boy by the name of [i]Yuuto[/i], working as a priestess and as a mother kept Nehan busy for two years. Time seemed to move faster than she actually expected, and that wasn't the only change that had occurred. Her hair had turned from black to white over the course of her mercenary activities, she blamed it on all of her wounds and associated it with the pain her body had endured, which made her wonder what would happen next to her hair, especially if she continued down the rabbit hole. She changed her persona to Nirvana to reflect on her new found self as a priestess and mother and hoped that the world would offer her a new chance to introduce herself, even though she had caused massive damage that could be considered irreparable.

Though her Nirvana persona was short lived, all of her repenting thoughts was ruined the day she set foot in Fire country and squared off with none other than the current standing Hokage, Takeo. His actions against the now peaceful woman, triggered her to snap back to her old persona. Their battle continued until both their backup arrived, effectively separating them. With a new mindset, the wicked witch from Konoha had now a new lease in life and she was going to make sure to reach the goal where she can one day sacrifice her new rival; Natsuki, Takeo. [hr]
[center][img=500,350]https://imgur.com/bNJetco[/img]

"[color=wite]From shade to light, [color=dimgray]I'll reap[/color], by my hand, [color=dimgray]you'll weep[/color]"[/color][/center][/spoiler][/table]
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[table=1,Battle Information][spoiler=Combat Style][table=3][c][quote=La Verdadera Quadaña]Hoshi created this style after leaving her homeland, Konohagakure, she uses the chain to control the scythe from longer range than usual. This style helps Nehan fight in short range to medium range, this style also lets Nehan change the style of play as well. The scythe can also turn into a spear and instead of learning a new way to use both of them, Nehan learned this style by utilizing the scythes ability to change form and the chain that is attached to the scythe, wiping the chain around to move the scythe when it is not in her hands.[/quote][hr][quote=True Believer]Believing in that a true follower are born with the ability to heal themselves, the daunting ninja has thought herself a way to combine both healing and fighting but at a greater cost and at a slower pace. This style is created to find openings where she can heal and times when she should go full out ballistic using her adrenaline.[/quote][hr]Using her creepy ninjutsu tech to open the target up for an attack using her scythe. Or the scythe to attack her targets as she flies in with her ninjutsu. Or you know. . Use her skills to overwhelm the targets.[c][/table][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Abilities: 2/3][quote=Imperecedero/Regen]An [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5925420/1/#new]ability[/url] special to Nehan, having been born with this special ability which allows her body to regenerate at all times. For this to work she needs to lessen the effects, make it slower and require more concentration, in order to be able to fight while recovering. Fatal wounds should have mandatory focus as the slowed down version can take too long to regenerate. If focused on regenerating then Nehan exponentially harder to kill. Each level of heal takes different time and requires different types of techniques to build up a perfect pyramid. -5 Stam for always being on.
[/quote][hr][quote=Brujería/Witchcraft]Being attuned with the more obscure side of life and existence, Nehan has discovered how to create a link, a bond with another living being, binding their souls together. This link is created via the consumption of blood or via body part that may contain the victim's identity, which then allows for the bond to be formed with chakra. She may also perform this ritual by applying this “identification” to a doll--Can't kill target when linked to a doll.-- or herself, thus forging a link between it and her target. Via the usage of Ninjutsu, this allows the user to gather multiple information on the victim's current state. Having gained the ability to perfectly and soundly bond with another life source, Nehan has taken a step further into the art of the obscure. Utilizing said ability and after creating a bond, La Bruja is able to physically influence her victim through this link via the usage of Ninjutsu. After creating a bond, she may apply and plant a multitude of curses on her bonded enemies, such as stabbings and shake ups. However, the way this is done is affected by how she has created the bond. If she herself has consumed her victim's identification, to physically influence them, she must start with herself. If the bond has created between the victim and the doll, the physical influence must start with the doll itself. This dark ability has altered Nehan's chakra color to [color=seagreen]Green[/color][/quote][hr] N/A [/spoiler]
[spoiler=Concentrations][i][spoiler=Ninjutsu 3/3][quote=Fuuton]Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.[/quote][hr][hr][quote=Iijutsu]This concentration allows for the user to user chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for it's advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiate from normal techniques by the faint light green colour of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques.[/quote][hr][quote=Fuuinjutsu]This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.[/quote][hr][/spoiler][spoiler=Taijutsu 9/9] [quote=Upper Body] The fundamental skill of the [b][Upper Body][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their arms, chest and head in various ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Lower Body]The fundamental skill of [b][Lower Body][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency in using their legs and feet in many different ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote][hr][quote=Acrobatics]The fundamental skill of [b][Acrobatics][/b] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Rigid Structure]The fundamental skill of [b][Rigid Structure][/b] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Hafted Weapons] The fundamental skill of a [b]Hafted Weapons[/b] indicated the user’s proficiency with various axes, blunt weapons, flails and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Polearm Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Polearm Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with staves, spears, halberds, pikes, scythes and other like weapons. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Corded Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Corded Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][hr][quote=Heavenly Body Control]The fundamental skills of [b][Heavenly Body Control][/b] cannot be mastered by those with less than 35 Taijutsu, Strength and Speed. These skills include those required to create almost ninjutsu-equivalent effects simply from the movement of one’s body such as animal shaped blasts of compressed air from especially positioned hands and other similar feats which are beyond reality. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu, and requires Taijutsu Specialist.[/quote][/spoiler][/spoiler]
[table=5][b]Rank:[/b][c][b]Village:[/b][c][b]Primary Chakra Affinity:[/b][c][b]Secondary Chakra Affinity:[/b][c][b]Tertiary Chakra Affinity:[/b]
[c]S-[color=maroon]Rank[/color]
[c][color=seaGreen][s]Konohagakure[/s][/color]
[c][[color=lightgreen]Fuuton[/color]]
[c][[s]N/A[/s]]
[c][[s]N/A[/s]][/table][table=6][b]Chakra Pool:[/b][c][b]Endurance:[/b][c][b]Control:[/b][c][b]Strength:[/b][c][b]Speed:[/b][c][b]Will Power:[/b]
[c]30 (35 - 5)
[c]50
[c]50
[c]50
[c]35
[c]30[/table][/table]
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[Taiga]

Can you describe all changes in this revamp?

[Trusted Grader]

Songs, New stat system... Avatar for character I believe.

[Kabu]

I notice you still have upper body and lower body. These have been combined into close quarters combat so you should add that. If you do wish to keep them however you can though they may not have too much use.

[Zao]

Any update on this?

[Valkier]

This has probably timed but since the feedback has been light I'll give you a few more days to let us know if you're still working on it

In addition to Kab's feedback about concs, please can you link to the place where you got your new stat total

What is happening with jutsu? You haven't cashed them in for ryo but nor are they part of this revamp. Are you intending to do it in parts, section by section?

Your first ability still references the Stamina stat which no longer exists

Your poisons still reference the Instinct stat which no longer exists

[Trusted Grader]

Working through some kinks with the ability and will edit those things asap!

[Kabu]

Let us know when done

[Valkier]

5 days

[Kanade]

Timed

[Valkier]

Yep, timed. Please let a mod know if you need the nocode to repost and continue this.