Akari, Yoritomo

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Akari, Yoritomo

Post by Texas » Tue Sep 20, 2022 1:56 pm

Ryo PlacementShow

First off, I am putting the abilities in separate posts since overtime there might be changes. For example; additional shiins and even different classes for the Curse abilitiy. Below is the breakdown of the startup Ryo usage, if you have any questions I can of course answer it.

Starting Ryo Breakdown: 155ryo - 60ryo (15stats extra)
=95
95-42(shin jutsu)
=53
53 - 46(command jutsu)
7 - 1(5 throwables)
6 - 6 (two swords)
Akari, Yoritomo

Normal GarbShow
Assassin AttireShow
TBD
Warrior AttireShow
TBD
Yori
General Information Age: 430
Gender: Male
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 215
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Yori has the face of a 24 year old. He has flowing dark blue hair that goes a little bit past his shoulders. Yori's violet eyes are vibrant, however he has a scar that goes two inches above his eye brown down midway on his face. His eyebrows are black and he has a large tattoo that starts on his neck. The tattoo that can be seen from his neck seem to be tentacles of an octopus.
  • Body: Slender, but muscular body is covered with octopus tentacles. The cover the upper part of his torso (chest), shoulders, and end on his arms. In the middle of his chest there is a light shade of a tattoo that leads to an upside-down pyramid tattoo. In the middle of the pyramid is what appears to be a closed eye tattoo.
  • Notable Features:Other than the contrast between his eyes and hair, his most notable feature and rather most recognized trademark is his tattoo.
Clothing/Accessories: Yori wears a tight blue long sleeve shirt and a tight blue long sleeve pants underneath his regular garb. His Kimono is dark red on the top and as it goes further to his waist line, it gets brighter. By the time it gets to the waist it is a an orange color. Over his shoulder is a darker red cloth that acts like a vest. Around his waist is a blue cloth that helps hold both his shirt and pants together. He wears puffy ninja pants that goes down to his shins. Over his shins is a hardened red leather guard that goes down to his ankles. Yori wears blue socks with black ninja sandals.
Personality:
  • General: Yori is a fun and adventurous individual. He loves new locations, delicious foods, and celebrating anything he can with a nice drink. Due to him spending pretty much all of his life away from society, he has vowed to enjoy every interaction he could participate in. However, because of his history Yori finds it hard to trust people. He won't do something without knowing all of the reasons behind it and if it is something he could get behind or finds fun, he will indulge.

    Over the years of fear, stress, and loneliness Yori has developed Dissociative Identity Disorder. Often times he will consult with a few people before making a big decision. In his head he has many people to seek advice from, but in reality it is all in his head.
  • Hopes/Dreams: His main goal in life is to be a part of something that tries to aim for the future. As a man who enjoys life, he simply wants to help form peace for those that can't do it themselves.
  • Fears: Yori's main fear is living in a future of war and hate.
  • Combat Mentality:Evade and Strike. Usually Yori likes to get an idea of how someone else fights in combat situations. After a little bit, he will attack with brutal and terrifying strikes. He has two methods of fighting whether it is with his familial ability or his spiritual ability, regardless they all fall under mainly using physical attacks. He rarely uses jutsu, but when he does it is mainly a way to steer focus from himself.

Battle Information Village: Iwagakure no Sato, Spirit Realm, Heart Empire
Rank: A-Rank Missing Ninja
  • Chakra Pool: 20
  • Endurance: 25
  • Control: 15
  • Strength: 25
  • Speed: 30
  • Willpower: 30
  • Mastery: 30
  • Power Rank: A
Equipment:
Ninja Pouch:
Yori has a ninja pouch located on his lower right back along his waist line. The bag itself is black and somewhat tattered. It has stitch lines throughout it. In the pouch are these items nicely organized.
  • 10 Kunai
  • 10 Shuriken
  • 10m of Wire
  • 5 Exploding Tags
  • 1 Smoke Bomb
  • 1 Flash bang.
The Kuroshishi:
The Black Lion Blade, otherwise called The Kuroshishi is a 42" black steel blade with a 12" black handle. Where the cross-guard would be is a small black lion's head that has it's mouth facing the blade as if the sword is coming out of its mouth. The end of the hilt as a black circular swirl design. This is sheathed into a matte black sheath that matches the color of the hilt. The sheath itself stops at the lions mouth and fits around it so it stays visually present when sheathed. This blade is located on his left hip.
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The Tsuinsunēku:
The Twin Snack Blade, otherwise called The Tsuinsunēku is a 42" steel blade with a 12" gray handle. The handle has black cloth wrapped around it putting into a diamond patterned design. Where the cross-guard would be is a golden circle a couple inches extending from the blade with a design of two snakes wrapping around. The end of the hilt has a gold guard, the same as the cross-guard. The sheath itself is gray like the handle, but on the end has a gold guard that comes down a few inches. The gold matches between the hilt, handle, and the cross-guard. The blade is located on his left hip with the Kuroshishi.
The LookShow
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity/Specialization: Doton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability[Akari]
Second Ability[Demon's Command]
Third AbilityTBD
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Iijutsu]
Taijutsu[Place them here]
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
Shiin UsageShow
Shiin Usage Each shiin can be used differently. The majority of the shiin are melee-combat based and rely on using the extra reach granted by the Mela/Temershiin to gain an advantage and overwhelm the opponent with added appendages or the added defensive capabilities of the Phasma/Lacrishiin to shrug off damage and place decisive blows while the enemies guard is down. Those fortunate enough to be born with the Dergoshiin are outliers within the clan due to their ability to engage at longer ranges than their counterparts and as such are more likely to stick to hit and run tactics.
Requires one or more Shiin and Shiin Usage

D-Rank Ninjutsu

~Basic Formation: Temershiin
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Channeling chakra to their shiin, they cause it to inflate, fully forming into its full glory. The temershiin takes the shape of a wide and powerful tail. The strength of a temershiin equal to the user's strength.

~Basic Formation: Lacrishiin
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Channeling chakra to their shiin, they cause it to inflate, fully forming into its full glory. Taking the form of an almost opaque armor with an appearance of glass, the lacrishiin almost completely covers the user's body. As a pseudoarmor, the lacrishiin has strength equal to the user's strength +3, while causing the user to move with -3 speed.

~Basic Formation: Derghoshiin
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Channeling chakra to their shiin, they cause it to inflate, fully forming into its full glory. Taking the form as a pseudo-crown on the user, the derghoshiin has a strength equal to half the user's strength.

~Basic Formation: Astrashiin
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Channeling chakra to their shiin, they cause it to inflate, fully forming into its full glory. Taking the form of a helmet, the astrashiin is perhaps the weakest of the shiin, having only half the user's strength.

~Dismiss
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A partially automatic technique once learned, but can be stopped if need-be, the user is able to cause the manifested form of their shiin to deflate at command or whenever they go unconscious. While the uses of this aren't directly obvious, it does allow them to hide the fact that they do in fact have a shiin.

~Bullet Spray
D-Ranked Ninutsu
Prerequisite: Derghoshiin or Dergoshiin combination
By focusing chakra on their shiin, the user is able release bits and pieces of the shiin, causing a kunai-like projectile to be launced by the shiin with strength and speed equal to the user's [Control]. While effective, much use can tire out the shiin, just as throwing a kunai with a single arm would overwork it.


C-Rank Ninjutsu

~Basic Regeneration
C-Ranked Iijutsu
Prerequisite: Iijutsu Concentration
While still part of the body, each and every shiin has remarkable regeneration rates. Normally not enough to fully recover in battle, with rest, a shiin is able to recover itself in a few days, even if the manifested organ has been sliced to pieces, as long as the base organ remains in tact, taking chakra from the Akari, forcing them to rest longer than a normal ninja.

~Bullet Barrage
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Dergoshiin or Dergoshiin combination, ~Bullet Spray
By focusing chakra on their shiin, the Akari is able release bits and pieces of the shiin, causing a group of fifteen kunai-like projectiles to be launched by the shiin at strength and speed equal to the user's [Control] in a spray 5 meters wide. While effective, much use can tire out the shiin, just as throwing a kunai with a single arm would overwork it.

~Strengthen the Armor
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Lacrishiin
By doing the needed hand seals, the user is able to channel chakra directly into their shiin. This strengthens the armor, giving it an extra 10 Strength. However, while doing so, they are unable to use any ninjutsu or genjutsu while this is in effect. This lasts as long as they continue to channel chakra into their shiin.
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D-Rank Ninjutsu

Basic Rise
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Yori weaves the mandatory hand seals and then flows the spirit's chakra throughout his body. The chakra is pulled from the spirit releases black skeletons with purple flowing chakra expelling from their bodies. Their stats and quantity is dictated on the Mastery stat.

Communicate
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A passive jutsu that is activated with one extra hand seal once the Basic Rise is activated. Since the host is merged with the spirit and utilizing the Collective ability that comes with the Spirit's chakra, the collective parts and Yori can communicate as if they were all thinking within the same mind.

Basic Sacrifice
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
With chakra from the spirit flowing through Yori and the collective warriors, through chakra channeling Yori would disconnect the link with one of the warriors. By doing so, this activates the failsafe jutsu within the collective. This naturally causes the targeted warrior to explode at a 2m radius.

Cover
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By weaving the necessary hand seals, Yori would focus the connection with one of the Collective spirits. The targeted selective spirit would crunch all of the black bones. By breaking apart and reforming with the purple chakra surrounding it, the clone itself will cover one body part as if it was an armor. Due to the amount of bones, it can cover any one body part weather it was his entire head, one arm, one leg, chest, or lastly back. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts or until the jutsu is dissipated.

Weapon Transformation
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By weaving the necessary hand seals, Yori would focus the connection with one of the Collective spirits. The targeted selective spirit would crunch all of the black bones. By breaking apart and reforming with the purple chakra surrounding it, the clone itself will form into a black sword. The sword blade itself is 4' long with a 14" handle. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts or until the jutsu is dissipated.

C-Rank Ninjutsu

Standard Rise
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
Yori weaves the mandatory hand seals and then flows the spirit's chakra throughout his body. The chakra is pulled from the spirit releases black skeletons with purple flowing chakra expelling from their bodies. Their stats and quantity is dictated on the Mastery stat. This jutsu allows to max out at this jutsu rank or lower.

Combine
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
By weaving the necessary hand seal, Yori can connect a link between two collective spirits. By focusing on the two targets, their bones will crunch and open up upon contact with each other. The skeletal collective opens up its bones and combines into a larger spirit soldier, doubled in size both taller and wider. Both heads are attached, one facing forward and one facing behind, giving it a larger view of vision.

Average Sacrifice
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
With chakra from the spirit flowing through Yori and the collective warriors, through chakra channeling Yori would disconnect the link with one of the warriors. By doing so, this activates the failsafe jutsu within the collective. This naturally causes the targeted warrior to explode at a 5m radius.

B-Rank Ninjutsu

Advanced Rise
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
Yori weaves the mandatory hand seals and then flows the spirit's chakra throughout his body. The chakra is pulled from the spirit releases black skeletons with purple flowing chakra expelling from their bodies. Their stats and quantity is dictated on the Mastery stat. This jutsu allows to max out at this jutsu rank or lower.
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GenjutsuShow
Place Genjutsu in here

History
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Chapter 1: Childhood

Yoritomo was born of Akari clan. A clan that respected strength and rewarded those with their own capabilities, caused chaos and fear among Yori’s own direct family. Especially with he came into the world. Yori had two older brothers and one oldest sister. Until the boy was 14, life was perfectly fine. They were a combat heavy branch, although that was not out of the normal considering it was the main focus of the clan in general. Support and Rigidity were the pillars of growing strength between Yoritomo and his siblings.

However, Yoritomo was born with a blessing and a curse. He was born with the Astrashiin. A shin, on its own wouldn’t do much, but combined with others could make himself incredibly powerful over time. That is, if he was to survive. Due to him being born with this Shin, his parents assigned both of his brothers to watch over him.

Chapter 2: A Short Career

The child had incredible promise. In fact, he was head of his class and promoted to Genin with no issues at all. However, during the course of his Genin career, Yori always had the feeling someone was watching. This feeling wouldn’t be known until his Chuunin exams. At age 14, he had already spent a few years as a Genin at that point. For the exam, he was given an official challenge match of another Akari clan member. The winner would win both the Title of Chuunin and submit themselves to the other for consumption.

The battle was a long a grueling battle, however Yori left victorious. Unfortunately, before he could consume his opponent, his family arrived. His family had 3 older brothers over 20, along with his parents. The interuption caused a commotion with both of the families. Before they could get up in arms other Akari members stood on the side opposite of Yori’s family. It seemed that it was a coordinated assault, although they didn’t account for Yori winning the battle without a combat Shin.

When this coordinated assault started both of Yori’s parents stayed back to hold them off. They demanded that the three older siblings escort the boy out of the village and away from the area completely. They assured the children that eventually they will meet up with them and they would get this all these problems resolved. With the demands and assurances placed, Yori and his three siblings were able to get out of the village. Desperately the siblings continued out of the village and through different lands.

Based on the lingering feeling of someone watching them, it was clear that their parents had failed.

Chapter 3: Sacrifice

What was days, turned to weeks, and turned to months. Every place they relocated to and hid, eventually would have been tracked. After constantly traveling, the siblings and Yori realized that there would be a point where they couldn’t run. During their hiding and traveling, they also realized that they had a few days before they were found. So they would spend one night of rest, one day of training, and then the next day they would head out to find a new location. The system worked for a while although there were some close calls. It got to the point that Yori was pretty skilled at finding places to hide.

One day, over the campfire, Yori came to his three siblings talking. When he say down it got quiet. When he asked what was going on, his life would change right there and then. It was clear that they were being tracked by their unique different chakra signatures and smells. They came to the conclusion that if there was to be a change to them, then they wouldn’t be able to track them. This was the moment they laid out their plan to Yori. They handed him a map with circled locations and x’s over others. The x’s indicated where they have been, and the circles were locations that could have good hideouts at. Confusion struck Yori, this was the kind of gift that would imply they wouldn’t come with him.

It was there that the three siblings told him that the only way to truly get their pursuers to lose their tracks. All three lifted up knives and told him that he would have to eat all three of them and absorb their Shin. If his shin would manifest theirs, it was possible that the change would alter his presence. After a long time arguing, the oldest sister stabbed her own heart and fell to the ground. The two other brothers followed. This sacrifice left Yori with an emotional conundrum, however after a little bit of time of thinking, he knew that the deed was done and he would have to do it.

The next day, Yori spent what would be the training time, digging graves for the remains of his siblings. Tears, sweat, and blood were left over their graves. The afternoon and night were dedicated to grieving. Only to wake up the next morning and head out. Something the child was not mentally prepared for, but was forced to do because of the circumstance.

Chapter 4: The Unfortunate Gateway

Although the plan was solid, Yori noticed that the locations he had been going to was found much more quickly by his pursuers. One night when he had found a good spot, he was confronted before he could truly set up camp. In this confrontation, Yori was fully outnumbered. Due to the boy being not fully adapted to his combination of Shin, he turned and ran.

The location was lush with forest. It was a both a great and terrible spot for escape. As the child ran through the area, his pursuers chased from all different angles. After several minutes of running, Yori reached a temple. His pursuers were incredibly close, to the point where he could hear them approaching. Out of fear, the child ran into the temple. It was dark like the night, but there was a warm feeling. In fact, there was a faint purple light that could be send below the floor. He ran through the temple to find stairs leading down. When he ran to the basement, there were two large doors with purple light leading out from it.

The child was barely able to open the doors before he heard a couple of the pursuers running in the stairs. For a split second the boy was in utter shock. A circular purple light flowing with a irksome chakra stood at the other end of the room. Without thinking, Yori ran over to the light. He could hear the pursuers yell “What is that” and little did Yori know, that was the last time he would hear a person speak. He entered into the purple light only for it to close behind him. When the boy opened his eyes, he couldn’t fathom what had happened. The land he was in looked like nothing he had seen nor read about. Where was he?

Chapter 5: The Spirit Realm

What Yoritomo didn't realize is that he had entered not just a land that was different, but a place/area that was not even of the world he was familiar with. Through traveling from land to land, he noticed that each place he went to was drastically different than where he was prior. Not only that, the creatures that habited these lands were also drastically different. Yoritomo had a realization that he was in not only a foreign land, but a foreign world completely.

Over the course of 8 years, Yori had figured out the lands that were safe for him, hunting lands, the creatures and plants to avoid, along with the creatures and plants to hunt for. Due to being along for that much time, Yori had developed a Dissociative Identity Disorder. Often times he would outwardly consult his invisible comrades. Whether it was for personal, hunting, safe locations, or even to get a good laugh he would constantly talk to his invisible comrades.

A few days after his 22nd birthday, although his track of what day it was had long passed, Yori visited a land he was not familiar with. In fact, out of all of his traveling, this was a location he had thought he had been through. The location was a lush forest and plant life that seemed to have been grown over the remains of a large stone village. As the man walked through, he got a tingling sensation that grew the closer he got to the source. After hours of walking he had arrived to what looked like steps leading to an incredibly large throne. Sitting on the throne was an extremely large entity. When Yori arrive to the base of the throne he saw a white demon looking being laying on the ground.

Chapter 6: Do you Accept?

A loud deep voice echoed within the area, coming straight from the large being. The large creature explained to Yoritomo that his host was no more and was seeking a new and fresh host. After conversing and getting a better idea of what it entailed, they both were shocked to find out that the ex-Iwa shinobi was not meant to be in this realm. Both the large spirit and Yori discussed further into their abilities and their past. It took a while but they developed somewhat of a kinship.

During their discussion, Yori learned of the downsides of hosting a spirit of this stature. With the loss of his family and borderline hunted like a dog, the turquoise haired man decided to make a deal with the devil, literally. They both agreed upon a merger for the benefit of both parties. The entity wanted to leave this realm and leave its mark on the Human realm, while Yori wanted to seek out revenge with this power. It took several days of straight concentration, through pain and mental strain.

Once the merger was complete, it left Yori with a closed eye in the middle of his chest right below his pecks. Due to this newfound power, Yori didn't age. With that he trained for several years to master this ability and it's transformation.

Chapter 7: Welcome Back

Over the course of Centuries Yori has mastered the ability bestowed upon him. One day the man was terrorizing some dangerous spirits that caused him issues in the past. As a result a group of spirits devised a way to send him back to the Human Realm and away from them as a whole. Before Yori could finish his slaughter, a purple gate opened behind him and pulled him through it. Before the Centuries Old Man could realize it, he was no longer in the Spirit Realm.

What will be his next move?

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NameVillageRank
Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
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Akari, Yoritomo

Post by Texas » Tue Sep 20, 2022 1:57 pm

Demon's Command
Demon Lord's Ability

Within the spirit realm there was a leader of the Demon Clan. This leader was named Mikaboshi. Mikaboshi was a demon that was blessed with a pure chakra spirit comprised of many other spirits, simultaneously independent and at the same time working as one. When the spirit of Mikaboshi merged with Yori, this granted the ability to split this giant spirit into a collection of spirits to work with him tandem. The number of spirits that could be pulled out are dictated by the mastery stat. The stat total of the spirit fragments are also dictated by the mastery stat as well. The spirits themselves are humanoid in shape but are made of solid purple chakra with a visible black skeletal insides. Since the spirit and Yori have merged as one, the individuals of the collective can utilize all of the same combat techniques that Yori could do and poses the same height/build as the host as well. When pieces of the collective being are active they communicate with each other and the host within thoughts. Due to sharing information through a collective thought, sharing information can be done through otherwise impossible speeds.


Influences: The host will immediately hear the voice of the collective even without any training. Once the host has unlocked the capabilities of the ability through the master stat, they can access those capabilities at any point.

Longterm Drawbacks: Due to the nature of the collective spirit, Mikaboshi, when he merges with a being they must have a strong will. If the will of the being wavers or is lost, they will be added to the power of the Collective Spirit.


Forms
Form Number Description
Merged Presence (Form 1) (Perm) Only a few things have changed in Form 1 since the merger. His eyes are bright purple, almost glowing. His chakra has a sickly purple glow to it that could be seen by someone trained to do so. Then lastly he has a print of a closed eye in the middle of his chest, right below his pecks, which is often mistaken for a tattoo.
Expelling Presence (Form 2) Once the Host masters the second form, and enters it they will find that their chakra will start to change. The spirit's chakra will take over the host's leaving them with a purple colored chakra that would seemingly flow sporadically to the untrained eye. The chakra itself would give the natural presence of malicious intent to those with even minor chakra sensing capabilities. Yori's eyes will change color from purple to red and his hair will go from the dark turquoise it is now, to a lighter sky blue color. The eye in the middle of the chest will open and begin to glow purple, the same color his eyes would otherwise normally look like.
+8 Control, +8 Chakra Pool
Full PresenceDue to being passed down into sealings, the Merged Presence leaves a permanent physical form. This form changes the user's total body. Leaving them at 6'7" tall. Their skin is pure white like paper with textured scaled skin. The head leaves longer white hair, red eyes, two horns on the forehead, and extended fangs. The overall presence leaves the host to resemble the myth of the Shinigami.
+10 Chakra Pool, +15 Control
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Mastery
1The Host is permanently in Merged Presence (form 1)
5The host has achieved access to the Collective Spirit residing within themselves. They can split the collective 5 times or fewer with D rank companion stats
10The host gains access to a max of 10 pieces of the Collective Spirit, each split having its own set D-rank companion stats.
15 The host can now increase each individual rank of the Collective Spirits to C-Rank Companion stats
20The host can now increase each individual rank of the Collective Spirits to B-Rank Companion stats
25The Host gains access to 15 pieces of the Collective Spirit with up to B-Rank Companion Stats. The Host can also access Expelling Presence (Form 2)
30The host can increase the rank of the split collective to A-Rank Companion stats.
40The Host can increase the rank of the split collective to S-Rank Companion Stats
45The Host can access Full Presence (Final Form)
50 With full mastery over the Collective spirit, the host can create and control up to 20 Collective clones with S-Rank Companion Stats.
Collective Options
RankClassStat Breakdown
DWarrior (20)- Willpower: 1 Chakra Pool: 4 Control: 3 Endurance: 2 Strength: 5 Speed: 5
CWarrior(40)- Willpower: 1 Chakra Pool: 5 Control: 5 Endurance: 9 Strength: 10 Speed: 10
BWarrior(80)- Willpower: 5 Chakra Pool: 10 Control: 10 Endurance: 15 Strength: 20 Speed: 20
AWarrior(120)- Willpower: 8 Chakra Pool: 12 Control: 15 Endurance: 25 Strength: 30 Speed: 30
SWarrior(200)- Willpower: 15 Chakra Pool: 25 Control: 25 Endurance: 45 Strength: 45 Speed: 45
BRange(80)- Willpower: 15 Chakra Pool: 20 Control: 20 Endurance: 10 Strength: 5 Speed: 10
ARange(120)- Willpower: 15 Chakra Pool: 30 Control: 30 Endurance: 15 Strength: 10 Speed: 20
SRange(200)- Willpower: 45 Chakra Pool: 45 Control: 45 Endurance: 25 Strength: 15 Speed: 25
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Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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Akari, Yoritomo

Post by Texas » Tue Sep 20, 2022 1:58 pm

Shiin:
The main bloodline of the Akari clan is their shiin. While the size, shape, and abilities of the shiin depends on which chakra the organ is connected to. The shiin, while manifesting itself, is a constant within them. Unlike other similar clans, the shiin is the only thing that alters itself, leaving the Akari's body largely in tact. However, because of this, the shiin is just another part of the body, just as someone's arm or leg.
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Astrashiin:
The seventh and most rare of the shiin is the Astrashiin. Connected to the Crown Chakra, an astrashiin manifests itself as a helmet over the Akari's head. Appearing as a partial contradiction, the shiin is slimy, cold, and course at the same time. Appearing more alien in nature than the other shiin, it also commands the most respect. Very rarely showing up in children, and, for some reason, having such a low birth rate, those that are born with an astrashiin are looked after at an astonishingly high rate. Guarded by the clan almost as much as a village guards a Genma, all hungrily waiting for any mess up, it is completely unheard of for an Akari with an astrashiin as a missing nin. The abilities of the astrashiin tend to be hidden until after genin-level, whenever the Akari first consumes a shiin of another Akari, it 'activates' The astrashiin fuses with the shiin, meshing with it in whichever way, depending on the user, the basic shiin, and the astrashiin itself. Unlike other shiin, which are each composite parts, the astrashiin, and those that use them, are adept at fusing different shiin together, making new and beautiful combinations. This leads to many different fusions, such as a phasmashiin with the regenerative powers of a melashiin to almost anything, depending on the user's own imagination. Every single astrashiin has shown to be violet in hue, giving that same light color to any shiin that they consume. While valuable to the clan, due to different types of experimentation, they are also looked at by the entire clan as a predator looks at their prey. Each clan member hopes that they will be the one to absorb and consume the astrashiin.
When activated, Yori's Astrashiin forms over his entire head. The form takes an alien like smooth helmet shape. The helmet covers the whole head and covers the face as well. In front of the face is a tinted see-through visor that fits into the helmet to make it complete. The tinted visor allows Yori a full visual like normal as if he was seeing through glass, where others can't see in. Once formed, the helmet has a darker violet hue to it.
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Lacrishiin:
The fifth and slightly rare shiin is the Lacrishiin. Connected to the throat chakra, a lacrishiin manifests itself as an armor around the user's body. The amount of armor depends on the user's own body. While protective in nature, it is one of the slowest forming of the shiin, forming based on half of the user's [Control], compared to the standard rate. This armor smooth and dull, appearing as as a dim and opaque glass. While the armor has the same durability as others, it is also able to be strengthened in more ways, unlike the others. However, the armor created is almost never offensive in nature, requiring the user to use their own brute force to damage enemies. Most lacrishiin are blue in hue, though there are exceptions. Members of the clan with lacrishiin tend to be bodyguards of those of importance and high ranking members of the clan.
Yori's Lacrishiin Covers his entire body up to the top of his neck where his Astrashiin would connect. The texture of the armor are scaly in nature. The Lacrishiin has a darker violet .
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Temershiin:
The second and second most common of the shiin is the Temershiin. Connected to the Sacral Chakra, a temershiin manifests as a tail of some sort on the user. While the type depends on the user, it is almost always coarse and rough to the touch. Most temershiin are orange in hue, though there are exceptions. Those with temershiin tend to be a good chunk of the ninja population, they are mostly lower ranking ninja.
Yori's Temershiin has matured rapidly over time. The tail has the same thickness as someone's thigh with a length of up to 14'. The tail has a texture of scales that face the the origin of where it comes from. So if it is to go through someone, the opposite ends of the scales could cause a ripping effect. At the tip of the tail lies two blade like shaped objects that extend two feet. They are close enough and sharp on the ends to act like a blade. With the space in the middle, it lets the two blades 4 inches apart. The Temershiin has a darker violet .

Through consumption and Yori's Astroashiin, his Temershiin has developed the capabilities of the Derghoshiin. This allows the middle area where the space between the blades to the capability to manifest chakra-based projectile attacks and fuse differing chakra-based abilities into their projectiles.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Oct 04, 2022 10:03 pm

The ability is way way way way way way way too strong.

An Nth stat ability is 1 Ability + 2 Concs. At best that is Beast Master ability (3 slots) + 2 Beast Master Concs (1 + 1 slots) for 5 slots total. This gives you access to 20 companions. You also do not have to pay for the stats to rank them up to S-rank, right? Or pay for the slots, meaning you're saving literally thousands of ryo.

Gonna have to restrict them way more than this, sorry bud.
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Post by Texas » Wed Oct 05, 2022 1:44 am

Hear ya loud and clear, totally get it. Can I get more than 3 days to make changes? I can repost when I do, if that’s alright.
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Post by Kabu » Wed Oct 05, 2022 3:16 am

Take as long as you need.
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Post by Valkier » Tue Nov 01, 2022 4:16 am

How are you getting on with this one Tex, do you need more time?
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Post by Texas » Tue Nov 01, 2022 10:02 am

I have been trying to make the ability work in some capacity. However, overall it really isn't possible. For now you can close it out. I might re-submit this without the ability just to at least get the character going. That way I can adjust the history, figure something alternative, etc. Thank you for allowing me the time to flesh it out though.
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Post by Valkier » Tue Nov 01, 2022 12:33 pm

No worries, let us know if you want a copy or have this moved back to regs!
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