Nozomi jutsu fixes

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Changing the effects of the jutsu on sheet so they aren’t so weak like iza suggested

ninjutsu pink haze
D ranked ninjutsu
Duration 4 posts
The user breathes a plume of smoke that when making contact with the eyes it causes pink eye causing blurry vision. The eyes seem to swell and itch like crazy the pain and itchiness increases with control pain starts a dull throb at 1-12control
Then at 14-25 increases to a intense itch and feel like something is constantly tickling your eye ball along with migraine from the eyeball swelling causes near and farsighted vision making everything look blurry.
Then at 27-38 increases to an itch similar to poison sumac that can possibly drive you mad along with intense pain and blindness if not treated this could lead to permanent blindness
Finally at 39-50 control it causes extreme pain as the eyes literally start to rot away if not treated within two posts can lead to permanent blindness. can only be treated with lijutsu that has equal or higher control and can be stalled but not cured with 1-9 less control

ninjutsu painful expansion
D ranked ninjutsu
Duration 5 posts
The user can either direct the poison into bodily fluids such as sweat and saliva because of that this jutsu is best used in close quarters. It makes a random body part swell up painfully feeling like it’s about to pop and becomes more sensitive to pain. The effects increase depending on control. Starts at a 50% increase in pain at 1-12 control lasts
At 14-25 control increases to double the pain and body parts now begin to swell to a additional half its original size limiting range of movements
27-38 control increases pain to triple the amount normal body parts now swell rapidly and can reach double there size and heavily restricts movement of the body and movement feels like your pulling a muscle even breathing can feel like your being stabbed at this point.
39-50 control increases pain quadruple and causes body parts to one by one rapidly swell until the skin and muscles literally explode leaving only the skeleton. It starts with the arms after 2 posts first one arm goes then 1 post after that the left arm goes then next post the legs then 1 post later the torso resulting in death. can only been treated with lijutsu that has equal or higher control and can be stalled but not cured with 1-9 less control

ninjutsu burning hell
D ranked ninjutsu
Duration 4 posts
The user of this jutsu can emit a gas-like substance that on contact burns the skin. It is unaffected by the presence of water. The pain from the burning feeling is equal to control, if inhaled this also causes a fever as well as burns in the esophagus and stomach. The burns equal first degree burns at 1-12 control
At 14-25 equals second degree burns and if inhaled starts to eat away at your esophagus.
At 25-37 equals third degree burns and if enhaled gives a one hundred and 4 fever
At 39-50 4th-degree burns and if inhaled severe most likely lethal heavy burns or a one hundred and ten fever.




ninjutsu rocking uneasy sea
C ranked ninjutsu
Duration 5 post
The user of this jutsu creates a plumb of smoke that they shoot out of their mouth the smoke envelops the target and if breathed in at all the target will start puking uncontrollably as well as having stomach pains as the target's stomach slowly eats away at itself. The pain the user feels is tied to control 1-12 control is a intense nausea
14-25 control is extreme nausea and the feeling you were stabbed in the gut as your stomach eats away at itself giving you a ulsor and feels like you haven’t eaten in a week.
27-38 you feel extreme pain as the lining in your stomach is starting to thin and gets thinner as jutsu progresses,
39-50 control your stomach completely consumes itself this causes sepsis to start to occur and can lead to death if not treated with lijutsu that has equal or higher control and can be stalled but not cured with 1-9 less control


ninjutsu blurry mirror world
C ranked ninjutsu
Duration 5 posts
The user creates a colorless scentless mist with the exception of the faint purple hue that accompanies all Doku jutsu the mist can envelop a large area, and obscure vision, suiton and suiton extensions can spread this jutsu. Everyone inside that breathes in this jutsu will be struck with intense vertigo as their sense of balance shifts dramatically and gains a painful ear-piercing ringing noise in their ears the pain increases the more sensitive your ears are. As well as messes with your hearing. The pain from the ringing increases with control at 1-12 it only is ringing and painful throb like a earache you also get slightly dizzy
At control 14-25 it becomes a loud ringing cutting all hearing and severely weakens hearing based abilities. Along with getting moderately dizzy
At control 27-38 the victims ears begin to bleed rapidly as well as a extremly loud mind numbing ringing noise in your ears as the tympanic membrane starts to become heavily inflamed and after 1 post it spreads to your cochlea and begins to make it to get heavily inflamed as well causing distorted sense of balance making it very hard to even stay standing.
At control 39-50 the victims tympanic membrane starts to rapidly deteriorate after 2 posts it’s completely gone then after 3 posts it starts to rot the Coclea causing the victim becomes so disoriented that they can no long even stand properly they are no longer able to tell different directions apart. can only be treated with lijutsu that has equal or higher control and can be stalled but not cured with 1-9 less control



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[center][big][big][b]Karagata Nozomi[/b][/big][/big]


[win by any means necessary][/center]
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[center][b][big]General Information[/big][/b][/center]
[b]Age:[/b]appears 10 but true age is 5
[b]Gender:[/b]female
[b]Height:[/b]4ft
[b]Weight:[/b]150lbs
[b]Physical Features:[/b]
[list][*][i]Face/head:[/i]nozomu has white hair, along with skin that is pale almost looking grey, she has cold piercing gold eyes.
[*][i]Body:[/i]her body is still in development so her body type is currently in flux she currently has the body of a 21 year old adult because of the rapid aging from Chiaki’s virus
[*][i]Notable Features:[/i]black sapphire as equivalent to core [/list]
[b]Clothing/Accessories:[/b]she wears a black shirt with a mesh net underneath. With a black cloth hat on top. Knee high boots
[b]Picture:[/b][img]https://honeysanime.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/11/Goemon-Hachisuka-Oda-Nobuna-no-Yabou.jpg[/img]
[b]Personality:[/b]the character is very antisocial and she is extremely cold, placing very little value on human life. Her personality borders on sociopathy also called antisocial personality disorder and she is always looking to get stronger and smarter. Luxury goods hold very very little value to her if something isn't useful or practical she considers it useless and a waste of time. Normally she treats all friends as disposable pawns to be used and if they are no longer useful thrown away.

Though there is an important distinction between friends and teammates to her and while she would abandon a friend who is no longer useful, she wouldn’t do that to a teammate unless her survival was at stake then she maybe would. She has a sense of honor or a code of sorts like most of her clan and believes in a favor for a favor and it's a important priority to her to repay favors when she deems she owes someone. she is prone to lie if she thinks it will get her a favorable outcome
She currently has the mental age of a preteen as her mind continues to develop and she learns more eventually her mental age will line up with her physical appearance age.
[list][*][i]General:[/i]
[*][i]Hopes/Dreams:[/i]
[*][i]Fears:[/i]failure, death, being powerless, being helpless,
[*][i]Combat Mentality:[/i]gorilla warfare[/list]
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[center][b][big]Battle Information[/big][/b][/center]
[b]Village:[/b]kirigakure
[b]Rank:[/b]genin

[list][*][b]Chakra Pool:[/b]5
[*][b]Endurance:[/b] 8 -3=5
[*][b]Control:[/b]15
[*][b]Strength:[/b]2
[*][b]Speed:[/b]5
[*][b]Willpower:[/b] 5
[*][b]Power Rank:[/b]
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[b]Equipment:[/b]1 kunai and explosive tag in each of her boots. Then 1 kunai and explosive tag hidden in each sleeve. Then 1 kunai, 10 shuriken, 10m of wire ,1 exploding tags, 1 smoke bomb, 1 flash bang in a pouch on her hip.
[b]Companions:[/b] (0/1)
[b]Affinity/Specialization:[/b]dokuton
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[center][b][big]Abilities and Concentrations[/big][/b][/center]
[table=2, Abilities][b]First Ability[/b][c]kekkei genkai Shinobiyoru byōki ((creeping sickness))
The natural kekkei genkai Nozomi was born with the Creeping Sickness is the enhanced biological immunity that is carried by her. She has an incredible advanced metabolism that makes them effectively immune to all radiation and Dokuton jutsu as well as common illness and disease and all other illness and diseases are quickly recovered from. Even has developed a natural immunity to all of poisons, tranquilizers, venoms, and toxins, even alcohol has a minimal effect on her. This overactive metabolism results in a -3 in Endurance however. This also give the user access to a concentration called poison release or in other words called dokuton

[c][b]Second Ability[/b][c] A perversion of the Toukai clan, Chisaki's virus has mutated into a communicable disease. Upon inheriting Chisaki's virus [Nozomi] has become a mass of viral bio-organic material. Everything about their appearance is determined by them and is simply a superficial shell covering the bio-organic material within. There are no actual bones or organs within their body. Instead, [Nozomi] has a virus core that produces chakra and viral organic material. The core is the size of a human heart and is easily mistaken for a valuable jewel as it looks like a large cut and polished [Black sapphire].

[Nozomi] is able to regenerate either by absorbing infected biomass that they have previously created or by consuming the living tissue of another person wherein the virus that makes up their body will infect then assimilate the new tissue. [nozomi] being a creature made up of organic tissue without internal organs, is immune to most diseases and poisons, their own viral cells aggressive in attacking foreign material introduced into their body. However, when affected by poison, only the immediate area of exposure is affected and can be treated by ejecting the contaminated biomass. When their body is destroyed to a certain level (loss of 35-45% biomass), [Nozomi] can turn into a slug like creature( loss of all four limbs or half their body). If another Viral character attempts to assimilate [Nozomi] biomass it becomes a battle of willpower+control/2 vs willpower+control/2.

[Spoiler=Full Transformation] All inheritors of this ability have a full transformation. There is only one final form possible and once a full transformation has been realized that is their only full transformation for life. As a mutation of the Toukai Virus the rules follow the same limitations: come in three types of builds: Offensive, Defensive, or Mobile. These builds are often able to be seen based on the Evolved's normal appearance, however when their viral protocol is activated it becomes far more obvious. Builds are static, and do not change, meaning once someone's Full Transformation is realized, that is their full transformation for the rest of their life. [B] Mobile: Mobility Builds are a mixed build, used to allow the Toukai to move with ease and cover large areas. Mobility builds are usually very slim, and have things like additional limbs such as wings or tails, use vents to fly, or even the creation of things like wheels or skates, and grips to make it easier to climb.[/b]


[Img=390,700] https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/795478577847992331/998287856848076900/1dcee43bbf73eb50508fec68a7add631.jpg[/Img][/spoiler][Spoiler=Biomass]Biomass is the organic tissue that makes up [Nozomi] body. Like the original virus' ability [Nozomi] is able to transform their body utilizing biomass to make weapons and armour by channeling chakra. When chakra has been channeled and concentrated the affected body part will glow [purple] as small amounts of their biomass fuse with their chakra. While structure and body build is fixed in design and appearance while fully transformed, the weapons on their limbs are capable of changing. All transformations and attacks utilizing the virus fall under their own concentration titled Biomass jutsu. Biomass jutsu have a passive of mutation. [Quote=Mutation Passive]The mutation passive of Biomass techniques are caused by the cancerous effects of [Nozomi’a] virus in the human body. These mutations are generally temporary with the more severe ones requiring iijutsu to heal properly. The mutation only occurs if [Nozomi] manages to get their biomass into the target's body. Viral infections take 2 post to incubate before symptoms start to show, lasting for a number of post = to the difference between the targets endurance (immune system) and [Nozomi’s] control to a minimum of 1 and a maximum of 5. Each level higher gains a new symptom along with the symptoms caused by lower level infection.

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[*]1-9 Strength: Infectious bleeds from body's orifices.
[*]10-19 Strength: Fever causing mild disorientation (makes it hard to focus)
[*]20-24 Strength: Purple eyes that cause mildly distorted vision (drunken vision)
[*]25-34 Strength: Small tumor like growths on skin (stops forming after infection ends but tumo rs require iijutsu to treat)
[*]35+ Strength: Numerous tentacle like growths that move involuntarily (stops forming after infection ends but tentacles require iijutsu to treat)
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[c][b]Third Ability[/b][c]

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[table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][quote=Suiton][color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive [color=dodgerblue][i]enveloping[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Enveloping)]Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of times (i.e, exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with the 3/4th strength of the technique, rounded down. This means that if a suiton wave is shot forward with 17 strength, it will envelope and move anything with it that does not have more than 12 strength to resist it. This allows Suiton to fill a very powerful role in eliminating tools from opponent's access and capturing targets.[/spoiler][/quote]


[quote=Fuuton Affinity][color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an [b]cutting[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Cutting)]Fuuton has a natural [b]cutting[/b] property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.[/spoiler][/quote]


[quote=Chiton Affinity][color=#8B0000][b]Chiton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Chiton, and advanced form of Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Chiton affinity. Chiton has an [b]replenishing[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Replenishing)]Chiton has an [b]replenishing[/b] effect. This means that Chiton jutsu passively repair themselves when damaged, at no additional cost to the user. The rate of repairing itself is 1/3rd the speed of the technique rounded up, so a Chiton defense that manifests at 10 speed would repair itself at 4 speed when damaged. This only works for the length of the technique, so maintaining the damage to Chiton until the jutsu expires will stop it from regrowing. [/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Iijutsu][color=#008b5e][b]Iijutsu[/b][/color]
This concentration allows for the user to user chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for it's advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiate from normal techniques by the faint light green colour of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques.[/quote]

[quote=Dokuton]
[b]Dokuton[/b]
A unique concentration typically only usable by Nozomi is able to use their chakra to produce a gaseous poison inside their body that she can release as jutsu. She is capable of utilizing these techniques due to her inherited immunity to poisons. At default, Dokuton techniques are produced as a purple mist that can be breathed out, or released through her pores. Dokuton has a [b]deteriorating[/b] effect, which reduces the speed in which iijutsu and regeneration works for those poisoned by the techniques. The deteriorating effect works off the following table based off the control used to perform the technique:
[list][*]1-14 is -1 post on regeneration speed
[*]15-24 is -2 posts on regeneration speed
[*]25-34 is -3 posts on regeneration speed
[*]35+ is -4 posts on regeneration speed[/quote]


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[b]Taijutsu[/b][c]

[quote=Stealth]The fundamental skill of [b][Stealth][/b] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote]

[quote=Medicine]The fundamental skill of [b][Medicine][/b] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote]

[quote=Perception]The fundamental skill of [b][Perception][/b] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote]

[quote=Deft Hands]The fundamental skill of [b][Deft Hands][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.[/quote]

[quote=Projectile Weapons]The fundamental skill of [b][Projectile Weapons][/b] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][c]
[b]Genjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][/table]
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[center][b][big]Jutsu[/big][/b][/center]
[spoiler=Ninjutsu]
[spoiler=dokuton]
D rank


[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu thousand years of humiliation [/b][/color]
[i] D ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Duration 2 posts
This jutsu usually is primarily used by little kids and spiteful people it introduces a concentrated laxative poison that when making contact with skin it makes the user have either explosive diarrhea next post or piss their pants causing -1 debuff to control in addition to having the RP penalty of the humiliation associated with that and how uncomfortable it would be to fight with pants full of shit or piss running down there leg. When it makes contact it seeps into the skin leaving no trace making it perfect for people who want to make it seem like it was the opponent's fault. Because of the nature of this jutsu it requires ooc permission to use.

[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu pink haze [/b] [/color]
[i] D ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Duration 2 posts
The user breathes a plume of smoke that when making contact with the eyes it causes pink eye causing blurry vision. The eyes seem to swell and itch like crazy the pain and itchiness increases with control pain starts a dull throb at 1-12control
Then at 14-25 increases to a intense itch and feel like something is constantly tickling your eye ball along with migraine from the eyeball swelling causes near and farsighted vision making everything look blurry.
Then at 27-38 increases to an itch similar to poison sumac that can possibly drive you mad along with intense pain and blindness if not treated this could lead to permanent blindness
Finally at 39-50 control it causes extreme pain as the eyes literally start to rot away if not treated fast can lead to permanent blindness and eventually death as the brain starts to rot as well after the eyes.

[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu painful expansion [/b] [/color]
[i] D ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Duration 5 posts
The user can either direct the poison into bodily fluids such as sweat and saliva because of that this jutsu is best used in close quarters. It makes a random body part swell up painfully feeling like it’s about to pop and becomes more sensitive to pain. The effects increase depending on control. Starts at a 50% increase in pain at 1-12 control lasts
At 14-25 control increases to double the pain and body parts now begin to swell to a additional half its original size limiting range of movements
27-38 control increases pain to triple the amount normal body parts now swell rapidly and can reach double there size and heavily restricts movement of the body and movement feels like your pulling a muscle even breathing can feel like your being stabbed at this point.
39-50 control increases pain quadruple and causes body parts to one by one rapidly swell until the skin and muscles literally explode leaving only the skeleton. It starts with the arms after 2 posts first one arm goes then 1 post after that the left arm goes then next post the legs then 1 post later the torso resulting in death.

[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu burning hell [/b] [/color]
[i] D ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Duration 4 posts
The user of this jutsu can emit a gas-like substance that on contact burns the skin. It is unaffected by the presence of water. The pain from the burning feeling is equal to control, if inhaled this also causes a fever as well as burns in the esophagus and stomach. The burns equal first degree burns at 1-12 control
At 14-25 equals second degree burns and if inhaled starts to eat away at your esophagus.
At 25-37 equals third degree burns and if enhaled gives a one hundred and ten fever
At 39-50 4th-degree burns and if inhaled severe most likely lethal heavy burns.

[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu poison funnel [/b] [/color]
[i] D rank ninjutsu [/i]
Duration 2 posts
This jutsu causes the user to suck up all sources of poison, venom, or diseases, and other toxins in range and safely stores it in the body as long as control stat is higher than the Substances strength the jutsu range equals 10 meters for every 5 in strength.

C rank

[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu rocking uneasy sea [/b] [/color]
[i] C ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Duration 5 post
The user of this jutsu creates a plumb of smoke that they shoot out of their mouth the smoke envelops the target and if breathed in at all the target will start puking uncontrollably as well as having stomach pains as the target's [i] stomach slowly eats away at itself. The pain the user feels is tied to control 1-12 control is a intense nausea
14-25 control is extreme nausea and the feeling you were stabbed in the gut as your stomach eats away at itself giving you a ulsor and feels like you haven’t eaten in a week.
27-38 you feel extreme pain as the lining in your stomach is heavily thinned and even removed completely in some places causing the stomach acid to bore through your stomach and start to leak out into your other organs.
39-50 control your stomach completely consumes itself and your insides start to melt from the stomach acid leaking out.


[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu blurry mirror world [/b] [/color]
[i] C ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Duration 5 posts
The user creates a colorless scentless mist with the exception of the faint purple hue that accompanies all Doku jutsu the mist can envelop a large area, and obscure vision, suiton and suiton extensions can spread this jutsu. Everyone inside that breathes in this jutsu will be struck with intense vertigo as their sense of balance shifts dramatically and gains a painful ear-piercing ringing noise in their ears the pain increases the more sensitive your ears are. As well as messes with your hearing. The pain from the ringing increases with control at 1-12 it only is ringing and painful throb like a earache you also get slightly dizzy
At control 14-25 it becomes a loud ringing cutting all hearing and severely weakens hearing based abilities. Along with getting moderately dizzy
At control 27-38 the victims ears begin to bleed rapidly as well as a extremly loud mind numbing ringing noise in your ears with distorted sense of balance making it very hard to even stay standing.
At control 39-50 the victims ear drums rapidly deteriorate until they pop the victim becomes so disoriented that they can no long even stand properly they are no longer able to tell different directions apart.

[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu visions of corruption[/b] [/color]
[i] C ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Range 5 meters for every 5 points of control
Duration 7 posts
The user of this jutsu will be able to detect all chakra based poisons, diseases, and other toxins or abnormal chakra with similar effects within their field of vision. As well as living creatures affected by chakra based poisons, diseases and other toxins. First post user tells the user that a chakra based poison, disease or toxin exists if the user continues to focus on the source of the poison, disease or toxin for a second post they learn more info on it. Such as whether it’s a poison disease or other type of toxin as well as what type of poison, disease and other toxin it is. Finally if focusing on the source for three posts they gain the remaining info on the poison, disease or other toxins there using the jutsu on. This jutsu doesn’t apply the usual passive

[color=#BA55D3][b]ninjutsu cleansing spirit[/b] [/color]
[i] C ranked ninjutsu [/i]
Duration two posts
The user of this jutsu is able to cleanse the target of all chakra based poisons, diseases and other toxins that they have previously identified through various medical jutsu in the past or if they have knowledge of the poison. This jutsu doesn’t apply the passive

[color=#BA55D3][b]Ninjutsu poison clone[/b] [/color]
[i] C ranked ninjutsu [/i]
The user gathers his chakra and after performing the necessary hand seals is able to gather air in his lungs. While bringing it up through his esophagus he imbues it with poison that lines the esophagus through the mucus membrane. When it is finally dispelled from the mouth it takes the form of the user and acts as a bunshin clone. Since the clones are made of poison vapors they are not able to touch the physical world. But also can’t be touched by normal physical attacks making them harder to dispel then normal clones However, they are able to perform any C-rank jutsu known by the user that utilizes poison. When the clones disperse due to damage dealt or a particularly strong wind or sent away by the user they turn back into formless vapors

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[spoiler=Taijutsu]Place Taijutsu in here[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Genjutsu]Place Genjutsu in here[/spoiler]


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[center][b][big]History[/big][/b][/center][spoiler=Historical Accounts]Nozomi was the daughter of a rich merchant from star country and Karagata Shinjiro but soon after birth her birth mother was killed by Chisaki and then she took the baby and she shared some of her biomass with Nozomi which caused her body to rapidly age to 21 putting a newborn in the body of a adult. Chisaki would then care for her as her mother for a while for the first year. During this time she was taught how to change her appearance so that people wouldn’t confuse her and took the form of a 5 year old.

After the first year and she was capable of walking and moving on her own and caring for herself. Chisaki also was teaching her discipline and how to fight and chakra control until she had matured enough for the academy. She would be enrolled in the second academy by Chisaki. While she was at the academy each year she would gradually age her appearance up by a year. While in the academy she started to learn quickly and when it was time for graduation she would go into the forest and set up some traps and poisons ahead of time to weaken her opponents or deter them from approaching her position. Then at the right moment she would go in for the kill with kunai. By the end of the trial she had the heads of 2 classmates and 2 criminals who tried to attack her. She was then named a genin and had graduated her class four years later. By now her appearance was that of a 10 year old.

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[Kanade]

Pink haze: death from eye rot for a d ranked jutsu seems a bit too strong.

Burning hell: a fever of 105 Is enough to boil your brain and cause permanent damage. 110 is lethal.

Rocking uneasy sea: if your stomach is leaking to the extent of the 27-38 control one, that is death due to sepsis. Also 39 control is death.

Blurry mirror world: there is a difference between the eardrum and the inner ear. Tinnitus and nausea can go hand in hand, but disorientation due to tinnitus is rare. If you want this to be more medically accurate I'd study diagrams of the ear and the intricate workings of the delicate balance of it. People can experience tinnitus and deafness and retain their equilibrium, and vice versa.


From a modding standpoint, how many posts does it take for the death to occur in each? You say treated, is it iijutsu or medicinal arts tai?

[Kaitos10]

Fixed it I think

[Kanade]

1/2, I think these are in line with what we want or need from the jutsu

[Kabu]

Accepted