Add 4 jutsu to Chiaki and increase control by 4

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Kanade
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Add 4 jutsu to Chiaki and increase control by 4

Post by Kanade » Sun May 08, 2022 2:28 pm

Application: Kyoukan, Chiaki
Change: Increase control by 4 and add these 4 jutsu to her library:
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*Raiton • Lightning Armament
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After the correct hand seals are performed, the user coats themselves in a thick layer of lightning. This armour of lightning forms near instantly and requires [Control] Strength to break. During this time, the user's physical strikes apply the Raiton shocking effect.
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*Raiton • Conductor
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.
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*Raiton • Stun Gun
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will channel Raiton chakra to two of their fingers. They will then be able to fire up to three total bullet sized balls of concentrated lightning from their fingertips. These bullets will travel at [Control] speed, but will not have any physical force. Instead, they will apply light electrical burns similar to a sun burn and will apply Raiton's shocking effect.

*[Iijutsu • Burn Ointment Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A relatively simple and handy technique to have at hand, *[Iijutsu • Burn Ointment Technique] is used to alleviate pain caused by burn wounds. After focusing chakra into his/her hands, the user will hover them above the burn wound. As the chakra is channeled into and around the burn, it cools the area and works to prevent harmful, scar-producing blistering in the affected area. To provide this soothing relief to small areas of first degree burns, it's fairly quick to do. For small areas of second degree burns, it takes one (1) post of concentration to achieve the same effects. This technique is ineffective when applied to larger areas or burns worse than second degree.
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Last edited by Kanade on Mon May 09, 2022 9:01 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Add 3 jutsu to Chiaki and increase control by 4

Post by Zao » Sun May 08, 2022 7:15 pm

Can you link to the accepted character app?

Chiaki has 80 stats so that 80x10 = 800 word discount

D-rank Jutsu are 1400 base. 1400 - 800 = 600 per D rank. You'll need about another 200 words on the jutsu training to make the minimum word count of 1800 for three D-ranks. Fix that and everything should be good.
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Add 4 jutsu to Chiaki and increase control by 4

Post by Kanade » Mon May 09, 2022 9:00 pm

Fixed, added 1 more jutsu in the meantime ;)
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Add 4 jutsu to Chiaki and increase control by 4

Post by Zao » Tue May 10, 2022 12:30 am

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Tsukino Hisato - Kiri Chuunin - Seven Swordsman Dagger

Saisuko Zao - Suna Bannin - Spirit Weapon Saint

Kyōhō Ken - The White Snake Sage - S Rank Assassin/Bounty Hunter

Aburame Hisato S-rank Mn / Inactive

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Arashiyama Ning - Kumo Chuunin - Weilder of the Ghost Spear

Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

Genso - Elemental Crafting Shaman - A Rank Monk - Inactive

Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

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Add 4 jutsu to Chiaki and increase control by 4

Post by Kabu » Tue May 10, 2022 1:52 am

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